Candle In The Wind © (3)-End-Pg85-9/5 - Page 19

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Posted: 18 years ago
The nitty-gritty of settling in Reya into the new equation of "DadnMom",very well composed. J handled the situation rather well,I must say. Hmmm DadnMom kissing....poor kid Reya gotto deal with too much stuff in one morning.But she sure has quite an attitude for a six yr old.

Unhappy childhood ,unappeased aspirations, discontentment,no excuse....Jiggs will get her comeuppance & how. Poetic justice indeed!

Methinks Jigs mind is truely warped beyond hope of reformation.

Enjoyed reading the part and looking forward to next.

Thanks Sheena.

Annika
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Posted: 18 years ago
Children do get a shock when they view their parents not only as parents but also as individuals with desires. It does take some getting used to. But Jai is relentless in his pursuit and his headstrong daughter will just have to accept it. Very well written, Sheena.
Somali
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Posted: 18 years ago
hi billi, good to know that u r not giving company to papa now a days else u know his mind can have effect on ur mind too 😉 i was really worried, hope to see ur mama back with dad soon so that again u can go to ur favorite spot lap of papa 😆 and don't worry tazo billi will accompany u and will take great care that papa don't eat ur food, but may be tazo can take 50% as bribe from u 😆

loved the part and loved how u have described the feelings of reya who is not able to accept the things in easy manner but liked the way that JW openly tells her that how mom-dad relationship is, i just hope that reya will be able to accept all these things slowly and will accept JW also as an important part of her left as well as bani's life. good that JW has not agreed to any of bani's demands and loved his answer about not sleeping for months to come and taking nap in afternoon 😆 hope reya won't disturb them as she will be away for her summer horse riding training 😉

wow ran-ran are getting married and jigs will taste her own medicine soon and what will be her reaction seeing rano and varun 😉 hope aditya is able to teach a great lesson to jigs.

please continue soon

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Takral Billi..meeeooowwww, awesome part n thanks for the dedication 😃 😃

I think Jai is going to have a tough time with his daughter...Reya doesnt seems to like the fact that she has a father now. I can understand the little girls feelings..she has never been used to have a male figure in her life. But Jai is handling the situation very well. Reya will have to accpet the fact sooner..But she is very stubborn n head strong for a 6yr old kid!! 😃 😃

Hmm..Jigs be ready for the dhamaka..U r going to face the biggest shock in ur life. Forget Roshini n Rashi..In fact Roshini is also going to have the same shock as u.😆 😆 😆
Jigayasa's feelings n thoughts about her life has been penned well. She is very insecured about her life as she has gone through lots of unpleasant situations in her life right from her childhood.

Again very well written. Cant wait for Wed/Thurs..
Rama
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Posted: 18 years ago

Ohkayyyy....Adi knows his mercenary biwi well but still shocked at the depths she would sink to..

Jigs thinking "Leave the old people alone before they ask her to do something for them. " 🤣 that really cracked me up...so like her...😆

The part where Bani says she is sorry, is that bcos Reya kicked Jai in her sleep? and what did J's response mean? next time, she should not use Reya as a barrier in the bed?

Poor Reya, seeing her parents kiss...and Jiggy expecting just Jai & Ranveer - hah!!

👏👏👏

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Edited by btkr - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sheesh, my brain stopped working yesterday, I forgot to change the subject line....blame it on overwork...
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sheena,
Once again great job but yaar, are u trying to kill us?? U left us hanging right before Jigs/Jai/Ranveer confrontation!!!!!
Please yaar update soon......
So Ria keeping JB apart, huh?? 😆 😆 Good Good!! I like this child more and more with each update!!! She keeping Jai safe for me!!! 😛 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Happens Sheena, overworked brain I mean, so dont worry. 😉

Read the newly posted part and loved it as always.

Seems like its going to be interesting how Bani and Jai are goign to handle Reya, especially when she is so possessive about her Mom and understandably so. Jai was also right when he said that she needs to learn certain rules and stuff. Seems like we are going to see lots of fireworks very soon.
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The entire house is waiting to usher in both Jai and Ranveer with tehir full families. 😊 And Jigs has absolutely no role there. Such is life's irony.

Please update sooner Sheena, love reading this story.

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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi Sheena,
first thank you for dedicating this part...I am really honored. 😊
Awesome part.
loved it
Jai and his imagination...he is too much 😆....so his sleeping arrangements has been answered...Reya in btw. 😆
hmmm....Reya is one stubborn and stronghead kid...she is definatly going to give Jai a hard time...oh well slowly she will learn to deal with him...and hope he will prove himself as a best father with the time.
hehehe...kids to react like this I have seen them 😆
Jigs don't know whats going to hit her...soon....she is already feeling left out....but what can one do it is entirely her fault....can't believe she has this low thinking about Jai being married...so for her it is all about money and statice...not about other person's happiness...Jigs thinking of Rashi as her bahu...but she already have a bahu...who is coming with her grandchild 😉 😆
can't wait for the next part.
plz cont. asap.
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Posted: 18 years ago

sheenu...this is not right......in falous jigu style...hmph...jaao...main tumse baath nahin karti...😒...how can u end there...i was all...😃😃😃...cuz jigyasa was going to fall flat on her face...what do i get...nothing, nada...zip, zilch...😭...ok...aab aapni nautinki baand karti hoon...i was just joking...well...half joking...😉

bordering on x-rated jai...right...i think its safe to day that your thoughts were already there...😳😳😳...besharam...😛...haila...reya is just like papa...stubborn and hard headed...uff...poor bani...jaane uska kya hoga 😕...

i cannot wait to see jigyasa on the floor with everyone trampling over her...i soooo cant wait for that...great update sheenu...👏...

JAZ

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