Hellooooooooooo Guli!!!! 🤗 🤗 Finally caught up with this ff!!! Oh Man!!!! 😆 😆 😆 (sorry just had to say that famous line of urs!!!!) 😉 😉
Wow!!! What a unique style for writing a ff...straight to the point!!! Not at all like mine where i drag a scene for like ever!!! 😆
The story is fab!!!! 👏 Jai and Bani were really good friends to begin with...love those scenes...working together in the office, Jai staying and eating at Bani's place, sharing everything...awwww....so sweet!!! 😊 😊 I really thought Jai fancied Bani...but he only just liked her as a friend at that point...jerk!!! Felt like hitting him one when he decided to marry that other girl Masi chose!!! 😡 😡 But he didn't go ahead with the engagement ...bewaqoof kahin 🤪...kitne der baad akal aaye.
Then Bani and Pushkar got together almost!!! Haila...Jais, best pal!!! 😲
But the Goa trip did the trick!!! Cleared everything and bought our JB together!!! 👏 😃 😃
Then this Masi!!! Urggghhh 🤢 🤢 ...she made me so mad!!! What was she like!!! Throwing Jai out, first from home then the office!!😡 😡 😡But Bani stuck by Jai all the way...loved how both their relationship developed...Bani became such a workahlic...some wonderwomen, when Jai met with an accident...Jai was so lucky to have her.
Masi gradually began to undrstand Bani and then Jai eventually forgave her...awwww...and they decided to get JB married again... 😃 😃
The concepts u used from my ff did fit in well. 👏 👏 👏 It was like reading my ff...in one quick blast...gosh i dragged all that wedding part for so long and it was in so much detail!!! I felt i got a recap of my own ff... 😆 😆 😆 i had forgotton about some of the things i wrote!!! 😆
The honeymoon is just as fun...haila...JB were constantly all over each other!!!! 😳 😳 😳 Sure was getting steamy at times...had to open a window for some fresh air!!! 😆 And that snowman bit...awwwwww....simply loved that!!!
Pia is in a MA??? Plzzzz...do keep her there...does she have to get better??? Ok so she blames Bani for the murder of her parents...but i really don't want her around JB...door hi rakhna usse...can't trust her one bit!!! 😡 😡 😡
Wowzer!!!! Ur like part 400 parts plus now...mindblowing....!!! Well done!!! 🥳 🥳🥳 Great ff dear...keep it up... 👏 i have like 16 other ff of urs to get through... 😆 One day i will read through them all...Okay jaan...enough of my bak bak...gosh look i ended up writing a lenghty essay too!!! 😆Hope u don't mind?
Cont soon...
Luv ya!
Taz!!! (Big hug from me!!! )🤗