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Krishna

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Posted: 18 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

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btkr

@btkr

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Posted: 18 years ago

#222

Hi Sheena,

Fantastic parts - finally they meet as adults! Great description of the race, Rano?, Jai's feelings of "something missing"...

Always a good read! 👏 👏 👏

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Urooj

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Posted: 18 years ago

#223

Loved it Sheena!
it was great!
👏 👏 👏
I see Nish's curse is finally coming true somehow
poor jai 😭 😭
So Bani finally took likings to her dream unless this is to help her live 😕
Ok i know i'm being a little jumping to conclusion but what can i do? adat se majboor hoon 😆
Please continue soon
Rooj

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TINK

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Posted: 18 years ago

#224

ooommmgggg 😲 ...sheena....haila!! did he accidently kill her mom ...ooommmggg😲😲😲.....ok...that i might cause a problem 😭 😭 😭 .....wht u think???? 😆 .....i mean she is bound to loose the plot 😡 😡 😆 😆 ...like in te real thing 😭 😭 .....hahaha.....or we might be in luck 😃 😃 ...she might be preggars when she finds out 😉 😉 ....hint...hint 😆 😆 ......ok...tinku is not gud at hinting 🤣 .....i luved that part yaar 😉 .......

.....so finally the dude finds out she is not a BOY 🤣.....great....one big confusion out of the way 😉 ....

....man its sooo exciting 😉 😉 😉 ...i came on here...to comment for this part 😃 😃 😃 ...and ur soo quick 👏 👏 👏 ...we got another part 😳 😳 😳 .....gonna goand read that now 😃 😃 😃 ......thankies 🤗🤗🤗 ....for the update 😉 😉 😉 ...........

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TINK

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Posted: 18 years ago

#225

Sheena.. tinku *Faints* and faints again 😳 .....they meet again 😉 😉 😉 ....haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaiiiii 😳 ....and jai was grinning to himself 😃 ....aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwww 😳 ....and he tried looking around to see if she was doing horse riding or not 😳 .....ooommmggg 😲 ...if that is not sweet 😳 😳 ...i dont know wht is 🤔 😳 😳 ........

...go bani...she won the race 👏 ...awesome...now that is wht i call gud horse riding 😃 😃 😃 .....well..i dont have a klue about it 😆 ....but the way u described the race 😃 😃 ....had me all jummpy 😆 😆 😆 ......soo imaginable 👏 👏 👏 .....great 👍🏼 ....

yaar have learnt soo much ...about horses....ur really gud........ 😃 😃 😃

...and rano...well i am assuming its rano 😉 😉 😉 ...man she cracks me up 🤣 ....underage betting🤣🤣🤣....thats wht i call a rebel 😆 ....hahaha....and jai got 52 lakhs 😃 😃 😉 .....wow....thats gud.........might i say in a very British accent🤣🤣🤣..." that was jolly gud chaps....bravo bravo" 👏 .....hehehehehe........

cant wait for them to meet up and stuff 😳 😳 😳 ....man i have a gud feeling about this 😳 ...i hope ...fingers crossed that bani is well of with money 😃 😃 😃 .. afta all the racing has began 😃 😃 😃 ....will be gud to see her with some attitude 😉 😉 😉 ...hahahah🤣🤣🤣...........

plzzzz cont soon yaar 😃 😃 ......mere billi 😳 😳 ...man tuse toh ajj kamaal kardita 👏 👏 👏 ....i luved this part 😳 ......

p.s i hope this monica ...women does not annoy tinku 😡 😡 ....varna!!!! 🤣...hehehe

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TINK

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Posted: 18 years ago

#226

haila!! sheena sorry i am bugging 😆 .....but was on the net...and i found this 😳 😳 😳 ....reminded me...when u mentioned that jai has a bike 😳 .....hahahhahaha 😆 😆 😆 ......well this one looks a bit like the biker bikes ..if u know wht i mean 😉 😉 😉 .....hehehehehe

and the girl at the bck 😆 😆 ....well i thought about for a long time 🤔 .....thinking who could it be 😆 😆 😆 .....and then 😳 😳 😳 ...i got it ...its TINKU 😳 😳 😳 ......hehehehe 😆 😆 😆 ......

..ok...i am bigging u 😉 ....soo betta be off 😳 😳 ......going to bug tazoo for a update 😉 😉 ...see if it works 😛 😛 😛 .....

luv ya
tinku 🤗

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amisha

@amiee

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Posted: 18 years ago

#227

wow that was such a wonderful update so bani finally fulfilled her dream of becoming a jockey will jai go and search for bani and introduce him self or will she remember him oh god sheena pls cont soon or i wont be able to sleep 😆

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Ridhi

@ridizzz

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Posted: 18 years ago

#228

Fab part.
loved it.
Jai came back....helping raising Jigs children....handling business....interesting.
Awwwwwwww so caring to him looking for Bani.
Finally they meet and see what profit Bani had brought him in their first meeting after all these years.
plz cont. soon.

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@bkeero

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Posted: 18 years ago

#229

That was great Sheena. I guess I am little behind on commenting. I just finished reading the last two chapters.

Jai is always going to have a different girl with him isn't he. One day though Bani will be by his side…

He hasn't seen or heard from her in that long. I am so glad he knows about her now. Will he be able to keep track of her now.

Are they ever going to have a long conversation without being interrupted someone is always there.

Looking forward to the next part. Continue soon. Oh I did update so can't give me the line you update first.

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Miss_Diey

@Miss_Diey

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Posted: 18 years ago

#230

Finally, they meet again. What a beautiful meeting. I'm so happy for Bani and Rano.
It's very pleasant to see Jai smiles again and i heard his heart beat 😆 😆 😆. Bani should be a beautiful woman now even is she isn't sexy she must be wonderful.
I'm sure Jai will fall for her very soon 😉
I just caught up your ff, and it's amazing and fantastic. Just keep on your great job. I love horses too, i think it's a beautiful animal 😉

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