Short FF – Jeena sikh liya - Page 2

Originally posted by: Henna 786

Im supposed to be revising, the revision page is on the tab at the top, but my finger slipped to IF and ur SS! 😆

WOW! is one way to sum up your SS! i loved it!

Throughout the whole SS i thought it was JW hu was helping Bani out, but to my pleasent shock it was Aparajit! [hes always helpin Bani when u think of it 😆 ]

i liked the words used.. very sophisticated, simple and easy to access for readers like me 😆

Can't believe jai left Bani for Pia! 😲 but kya kare they say love is blind 😆

totally digged the idea that Bani never went back to JW.. she became strong and opened her own place! 👍🏼 shows shes independant and not weak!

If however you do continue this futhur, it would be a pleasure to read [hint hint wink wink 😆 ]

Henna x

Originally posted by: shaz81

Well i demanded a epilogue, if not a update to this divan !!!!!!!!!! 😉 haila love the idea!

Sharan XXX

PS Henzy GO study *VARNA*!!!! i temporarily went blind 😳

Originally posted by: Henna 786

Originally posted by: Henna 786

hahaha! what came over me 🤔 er.. sense i guess! 😆

nah i wont write the ss in my exam.. 🤣 if i do i'll let u know!!

Aww no continuation! then i demand [well loads are demanding on the forum these days!] anyway i demand another SS! a longer SS 😉

WE want a SS! we want a SS! [i would write it in hindi for more umph.. but i dnt know how to 🤣] hindi...sikh jaa..I only studied it for a year when I was eleven...movies toh dekhe hai...just copy the dialogues...dialogues in Hindi make bigger impact...u knw why cause English don't have matching translation of those words....you know take love...pyaar, ishq, mohabaat,

Henna x