Bas Ek Pal Note pg.61 [08/09]

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 18 years ago

#11

eeewwww chi... 🤢 totally killed my appitite...ewwww!!!!...pia kissed jai... 😡 how dare she...and jai...why you have pia as your gf...ewww...aur koi nahin mila...
gald that u r back with another ff maro...cant wait for next update
JAZ

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Dammy

@damilola

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Posted: 18 years ago

#12

great ff !!!!!!!!

luv the start but the thing wit jai and pia

ew ew ew ew nasty jai and pia kissing !!!!!!

makes my skin crawl

dammy

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Ridhi

@ridizzz

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Posted: 18 years ago

#13

Great start.
liked it
looking forward to it.
plz cont. soon.

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btkr

@btkr

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Posted: 18 years ago

#14

Sounds interesting and good - esp J leaving Pia on another continent 😃
👏 👏

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nema123

@nema123

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Posted: 18 years ago

#15

wonderful start... looking fwd to read more.. 👏 👏

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divan

@divan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#16

Great start Maro. Jai is back in India, is papa really ill or just got him back for some other reason?

Keep on writing.

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@ag06

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Posted: 18 years ago

#17

yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!.ur bak wid ur second ff!!! 👏 😃 😛 [:D/] ...ewwwwwwwwww!!!..Piaz jaiz gf!! 🤢 ...continue soon!!waitin eagerly for Jbz meetin!! 😉

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kinnu410

@kinnu410

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Posted: 18 years ago

#18

wow wat a start
y am igetting the hint of jb marriage here? well u see its only my guess
anyway nice intro this is really since jai is always seen as owner of his company but not working anywhr but still he only second....
continue soon
waiting for next parts

do post me the updates regularly

Edited by kinnu410 - 18 years ago