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Posted: 18 years ago

Hey sheena…sorry took my time to comment yaar..u were sure fast with the update this time…😆…

So Its year 2001 and a day at the races woo hoo!!! 😃 😃 Better go get my best hat…😆…need to look good na…Jai being there and all!! 😉 😆
Really loved the whole atmosphere at the races….so he had been searching for his BD…oops now Bani…but wasn't having much luck…he probably still wouldn't have found her it it weren't for that chasmish Rano…awww…bless her wanted to buy a b'day pressie for her sis…made jai put a bet on an unknown horse and rider. Loved Rano's entry…very lively!!

Jai going down to congratulate the rider….haiiiii….

For an unknown reason, his heart started beating wildly
Jiya dhadak dhadak…jiya dhadak dhadak…😳 control Jai!!!

She laughed nervously and broke free from her grip and took a step back. She looked up into his face to thank him and her mouth remained open as she lost herself in his chocolate brown eyes that were speckled with gold.

They stared at each other for interminable minutes, neither wanting to break the hold.
Awww…Teri aankhon ke siwa duniya mein rakha kya hai….ooohh…me going all musical!!! 😆

"Bani" he breathed in finally.
Yes Jai…that is ur Bani darling…ab kaisi lag rahi hai???

Jai saw little of Bani afterwards as she was led to the stage to receive her trophy. Jai had a smile playing on his lips as he made his way back to Monica, at least he knew that she achieved her dreams!! He pumped his hands in the air like a little kid and laughed at his own happiness.

Sheena yaar…great and exciting updated 👏 👏…was on the edge of my seat…hoping for bani to win the race….but how can u end it there 😔…things were getting really interesting!!! Jaldi karna…me wanna know what happens next!!!

Taz!!! 😃
Edited by Taz234 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Once again Sheena, an amazing part!!👏👏👏

I just can't figure out how you manage to decsribe each part so that I have a private little movie running in my head!!😕😆

Knew it would be Bani as the jockey, and ofcourse that she would win!!😉

Had a great big grin on my face when she fell into his arms!!😳

I'm guessing the 17 year old's Rano!!😛.......Loved the little bit about the 'piggy-bank'.....so cute!!😆

And ofcourse Jai's description!!😳

Jiggu I see is the same!!......poor Aditya - love surely is blind!😕

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Posted: 18 years ago
BRILLIANT PART 👏 👏 👏

i had a feeling that the jockey was going to be bani..yay she was and jai has fallen in love ith her!
im glad she made it big! 😃

2 lacs.. jai must be very pleased. so was that pia who askd him to bet... [

hopefully they'll have a chance to talk 😛 😳

i love this FF and i read your 2 other ones.. they were brilliant! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
shoba...this was amazing..they meet finally...and what a way to meet...

And what an amazing way to introduce Rano...she seems a lot different than the Rano we all know...and I am hoping this different will be good different...

I read ur response to my previous post...I truly hope u can change the accident piece...
Quick question -
How old is Bani now? And Jai?

Rivs
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: TINK

Sheena.. tinku *Faints* and faints again 😳 .....they meet again 😉 😉 😉 ....haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaiiiii 😳 ....and jai was grinning to himself 😃 ....aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwww 😳 ....and he tried looking around to see if she was doing horse riding or not 😳 .....ooommmggg 😲 ...if that is not sweet 😳 😳 ...i dont know wht is 🤔 😳 😳 ........

Ain't he sweet!! Tinku, I am going to faint too!! Now we are going to get faintisis....

...go bani...she won the race 👏 ...awesome...now that is wht i call gud horse riding 😃 😃 😃 .....well..i dont have a klue about it 😆 ....but the way u described the race 😃 😃 ....had me all jummpy 😆 😆 😆 ......soo imaginable 👏 👏 👏 .....great 👍🏼 ....

lakadi ki kaathi kaathi pe ghoda
ghode ki dum pe jo maara hathauda
dauda dauda dauda ghoda dum utha ke dauda

ghoda pahuncha chauk mein chauk mein tha naai
ghodeji ki naai ne hazaamat jo banaai
chag-bag chag-bag chag-bag chag-bag
ghoda pahuncha chauk ...
dauda dauda dauda ghoda dum utha ke dauda

ghoda tha ghamandi pahuncha sabji mandi
sabji mandi baraf padi thi baraf mein lag gai thandi
chag-bag chag-bag chag-bag chag-bag
ghoda tha ghamandi ...
dauda dauda dauda ghoda dum utha ke dauda

ghoda apana tagada hai dekho kitani charabi hai
chalata hai maharauli mein par ghoda apana arabi hai
chag-bag chag-bag chag-bag chag-bag
ghoda apana tagada hai ...
baanh chhooda ke dauda ghoda dum utha ke dauda

lakadi ki ...



yaar have learnt soo much ...about horses....ur really gud........ 😃 😃 😃

Thanks yaar!! I love horsieeeeeess....

...and rano...well i am assuming its rano 😉 😉 😉 ...man she cracks me up 🤣 ....underage betting🤣🤣🤣....thats wht i call a rebel 😆 ....hahaha....and jai got 52 lakhs 😃 😃 😉 .....wow....thats gud.........might i say in a very British accent🤣🤣🤣..." that was jolly gud chaps....bravo bravo" 👏 .....hehehehehe........

He He!! Doesn't she remind you of Jaya Bhaduri in Zanzeer or whatever,
Chakku Chhuriyan Tej Kara Lo

cant wait for them to meet up and stuff 😳 😳 😳 ....man i have a gud feeling about this 😳 ...i hope ...fingers crossed that bani is well of with money 😃 😃 😃 .. afta all the racing has began 😃 😃 😃 ....will be gud to see her with some attitude 😉 😉 😉 ...hahahah🤣🤣🤣...........

Tinku, kya hints de rahi ho!!
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

plzzzz cont soon yaar 😃 😃 ......mere billi 😳 😳 ...man tuse toh ajj kamaal kardita 👏 👏 👏 ....i luved this part 😳 ......

Mein aur kamaal dar diya!!
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Mein tho bholi bhali hoon, nadaan hoon, bilkul Bani bachi ki jaisi...Horse dung gift packet mein rakh diya, Bani ne.....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


p.s i hope this monica ...women does not annoy tinku 😡 😡 ....varna!!!! 🤣...hehehe



Chee, Yeh Monica tho incidental hai, yaar one episode ka extra...tu bilkul fikar nahin karna!!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Teri Pyari Bholi Bhali billi!! Mieeeeeoooooowwww!!
Edited by Sheena_Row - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: TINK

haila!! sheena sorry i am bugging 😆 .....but was on the net...and i found this 😳 😳 😳 ....reminded me...when u mentioned that jai has a bike 😳 .....hahahhahaha 😆 😆 😆 ......well this one looks a bit like the biker bikes ..if u know wht i mean 😉 😉 😉 .....hehehehehe

Haila, you are not bugging me yaar, you are such cutie pie, tinku, rinku, pinku!!!! Mwaaahhh!! This biker dude looks like Natkat Nattu yaar, not Jai -- 😆 But you look like an angel, kitna cute picture hai, yehhh!!




and the girl at the bck 😆 😆 ....well i thought about for a long time 🤔 .....thinking who could it be 😆 😆 😆 .....and then 😳 😳 😳 ...i got it ...its TINKU 😳 😳 😳 ......hehehehe 😆 😆 😆 ......

Aahhhhh, TINKU dear.....You look like an angel...I need to give you a ride on Jai's bugatti for sure!! I will....watch out....😳

..ok...i am bigging u 😉 ....soo betta be off 😳 😳 ......going to bug tazoo for a update 😉 😉 ...see if it works 😛 😛 😛 .....

Bugging me? don't worry yaar!! You are not bugging me...But do let us go and bug Taz, LMAO, LOL, I am all in too!! Let's beg her to update!!😆

luv ya
tinku 🤗



Luv you too, buddy!! 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗Huggies back at ya!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rivya

shoba...this was amazing..they meet finally...and what a way to meet...

And what an amazing way to introduce Rano...she seems a lot different than the Rano we all know...and I am hoping this different will be good different...

I read ur response to my previous post...I truly hope u can change the accident piece...
Quick question -
How old is Bani now? And Jai?

Rivs


Thanks Rivs,

Bani is 22 and Jai is 32 they are 10 years apart...Yes, Rano will be a different character in this FF. Hope you will like her part!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nibbles

Once again Sheena, an amazing part!!👏👏👏

Nibbles!!!!! Thanks you sweetie😛😛😛

I just can't figure out how you manage to decsribe each part so that I have a private little movie running in my head!!😕😆

That is soooo nice of you to say!! 😳😳😳

Knew it would be Bani as the jockey, and ofcourse that she would win!!😉

She sure is a winner!! 😃Gumption, Spunky!!

Had a great big grin on my face when she fell into his arms!!😳

What a way to fall for some one!!😳

I'm guessing the 17 year old's Rano!!😛.......Loved the little bit about the 'piggy-bank'.....so cute!!😆

Thanks, she wants to buy a prezziee for her di...😉😉😉

And ofcourse Jai's description!!😳

You know, here I was thinking that I do injustice to the characters in describing them!! I could write one or two sentences about the looks!! But I am always in a hurry to write the part!!😭😭😭

Jiggu I see is the same!!......poor Aditya - love surely is blind!😕

Poor Aditya, I love his character, he is sooo sweet, unfortunately he falls in love with the Kadwaa Khatti Jigs...😭😭😭



🤗🤗🤗🤗Lots of huggies dear!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

BRILLIANT PART 👏 👏 👏

Thanks Bugs, you are very sweet!!

i had a feeling that the jockey was going to be bani..yay she was and jai has fallen in love ith her!
im glad she made it big! 😃

She made it to the first rounds in a big race, she has a long way to go!!😉

2 lacs.. jai must be very pleased. so was that pia who askd him to bet... [

52 lacs, the odds were 1 - 52 and he placed 1 lac!! She is going to bring him luck!! 😳😳😳

hopefully they'll have a chance to talk 😛 😳

They got to talk and they will...unfortunately there will be another leap before they meet again!!

i love this FF and i read your 2 other ones.. they were brilliant! 👏 👏 👏

I am glad you liked AZ and BB, AZ was semi-serious, BB tried to be funny, CITW is more adventurous!! So I hope you will like it going forward!!
Thanks for reading and commenting!! Hugs to you!!
🤗🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amiee

wow that was such a wonderful update so bani finally fulfilled her dream of becoming a jockey will jai go and search for bani and introduce him self or will she remember him oh god sheena pls cont soon or i wont be able to sleep 😆




Thanks dear!! I will try to finish something yaar, but it's going to be hard, Just came back from at 7:30, cooked till 8:15, watching prison break and didn't eat yet!! On top of it, writing replies to everyone!!

But I promise that Mein ek Loorie sunaongi tujhe sone ke liye!! 😆😆😆
aaja nindiya aaja
nainan beech samaajha
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nainan beech samaajha
aaja aaja aaja
amrit ras barsaa ja
pavan jhulaaye palna
mamta lorri gaye ho
pavan jhulaaye palna
mamta lorri gaye ho
sheetal sheetal kirnay.n
halke halke saaye ho
tu bhi khushbo bankar
palkan saje sajaaja
aaja aaja aaja
amrit ras barsaaja
aaja nindiya aaja
nainan beech samaaja
badli mein soya hai chanda
nadiya mein jhilmil paani ho
badli mein soya hai chanda
nadiya mein jhilmil paani ho
in akhiyon mein soya hai
tu hi nindiya raani
tujhpar vaari jaoon
lalna ko mere sulaaja
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amrit ras barsaa ja
aaja nindiya aaja
nainan beech samaajha
harr pal dekhoon isko
phir bhi chain na paoon
harr pal dekhoon isko
phir bhi chain na paoon
main khud nindiya bankar
nainan mein bas jaoon ho
mere nayyan ki jyoti
mera nanha raja
mere nayyan ki jyoti
mera nanha raja
aaja aaja aaja
amrit ras barsaa ja Lot of hugs.....

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