FF:Accidental Valentine: FINAL CH. 08/02 - Page 7

That was really awesome just caught up 😊 . Great parts, really well written. You are a writer writer 👏 , there is really a great flow in the writing 😃 .
Hope Bani meets her Mr. Cynical soon 😭 😊 .
Please update soon 😛

Cords,
finally caught up and that was amazing!!!
i really loved it!!!
I can't believe that Bani lost his number...that was really funny...
btw i didn't tell you this but i loved your Bani in that drunk state...too funny 😆 😆 😆
I love this Bani and Laxmi pair too funny and too cute!
So Laxmi is engaged to be married to Nattu...thank the lord for that!
Tarun...ugh! 🤢 🤢
i hope Bani sees through him...and she finds Jai again and then ask him for his number..
please continue soon
rooj

Okay I am back, I did write a comment but then my mama caught me on the computer when I was supposed to be packing so I slammed the screen, and the message got destroyed. And vaah kya message thi. It was sooo long, hopefully I'll be able to re-create it right now!!!😉

Part 1:
Ooo a khadoos Jai, and he hates V-day?? Why?? I guess he has had a past experience.. Roshini? Pia?? Ahh I see its Ranveer's bday, then it must be a double celebration 😳 😉 .. heheh.. he WHAT?? He is married to Pia, why Nisha why?? Bechare ki zindagi barbad hogayi 😭 .. confused? Ask Sabby, she'll explain it all to you! 😉 No wonder Jai hates Pia, I would too, mera Ranveer 😉

I like this Bani, she reminds me of Madhuri Dixit's character in Dil To Pagal Hai.. with buying the gifts on V-day! Hey I do it too..lol. 😆 😆

They kissed, wow. I never expected this. Nice nice. But why did he pull away, I am sure he was enjoying it too. 😉


Part 2:

I love Lakshmi, she is getting married to Nattu. If they don't get married in the serial, at least they are getting married here. She is such a chatterbox, kabhi khatam hi nahi hoti hai 😆 ! The dialogue with the choti and the motorbike.. vaaah CLASSIC. I couldn't stop laughing for a solid minute. I loved it.

This Tarun makes me mad. I hope at the restaurant he acts like a jerk and then Jai comes as superman and beats Tarun up.. dishum dishum.. pow pow!! 😆 😆

Hehe, I better stop now, before I get wacky ideas.


Update sooooon,
Sheen

exactly what I expected. Fitted into her character perfectly, to wash off the number sulk and blame it on destiny. Anyways, there is always tarun the dentist in his new merc. Maybe she will meet jai at the restaurant 😉 . If she tells him she lost his number it would seem that he was not that important a person to get to know 😉 .

Wonderful update Didi!!!
I really loved the pair of Nattuji and lacchho.I realy wanted their marriage in KS.But we all know how the destructive's mind work.On the contrary,you are going to fulfil my small wish.Thanks a lot.
Moving forward to my BIG wish:-
Sad that Baani lost the number.I hope OCD is eliminated.I hope that Tarun leaves Baani at the right time and don't bring problems btw Jai and Baani.Loking forward for the next part.
Take care,
With Love,
Shiya

Dear Cordelia

I had read this fan fic in the competition link and had loved it. Am so glad you decided to continue it further. 😊 Lacchho is the typical caring, bubbly friend and she's engaged to Nattu (the cutie). Bani..Bani..how could she be so careless in getting the number washed off and not noting it somewhere first. Now she should stop sulking and start praying. Her date with the high and might Tarun is looming up!! Good luck!! 😆

Namaste Cordsji,glad to know you are doing great. 😃 Talking abt dance,tommorrow I have my first bhangra performance of this year,so excited. 😛

that was such a sweet part,loved it.Laxmi is so cute,chalo atleast you made Nattuji and Laxmiji together. 😛 bechara Bani,phone no already lost,dont worry he'll come looking for you.This Tarun is annoying me,what a show off---Mercedes?Here I still haven't gotten my license. 😆 😆 lovely part.looking forward to the next part,hope god listen's to bani's request despite Mumbai loud noise. 😃 can't wait. 😊

preet 😳

Great stuff Cords.....so glad to know you've decided to continue AV....I loved the story to bits when you first wrote it!
Can't wait for you to continue...

👏 👏 u updated it u updated it wow
fab part cordyyyyy
👏
Bani how could u forget about the numbs on ur palm budhhu

eekks yaha bhi OCD yaar isse bhaghado ... hope jai and bani meets again soonnnn 😳

continue soonnnn