Candle In The Wind-Note-Pg 151-07/09 - Page 114

YUPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE you update.
I was reading your last part with a big smile. 😃
Poor Bani, she's so helpless. How can you resist to the man you love the most even if you're angry with him.
Hope for Jai, Reya will be more affective with him, he really deserves to know her daughter much better.
The scene between Rano and Jai was so cute and emotional.
Of course the last scene was sensual and passionate.
It's good to know that with all the years without meeting each other the love and passion is still there. 😉
It was a great as usual 👏
But it seems that's the part was a little short no?????
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OMG!!!!!!!!! WHAT A THREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!

it was an amazing and sizzling part!!!!!!!1😳

loved how jai became emotional when reya wished him happy birthday!!!!!!!!

cant wait to see how bani will react in the morning!!!!!!!!!!

pls cont soon
thanks
sunju

Lovely part Sheena, and it was so cute how Riya wished Jai... could almost picture the whole thing in my mind.. Very beautifully written.
Kripa.

Ok now that u changed my name there…I am 😃 n back with my commentoes…haila first off thanks for the dedication 😳 ….luv ya…haan haan kabhi kabhi I am a good girl… 😆

Aaaaawwwwwww its my munna's b'day….haila… 😳 😳 😳

Hum bhi agar bache hote…naam hamara hota babloo dabloo…khane ko milte ladoo aur duniya kehti happy bday to u…. 👏 👏 👏 (wot did u expect a better song from this nautanki 😆 )

Haila muah…Meri taraf se bhi happy bday hai ji…. 😳 😛

Haila raging bull, berserk, matador, red shirt…uff wot images 😳 …haila stop it Sam…u r so cheap…bache hain yehan…

Sheena did I tell you my nick name in school was bully…no I am serious here…I was not a bully but then coz of my height n loud mouth attitude they called me bully…lol Bani called him bully…I luv bullies… 😉

Haila Rano behave…tumhe kahan se wrinkled lagta hai ye wala JW….but yeah keep his ego in control….

Haila I so want to see his reaction to Rohan's truth…

Bani bani Bairagan….itna hunk of a hubby hai n she wants an extra bed in the kids room…ye bhi nautanki hai….

Haila…phir kya hua ye na pucho kuch aisi baat ho gayi… 😳 main mar gayi…waise mughe khuch samagh main nahin aaya...main to innocent hoon 😉 par kuch hua zaroor 😆 😆

The song that comes to my mind for both of them….yeah it's a good song for once…


Don't leave me in all this pain
Don't leave me out in the rain
Come back and bring back my smile
Come and take these tears away
I need your arms to hold me now
The night are so unkind
Bring back those nights when I held you beside me

Un-break my heart
Say you'll love me again
Undo this hurt you caused
When you walked out the door
And walked out of my life
Un-cry these tears
I cried so many nights
Un-break my heart
My heart

Take back that sad word good-bye
Bring back the joy to my life
Don't leave me here with these tears
Come and kiss that pain away
I can't forget the day you left
Time is so unkind
And life is so cruel without you here beside me.


now update soon....

😆 😆 😆 sorry.. jut read sam's birthday song for JW!! 😆 😆

on a more seriuos note: awesome update! aww jai;s birthday! i feel like bowling! 😊

reya (love the name) is so cute..and rano! good to know they still have a saali-jija relationship!

i cant wait to see jai's reaction when he finds out about Rohan! 😊

continue soon

What a timing I had to catch up with all parts 😃 I know that I always say that I will comment every parts from now one but somehow I always end up missing some parts, it's not my fault it's onlt that I don't visit KS section much, I only read FF's but always end up missing some...

Finally Jai comes to know that Bani is the famous "Sara Waller"... How on earth can we say that Jai is only a business tycoon? He is so caring for her daughter 😳 and the way he is being stubborn to take Bani with him to Mumbai... Awww it's Jai's birthday couldn't have been better. The first time he was together with his family 😳 😳
Jai and Rano's relationship seems very real just like a jija-salli relation 😊
Wohooo the last part was ☺️☺️☺️ can I faint? LOL it doesn't look like they have been separated for 6 years 😳
You continue to rock with this FF 👏 👏 👏

Hey Sheena

fabalous update once again,beautifully written.love how Jai is trying to make a effort to make a spot in his daughter's heart,Reya and Rohan are so sweet.Their interaction with Jai really touched me.WOW his shock abt Rohan and Rano was very well penned down.I think I need to turn the AC up cuz my room is really really HOT.too good,and keep the steamy part's coming. 😆 😆 will be looking forward to the next part,cant wait. 😊

preet 😳

fabulous part btw how are you feeling after reading this wonderful update i m 100% sure that you are doing really good 😉

Awesome part. 😳 Please cont. soon.