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Posted: 18 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

arey pata hai.. read 'em... and its not cheating.. i had to post some part.. cuz piku dear was threatning me..to close d otha ffπŸ˜†

yaar we got to do sumthin bout her ye hamare peeche danda le ke pad gayi haiπŸ˜†she told me off , haila imagine she called me SANAM😲 can u believe thatπŸ˜†

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Posted: 18 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

guyz i'll udpate tomorrow.. or is it later on today πŸ˜• 😳 .. im so sorry for d delay.. i blame my laziness.. as well as anju, piku, nidhi, krishna 😳 😳 .. wat?? i have to.. come on.. now im not THAT lazy.. am i πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ par pakka later on today.. i have started writing it.. if that helps πŸ˜•

pakka promise????

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Posted: 18 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

yep yep... jai just fell asleep... cuz of drunk baniπŸ˜‰.. are raashi/rano nahin.. cupid boloπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Cupid, I like it Navs. It suits them.. πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

yep a whole suitcase.. its as if they kicked him out.. and told him to bring bani back.. warnaπŸ˜‘πŸ˜†

Well I hope he brings her back!πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 18 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: sanam84

yaar we got to do sumthin bout her ye hamare peeche danda le ke pad gayi haiπŸ˜†she told me off , haila imagine she called me SANAM😲 can u believe thatπŸ˜†

sachi yaar. bahut daant ti hai😭.. haila.. i can totally imagine itπŸ˜†
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: khattimeeti

Dont you dare!!!!!!!!! Dont you dare to put the blame on us......................... u didnot update becoz u were busy doing u know what..........i mean with laptops and other things............how is it our fault that u didnot write an update.........................write soon if not i will make u, u know who...................... in my ff

arey.. its u guyzπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† acha acha. its my laziness.. i take it back... excuse me.. laptop and other things.. plz yaar.. yaad mat kara.. im 🀣 nooooo im updating.. don't make me.. u know who in ur ff.. noooooooo never.. 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
You tell her Anju
How dare 😑does she blame us for the laptops and the other things πŸ˜†
We are all innocent angels
You were just lazy and got distracted from the day dreaming, drooling over Sallu and Jai πŸ˜†
Edited by ziddi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx guyz.. hope u enjoy this part.. sorry for d delay 😳 😳 😳 its me and my laziness 😭 😭 😭 .. sorry anju, piku, nidhi krishna πŸ˜†

*~*~*PART 52*~*~*


bani continued to sleep.. one aspirin was having good effect on her.. so much sleep.. bani never ever slept this late .. not even if she was home.. just relaxing.. .she'd always get up early.. call it old habit.. if u may 😳 😳 .. bani woke up.. as she heard her cell's vibration. .irritated and lazy.. and feeling tired .. bani got out of bed.. looking for her phone.. as she had no idea where it was πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. usually it'd be on her side table.. but not today.. well that's wat happens.. when ur drunk late at night and no clue where ur headed.. it happens.. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Bani moved out of bed.. looking for her purse.. she was sure that's where her cell was last placed πŸ˜• πŸ˜• .. now where was her purse .. that was d question of the day.. or well question of the moment.. the biggest question πŸ˜• πŸ˜† .. bani lazily got out of bed.. looking around for her purse.. finally found it on the floor .. how did it get there? πŸ˜• Who cares .. that's not d point is it now.. she found it πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. that's all that matters… bani took her cell out.. to find so many missed calls.. messages .. all by pushkar and raashi πŸ˜• .. bani sat down... Going thru all the messages.. which wasn't so tough.. now that her headache was gone πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ ..

but after listening to d messages… d last thing she was gonna do was go to work πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. or even call raashi and pushkar.. d messages were just rude and angry 😭 😭 😭 and.. simply starting and ending with "how dare u get drunk" πŸ˜• .. they sounded a bit angry.. she was sure they were..hmmmπŸ˜• πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Oh well.. she was ordered.. ye ordered by jai walia.. ahem.. to stay home πŸ˜• πŸ˜• .. and NOT go out.. 😭 😭 😭 bani looked around her room.. his suitcase was still laying there 😳 😳 .. open.. his clothes neatly packed.. as if he was moving in here πŸ˜• .. now wat was all this about?? Bani sat there staring at the suitcase.. and then found his towel 😳 😳 .. which he had dropped on the bed.. bani picked up his towel.. as she held it close.. it smelled like him πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ .. now that brought back memories 😳 πŸ˜‰ .. memories of the sweet kiss she had gotten this morning 😳 😳 ..when she wasn't in her senses πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

.. now wat had happened last night .. i kissed him.. or he kissed me .. bani swallowed d big gulp in her throat .. as she got up.. hanging his towel.. πŸ˜ƒ she made her towards the bathroom to freshen up… only to find his clothes hanging there 😳 😳 .. d ones he had changed out of.. bani took his clothes.. folding them neatly.. even though.. his suit was all wrinkled πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. she placed it on the bed.. grabbed her towel.. she went towards the bathroom to freshen up 😳 πŸ˜ƒ

After about twenty minutes later.. she made her way outside.. wearing a beautiful salwaar kameez 😳 😳 .. she fixed his suitcase...closing it.. Putting it on one side.. as it was in the middle of the floor.. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† fixing a couple of things.. she prepared herself some breakfast.. as she hadn't had anything to eat since d day before yesterday .. why didn't she eat yesterday.. well she had that fight wit jai the other night πŸ˜• 😭 .. so was too pissed off and sad to eat .. then at the party.. she would've eaten but she got drunk πŸ˜• .. and then well she didn't have time to eat.. after the breakfast.. bani decided to watch some tv πŸ˜ƒ

Bani: this is so boring.. can't go to work 😭 😭 .. pushkar and raashi will yell.. don't wanna stay home... Kya karoon.. just then her phone rang..
Bani: now who's calling me.. 😑 😑 as she went to pick up d phone
Bani: hello πŸ˜ƒ
JW: good to know ur home.. how's ur headache 😳
bani's heart stopped as she heard jai on d otha end 😳 😳 .. a bit caring.. yet a bit khadoos/angry πŸ˜• .. even a little ordering.. ordering .. was that the right word .. yep ordering 😑 😑
JW: bani?? πŸ˜• 😳
Bani: ji 😳
as bani replied slowly.. or softly
JW: how's ur headache?? 😳
Bani: its fine now πŸ˜ƒ
JW: good get some rest.. no going out
bani didn't reply bac.. just then someone called jai...He had to leave.. as he was needed back in the meeting..
JW: I have to go.. I'll be there to check on u in the evening 😳 as he hung up .. bani put the phone down.. mimicking jai πŸ˜†
Bani: get some rest.. no going out πŸ˜† πŸ˜† now back to her original self..
Bani: wat's this.. ek drink hi toh pi thi.. 😑 😑 and im under house arrest 😑 😑 .. kya samajh rakha hai.. bani grabbed her purse.. her keys and cell.. making her way out of her apartment.. πŸ˜†

Bani: now wat should I do.. kya karoon.. kahaan jaoon bani went outside.. taking a taxi.. decided to head out to the mall.. why not treat herself.. πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ she went to the mall.. did mostly window shopping πŸ˜• .. shopping was no fun with out buddies.. raashi wasn't there to help out 😭 .. pushkar wasn't there to tease.. on d clothes or things they'd usually pick.. πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Bani: this is boring.. wat a boring day.. ab mein kya karoon.. hmm.. bani ended up calling raashi πŸ˜†
Bani: im bored 😭
Raashi: where are you??
Bani: at the mall πŸ˜•
Raashi: aren't u suppose to be homeβ€¦πŸ˜‰

Bani: raash ab tu shuru mat kar.. im so bored.. 😭 😭
Raashi: haan lekin bani
Bani: no I don't care.. ek drink hi pi thi. U guyz have put me under house arrest 😑 😑 😑
Raashi: not us.. jai mama did πŸ˜‰
Bani: toh mujhe kya.. arey im just shopping not working 😭
Raashi: not resting either πŸ˜‰
Bani: raashi.. stop taking his side.. unko toh mein.. 😑
bani angrily hung up on raashi.. as raashi smiled.. going bac to her work..

bani eventually did end up doing some shopping πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. after cooling down.. wat did she shop for.. food.. groceries.. πŸ˜• πŸ˜• she made plans to go home and cook herself a nice dinner 😳 πŸ˜ƒ .. she wanted it..she deserved it.. she couldn't go to work. Due to many reasons πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. bani came out of one of the stores.. as she carried two bags in her hands..she was about to catch a taxi.. when she saw an ice cream stand 😳 πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜› .. today just seemed like bani's day to treat herself.. why? Who cares πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. she got a day off.. so why not.. bani made her way towards the ice cream stand.. buying herself a ice cream… πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Wit a cute childish smile on her face.. she took the ice cream from d guy πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ .. as she paid him.. she turned around.. before she could think of enjoyin d ice cream .. it slipped from her hand.. goin to the floor.. 😭 😭 bani stood there shocked 😲 .. mouth wide open.. her heart beat – ye it had stopped πŸ˜• .. definetely stopped .. .as she found jai standing across from her😲.. well across the street..staring at her..

looking happy? No wait.. wat's opposite of happy.. πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” sad nope not sad.. πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” angry? Yes definitely angry πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜• .. giving her a "I thought I told u to stay home and rest" 😑 😑 look.. bani stood there frozen on d spot.. no reaction on her face watsoeva πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. just then some men approached jai.. talking to him.. men in biz suits. .must be clients or something πŸ˜•

Jai was about to enter the building behind him.. when he looked at bani wit a "I'll DEFINETELY be seeing u in the evening.. now.. 😑 😑 😑 bani finally managed to blink her eyes.. 😳 as she saw jai enter the building behind him.. bani quickly rushed to a taxi πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. and went straight home.. her heart was pounding like a drum.. bani went in her apartment.. literally rushing up the stairs.. not caring about the elevator.. when she dropped herself on the couch.. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Bani: wat a day....I can't believe he was there… but wat a chicken I am .. who cares if he saw me.. I mean I was shopping.. voh bhi vegetables.. is mein galti kya hai 😭 as bani sat there.. lost in her thoughts..

Bani: now in the evening.. oh god.. soch mat bani.. soch mat.. aise hi tension ho jayegi.. πŸ˜† she took the groceries.. in the kitchen and decided to prepare the dinner.. that she had planned for herself 😳 😳 😳 .. a special treat.. how could she forget. She rarely treated herself.. of course its different that girls would normally go to the salon πŸ˜• and treat themselves 😭 .. but noo.. not bani 😭 😭 .. how could she… after all she was under house arrest.. πŸ˜†

Bani tied her pallu to her waist… tying her hair.. she started her cooking 😳 .. as she put the radio on … one of her fav songs was on.. it had been a while since she heard it.. bani put up d volume.. really loud.. as she moved to the beat.. enjoyin her cooking and singing... πŸ˜ƒ And dancing ..full masti in the kitchen..along wit her knives and spoons and forks and food… πŸ˜†

Ding dong ding, ding dong ding dong ding dong,
Ding dong dong, Ding dong

Ek do teen, char paanch che saath aath nau, dus gyarah, barah tera
Ek do teen, char paanch che saath aath nau, dus gyarah, barah tera

Tera karoon, tera karoon din gin gin ke intezaar,
aaja piya aaye bahaar

Chaudah ko tera sandesha aaya, Pandrah ko aaunga yeh kehlaya
Chaudah ko aaya na pandrah ko tu, tadpake mujhko tune kya paya
Sohal ko bhi
Sohal ko bhi sohal kiye the shingar, aaja piya aayi bahaar

Tera karoon, tera karoon din gin gin ke intezaar,
aaja piya aaye bahaar
Ek do teen, char paanch che saath aath nau, dus gyarah, barah tera

Satrah ko samjhi saang toot gaya, Atharah ko dil toot gaya,
Roh roh gujara meine saara unnees,
Bees ko dil ke tukade hue bees,
Fir bhi nahi,
Fir bhi nahi Dil se gaya, tera pyaar, Aaja piya aayi bahaar

Tera karoon, tera karoon din gin gin ke intezaar,
aaja piya aaye bahaar
Ek do teen, char paanch che saath aath nau, dus gyarah, barah tera

Ikees beeti, baais gayi,
Teiss gujari, chaubees gayi,
Pacchis chabees ne mara mujhe,
Birha ke chakki mein main pees gayi
Din baas, Din baas mahine ke hai aaur chaar,
Aaja piya aaye bahaar

Ek do teen, char paanch che saath aath nau, dus gyarah, barah tera

Din bane hafte, hafte mahine,
mahine ban gaye saal,
Aake jara tu dekh tho le,
Kya hua hai mera haal,
Diwani daar daar mein firti hoon,
Na jeeti hoon naa mein marti hoon,
Tanhai ki raatein sehti hoon,
Aaja aaja, aaja aaja aaja,
aaja ke din ginti rahti hoon

Ek do teen, char paanch che saath aath nau, dus gyarah, barah tera
Ek do teen, char paanch che saath aath nau, dus gyarah, barah tera


the song eventually faded away.. as the tracks kept on changing.. 😳 😳 and bani continued to cook.. enjoying...time had gone flying by.. it was already six in the evening.. preparing a full meal.. she had made aloo matter, paneer, rice, and gajar ka halwa.. 😳 😳 puri's – was the last.. as she wanted them hot.. and right before her meal.. bani finished most of her cooking.. only the puri's were left.. πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜› 😊

Bani: omgg 😭 bani looked around
Bani: arey mein bhool kaise gayi.. ab mein kya karoon bani turned off the stove.. as she ran outside.. she found one of her neighbor's kids playing.. bani ran back in her apartment.. getting something .. then rushed back out πŸ˜•
Bani: deepu 😳
Deepu: ji bani di πŸ˜›
Bani: tum mera ek kaam karoge πŸ˜ƒ
Deepu: lekin abhi toh mein khel raha hoon πŸ˜•
Bani: kya apni bani di ke liye nahin 😭
Deepu: kya kaam
Bani: mere liye kuch laana hai… woh..
Deepu: lekin bani di. Mujhe padhna hai πŸ˜ƒ
Bani: padhna hai.. abhi toh khel rahe ho 😑
Deepu: haan bani di.. lekin mummy aane wali hai.. phir kahegi.. deepu abhi tak khel rahe ho.. padhoge kab πŸ˜†
as he mimicked his mom.. bani stood there.. staring at him.. 😲
Bani: lekin deepu.. wat about.. hmm not even for a chocolate πŸ˜‰ as she took out a chocolate.. that she was hiding behind her back..

Bani: ab soch lo πŸ˜‰
Deepu: kya sochoon.. ke padhai important hai.. yaan chocolate πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Bani: kya??😲
Deepu: acha.. batao di.. kya kaam hai πŸ˜ƒ
Bani: I thought u had to study πŸ˜•
Deepu: haan di.. lekin aap ka kaam bhi zaroori hai na.. aap batayiye.. 😳 πŸ˜ƒ
bani told him to get her something from d store.. as she handed him some money.. deepu took d chocolate along wit d money.. and ran out with this friend. πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ . as bani went back in her apartment.. decided to finish her dinner.. she was starving now.. and the food never looked so yummy before.. all d hard work.. how could she not be starving.. πŸ˜ƒ 😳 πŸ˜›

Bani went bac preparing the poori's 😳 😳 .. jai made his way out of his office.. but before he went to his car .. he heard a voice behind him.. calling him
JW: arey raashi.. rano tum dono yahaan πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
Raashi: hi mama ji
JW: tum dono.. yahaan kaise i thought u guyz had gone home already πŸ˜•
Rano: woh jiju aap se baat karni thi πŸ˜ƒ
JW: baat toh mujhe bhi tum dono se karni hai 😑 😑
Rano: kaunsi?? πŸ˜•
JW: baad mein.. right now im in a hurry 😳
Raashi: going to check up on bani πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
JW: haan.. I saw her at the πŸ˜•
Raashi: mall?? πŸ˜‰
JW: yea..
Raashi: well.. go ahead..u go meet her first.. tell her we said hi πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜†
JW: lekin tum dono ne is waqt kya baat karni thi πŸ˜•
Raashi: arey baat nahin.. we had to give u something.. here u go πŸ˜ƒ
JW: yeh?? πŸ˜•
Raashi: ur gonna need 'em πŸ˜‰
jai looked at rano/raashi confusedddd
Raashi: TRUST us πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜ƒ jai looked at rano/raashi again in a confused look.. as he headed towards his car.. πŸ˜ƒ while rano/raashi went to their car and headed home 😳 πŸ˜ƒ

deepu had come about fifteen minutes later.. πŸ˜ƒ
Bani: thank you so much...ab jao go study 😊
Deepu: study??? πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Bani: haan study πŸ˜•
Deepu: nahin.. now im gonna go play πŸ˜ƒ
Bani: lekin u said πŸ˜•
Deepu: bye bani di πŸ˜ƒ
deepu ran outside once again.. handing over the things to her.. wit d change he had gotten back.. πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

Bani: aaj kal ke bache.. πŸ˜• bani went closing the door.. locking it.. πŸ˜ƒ as she decided to eat her dinner.. she decided to go change.. and freshen up.. then enjoy dinner and go to bed.. 😳 πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜› as fo jai walia πŸ˜• .. he won't come .. if he comes.. she'd be asleep πŸ˜ƒ .. which means resting πŸ˜‰ .. like he had told her or ordered her πŸ˜• to rest πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ bani smiled at that thought πŸ˜ƒ she finished her last minute things.. fixing everything.. the dinner table was set.. πŸ˜‰ everything was set.. d only thing left was.. someone to eat.. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† d music kept on playing on the radio.. bani went to freshen up.. after about 10 minutes.. a car stopped outside her building.. as


hope u guyz enjoyed.. I tried
Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hope u guyz enjoyed.. i tried πŸ˜• 😳 i know its a bit boring.. but.. i.. hmmm.. this is like a bani special updateπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
Haila jaani!!!! What a timing!!! Cuz i sign on and i see you updated and u were the last one to post so i had to save my spot and be 1st!!! and i was surprised you updated to!!!! but i am like yay!!! she updated!!! woohoo!!!!πŸ₯³


Anyways.. i am blabbering again!!!!!!!! let me stop... before i get carried away!!!!!!!....

Haila jaani.. this time i wont complain cuz it was a long part!!!!!!!!πŸ₯³it was awesome as always!!!!! But this Bani.. uh oh!!!! i wouldnt want to be her right now....

Cuz.. Jai.. oh man!!!!! Jai let me tell you anger management!!!!!πŸ˜†.......


Jaani that rocked as always! i am still waiting for the reunion of these two!!πŸ€” but i guess i have to wait more!!πŸ€”


anyways jaani!! please cont soon!!!
Edited by Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Navs not fair...agey now....update the next one soon...spring break hai na ...so update quickly.... looking forward to seeing what is going to happen...

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