FF:Accidental Valentine: FINAL CH. 08/02 - Page 8

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Posted: 18 years ago
#71

Dear Cordy,

Fab part - just loved it (though it didn't have Cuddles in it). I knew when Bani went to take a shower that she would wipe off Jai's number. Now she will go out with Tarun to a restaurant and Jai will there too. Seeing Bani with another bloke, Jai will get engry and jealous and the story will 😳☺️......... . I just love it when Jai is all angry and jealous 😍.

Sonia.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#72
Fantastic Cordy!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it!
"Breathe a word and I will tie your choti to the nearest motorbike!!" - kya line hai.

"Bani didn't answer, she just wanted Laxmi to leave her alone so she could sulk" - 😆 😆 very human...

"Can't you firmly resolve to shut up for once?!!" - are u going to continue this ff with similar 😆 banter? Can't wait...

👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#73
yeah u decided to contnure ur ff! i loved ur ff it was relly good in the competition! loved the second [part mainly cos lakshmi and nattu are together! they are cuple made in heaven...and lakshmi and banis banter seems so real similar to what me n my friends share...as for tarun 🤢 less said about him teh better he really thinks hess gods gift to women doesnt he! awww bani wants to meet her mr.cynical im sure she will! pls cont soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74

Cords,

Your FF Entry was one of the best and fully deserved the 1st Prize that it won!😃

Glad to see that you decided to continue along the same story line and treat us with a full-fledged FF!

I love the banter between Jai and Bani....Too cute and so funny!😆 Besides, no one can portray breezy romance the way you do it!

Looking forward to reading the next installment as early as possible!

Cheers,

MT

PS: I can't get over the image of an inebriated Bani dancing on Crazy Kiya Re, falling all over poor JW!😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#75

Cordy, wow what a part 👏 👏 👏

And I am so glad you are continuing.

Thanks a lot dear.

Anyways, will catch you in the weekend.

And please do post the nest part soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76

Cordy darling,

Aww......wow, Laxmi is with Nattu and they are engaged , great. Love them and would like to see them togther in the drama as well.😃

Oh!!!!!No our baby Bani washed her hands without joting down the number ......awww.......god and that Tarun bugging he to go out with him. Why dose not he take a hike!!!!!😡

Aww.....I hot god answers her prays soon and she meets her JW soon.😉😛

Love

Krishna

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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
AWESOME FF Cordelia!!! 👏

Loved both the parts!!!!! love they way they met and how their night went in the store!!!!!! Absolutely cute and sweeeeet!!! 😳

Awwww she lost his number!!! Poor thing!!!! Hope they meet again and hope something happens!!!! 😆 😆

Update soon!!!

Radhika
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78

Bani's blind date?😕.....Tarun😲.....A dentist?🤣🤣🤣

Okie, this guy is wayyyyy to pushy!!.....Hope he tries to misbehave with Bani and she thanks him with a slap!!😃.....or better yet, a magical appearance from Mr. Cynical! (*Hint* *Hint*😉)

Lacho and Nattu-ji sound super sweet!!😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#79
Cordddyyyyy !!!! .. see i am beingg a gud girrll !! .. and Missyyy u and ur txts.... stoppp teassinggg meee !! .. i loved theone wen u siad "nono no bed time" ... i laughed at it for likee half hr .. min !!! 😆 😆 😆 ... u knww i luvv yaa !! .. xcusee me .. i betterrr hear the sameee !! 😆 ...

awwwww.....blesss !!! .. freindss r alwaysslikeee dat !! .... but then they care for u !! .. aww bless..bani's freind is such a sweet heart !! .. loved the .. wholee freind scene !!!

Gosshhh !! .. i cant beliveee itt !! ... she lost the numberr !! .. gosshh ! .. noww whu wud do tht ! .. akkal .. to gayi paani mein !! .. 😡 😭 😭 ....but then she cud call his office too .....andd why is shee sooo nervousss ..??? 😕 😕 ... she shud be likee on top of the worldd.... 😳 ....

ewww... why did u bring the OCD tarunnn guyy ...?? .. hmmm SLK .. hai .. to koi baat nahi he can stay ! .. chalega ! .. fro the time being ! .. apr i wud have prefferend.. .CLS 500 .. moree..... par chalta hai !! .... but it has to be blak haan ..?? 😆 😆 ...looolzz... jokess apartt...but i reaallyyyyy hoppee....tht wen she goes to seee him .... they dont see jai !! .. nahii to mayi ki tarha misundertsdingss..hi hoti rhaeingi !!! .. 😭 😭 😭 .....

will be waiting eagerllyyy .. for the part ... wen Jai and Bani meett !! .....andd jo bhi gaari ho ... tarun nahi hona chahiyehh !! .. tht guy is suchh a crreeeppp ! !..... will be waiting eagerlly !!!
Shafaq! 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
cool ff. glad to c ur continuing it. 👏

could picture like the enactment in a movie scene, it felt so real n descriptive 😳

hope she bumps into her mr cynical on her redo with tarun. 😃

pls continue soon

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