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Posted: 18 years ago
U finally managed to finish the update!!! haila you did that much!! but dude i knocked out by 930 yesterday!!!!!!!........... cuz i was sleepy!!!!!...

but haila.. what a part!!!!😳😳😳 i was smiling like anything!!!!!!!!!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ it was just awesome!!!!!.........

πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Bani is something else..... Jalebi!!! oh man that was soooo funny!!!!!!!πŸ˜† before i read what she was gonna say... i was thinking wat could be a word that starts with a J and I πŸ€” but i couldnt think of anything!!! but like... wen you said jalebi i was like πŸ˜† oh man!!!

wat an awesome part!! loved it jaani!! rocking as always!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
woo hoo update... πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ lol...um wait...last comment u said u were innocent...right...i was like ok...my navu is innocent...duniya ke harquatoon se door hai...lekin haia...i read this update anf first im all 😲 cuz its coming from my navu and then im all 😳 kya update hai...wah wah...woo hoo... πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› ...haila...when bani said jalebi im all...😲 😲 😲 and them im all 🀣 i can totally picture jais face...lol...haila...that was too much romance and passion...not that im complaining...oh no...no way...more of that ... 😳 haila...i knew your innocence...ha...went out the widow on the last few lines...he got to hear is name...jai...more than once... 😳 haila...gee...i wonder what that means...pls do tell navu... πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ update soon hun...cant wait
JAZ
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

thanx guyz.. hope u enjoy this part 😳 forgive me for d delay.. its tough to write a happy part wit all d BS we see in KS 😭 😭

*~*~*JRJK*~*~*



both slept in each other's arms..ok on d slightly small couch..how??? but that didn't bother 'em.. as they seemed pretty comfyok got it now i know how 😳 😳 wat more could they ask for maybe a bedπŸ˜†πŸ˜³ πŸ˜ƒ suddenly bani got up..uth gayi khumbhkaran as she felt d cool breeze from d open window.. she got up..still in jai's arms oye how can JW hav 2 ppl in his arms not possibleπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰ .. she looked at him.. as a slight smile played across her lips hhhhhmmm slight i was like had a big grin😳 πŸ˜ƒ .. she slowly moved .. moving from his arms.. gettin up.. she grabbed a blanket.. couch ke paas blanket kaise....putting it over him.. she went to close d window.. πŸ˜ƒ 😳 😊.. closing the window.. feelin d cool chill.. she opened her balcony door.. 😳 going outsideπŸ˜•.. as she went to her balcony.. she stood there lookin at the stars.. and everythin that had happened tonight 😳 πŸ˜ƒ .. how life changes .. one minute u r wondering something and the other minute something else happens.. but that's life..yep i know n sumtimes life stinks well sumtimesπŸ˜‰ πŸ˜• u put ur belief and faith in someone.. they betray u 😭 .. and then d one who u don't expect anything bac from.. gives u their all.. their faith.. trust… love.. belief 😳 😳

Now that was d case for her and mr. walia πŸ˜‰ .. who would've thought.. with all the hatred he had for her.. after their marriage.. she'd make a space for herself in his heart 😳 😳 πŸ˜‰ .. past memories rushed thru her head.. as she took a deep breath.. a shiver once again went down her spine.. but it wasn't cuz of d chill…it was due to someone's touchbaharon phool barsao mera mehboob aya hai😳 .. . before she could turn.. jai placed his chin on her left shoulder.. as he kissed her cheek.. which led to a smile and a blush on bani's face.. 😳 πŸ˜ƒ
JW: so u like hanging out in d balcony.. more πŸ˜• yeah she is mad
Bani: nahin mr. walia... I was just cold.. so came to close d window πŸ˜ƒ 😊
JW: and now ur standin in d cold.. that too in d balcony.. πŸ˜•
Bani: well I was just.. im sorry for waking u.. 😳
as bani rested her head on his shoulder.. putting her hands over jai's.. which were around her waist.. πŸ˜ƒ 😳 haila haila ye kya ho raha hai

JW: its ok.. ur forgiven.. now tell me.. wat could be so interesting.. than being wit me.. in my arms she likes the stars more than you πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ .. voh bhi balcony mein.. itni raat ko in the rain on the roof (read blcony) πŸ˜•
Bani: nothing.. I was just.. πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
bani looked at him.. as she turned around.. still in his arms.. she wrapped her arms around his neck 😳 😳
Bani: seriously as I said.. just came to close d window.. then ended up comin here.. and was just thinking about something 😳 πŸ˜ƒ jai smiled as he moved closer to her.. I don't know how close as they're already in each other's arms πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. jai put her forehead on hers (does that make sense..no navuit does not i tried to do it but it dint work, i mean if it was Jai put HIS forehead on hers, it makes sense like u know 2 foreheads together, but Jai put HER forehead on HERS, i seriously tried navu to put my forehed on mine but its alredy there?????🀣 🀣ok ok sorry i know its typo wateva picture it somehow) πŸ˜•

JW: well watever u were thinking about.. I hope the name starts wit J.. and ends wit I πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ yeah with a in the middle
Bani: J ends wit I.. πŸ˜• πŸ˜• it does .. it does 😳 πŸ˜ƒ
JW: oh yea.. since it does start wit J and end wit I.. πŸ˜‰ why don't u say the whole name πŸ˜‰
Bani: really?? πŸ˜•
JW: yes really πŸ˜ƒ
Bani: j.. ahem.. πŸ˜• 😳
JW: oh come on.. bani.. its not that hard u know
Bani: easy for u to say 😭
JW: seriously just say it once.. just once
Bani: j.. j.. πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
jai stood there waiting for her to say JAI as he looked at bani.. feeling tormented πŸ˜‰ .. and yet excited.. bani cleared her throat.. 😳 😳

JW: itna time bani.. its really not that hard
Bani: jalebi πŸ˜ƒlmao this is too fuuny now my moth is watering i want Jalebi, jalebi jai i dont know i just want wotever it is
jai stared at her.. jalebi πŸ˜• all that torture to hear his name on her lips and he gets JALEBI.. 😑 😑
JW: jalebi?? i can well imagine his expression lmao
bani: haan starts wit J.. ends wit I
πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜› as she let out a laugh.. jai just stared at her… she kissed his cheek.. lightly.. πŸ˜ƒ 😳
Bani: im tired.. gonna go to bed.. good night mr. walia 😳 😳 as she moved back.. out of his arms.. jai just stood there.. staring at her.. jalebi 😑 😑 .. he couldn't believe it.. bani had jokes.. that too on him…n it was too good Jai common u hav to give it to her.🀣🀣🀣vv

jai's hand moved down her arm.. as he held her hand.. interlocking his fingers wit hers.. while d other continued to be wrapped around her waist.. 😳 😳 moving to her back.. and waist... bani stood.. leanin on d balcony rail now.. as jai placed a kiss on her shoulder.. 😳 moving sideways.. to her neck.. then her throat.. bani moved her head back.. giving him d space.. πŸ˜‰ as jai's lips made their way upwards.. as jai approached her lips.. kissing her.. 😳 😳 jai looked at her.. her angelic face.. and he couldn't help but smile.. she was his.. just like he was hers.. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

oye oye hang on, neighbours abhi jaag rahe hai, andar jao tum dono.

navu love the song.


Jai whispered JW: u know Im still waiting to hear d word that starts wit J and ends wit I.. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ bani opened her eyes.. a smile appeared on her face
Bani: waiting but I already said jalebi.. 😳 πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜†
JW: tum aise nahin manogi 😑 koi aise nahin manta jai, u need to ty haderπŸ˜†







...somewhere in all of thisπŸ˜‰.. jai had moved her towards the bed smooth operator πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³ 😳 .. as d beautiful young night awaited these two...into a wonderful night of love, passion.. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ as they were now together.. united😳 😳 heart.. mind.. body.. soul πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
and through out this passionate journey πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³ ... jai had achieved his goal and had managed to hear the name that began wit J and ended wit I πŸ˜† if i might add...wayyy more than once aisa kyon bhala, was she doing Jai jai ram ji, i mean pooja wooja kar rahi thi kyaπŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ and d rest.. as the song goes πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³ 😳 yaar ko maine mujhe yaar ne sone na diya...pyar hi pyar kiya...pyar ne sone na diya my fav song navs 😳
navs yaar sorry cant do full commentoes, hav to run, go get dinner ready, but just loved it, loved it to bits. very good update n worth the wait. so sweet, n u made the whoe thing around his name, beautifully done, idont hav words to express now. n navu i want JAlebI now πŸ˜‰
n u r NOT innocent baby, nope nope. but then none of you guys r except meπŸ˜‰ thanks navs for a lovely updateπŸ‘


haila almost 7 pages on MS .. hope u guyz liked.. i tried 😳 😳 .. once again sorry for d delay 😳

Edited by sanam84 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey navs..
love this part..
it was so cute..
love jai in this ff.. 😳 😳
he is so cute and romantic..
hehe

continue soon
please

❀️niralixxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
mindblwing part!! πŸ‘

loved.. maybe coz it JB all the way through!! 😳 😳 😳

so in the end JW got what he wanted?? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†


continue soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Haila! That was absolutely mindblowing!!!! 😳 Loved this part! Funny and romantic! 😳 Hai!!! Blushing as red as a tomato here! 😳 πŸ˜† Please continue soon! Really looking forward to the next part!
πŸ˜‰ 😳

Love,
Goddess
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Posted: 18 years ago
Haila...did you want us to faint without giving us any waring...I couldn't prepare myself for this.... πŸ˜†.
Ok...I am all red from head to toe.. πŸ˜‰ ...need to get out for some airrrrrrrrrr... πŸ˜† 😳 πŸ˜› .
Ok all jokes apart..it was very well written.. πŸ˜ƒ and extremely romantic 😍 😍 πŸ˜›. Really worth the wait..I know most of are brains are not working because of KS.. it is just making us depressed..hope it will turn out alright...did I go too much out of topic πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”
Bani and JALEBI part was really funny..poor Jai πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† ....Well he did get what he wanted right πŸ˜‰ .
Hope you will update soon dear it was really awesome πŸ€— πŸ˜ƒ .


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Posted: 18 years ago

Dear Mrs. Sir,

First things first -- yours siggy is absolutely the best ---- MRS. SIR. I wish I thought of it. It's sooo perfect 😳😳😳.

I have had somewhat of a sad weekend and it's sad to admit (the sad person that I am) the reason is KS and JW. I have just fininshed reading your entire FF upto now and it has pulled me out of the dire KS mood. Every part of your FF had a JDD 😳 moment and the last part (54), well, all I can say is that, I am going to print it out and read it a few more times before I go to bed.

I just wanted to say thanks.

Love,

SONIA.

PS: I wish I had thought of MRS. SIR first.

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Posted: 18 years ago

Dear Navs,

I forgot to mention that, the best bit of part 54 is making Bani say JAI rather then the somewhat formal Mr. Walia. I have always wanted to see this in an FF and you have portrayed the scenario perfectly. I can understand if she calls him Mr. Walia in public, but, privately will JW make her call him JAI 😳? It will totally metl me - a throughbred JDD moment.

Sonia.

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Posted: 18 years ago
πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
so finally an update
hehe
you just made me wait til today
hehe
man i am 😳
it was funny and romantic/hot
please continue soon

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