Time to move on (2) IMPORTANT NOTE p 51 - Page 16

Jigs, I love it! 😉

Okay sorry Navs, got kinda distracted.. after all its the Suns all the way.

Okay that was such a JDD moment. Awww, when he said J and ends with I.. I wasnt even thinking Jai, I was thinking Jani 😆. I know I have lost it, this is what the forum is doing it tooo me. Great Job!!

"I just wanna spend the rest of my live with you" is my dedication to JB.

Sheen

Originally posted by: sssiham

This was a really nice story....i really liked the way the incidents moved along, so smoothly....Keep up the good work and I hope you will start writing again soon!!! 👏 👏 👏

thank u so much hun.. glad u like it😳😳.. i'll update soon.. sometime this week.. 😕😃

Originally posted by: sanam84

navy u updated yyyyeeeeeeeee, u went to sleep n i just got up so quite grouchy. will come back. 😆

arey aur nahin toh kya... i updated.. finally.. took me ages

Originally posted by: caddy

awesum plz cont soon

thanx hun.. will update soon😳😳😳

Originally posted by: ag06

awesome part 😳 ......ur update helped me bear the sh*t goin on in ks ...poor bani 😭 .... 👏 👏 ..ur a fab writer ...write soon

awww hun.. glad u liked it.. as fo KS.. let's hope they make it betta for our poor souls and end our torture😭

Originally posted by: davia389

atlas jai and bani became one hope next part both go back to wm... pls continue soon.
davia

not yet .. not yet.. but soon yes they'll be goin bac to wm😉

Originally posted by: kinnu410

wow wonderful.........
i just dont have enough words to explain this part
awesome superb....... thanx jaanu.. glad u liked it.. im not good at writin such parts.. so.. took my time 😆
just a 3 letter word made so much... 😉 well the credit only goes to u.... lol yeppppppp.. so much😉
continue soon
waiting for next parts will update soon thanx hun😳

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

👏
thnxgod u updated..n it ws an awesum update...plz cont soon

thank u so much swati.. will update soon.. so sorry for d delay.. glad u liked it😳

Originally posted by: swatinarang

navs dear this part is awesome and made me 😳 phew.. im glad cuz it took me ages.. and me writin such a bold part.. is a no no.. that's y it wasn't so bold.. more of a comedy😆 and i just love this part. so now bani is going back to her own house soon and so sweet of them that both admitted their love. please continue soon. yes yes they admitted and yep bani'll be moving bac soon😉

swati

Originally posted by: rooj-i

Yay!!!
Navs,
you finally added the mirch to your update!!! haan yaar.. bahut time laga.. u know me and innocence😉
may i remind you that....never mind...you know what i was going to say...haha 😆 lol
Love it!!!
I can't believe Bani she said Jalebi....haha 😆 arey he said starts wit J .. ends wit I😉😆
Poor Jai...hehe
btw love the whole scene of romance 😆 lmao.. glad u liked it hun😃
I know you are fainting right now...hehe haila no no.. me not fainting.. 😆
lovely update...
all the safe words used 😆 of course u know me and innocence😉.. that's as good as i can write.. warna it'd be ahem ahem..cough cough moon 😆
please continue soon with the mirchis more mirchis.. ur joking me right thanx jaanu
rooj

Originally posted by: momtajbegum1

great part 😉 thank u so much jaan😳


Taj

Originally posted by: rivya

navy...thanks for the upate....it was awesome...loved it so much...am giggling...lol...lol.. of course ur all giggles... u've been watchin june 19th fo d past couple of days😆😆 but am glad u liked d update

and u know what...if I stay in this mood through the afternoon...I might do an update...thanks to you... hmm so its beneficial for me.. cuz u updated😉 thanx rivs

Rivs

Originally posted by: Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli

U finally managed to finish the update!!! haila you did that much!! but dude i knocked out by 930 yesterday!!!!!!!........... cuz i was sleepy!!!!!... arey i had to update.. u and jiggu were on my case 😆😆😆.. but yes i finally managed to finish..

but haila.. what a part!!!!😳😳😳 i was smiling like anything!!!!!!!!!!!😃😃😃 it was just awesome!!!!!......... haila good good.. took me ages to write.. i couldn't.. u know mee 😉😉

😆😆😆 Bani is something else..... Jalebi!!! hey yaar.. jai started it wit J and I 😆oh man that was soooo funny!!!!!!!😆 before i read what she was gonna say... i was thinking wat could be a word that starts with a J and I 🤔 but i couldnt think of anything!!! but like... wen you said jalebi i was like 😆 oh man!!! arey aur kya hoga.. just JAI.. haye ram.. kya karein.. tu toh jiju ke peeche hi padhi hai.. tabhi jai deemag mein nahin aaya 😆

wat an awesome part!! loved it jaani!! rocking as always!!!thank u so much guli jaanu..

Originally posted by: jnawaz

woo hoo update... 😃 😃 😃 lol ur neva gonna stop saying woo r u.. ...um wait...last comment u said u were innocent...right...i was like ok...my navu is innocent.. i am.. i am😳.duniya ke harquatoon se door hai.. i am.. i am😃😛.lekin haia...i read this update anf first im all 😲 cuz its coming from my navu and then im all 😳 kya update hai...wah wah...woo hoo... 😉 😛 AREY it was innocent.. maine aisa kya likha.. i think it was more innocence.. ...haila...when bani said jalebi im all...😲 😲 😲 and them im all 🤣 i can totally picture jais face...lol.. he asked for it.. not bani's fault😆😆😆.haila...that was too much romance and passion it was?? i thought it was pure comedy😆...not that im complaining...oh no...no way...more of that ... 😳 haila...i knew your innocence...ha...went out the widow on the last few lines...oye.. my innocence's right here..nope nope.. it did NOT go out d window.. noooo he got to hear is name...jai...more than once... 😳 haila...gee...i wonder what that means...pls do tell navu... 😉 😉 😉 update soon hun...cant wait sudhar jaa jazu.. sudhar jaa.. there's a reason y i wrote that.. and then finished it wit d song lyrics.. yaar ko maine.. mujhe yaar ne😉😉 if that doesn't describe innocence i don't know wat does 😕😕 i mean i couldn't write up d part.. so i used song lyrics.. see innocent .. ME innocent😳😳😳
JAZ

Originally posted by: usa30172

hey navs..
love this part..
it was so cute..
love jai in this ff.. 😳 😳
he is so cute and romantic..
hehe

continue soon
please

❤️niralixxx

thank you so much jaanu.. glad u liked it.. glad u luv d jai in 'dis ff.. me also luv him😆 but thanx hun.. will try to udpate soon😳

Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

mindblwing part!! 👏 thanx jaan😳

loved.. maybe coz it JB all the way through!! 😳 😳 😳 yep yep jb beginnin to end

so in the end JW got what he wanted?? 😉 😆 😆 😆 ahem. yea.. wohi toh likha maine😳😆😆


continue soon!! will try my best to hun.. thanx

Originally posted by: indian_godess

Haila! That was absolutely mindblowing!!!! 😳 Loved this part! Funny and romantic! 😳 Hai!!! glad u liked it jaanu.. yep comedy and romance - its a special mix😉😆 no u see i couldn't write up such a "romantic" part so i added comedy😆 Blushing as red as a tomato here! 😳 😆 Please continue soon! Really looking forward to the next part! thanx jaan.. will update soon😳
😉 😳

Love,
Goddess

Originally posted by: melonie

Haila...did you want us to faint without giving us any waring...I couldn't prepare myself for this.... 😆. lol.. heyyyy u guyz had it coming.. wat warning 😆😆
Ok...I am all red from head to toe.. 😉 ...need to get out for some airrrrrrrrrr... 😆 😳 😛 . arey air.. it was pure innocence in d whole part.. air kis wajah se 😆
Ok all jokes apart..it was very well written.. 😃 and extremely romantic 😍 thank u so much jaan glad u liked it.. i tried😍 😛. Really worth the wait..I know most of are brains are not working because of KS.. it is just making us depressed..hope it will turn out alright...did I go too much out of topic 🤔 🤔 🤔 lol nope nope.. no way... but its true.. i hope d "kreatives" make 'dis revenge thing worth our while..
Bani and JALEBI part was really funny..poor Jai 😆 😆 😆 ....Well he did get what he wanted right 😉 . now - come on hun my ff and jai doesn't get wat he wants.. is that possible😉😆 but yes jalebi.. i was gonna write Jai in d first go.. but i remembered jalebi so i was like hey why not 😆😆😆
Hope you will update soon dear it was really awesome 🤗 😃 . thank u so much hun.. will try to update soon🤗🤗

Originally posted by: stahmed69

Dear Mrs. Sir,

First things first -- yours siggy is absolutely the best ---- MRS. SIR. I wish I thought of it. It's sooo perfect 😳😳😳. thanx jaanu.. kya yaar wat's not perfect.. i mean salman, iqbal, ram - sighhh.. 😍 and divs made me d siggy.. now im alwayz 😍

I have had somewhat of a sad weekend and it's sad to admit (the sad person that I am) the reason is KS and JW. I have just fininshed reading your entire FF upto now and it has pulled me out of the dire KS mood. Every part of your FF had a JDD 😳 moment and the last part (54), well, all I can say is that, I am going to print it out and read it a few more times before I go to bed.jaan KS does that to all of us.. so 🤗 try not to let it get to ur head so much.. cuz at the end of d day it IS just a show.. but who am i kidding.. happens to me too 😭😭 but wow thanx.. glad to know u enjoyed d part so much.. i tried.. really tried..

I just wanted to say thanks. arey thanx fo wat.. yaar..

Love,

SONIA.

PS: I wish I had thought of MRS. SIR first. arey yaar i was bored.. and thought of a nickname for myself.. that included d men i drool over😆 first it was sri.. but SIR was easier😆 so now its easy to say I LOVE SIR😆 or mrs. sir😉

Originally posted by: stahmed69

Dear Navs,

I forgot to mention that, the best bit of part 54 is making Bani say JAI rather then the somewhat formal Mr. Walia. arey hun that happened because i didn't know wat to write.. and i thought y not.. i mean he's her hubby not her freakin boss I have always wanted to see this in an FF and you have portrayed the scenario perfectly. well thank u so much.. glad i did a good job.. im so proud of myself now😆 I can understand if she calls him Mr. Walia in public, but, privately will JW make her call him JAI 😳? It will totally metl me - a throughbred JDD moment. yep jdd😉 now its their "thing"😕... public - mr. walia.. private - jai😉

Sonia.

Originally posted by: jigna_07

👏 👏 👏
so finally an update yaar u talk as if i didn't update in a long time😭
hehe
you just made me wait til today arey not my fault.. i couldn't write
hehe
man i am 😳
it was funny and romantic/hot i TOLD u it was gonna be comedy😆😆😆 thanx jiggu jaan. 😳 fo d commento and fo givin me that lil push to update.. u alwayz do that.. u and guli jaan.. haila😆
please continue soon

Originally posted by: khrhun_sheen

Jigs, I love it! 😉 jigs?? 😕

Okay sorry Navs, got kinda distracted.. after all its the Suns all the way. suns.. i thought it was moons.. now im lost 😆😆😆

Okay that was such a JDD moment. Awww, when he said J and ends with I.. I wasnt even thinking Jai, I was thinking Jani 😆 arey jaanu tu bhi.. thinkin jani. i thought that was a forum thing😉😆. I know I have lost it, this is what the forum is doing it tooo me. Great Job!! lol.. now u've proven it.. ur a true despo my friend.. no going back😆

"I just wanna spend the rest of my live with you" is my dedication to JB. awwwwwww beautiful song.. thanx fo d dedication😉 thanx jaan

Sheen

[quote=nyzbabigyal] samu ur commentos had me 🤣 i know u luv that song.. yaar ko maine 😉😉😉 pata hai pata hai.. and excuse me.. NO u can't have Jalebi he's taken.. 😉.. and excuse me.. i AM innocent.. very innocent part.. sachi it was😳.. and lol glad u liked d jalebi joke.. mere deemag mein aa gaya so i used it😕.. but glad u liked it.. thank u 🤗🤗🤗[/quote]

pls update the next part sooon.
davia

Navs,

that was totally cool, how he made her say

'J' ending with 'I' many many times!! 😆

Navs,I caught up yay! 😃

Lemme start on RR….. I am so happy with there reunion… God it took a while but hey they're together now right, that's what counts!
Loved how you portrayed Ranveer's jealousy…
Lol, seems like that one room 😆 did the trick 😉 and the fact that they were together

Pushkar is such a cutie I tell you! I'm very happy he's over that stupid Pia 🤢 even though she ain't that bad in your ff I still hate her 😡
And Aarti sounds really sweet please keep her that way!

Coming to JB… I knew it, I knew it… That stupid fight was about the money issue… Gawd…. But I'm happy they "kissed" and made up 😆
Enjoyed your drunken Bani 😆 didn't know she had that side in her!
Well now she has a room-mate 😳 When will she move back to where she belongs? Yes WM?

And please let Jiggie stay away from them, as far as possible!! Even Pia for that matter 😡

Continue soon! 😃

--Kajal

Originally posted by: davia389

pls update the next part sooon.
davia

so sorry for d delay hun.. will try to update soon😳

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Navs,

that was totally cool, how he made her say

'J' ending with 'I' many many times!! 😆

lol arey bhai jai walia hai😉 lol J ending wit I.. lmao.. 😆😆😆 glad u liked it... thanx hun.. 😳

Originally posted by: K__S

Navs,I caught up yay! 😃

Lemme start on RR….. I am so happy with there reunion… God it took a while but hey they're together now right, that's what counts! it did take a while didn't it but yep they're together now😃
Loved how you portrayed Ranveer's jealousy… glad u liked it.. a friend helped.. so yep ranveer bechara pyar ka maara
Lol, seems like that one room 😆 did the trick 😉 and the fact that they were together lol yep.. it surely helped😉

Pushkar is such a cutie I tell you! I'm very happy he's over that stupid Pia 🤢 even though she ain't that bad in your ff I still hate her 😡
And Aarti sounds really sweet please keep her that way! yep aarti and pooch forever.. as fo pia.. im gonna get REVENGE from her in this ff.. just wait.. i just gotta think of somethin😉

Coming to JB… I knew it, I knew it… That stupid fight was about the money issue… Gawd…. But I'm happy they "kissed" and made up 😆 yes yes.. d fight was about d money.. thanx to jigs😡 and yepp they 'kissed' and made up😉
Enjoyed your drunken Bani 😆 didn't know she had that side in her! lol well now u know.. and u've seen d drunken jealous side to her😉
Well now she has a room-mate 😳 When will she move back to where she belongs? Yes WM? of course she will.. soon... soon.. but yep she has a roomie😉

And please let Jiggie stay away from them, as far as possible!! Even Pia for that matter 😡 are yaar u dont' worry about those cartoons.. i'll take care of 'em😉

Continue soon! 😃 thank you so much hun fo takin ur time and catchin up and commentin.. means a lot.. will try to update soon😳 🤗 🤗 🤗

--Kajal

dont worry take ur time we can wait 😳