Candle In the Wind; Note Pg160;New Thread - Page 10

Originally posted by: jigna_07

sheena!
that was awesome!
poor jai
his mother is sick
please continue soon

Jigs:

Thanks - He doesn't like to accept sympathy!! Our man is stubborn!!😆😆😆

Originally posted by: amiee

thank you sheena you are such a wonderful friend
it was a awesome part cant wait for jb meeting cont soon.................

You are welcome, sweetie!!

Take care!!

Originally posted by: AMAL722

I am looking forward to reading the next update

Thanks

Just updated it!! Thanks for commenting!!

Originally posted by: rivya

first

Absolutely loved this update...infact the whole concept is awesome...

love the way u have drawn similarities between the leads, yet put down their difference...its awesome...

Rivs

Hi Rivs,

Thanks for liking the concept - Yeah they are alike and different - all the more interesting to contrast and compare!! Thanks for reading!!

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Originally posted by: aNsHu_tEjPaL

tht was mindblowing!!!! 👏 i feel so bad for jai 😭 and bani 😭 ......she's so sweet........u no i am really waiting for bani to slowly melt the ice inside jai and bring him back to living! 😳 ur such an amazing writer!!! tht was a great part.........pls update the next part soon b/c i cant wait for jai to finally find out that BD is a girl 😃 ......can't wait to see the reaction

Anshu,

Thanks so much! I really like the adjective 'Mindblowing'😆
I really like Bani in KS too, she is such a sweet thing, stubborn, practical, but will go the end of earth for the person she loves!!

Thanks for all the wonderful encouragement!!

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Great part.
Beautiful........loved it.
Roshni trouble maker is also there.
Well well what we have both Jai and BD think about each other ha......loved it.
Looking forward to their meet......Bani crash into Jai's car........now that what we call a meeting.
plz cont. soon.

Ridhi,

Thanks!! Yes, Roshni is here and she does have a capital 'T' in trouble maker. An accidental meeting, I like the sound of that!!

Thanks again, Ridhi!!

Originally posted by: salmansgirl

awesome! so an update tomorrow? really looking forward to it!

ok me heading to bed now as its 12:20. have to be up early for work.

take care, good night and thanks for the wonderful update!

Anam

Goodnight Anam,

Take care and have a great day tomorrow!! Back to work for me in the morning too!!

Aww....Shoba what can I say except 👏 I really wish that this was a novel and I could read it in one go without having to wait for an update from you.😆😆

You really are a fantastic writer and what a story you have woven here. Its different, mesmirizing, fresh and beautiful.😃

Aww....cant wait to see Jai's reaction to Bani now that she looks more like a girl.😆

Cant wait for their meeting and I bet that the person in the Land Rover is Jai.😉

Till your next update and hope it soon.😃

Love

Krishna

Originally posted by: kubare

Aww....Shoba what can I say except 👏 I really wish that this was a novel and I could read it in one go without having to wait for an update from you.😆😆

Wow!! A novel? REALLY?? You are too sweet yaar!!

You really are a fantastic writer and what a story you have woven here. Its different, mesmirizing, fresh and beautiful.😃

Krishna, Thanks - I am glad you are liking the FF, I like all your adjectives!!! 😆

Aww....cant wait to see Jai's reaction to Bani now that she looks more like a girl.😆

I think some fireworks will happen, good or bad!! Don't know!!

Cant wait for their meeting and I bet that the person in the Land Rover is Jai.😉

You probably guessed right!! 😆

Till your next update and hope it soon.😃

Till tomorrow then??

Love

Krishna

Krishna, Thank you for all your encouragement!! Hope I live upto your expectations!!