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Posted: 18 years ago
#71
hey
loved the last part..
so sweet the way jai and bani are getting together..
i think it is really cute..


continue soon
please

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Posted: 18 years ago
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pls cotninue waithing for jb mariage..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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AWSOME AWSOME AWSome!
dey are gettine married! 👏 👏 👏
cant wait to read mroe
would hav rote a long comment... but in a rush!
REALLY LOOKIN FOWARD TO THE NEXT UPDATE!
GREAT JOB! 😆 😃 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
#74
AMAZING PART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏


yeah they are married!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE CONT SOON
thanks
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PLZ CONT SOON
GR8 FF LOVED IT
READ IT IN ONE GO
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey i just read ur ff..its awesum..plz cont soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey thanks evryone for yr lovely comments and sorry cudnt send out pms this time as i am loaded with work but next time i will for sure..sorry for that guys ...

chapte r 8

It's the wedding day Jai is looking absolutely handsome ans bani looking gorgeous in her golden lehenga, the couple was the cynosure of all eyes…and they did complement each other no doubt

Once the rituals were all over Jai and bani posed for the press and had their dinner and left for home…

At home jigs had organized some traditional games to be played between the bride and the groom so jai and bani sat down to play the first game where in a big bowl filled with petals and water they have to find the ring that's been put in that bowl ( sorry guys me not too familiar with these customs just saw it very recently at a wedding so remembered pardon me on this)

Everyone in Jai's family was rooting for bani to find the ring she new where it was but she let jai find it … Jai was maha happy ,adi said well looks like u r the winner when it cums to this wedding

Next jai had to open a puja thread tied arnd bani's wrist with one hand and vice versa

Bani took a lot of time but managed to open the thread on jai's wrist but jai was facing difficulty so when people were not looking at them bani helped jai and jai managed to open it… so overall jai was the winner cos he won all his games….

After the games were over bani was taken to jai's rum she saw arjun merrily sleeping and she went and sat rite next to him time was passing by and jai hadn't cum as yet bani got rid of most of her jewellery as it was bothering her and just wore the mandatory stuff and decided to wait for jai


After much waiting Jai entered the rum bani luked up and jai manages to catch the spark in her eyes she smiles and so does he

Jai walkin up to bani and whispering as arjun is asleep : why didn't u change go and change…

Bani; sorry sir ill just

Jai cudnt help it and started laufing as for bani she was a little irritated and said if u order like that then sumthin like this will only cum out of my mouth and I didn't change cos I thought koi aur aaya in the meanwhile to kya sochegaa

Jai: sorry for laufing and ordering u…

Bani : mujhe time lagega u change first then ill

Jai : ok

So jai takes his clothes and goes and changes quickly after that bani also goes to change and when she cums out she c's that jai has already dosed off so she quietly goes to her side of the bed and sleeps

Morning bani's sleep was broken by arjun waking her up … she got up to c that jai wasn't there then she heard some activity in the washrum and knew where jai was .

Bani lifted arjun and made him sit on the couch while she put the bed in order while she was doing so she heard jai cuming out of the loo whistling … and humming
The way you
Make me feel, yeah
The way you
Make me feel

The simple things
You do to me
Simple things you say
I sometimes can't believe
It's for real



The way you
Make me feel, yeah
The way you
Make me feel
The way you
Make me feel

she luked up at him and was quite surprised at his singing he was all the while looking at her and singing and when she luks at him he says gmorning…

Bani; gmorning

Bani asks him abt arjuns breakfast and everything she quickly gets arjun ready and then goes to have a shower herself and comes out wearing a fuschia saree with her wet hair fallin on her face jai just by chance luks up when she cums out( he today is working on his laptop in his rum instead of the study) and just keeps luking again his poor hand reaches his heart bani doesn't notice …

Bani just drying her hair she c's jai engrossed in work and asks aap aaj office nahin jaa rahe who proj that we were suppose to give in this week uska ho gayaa

Jai : ho rahaa hai listen koi jaane dega office isliye to rum mein baith kar I m working study mein bhi gayaa to mom will be after me…

Bani laufed and said aap office jaana chahte hain to jaiye ill handle mumma

Jai are u sure she wont listen to u

Bani : u wanaa bet

As she went down to the kitchen to help the rest and she brought up the topic with her mom in law .

Bani: mumma who I was looking after a project for jai aur its due this week to uska kaam complete nahin hai as I have been away frm work for a while so can jai go to work pls to do it its vimportant….

Jais' mom: jai ki taraf daari usne sikha ke bheja hai..

Bani : no mumma i am just telling u the truth ..aur maine bet bhi lagaee hai ki u wont say no to me as jai ne to bola tha ki ull say no

Jai's mum: ok he can bas shaam ki party ke liye time pe aajaaye

Bani hugs jai's mum and says thnk u

They all have breakfast and jigs whispers to bani hey did jai find his name in yr mehendi to which bani replied" abhi nahin mila" jai heard the part nahin mila and wondered kya nahin mila and was like wholly Christ I didn't give bani her wedding gift


So when bani entered the rum Jai was ready with the gift for her and he gave it to her

Jai: tum jigs se keh rahi thi nahin mila for something she asked I guessed she must be asking abt the wedding gift main to bhool gayaa kal here this is for u ho sake to wear it always…..

Bani opened the box to find a nice diamond pendant … and she immediately put it around her neck and jai was vpleased and then bani said : nahin mila iske liye nahin kahaa thaa

Jai: then kisliye

Bani : woh jaane dijiye.. aap office jaa sakte hain maine mumma se poocha she said if its ok with me its ok with her….

Jai : thnks woh project driving me nuts tumhare office mein na hone the truble I have to face

Bani just laufed at his anger…cum irritation

Jai left for work while bani spent the rest of the day with arjun and family

At work jai was having a tuf time as he felt restless rite thru and wondered if it was bec of bani was it her thought that didnt let him concentrate on his work …he wondered..


Its evening and the party is on bani is ready wearing a red saree and heavy jewellery which jai's mum has given her but no sign of jai

The party starts , gets over but no sign of jai bani tries to call him but it keeps ringing and he doesn't pik up ,rite thru the party people question abt jai bani covers up for him she does hear a few nasty taunts here and there but manages to handle them pretty well , jai's parents are mad at jai and are waiting for him to cum back

So 11 pm jai walks in jai's parents confront him jai's mum: jai ye kya hai maine bani se kahaa thaa don't ask for this permission tumhe hi iska repercursion sehnaa padhegaa but she didn't listen jai u r not single ne more u r married and today is yr first day and u screw up..honeymoon pe jaana hai nahin wahaan arjun is the excuse or time spend nahin karnaa apni wife ke saath nayi shaadi hui hai

Jai: sorry ma( saying to himself ab kaise bataoon ki bani ka aisa asar ho raha hai ki she doesn't let me concentrated on work also I am finding it so difficult to be away frm her…..)

Bani has cum down frm her room

Jai's dad: arreh tum kyon bol rahi ho let bani talk to him

Jai's mum: aap uski taraf se mat bolo , and jai sorry mujhe nahin bani ko bolo and I don't think that's enuf

Jais dad buttin in: abhi tumne kahaa he 's not single to let his wife scold him jaise tum mujhe kar rahee ho

Jai ,bani, jai's mum n dad all smile at this..


Jai's parents leave the scene leaving jai and bani behind

Bani: freshen up ill serve dinner for u

Jai did as he was told and came down to eat…

While eating he said to bani : I m sorry bec of me u had to hear ..

Bani looked at him her expressions spoke volumes ,interrupting him : sorry galti pe kahaa jataa u did nothing wrong as for agar kisi ne mujhse kuch kahaa so I don't think humara relationship itna weak hai ki we need to give explanations to others
And mumma wo to meri wajah se gussa hain she'll be fine and don't worry u can keep goin to work…

Jai kept luking at her and wondered was she godsent for him…

Jai: so u r not angry with me

Bani: na

Jai : aur main poore raaste kept thinking what ill do to cool u down maine kabhi tumhara gussa dekha bhi nahin na so kuch idea nahin thaa,yehi soch rahaa thaa what will I say …do

Bani: I thought u said ur charisma works on women and u dont have to say or do much fir sochnaa ( her voice mischievious)

Jai : u remember…….

Bani: ab pooja ek case hai na mere saamne…

Jai: my charisma does work with woman but then agar woh na bhi kare so it doesn't matter but as far as u r concerned it matters ( what made jai say that he didn't no)

Bani: o really

Jai: ab mumma se kaun sunegaa ki biwi ko khush nahin rakh sakte… n all abhi suna nahin maine
Jai luking all seedha in front of her and hiding his true feelings ki he wud feel bad if he hurt her but bani had rough idea of what he was getting at.

Once jai was done bani kept away the dishes jai helped her and then just remembered and asked

"Bani woh u didn't tell me mujhe kya nahin mila"

Bani: hmmm actually u have to find yr name in my mehendi… so jigs di asked abt that to maine kahaa nahin

Jai : o to abhi dhoondh leta hoon

He got hold of both of bani's palms and started searching bani just kept luking at him he was really sweet she thought even though her initial impression of him was very different

Jai: c there I got it he showed it to her…..

Bani: lets go ill give u r gift

So once in their rum bani gave jai his gift , he opened it to find a nice sweatshirt for him and he quite liked it…

Jai: thnx

Bani: u deserved it…..
jai was luking at her
bani : its very late so jaiye...
Jai: gnite
bani:gnite

And they both went to their respective sides to sleep

sorry for the mistakes...
so sorry guys itna boring part ke liye vsorry i promise to make the next one more fun frm my side next update soon ...

feedback as always welcum ...

ideas suggestions also welcum


Edited by bccool - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78
great part, please continue soon.

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
#79
👏
gr8 part
plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
Very well written..they are getting close...Mom aur Papa Walia ka dialog was sweet..

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