FF: Pyaar Sirf Ek Baar Hota Hain - Page 86

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jigna_07 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 👏 👏
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bad timing wali woman
please continut soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
jigu...tu bhi...why u sayign bad timing...maybe for guli and jiju...i mean bani and jai...but for us saalis...her timing is perfect 😃 ...and really...just like guli dosent understand the work NO...jiju seems to not know the meaning of STAY AWAY 😡 ...dono ke dono behsaram 😛 ...and haila...humara jiju...the rash...matlab...jai...the rash... 😆 ...but i love the new lady...i see that JAGS lives on... 😉 😛
JAZ
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Posted: 18 years ago
updates were lovely...this lady that keeps cuming back reminds me of raashi(KMH) 😆 ............
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hellooooooooooo Guli!!!! 🤗 🤗 Finally caught up with this ff!!! Oh Man!!!! 😆 😆 😆 (sorry just had to say that famous line of urs!!!!) 😉 😉

Wow!!! What a unique style for writing a ff...straight to the point!!! Not at all like mine where i drag a scene for like ever!!! 😆

The story is fab!!!! 👏 Jai and Bani were really good friends to begin with...love those scenes...working together in the office, Jai staying and eating at Bani's place, sharing everything...awwww....so sweet!!! 😊 😊 I really thought Jai fancied Bani...but he only just liked her as a friend at that point...jerk!!! Felt like hitting him one when he decided to marry that other girl Masi chose!!! 😡 😡 But he didn't go ahead with the engagement ...bewaqoof kahin 🤪...kitne der baad akal aaye.

Then Bani and Pushkar got together almost!!! Haila...Jais, best pal!!! 😲

But the Goa trip did the trick!!! Cleared everything and bought our JB together!!! 👏 😃 😃

Then this Masi!!! Urggghhh 🤢 🤢 ...she made me so mad!!! What was she like!!! Throwing Jai out, first from home then the office!!😡 😡 😡But Bani stuck by Jai all the way...loved how both their relationship developed...Bani became such a workahlic...some wonderwomen, when Jai met with an accident...Jai was so lucky to have her.

Masi gradually began to undrstand Bani and then Jai eventually forgave her...awwww...and they decided to get JB married again... 😃 😃

The concepts u used from my ff did fit in well. 👏 👏 👏 It was like reading my ff...in one quick blast...gosh i dragged all that wedding part for so long and it was in so much detail!!! I felt i got a recap of my own ff... 😆 😆 😆 i had forgotton about some of the things i wrote!!! 😆

The honeymoon is just as fun...haila...JB were constantly all over each other!!!! 😳 😳 😳 Sure was getting steamy at times...had to open a window for some fresh air!!! 😆 And that snowman bit...awwwwww....simply loved that!!!

Pia is in a MA??? Plzzzz...do keep her there...does she have to get better??? Ok so she blames Bani for the murder of her parents...but i really don't want her around JB...door hi rakhna usse...can't trust her one bit!!! 😡 😡 😡

Wowzer!!!! Ur like part 400 parts plus now...mindblowing....!!! Well done!!! 🥳 🥳🥳 Great ff dear...keep it up... 👏 i have like 16 other ff of urs to get through... 😆 One day i will read through them all...Okay jaan...enough of my bak bak...gosh look i ended up writing a lenghty essay too!!! 😆Hope u don't mind?

Cont soon...
Luv ya!

Taz!!! (Big hug from me!!! )🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago
pls continue soon.. jai is naughthy..
davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 421

They both decide to go in the afternoon!!!!

And just go by the near by beach that's there!!!!

They are sitting on a big rock!!!!!

And they are just looking at the waves!

Both are just sitting there

Its all quiet!!!

Jai is like

I cant wait for the baby to come into this world!!!!

He's like I will be so happy!!!!!!!!!

Bani looks at him!

Bani: What do you want a boy or a girl?

Jai: I want a girl!!!! I want her to be a reflection of my mother!!!!

He's like

I was very attached to my mother!!!

She meant everything to me!!

But the day I had lost her

Seemed like…..

My whole world came to an end!!!!!

Bani looks at him!!!

Jai: What do u want??

Bani: I want a boy!!!

I always wanted to have a boy!!!!!

Bani: it would be cute if he was just like you!

Jai: Arre.. of course he would be!!! And I would teach him! fathers know best!!!

And I am sure

He will be handsome like me

Bani: Handsome? And you??

Jai: and why not? I am!!

Bani: Are you?

Jai: Bani?!

Bani: I am still thinking cuz I didn't go for ur looks!!! I went for who u are!

Jai; Oh really?

Bani: But you are cute now I look at it!!!!

Both touch foreheads!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 422

The next morning Jai was first to wake…

looking really hot without no shirt

rubbing his eyes he looked over to his right to find Bani all wrapped up warmly in the blanket

looking sweet as ever

He watched patiently as though waiting for her to open her eyes…

which she didn't much to his disappoinment

Getting bored…

he moved onto his side…

.and began touching Bani's forehead gently…

running his fingers down the side of her face,

moving a strand of hair aside…

making her stir!!

Sniggering,

Jai continued to run his fingers around her face delicately…t

hen tickling her just under her nose….

Bani, annoyed, whacks her hand about!!

Bani (squeezing her eyes tightly): Let me sleep!!!

covers the blanket over her face!!! …Jai sniggers!

Gets even more mischievous

he slides down under the duvet over on top of Bani…

moves his head around!!!

Bani (quiet voice): What are you doing?????

giggles then pulls the blanket off her face

to see Jai grinning widely before her

Bani: what are you doing?

Jai (innocent as ever!): Wat am I doing? (snuggles a little closer..looking into her sleepy eyes)

Bani: U know what I'm talking about….is this a way to wake up someone?…(pulls his ear!!)…

Now get out! and let me sleep!

Jai: Owww…I am getting bored here!!! And you are sleeping!!!

touching her nose with his…then kissing her nose softly….

Bani: If you are bored! Then go to sleep!!!

Jai: But………..

Bani: What time is it??

Jai: Its 8!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 423

Bani is like

Then I have to get up!!

Its 8!

Jai: No u don't! u can just stay here!!!!!!

With me!!!!!

Bani: Jai??

He laughs!!!

Bani is like

Give me my blouse!!!!

Cuz she wore a sari previous nite!

Jai: What blouse???

And he hides it from her!!!!!

Bani: What do u mean what blouse?

Jai; Oh u mean the one I had unhooked?? (Umm… No comment!)

Jai: You can go like that!!! I mean.. u don't have to be shy!!! Its me!!!!

But if u really want it….

let me look for it!!!

goes under the blanket!!!

Bani (squirming around): Jai stop it! Ur not looking for it! Ur doing something else!

Jai pulls his head out of the blanket again!

And tells her i found it!!!

Bani: Give me!!!!

Jai: 1st I want a kiss!!!!

Bani: Kiss??

Jai: Hmmmm…morning kiss….romantic kiss…passionate kiss…

Bani puts her hand over his mouth…

then pulls him close…

gives him a really warm and slow kiss

Bani (moving away): Happy?

Jai: Hmmm….

Bani; Now my blouse please!!!!

Jai: Bani I will put it on u!!….

heads under the blanket again…

slips her blouse back on with kisses galore
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 424

Jai then moves aside allowing

Bani to sit up and straighten up her blouse a little…

looking a little flushed she looks back at Jai and touches his nose with hers…

making him smile before turning away to get up off the bed

Jai now watching her slender back

where not a single dori was in place…..

admired how she carefully gathered up the end of her saree,

scrunched it all upto her chest and stood up

Not able to control himself Jai knelt up on the bed…

moved forward and wrapped one of his arms around her waist and moved her hair aside with the other…

Bani : holding the end of her pallu to her chest): what happened?

Jai: Nothing!

nuzzles her neck

Jai: …Just

kissing the back of her neck…

running his hand down her back…

then around to her waist …

Jai: Forgot to tell you something!!

kissing her again…

making her head tilt to one side….

Jai: that I love u!!!

kissing softly again

Bani turns around

Bani: I Love u 2…

kissing him softly on the lips….

looks into his eyes which were all dreamy …

then headed off towards the bathroom…

Smiling!!!

Bani comes out!!!

Jai goes!!

Bani makes the breakfast!!

And while making it

She's glued to the tv!!!

Her favorite movie is on!!!

*Guli* thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 425

Everytime she turns on the TV

Her eyes are always glued on it!!!!!

Jai comes out

And he's talking to her

But her mind is on the TV!!!

Jai is like hello!!

Bani is like sshH!

I cant hear!

Jai is like

We have 2 more days

And ur watching TV!

He goes

And turns it off!!!!!!!!

Bani is like hey!!!!!!!!!

She's like

Give me the remote

And he's like no!!!!!

And jai is like

U will spend time with me

And no Tv!

He goes and puts it in the room!!!

Bani is like aww!!

They have breakfast!

And go to a nearby lake that's there!!!

People are boating and stuff

And they decide to try it

They both go!!!

And having fun!!!

Bani gets freaked out sometimes

Jai scares here and there

And he gets hit for that!!!

They are there

For the most of the day!!!

And then they end up watching the sun go down!

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