You & I or...'Us? ~ Ch 5 - Pg 66 - Page 21

oooo.. so he remebers her.. and doesnt seem to be too happy! ah well.. get used to it Jai! 😉

and he still kinda cares.. nosey.. about her marriage!

international direct dial? 😆 😆 i hope it doesnt so he's stranded there with her! 😉

great upate!

Me second!!😃

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Hanu my nautanki baaz!!🤗

Sorry it took me so long to get round to reading this - blame it on my lazy habits!!😳

Now for the update (s)!!

JW is such a gentleman; demanding an IDD straight away!!😕.........Hmph, hope the rain was enough to cut all calls, transport ways, and any thing else so that he can be stuck there!!😃

But I loved the attitude he displays!!....Arrogant but I'm sure love can solve that!😉

Going right back to the start:

As usual your descriptions were amazing!!👏.......every little thing was clearly defined until you made sure all the details stuck in our heads!

One of my most favourite parts were the photograph of Bani and Nashikant!.........I love the bonding that they have!😳

Also agree with Bani's decision not to go ahead with the wedding....after all, if she had married Yash, what would have happened to our JW?!😉

Loved how the story moved on to Mt. Abu and Bani's relationship with her siblings was portrayed!!👏👏👏

And then JB!!

Haila, jaanu the way you put their feelings and emotions was amazing!!😳

Waiting for the next part!!😉

3rd

Lovely update Jojo😊..........loved it to the bits.......Jai seemed to be a confused man yaar......he is kind of nosy about her wedding but doesn't want to show his feeling........no manners, no culture......wanted to make a international call.....let him make one thing clear that he belongs to her only there is no other way around........can't wait for part - D.......please post it as soon as your'e done with it.......😆

lovely update jojo.......always full of surprises and twists.

so he remembers her, but doesn't seem to like that fact, but is still inquisitive about her wedding 😕

well jw tough luck......she is meant for u, no two ways about it 😆 and where are ur damn manners, seedha IDD call demand karne laga hai......watch it buddy. 😆 i hope there is a power cut for one whole year, that should teach him a lesson. 😆

r u serious???? u r very good at writing ffs 😊
but im still confused abt lot of things
so write the nxt part sooooooon 😊

Why did you stopped it there 😭 😭 😭
It is sooooooooo interesting.A very wonderful update.
Hope the power goes off and he gets stuck ther with her for 1 whole day and then changes his mind and wish to remain with her till he dies 😉 😆 😆
Please continue soon.
Shiya

wonderful part pls cont soon........

Mind blowing simply mind blowing please continue soon !!!!!

Sharan XXX

Wonderful update dear.....really thanx 4 updating.....so jai remembers her....beautiful part ... 👏 .enjoyed reading the whole part....again destiny brings them together....looking forward to the next part....

jo jo dear just loved the update. so bani lives in his dream land and he sees her in his fantasies for 9 years that was really great dear. i just want them to be together now and i think he is the reason that bani did not marry the person of his parents choice.

please continue soon

swati