FF maine socha na tha ch19,pg40 updt11/22

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part 1-pg 1, part 2-pg3,part 3-pg4 , part 4- pg 6,part 5- pg 8,part 6- page10,part 7-pg12,part 8-pg14 ,part9- pg 16,part 10-pg19, part 11 -pg 21,part12- pg23part13- pg 25 ,part 14-pg 28,part15-pg30 part 16-pg33,part 17- pg 35,part 18-pg37,part 19-pg 40

starting a new ff the old one is going on ... still ...
this one is not very romantic ... well none of my ffs are cos i am bad when it cums to romance ... well trying sumthin...lemme no guys what u think abt it

characters same as ks except all positive ... and that bani doesnt have ne sisters and lives with her parents.

&n&nbs p;bsp;;& nb sp;chapter 1

WALIA MANSION

masi: adi, adi beta , jigyasa , jaldi aao yeh dekho what are they saying

adi , jigs , saahil came running down the stairs to c what had happened

and they were rooted to their spots when they heard
the news channel say "flite BA139 comin into mumbai frm london has gone missing"

masi (crying) :adi, jai , jai ki flite hai( as she sobbed inconsolably)

jigs running upto massi and comforting her : massi , dont worry , adi pataa karo was bhaiya on this flite , wahaan khade kyun ho

adi comin to reality: haan abhi chek kartaa hoon ( as he took out his cell phone and dialled a number)

saahil on the other decided to call the airline helpline to gather info...

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DIXIT RESIDENCE

kiran: arre , kya aap fir news dekhne baith rahe hain ,thoda rest karlo, u have to go n pik bani up frm the airport late at nite

nishikant: haan abhi karta letme just chek the news

As nishikant switched on his fav news channel:
all he heard was our top story this hr is "flite BA139 coming into mumbai frm london has gone missing "

nishikant came back to reality when he heard kirans scream as he rushed to save her frm collapsing ..

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sumwhere in the rainforests of cameroon



Bani woke up with a heavy head ,as she looked arnd her , she found nothing familiar ,and then her eyes fell on herself and she found herself covered with bruises, cuts(some deep some not so deep),burns , loads of dirt n soot...and a piece of glass sticking in her foot , this look at herself and the surroundings made her mind go back a little in time when she was merrily enjoying her meal in the aircraft when all of a sudden they had announced some trouble the aircraft was facing and that they wud be making an emergency landing in cameroon but then a mini explosion , the aircraft's freefall and what followed , fir kya hua oh my mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahin ......,

comin back to present she looked arnd to c if there was sumone as lucky as her to have survived but cudnt c neone , as she looked at the piece of glass and shakily moved her hand towards it and pulled it out with a scream ,blood oozed out and bani looked for sumthing for sumthin to wrap arnd her wound, luckily her hankerchief was clean so she used that,and made a move tears flowing thru her eyes as the fear of never seeing her parents again grew in her also the fear that what if sumthing happened to either of her parents once they got the news of the plane havin crashed.....with tears in her eyes , scred to death and limping in pain she continued walking and cursing god for having put her in this situation

As she had moved a distance ,the tears had stopped ,she heard rustling of leaves , she turned arnd to see what was causing the sound , nothin she cud c nothing , then suddenly a palm on the edge of a semi cliff caught her attention

she rushed in that direction and caught hold of that palm and pulled , she was scared to look down the cliff to c who she was pulling so she just kept pulling and after considerable effort and time with that one final tug/pull she came crashing on her back , eyes closed and she felt something hard hit her rite side of the body

jai: thnx , i owe u this one

now she opened her eyes to face the stranger whose life she had saved and who was now lying partly on top of her and was trying to get his breath back...

bani: its ok

she caught jai's attention as he quickly moved away

jai: sorry ...

bani sitting up its ok not really yr fault

bani: ouch ( as tears flow out of her eyes)

jai : r u ok

bani: actually there was a piece of glass stuck in my foot , took that out but it left a deep wound now i stepped on sumthing pointed and it hurt...

jai: (searching his pockets , finds his wallet , and cs the credit cards n cash r in order , cheks on his cell but thats not working): phew , cash n card are fine so once we r out of here we can make head for our destinations...

bani: ( just smiled and looked at jai he was badly bruised himself , burnt in a few places but didnt seem to care): u r bleeing (as she pointed to his elbow which was in a very bad shape)


jai(for the first time looked at bani , she seemed like a kid to him): ummm, lets make a move daylight is receding fast , koi lake ,water body hogi wahaan jake well just clean our wounds, is yr foot better now , can u walk or u need help (as he moved towards her)

bani: (standing now ) i think i can manage ,thnx

As they both started walking jai unconciously held on to bani's wrist ..and kept looking at her time n again to c if she was ok

bani: i am bani dixit and u

jai: jai as in jai walia.

bani: jai , do u no where we r headed

jai: gud question , no idea but really am sure we r on course cos frm the cliff i cud make out the forest recedes this way, aha paani finally the site of water

jai and bani both cleaned their wounds up and also freshened up...

jai: much better , now need to create a safe haven for the nite , god nos what is safe here

bani: u think we'll be able to get out of here...

jai: (looking at her ,squeezing her arm to assure her) we will sooner rather than later....

As they started walking again

bani: bhook nahin lagi aapko

jai: lagi hai but today we have to keep a fast....as he laufed

bani just smiled

jai found a suitable place for them to stay for the nite , the fire was set up (using flintstones which jai found after much searchin), the bed of twigs n leaves was ready (bani helped jai in it all even thought her foot was in bad shape and jai even asked her to sit n not help)

jai: ok , lets get some rest and if sumthing bothers u wake me up...

bani: ok ..cant even say gnite cos it isnt ..

jai( smiled at her ) and went to his bed to sleep....

bani cudnt sleep her fears again started to grip her and she started crying silently tears flowing frm her eyes

jai was not sleeping really and heard bani stifled sniffs and sobs..

he got up and walked up to her and asked her" kya hua"
that was enuf for bani to break down completely as she clutched his shirt in her fist tightly and buried her face in his broad chest and cried

jai for the first time in 36 years was facing this and automatically his arm was arnd her as he comforted her and whispered "what happened bani"

bani in between her nonstop crying n sobbing told her fears as jai told her" dont worry everything will be fine as he patted and stroked her back affectionately, after some time the sobs, the sniffs ,the crying subsided and as jai looked at bani he saw she had gone to sleep clutching his shirt and her face still buried in his chest... as for jai his own concern for masi was now paramount as he hoped she wud be ok but he was sure adi n the others wud take care...and he silently wished this girls parents are ok ....poor girl ...and some where thinking abt what they wud do tom....he too fell asleep...holding bani in his arm......



ok sorry for the boredom n spelling errors.....
ok now u guys tell me kaisa laga and if i shud continue ....... or not.......



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siumi thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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saving 😛

different kind of ff
liked it, vnice beginning 😊
continue soon😛

Edited by siumi - 18 years ago
swatinarang thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start please continue soon

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow that was amazing completely different.. nice start with a different.. pls contine soon..

davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cool start to ur new ff! 👏

reminds kind of 'lost' cool show 😃

pls continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow guud story dear. 👏 👏 👏
sumthing new 😃
plzz do continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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amazing part
sounds really intresting and its something different
cant wait 4 the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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of cource continue yeh koi poochne ki baath hai its good and you know that too so pls cont soon but finish the other ff first before starting on this one just a suggestion
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great srt 👏


Plz continue soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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woooow great start ......its been a few days a was thinking if there was an ff like on the forum....and YES there is 😆 .........yipppppppeeeeeeeeeeee plzz post second part soon.......will be waiting eagerly 😊

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