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thanx for updating despite ur vacation! so ranveer is on the chase- interesting! jai's behaviour is confusing wid a capital everything!does he or does he not luv her? accepts it to himself and shows her attitude!so will u be updating on sunday?

Shobha

Hope you are having a grand vacation!!

So thankful you updated and what a power packed update.....Looking forward to the next update which I am sure will be more powerful especially with Ranveer finally meeting Rohan and the continuation of where JB ended (I hope...!!!) 😉 😳 😉

Nina

shoba...it was such a good part...i loved how the sisters stood up for each other...

It was an awesome part and especially loved the bonding movement between Jai and the kids as well as Adi and Ranveer.

Cant wait to see how Ranveer and Rahul's meeting goes..
Rivs

My sincere apologies for the lack of commenting!! Was on vacation- fabulous parts!! The feelings that Bani has for JW still havent died- and vice versa! Im loving it! Its the children that are going to bring them together! Do continue soon - I cant wait to see them rediscover each other and develop their relationship once again!

Hey Sheena Di,hope your vacation is goin great. 😊


that was just fabalous,just simply superb.love the interaction of Jai and the kids,so sweet and touching.Loved the way Rohan's truth came out,finally its out in the open.very well penned down,the feelings of Jai and Bani have not died down annd I am looking forward to when they start to rediscover themeselves and start fresh.looking forward to the next part. 😊


preet 😳

i loved that part!it was fantabulistic omg if only thoser 3 were lyk that in KS sticcking up for each other and not stealing their sisters husbands!i loved jais mehtod of shutting bani up sumthign tells me hes going to be doing that for a lont tym!hmmmmmmm rnaveer is in bangalore...poor guy doesnt that little kid is his son!cnt wait 4 the nxt part pls cont soon!
huma

This part was amazing. Aditya is really a funny guy.
So finally Ranveer has decided to go at Bangalore.
The last scene was superb. He would meet his son soon. 😊
Poor Bani, i'm feeling so sorry for her.
She needs to be strong for her daughter even if she still loves him she can't forget the past.

I started reading your story on Sunday, I finally caught up. It's amazing. Your characterization of Bani and Jai is amazing. Jai is so multi-talented - violinist (I found that amazingly sexy), Archer, Pilot, Business Man - uff...

Bani - she is giving a good fight to Jai, a horsewoman and a jockey - cute! So independent and self-relying!

Pia - first time in any of the FFs, I am liking her and I pity her so much -

Karan - the only thing I didn't like Was it necessary to kill him?? 😕 😕 He was a good guy...

Rano - LOL, the first few parts of the FF, she was giving tit-for-tat to Ranveer and giving Jai a run for his money. Very refreshingly portrayed.

Ranveer - I can't wait for Rohan and Ran's truth coming out. Ranveer and Rano have amazing chemistry - just like J&B.

Rohan and Reya - soooooooooooooooo Cute!! I love them already, just like K&A in Kasamh Se...

The passion, the storyline, the language, the style of writing and the whole put together was just great~~

Awesome Job....

PS: Confused about your name? Sheena/Shoba???

Hello everyone:

Thanks for sending all those beautiful comments my way....I know I haven't been really good with replying to your comments and all, it's because I have parents and in-laws and lots of relatives who have been visiting me and I have been taking my parents to places (Sort of vacationing and visiting people across USA) -

I promise to keep in touch and read all the FFs that I have been missing and commenting....Sending this email from Chicago - Midway airport....

Love,

Hey Billi!

i know i know, im in the mood 😆 😆
love it! it was one of the best i have seen...
it is so cute the way Jai was bonding with kids...i could imagine the whole thing...
and loved Ran and Adi's bonding...it was adorable...i was sure that he would've gone to show his employees. 😆 😆
love Jai and Bani part...but must say Jai is some hot headed person...lol. he needs to talk and so does Bani instead of the instant actions they keep taking...

love the sister Bonding...i guess urs is much stronger than the original KS...i wish it was like that there too
rooj