SS: Never Too Late: Last Part Pg 15 - Page 4

hey that was awesome dear..as usual..so I am rite that they both r married..yes u did leave lots of hints though...but then whats the matter? Why is Bani not with Krishna..Poor baby all alone in the hospital..Looks like she is also greedy of career n success n is working over n over to attain the top...

oh its very interesting please cont soon........

Hey Bristy
dis part was awesum 👏 👏 ...i can so imagine de brooding jai walia on bani being kissed by another man 😕 ...jai feeling like protecting bani 😃 ...hhhhmm interesting....but what is happening...i'm sorta getting confused....lol looks like i've gotta be patient...i'm bad at dat dear...so keep de parts coming thick n fast.
Ishita

ok now glued to this one also. good attempt. will be looking forward for your moves to depict all the secrets and emotions hidden underneath. till then tata. btw u say it is a ff and write in subject ss. why???

Originally posted by: swatinarang

great part dear so bani is career conscious and not concerned about her daughter 😡 and Jw made her star but u have written her smile was fake in last part, so does that mean she is also missing jw and her daughter. interesting story dear continue soon

swati

thank you swati dear, i can assure you that therea re many surprises stored for you....

Originally posted by: Twinkle20

Wow Bristy...Nice part.... 👏 👏 👏
It was great reading it on a rainy night... 😛 Haha...It's raining here cats and dogs...It was nice, snuggling up (not really, can't really do that if you're in front of the computer!) 😆 and reading another of your beautiful parts... 😃
Can't wait for the next part...That was the beginning of Jai's life...? 😉

thank you hun, that means a lot for me...

OMG, what are you saying? I wrote this on a rainy dawn, when i was writing it, it was raining cats and dogs here! I was cuddling with my favourite simba the lion king soft toy...😆

hmm, i may say that it was the beginning of both jai and Bani's life...

Originally posted by: jazzy28

wow yaar tht was great 👏 👏 ...pls cont soon 😳

thank you jazzy, will try to cont ASAP

Originally posted by: sakura*

great update! 👏 👏 plz cont. soon

thanks sakura dear, will try to cont soon 😊

Originally posted by: ash9

first time im thinking
jai should have listend to jigs 😆

whts with him?? whts going on..
there is a small grl who is in the hospital
bani acting... she is nt the mother of tht child??
or is bani very selfish in this story???

thanx for pm 😃

thank you hun for your wonderful comment, well, i'll be glad to answer all your questions but i can't..you know then i'll give up the whole story...

Originally posted by: pooks

Hey Brishty

I couldn't post my comment after the first part 😭
I had pm'd u asking ke is Bani such a cold-blooded woman as to leave her husband and child but after reading the first part again I realized that her smiles for people were fake, cause she was hurting inside herself. Something really big must have happened for our couple to have split up. ohh jaan, don't be sorry about comments, its natural to miss one or two posts 😊, and where have i written that Jai and Bani are spilt up? 😆

Am glad that the second part showcases Jai's feelings and how he met Bani. Now I can't wait for the next part

will tyr to cont soon Pooks...

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Hi Bristy! 😊
Awesome part dear 👏 👏 .....liked how the story progressing 😆 .....so Jai met Bani and felt protectiveness towards her 😉 😉 😛 ......waiting for more to come 😆

thank you dear Kh, hmm...Jai is just like that right? very protective when it comes for Bani....will try to update soon..

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

That was a cute beginning ! 😳
Let's see what jai does to protect bani ! 😳
Please continue ASAP ! 😉
Humera.

thank you humera, hmm, lets see what happens, i'll continue aSAp

Originally posted by: damilola

great part 👏 dnt u there stop !!!!!!

it was god buh i have a question

i know she was not mentioned in part two buh krishna !!! is she bani and jai's child ??? and y is bani not wit her daughter ???

great part and plz ctn soon !!!!!!!!1

thank you jaan, boht for the compliment and for hte threat...😆

hmm, Krishna is Jai and bani's daughter...rest i can't tell you now 😉


will try to update soon..

Originally posted by: jnawaz

aye haye... jai has to protect her form the big bad dirty directors huh...lol...you go jai...you go make sure no sleeze ball can do anything to her...and haila...dun JB were married...or should i say ARE ...and omg...krishna...they have a girl...where the h*ll is bani...why is she not with her baby...who by the way is in the hospital......aibar ami kintu bani ke maarte ashbo...uff...ey maitar ki shomosha...tik bhabe jokhon amar hater maat porbe...thokon bujbe ...and haila...amader jai-er ki hobe...poor guy is so broken hearted ....joldi joldi JB ke akshate kore dao...please....
JAZ

of Jaz, tumi paroo...😆 i can't stop myself from laughing...yeah, Jai is gonna do dhishum dhishum to save her Bani....aren't you a clever reader? off course JnB are married and they've got a daugher as well...ooo tumi Bani ke mar dite ashbe? kokhon bole dao...btw, mar dite kotha theke shikhle tumi? in you police custody where you were learnig ways of self protection to save yourselves from us? 😆😆😆

Ek sathe kore dibo, wait till the last chapter...😉

Originally posted by: ofcourse

hey that was awesome dear..as usual..so I am rite that they both r married..yes u did leave lots of hints though...but then whats the matter? Why is Bani not with Krishna..Poor baby all alone in the hospital..Looks like she is also greedy of career n success n is working over n over to attain the top...

thank dear..yeah you are right, they are married...he he, the matter is...(wait for later parts 😉 )..

Originally posted by: amiee

oh its very interesting please cont soon........

thank you amiee dear, will try to cont soon

Originally posted by: kool me

Hey Bristy
dis part was awesum 👏 👏 ...i can so imagine de brooding jai walia on bani being kissed by another man 😕 ...jai feeling like protecting bani 😃 ...hhhhmm interesting....but what is happening...i'm sorta getting confused....lol looks like i've gotta be patient...i'm bad at dat dear...so keep de parts coming thick n fast.
Ishita

thank ishita...hmm, i think you're confused between past and present, the paras in Italic form is past and the normal words are present, hope it helps...

Originally posted by: ree_views

ok now glued to this one also. good attempt. will be looking forward for your moves to depict all the secrets and emotions hidden underneath. till then tata. btw u say it is a ff and write in subject ss. why???

glad to make you glued...😃...will try to satisfy you wiht the story..well FF is fanfic, it deffo is a fanfic but SS is for Short Story, its' a short story as well...that means, ever ss is FF, but not all FFs are SS...(in my point of view)

Great parts hun,
i have to say you have some good taste and some solid story line going here...i love the father daughter relationship...its very cute but yet sad...very deep
im sad for all of them...Bani, Massi, and jai...but im surprised that Bani would do this...or Jai is lonely without her...hope everything comes out in the open and it goes back to normal
rooj

Originally posted by: rooj-i

Great parts hun,
i have to say you have some good taste and some solid story line going here...i love the father daughter relationship...its very cute but yet sad...very deep
im sad for all of them...Bani, Massi, and jai...but im surprised that Bani would do this...or Jai is lonely without her...hope everything comes out in the open and it goes back to normal
rooj

thank you rooj darling, for the wonderful compliments which i don't think i deserve, it's all of yours support and love that makes me go forward with each parts...it really means a lot to me..

the story so far is too confusing i must say, but it's good to see the positive replies and comments here...i'm more than glad than you liked hte father daughter moment, i thought hard how to portray it....it's nice to see that my effor is not wasted...


will try to tie up the loose ends as soon as possible...