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Posted: 18 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: inavars

I caught up Sabs!!!! 👏

Absolutely LOVED all the parts 👏 👏 👏 Ranveer is awesome 😳 plus I'm not liking JW much these days...okay...princi's moving up the scale....waaaaaayyy up the scale 😳 😳 won't ever reach Hope but he's getting there 😉 😆

awww...your husband's so sweet...and SENSIBLE...unlike a few characters in this show that we're all obsessed w/ 😆

I love how Bani gave it back to Roshni...that was hilarious...Roshni all embarassed 😆 😆 😆 and of course jai's reaction 😆

how old is kabir? I forget...is he only one? if he is...he sure does know a lot of words!! Of course...it runs in the genes...smart like his mom and good looking like his dad 😉 😳

ooos was sooo cute 😆 😆 i could so imagine jai carrying a baby who keeps squeaking appy oos appy oos 🤣

princi's growing on me! 😳


sweety, nothing is ever gonna get close to hope 😆 i am trying to get princi up to date for you, but khadoos is too stuck up 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: sabsj

gulabo, aakhir beta kiska hain 😆

SO...wait...hell change hsi mind?😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
Hey Sabs! I read all 21 shapters earlier today!
They were totally aWeSoMe!!
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Awww Kabir is choo cutteee, he reminds me of my nephew Kelvin a little!
Loved the confrontation with Roshni! 😃
Can't wait to hear Bani's decision. Please continue soon...

V.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: wite_rainbow

SO...wait...hell change hsi mind?😉

oy suspense naam ki bhi koi cheeze hain ki nahin 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
Lol Sabs,
i read the last part and i must say one of the funniest and the sweetest part in the whole FF yet...
that was really simple and delightful sweet to us Audience...

Kabir throwing tantrums 😆
and Jai trying to control him 😆 Poor Jai though...
love the last line..."Mera beta mera dushman hai" hehe 😆

that was really funny...i really love this new side of Bani and Jai swallowing up his pride is the best...and him becoming more livelier by the moment is too good...

This part was a cherry on the top with today's epi. at some point...

Love it partner...
Please continue soon
rooj
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56

very sorry for d delay 😭 😭 😭 .. i had lots of catching up to do.. in a way im glad i had to catch up 😕 .. cuz i was smilin and laughin thru and really needed it 😃 😃 so thanx 😳

WOW.. parenting.."One day gone...a whole life time to go.." haila.. i luv d way u explain d parenting sequence minute by minute.. day by day.. it seems how fun and hardworking it can be at times.. 😕 😃

i was 🤣 d whole time.. now kabir is adorable.. ooooooossssss.. my fav word now.. 🤣 🤣 🤣 simply mindblowing

d bac and forth on jb is amazing 😉 😉 their chemistry, concern, love, friendship, hatred is allll there.. luv the way their relationship's going 👏

and d way bani had told roshni off in d last part.. wat wat.. u tell her bani 👏

i can imagine ur whole ff as i read it.. every update.. jai struggling.. which is pure comedy 😆 😆 and bani's teasing.. and kabir's masti - he's simply so cute.. its easy to picture a cute chubby baby 😃 😃

now jai .. tryin to involve kabir - so bani can say yes 😉 kabir.. haila.. him and his NO 😆😆 GOOD LUCK jai 👍🏼 ur defo gonna need it😉

luv d character of ranveer and veer - basically everyone else.. luv ur usage of songs 👏

so overall.. loved it.. won't fall behind now.. no no.. cont soon 😳 and thanx fo d pm wit d new link.. 👏

Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: sabsj

oy suspense naam ki bhi koi cheeze hain ki nahin 😆

hmm...now that cheeze u are talking about...is it goats milk??😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: sabsj

Chapter 21 (18/04/07)

Friday - Day 1

From a dead sleep Jai shot straight up in bed with a start, and in the bargain fell off it, banging his elbow on the floor. The baby alarm had gone off.

Kabir will bug you wont he!😆

His small fists were wrapped tightly around two bars, his tearstained face squeezed between the bars as if he was trying to escape.When Kabir saw Jai, he stopped crying to stare suspiciously. "Man" he blurted out."Hey, slugger, what do you need? Your diaper changed? A bottle? Did you see a bad dream?"Mama" said Kabir with his pouty trembling lips as he plopped down on his butt and began to cry again, deep wrenching sobs this time.

Awww, mera bacha.. poor little guy. Make your father pay.. sood and samed!😉😆

"No man…….man go……..Mama" screamed Kabir. From the look on Kabir's face, he didn't appreciate Jai's part in the scheme of things. He did more than just push and kick. The boy shoved, twisted, turned, hit, mooning Jai.

This kid rocks.. I love how you write it Sabby. The words like Gunda, Man, Mama.. just the little convo's...hehe

Twice.

And he screamed, loud enough for Jai's neighbors to suspect him of murder.

Haila, that happened with me too.. oo when I was on a rollercoaster with my sister. It was her first time, she was crying and screaming the whole time. People thought I had kidnapped her and put her on the ride. It was horrible!😭

"Ma-ma." Kabir hiccupped and his little body shuddered. With his favorite stuffed bunny, Mr. Hops, under his arms, Kabir settled down on the trip to the kitchen and while Jai fixed him a bottle, but when Jai laid him back in his crib, Kabir erupted into a frenzy once again.

Aww bechara.. cant Bani come back?? I can see Jai suffer. But not this poor chap!😭

"Hey kiddo, I know I can't sing like your Mama, but I ain't that bad also, just give me a chance buddy….." pleaded Jai."Here, let me try again. You are my sunshine………""No……no……….bad man…….gunda" cried Kabir. "Mama……..mama sing."

Hehe, gunda. My favourite word😆.. of course he cant sing like Bani. Kahan Raja Bojh kahan gangu theli

What a memory………or what a misery…..only time would tell.

Jai its all misery... until Bani comes back😆

One day gone………a whole life time to go………sighed Jai. Who said being a single parent was easy.

It isnt.. kudos to all the single parents who raise their children by themselves.👏👏

Ranveer (Heheh, I still cant believe that we thought alike. Heheh, that is hilarious😉 )and Veer take turns in driving junior Walia all around.

"Where the hell are you, I have been trying your number for so long" screamed Jai.

Ouch, what a grouch. I would have cut the phone on him!😡

"I did Jai, maybe you weren't listening. (Ahem, I wonder why😉, he was busy looking at you)You haven't unpacked have you? It is in the bag near the dresser…….all his essentials are in it. Is everything alright……." asked Bani, she did not have a good feeling about all this.

"Good night Bani"

Click. End of conversation.

Oooo I hate him, esaan faramosh!😡😆

Bani starts laughing. "Oh that, oosssss, means juice Jai, Kabir is asking for some juice. He likes drinking apple juice at times, gets bored of milk."

Hehe, ooo the baby lingo. I love it, although its soo hard to understand it at times. I had the craziest baby lingo when I was a kid😆.. man it rocked. No one understood me besides mama.

"Like father, like son" remarked Bani.

Hehe, go Bani. 1-0 for Bani!

"Byeeeeeeeee I'll be back tomorrow morning. Gotta go now."

Click, end of conversation.

Nice, and she rebounds!

"Yes exactly…………….Mama, so why don't you tell your Mama to say yes to your Daddy…………Mama and Man."

Kabir blurts out "No."

"What No….." asks Jai. "You see if Mama and Man get together…….."

"No……….." insists Kabir.

"Are you my son or my enemy?"

Hehe, I swear your last liners are FANTABULOUS! I cant stop laughing at that. Even Kabir knows whats right and wrong😆. I loved it, except you know who wasnt here😉😭

Sheen

*I loved how you made JW pay. I remember writing at the start to let Kabir make Jai pay. And it happened. I loved it!*

Edited by khrhun_sheen - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59
Hey Sabs,

This has been one of the best parts I have read till now...completely loved it...Kabir is adorably cute and I just enjoyed the easy camaraderie that has building between Jai and Bani...it looks like they are already family...Kabir saying no to Jai and the last sentence are you my son or my enemy was just the best....I think this chapter is definitely my favorite one till now... [ 👏 👏 👏

Garf
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60

Hi friends,

A collective thank you to all the readers of Chapter 21.

mahimn, khrhun_sheen, swatinarang, nema123, pooks, Sheena_Row, pkbains, love is fire, simz99, ovaltine, sanam84, btkr, bugs_bunny, damilola, kubare, khushboo2006, rivya, s_geetu, ShiyaNasreen29, punjabi#1, momtabegum1, Ammukutty, Neetusxm, jigna_07, usa30172, rooj-i, fsam, divya_123, Taz234, docsleepy, sill y sweety, nibbles, amiee, Miss_Diey, kripa0521, mb101, white_rainbow, soodr, big fan, K_S, loka, juney, sxcdevil, nyzbabigyal, swatz, nikita28, inavars, vedo, $h@faq, Garf, indian_godess.

Truly appreciate your marvellous comments and feedback.

I am so glad you liked the update....the father and son bonding, Jai having a miserable time trying to settle Kabir down in his new home, Jai and Bani's not so innocent flirting on the phone and last but not the least the way their relationship is progressing.

I hope I can continue to hold your interest and not disappoint you in the future updates.

A small poem dedicated to you all.

Thank you for the smile you bring to my face
As you post your comments each day
Thank you for the love and encouragement
You always send my way

Thank you for the time
You always have for this fanfic and me
Thank you for the enthusiasm
That you always make me see

Thank you for your words
You're always kind and sweet
But most of all I thank this forum
That you and I had a chance to meet

Edited by sabsj - 18 years ago

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