Originally posted by: lonely14
Swati,
However much you might hate Jai, i'll tell you one thing, he would NEVER do what he is doing right now in your ff. But hey you are the writer whatever satisfies you is good enough, after all writing is to satisy yourself.
Shina,
why u r saying that i hate ur baby, don't u think that i have given him much younger wifey toy now to play with, even younger than bani which i think he is fond of. believe me he can do this also what he is doing in my ff. when ur baby can say mera bacha mera bacha to pia and kiss her on forehead after pia staged that drama then he is capable of doing this also and he is the true JW. and very true i am writing it to satisfy me as i am tired of KS now.
As for the detectives they are morons, no offence or anything but Jai needs to hire other people.
kya karro mujhe to bani ke alawa sub log morons hi lagte hai and now even he will hire he won't be able to reach bani easily as now he is busy with ur sweet pia. 😉 akhir naye naye shaadi hui hai.😉 purana pyar jo tumhare baby ko mil gaya hai.
Complications in pia's pregnancy??? why?
because of her first abortion and then surgery for her ovarian infection.
He made her sign a contract that she won't leave Walia Mansion??? There's gotta be loopholes in that contract, send me a copy will ya i'll do the liberty of finding the loopholes and save her from the future trouble. and Yes every contract has loopholes you just gotta find them, and don't tell me there is no way of getting out of it, if not then i am going to just use the theory used in Harry Potter😆 (What? it's just fiction meeting fiction).
the contract is something like that pia won't leave WM without permission and without JW otherwise she will have no rights on her child or JW's property. so u r free to find out loopoles to save ur pia.
I seriously don't care if Jai and Bani are together or not, hey i would be happy if ALL the dixits are out of his life, and he can chose someone else like Roshini and be happy in his life.
i will think over it and what is the guarantee that they won't cheat him.
and you know one more thing, instead of getting angry all i was thinking of was how to save Pia from the future wrath of Jai Walia without actually hurting Jai. See it's hard to like both of them without hurting one in the process.
i know shina u must have felt happy after JP marriage i never thought that u will feel angry after reading this part, parts for ur anger r still to come. so have some patience and faith in me.😉 by the way who u like more jw or pia?
Take care,
Shina
after few parts i will have to take care to save me from shina's wrath so i better start practising now.
Luv,
swati
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