FF - JAI v/s BANI Part 9- pg 20

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nikita28

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Posted: 18 years ago

#121

Hi,

I just read all the chapters and all I have to say is:-

Brilliant yaar 😛.

I love Jai as the casanova...he gets what he wants, and he wants Bani 😛. I wish the real Jai Walia would be as determined as this, and next week sweep his pretty little wife off her feet and into his arms infront of Pia and Tarun 😉. Wishful thinking hey?

Getting back to the story.....I'm not surprised that Bani finds it difficult to concerntrate on other things when Jai is around....the guy has the effect 😳, but the worse thing is....he knows he does 😆.

Can't wait to read the next part, please update soon.

Nikita

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Taz234

@Taz234

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Posted: 18 years ago

#122

arre baba..bilkul boring nahin tha Manish character seemed so full of life and loved him picking on Jai a little...i wonder what saree he has in mind for Bani!!

Cont soon!!! Great!! 👏 👏

Taz! 😊

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Mansi

@silly_sweety

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Posted: 18 years ago

#123

Hey ppl…

I'm really very happy that all of you have loved this FF so much. I just can't believe I'm writing soooo much. I'm very glad you'll enjoy it…and I promise I'll try my best.

I know I'm very irregular in my updates, but plllzzzzz bear with it… It's a sincere request. I really get very little time.

Hope you'll like this part….

PART- 8

Manish takes Jai and Bani to the area where he had displayed the sarees. Bani is zapped, she cannot imagine where she was. Each and every saree was so beautiful and fantastic. It seemed completely out of the world. She and Jai started seeing all the sarees one by one. They were browsing through them when Bani stopped at a yellow one.

Bani- I think this is nice.

Jai- No.

Bani- Why?

Jai- Bani…It's too bright for you.

Bani irritated- What do you mean it's too bright for me? You think I can't carry off bright colours?

Jai- I… I didn't mean that…

Bani sternly- I'm going to wear the saree which I want to wear.

Jai also irritated- Bani, stop fighting for once and listen to me

Bani little angry- I'm the one fighting, or you're the-

Manish cutting her off- wohhohh…cool it guys…lets see something else..

Both of them shut their mouth, realizing this was not the right time and place to fight. They start seeing through the sarees again. This time Jai stops at a black one.

Jai- I think this is perfect (placing it on Bani to see how it looks)

Bani- Well no SIR (stressing on it)…black is an evening wear, and I thought we were going for a meeting rite now. (showing attitude) I wouldn't wear this now.

Jai little irritated- Stop showing attitude, and go try this out (giving her the saree)

Bani sternly- And if you think, showing me that good-for-nothing angry look of yours, I'll get scared and do what you tell me to, then let me tell you, that you still don't know BANI KAPOOR... I'm not going to wear this and that's final.

Jai- BANI…you-

Manish again interrupting- Ok… I think that's enough for one day. Don't you'll get tired fighting (then started smiling) or should I assume, that you'll enjoy it. Anyways we'll discuss that later. And about the saree, before you'll pick another saree and fight, I think I'll do the honours.

He sees through most of them, first looking at the saree and then at Bani, just to decide which would suit her best, until his eyes fall on one of them, looking at which he gives a broad smile. He takes it out, and brings it to Jai and Bani.

The saree was a beautiful pink one.

Both jai and Bani's eyes widen, looking at the magnificent piece of art. Both of them loved it at the first sight of it, and out of excitement, said together.

Jai & Bani (together)- This is perfect.

Manish was pleasantly surprised at their reaction. He felt some kind of a spark between them. Something completely different, unusual, strange, weird, simple, and what not. They just seemed perfect, he thought.

Jai smiling- Manish… dude, your choice is just awesome.

Bani- Ya.. Manish, this saree is fantastic. I love it (taking the saree from his hand and putting it on her self, to see how it looks)

Manish teasing- Well thanks guys. I know I'm too good… Well if I would have left the task for you'll to accomplish, then I don't think Bani would end up wearing a saree…

All three of them start laughing.

Manish- Bani, why don't you go and change? The room is right there (pointing towards a door, across the hallway)

Bani hesitantly- Manish…actually…I..

Jai and Manish (together a little worried)- What happened?

Bani surprised at their reaction, but softly- No…no…nothing to worry. Actually I don't know how to wear a saree, coz I've never worn one.

Both, Jai and Manish start laughing.

Manish- Such a small problem… Wait..

Manish called his assistants to where they were standing.

Manish to his assistants- This is the saree Ms Bani is supposed to wear, I want you'll to get her ready within 10 mins, and see to it that all necessary changes are made. She should look gorgeous.

The assistants nodded and took Bani into their changing room, leaving Manish and Jai alone.

Manish- She's perfect for you, Jai.

Jai was still seeing Bani go into the room. Manish's comment got him out of his daze.
Jai looked at him in surprise.

Manish- Don't look at me like that, and don't you dare try to fool me or lie to me. Jai, I've seen you with so many girls, or rather women, since the last four years…but you've never seen them the way you see Bani, you've never shown so much importance to them, the way you show Bani. I can read it in your eyes, that you love her.

Jai shocked- Love…are you mad, Manish. Bani is much younger than me. How can I even think something like that, it would be so disgusting on my part-

Manish- Who are you trying to fool, yourself or me? Since when how you started taking age into consideration. I agree it does make a difference, but I can see the passion for her in your eyes, Jai. If you'll both keep denying your feelin-

Jai shocked again- BOTH??

Manish- Jai, have you left your brains at home? Can't you see, she likes you too.
You'll both are so damn foolish. But I can't believe you to be so dumb, Jai. Common.. it's so damn obvious.

Jai- Manish, I thought she hates me. Didn't you see, she doesn't leave a chance to fight with me.

Manish- Jai, don't you understand, she's trying to hide her feelings by putting up a brave act. But, I think her temper is no less than yours, so you'll have your best match, buddy.

Jai- Manish, you know what…I do care about her, coz something is different about her. I'm immensely attracted to her, and I've never felt this way for any woman before, I agree. But LOVE… I don't know.. It's just been 2 days since I know her…it's too soon to even think about it. But I'll surely keep your advice and suggestion in mind, and work on it. Thanks buddy.

Manish smilingly- What are buddies for…so no thanks. Glad you've accepted your feelings, and at last you've found you're match. I'm quite confident this relationship will work out, after all JAI WALIA has found a match to his temper.

Jai gave him a friendly punch and started laughing.

Manish- Jokes apart, Jai…Bani is a very different and simple girl, so be careful with her. Don't hurt her…

Jai raised an eyebrow- wohowohwo… Bani, already has quite a lot of supporters… Do I need to worry?

Manish laughing- No…no…ofcourse not. I would rather die, before coming in JAI WALIA'S way to his lady love.. (becoming a little serious) Jai, it's just that Bani is a very nice girl, and knowing you, your very used to the hanky-panky ones.

Jai- I can understand, Manish…Don't worry I'll handle it. Anyways I've already got a punishment once, for being naughty (grinning).. I have no intention to experience it again.

Manish burst out laughing- Now…now..I was perfectly right…Jai Walia has indeed found the right girl. I still can't believe you got your PUNISHMENT (and burst out laughing again) Now I don't need to worry about Bani.

Jai was pretty embarrassed at the word 'punishment', and could see Manish laughing his guts out, when he saw the door of the room opening, where bani had gone. He hit Manish with his elbow lightly and said.

Jai- Now dude, you better keep your mouth shut, or else-

Manish cutting him off- I know…I know…

Both of them couldn't speak a word further, as Bani had stepped out of the room, and was walking towards them. Jai's mouth flung open, and his eyes were roaming all around her body.

Edited by silly_sweety - 18 years ago

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Tanima

@britishish

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Posted: 18 years ago

#124

I just started reading your FF...great story!!

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

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Posted: 18 years ago

#125

Fantastic,

Loved the fights between J & B and the Manish & Jai convo!! Very nicely written!

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exploringmyself

@exploringmyself

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#126

👏
gr8 part...
jai to gaya kaam se ...abhi se punishment bhi mil gaye... 😆
ab age kya hoga..hmm...
plz continue soon..

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silki

@joa123

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Posted: 18 years ago

#127

gr8 part 👏 👏
luv the fight b/w JB
Manish is really nice...
do cont soon

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#128

wow awesome update yaar 👏 u made me laugh 😆 😛 ... manish n jai's talk was vgood n thx 2 manish jai realasied his feelings 4 bani 😳 .... i l-o-v-e jb fighting 4 little things n imagining jb fighting it made me laugh 😆

u write awesome 👏 n don't worry about updating early or late but don't update vlate 😃 😃 😃

continue asap 😛