Candle In the Wind; Note Pg160;New Thread - Page 99

tht was amazing!!! loved all of it!!! wht's wrong w/jai's kundali?? are they getting married or no?? or will they get married and have lot of problems? i no i no...i should just wait and see what happens....but i wanna no 😆 😆 😆

update soooon 👏

hey great part! it wasnt too long just perfect! Jai and Bani going to get married 😊 i liked how u described the horse back riding! continue soon,


Maro 😛

awesome update shoba...loved it...it was amazing...does Jai not understand his feelings or is he is a duffer...

Ohh...I am scared about what the pundit said...i hope it has nothing to do with the little raaz Jai has...

cant wait for more...please continue soon...Rivs

Folks, can you do me a favor and let me know who you want to win the race.

Roberto,
Bani

Or a

Tie?

You can send me a PM, post it here, doesn't matter...

This Bani must be the first Indian woman jockey in the history of Indian Derbys!!! The rush, dynamism of the rider in the last lap of this part 17 was effectively captured.

Enjoyed this part from start to the finish line,ALL of it.

Thanks.

Hehe of course I want Bani to win 😳 😛 😃

Di pakka promise today I'm going to read and comment 😳 Tazoo di ka virus mujpar chad gaya hai lazy hone ka!!!

👏 👏 👏 Awesome part Sheena. Amazing.

Loved the Roberto - Bani interaction.

And Jai being such a sweetheart.

Please update soon.

And yes, let Roberto win but Bani allowing it. 😉

wonderful part! poor ranveer is trying hard to fit in.
can't wait for rano's revenge!
the race?? i want roberto to win but he knows that bani let him win.. as a retirement present!

Continue soon

Roberto could win but within a whisker......that ways Bani would have lost only b'coz seasoned skill had the slightest edge over natural,well honed skill.

Hey Sheena!

That was definitely a long update, which of course we don't mind. It was great as usual. You have great writing skills.

So when is the wedding, is it going to be postponed. I was wondering if they do end up getting married earlier then is something bad going to happen. I know my brain is working in over drive again with questions. Sorry. I guess I am thinking too far ahead.

Jai is a total love struck teenager. He is lost case. Bechara. The library is always a good make out spot. lol. I am sure Jai already knew that.

So how is Rano going to get even with Ranveer. You they make a great couple. Both intelligent people. Do you have any future plans for them.

The races were great. I didn't like that other racer. He annoyed me. He could retire as of right now.

Loved it.

Lots of Love