Pyar ke ek Kahani: A/N on pg 44, imp - Page 7

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here goes the update,


I know just how to whisper
And I know just how to cry
I know just where to find the answers
And I know just how to lie

I know just how to fake it
And I know just how to scheme
I know just when to face the truth
And then I know just when to dream

And I know just where to touch you
And I know just what to prove
I know when to pull you closer
And I know when to let you loose

And I know the night is fading
And I know the time's gonna fly
And I'm never gonna tell you
Everything I gotta tell you
But I know I gotta give it a try

And I know the roads to riches
And I know the ways to fame
I know all the rules
And then I know how to break them
And I always know the name of the game

But I don't know how to leave you
And I'll never let you fall
And I don't know how you do it
Making love out of nothing at all

Every time I see you all the rays of the sun are
Streaming through the waves in your hair
And every star in the sky is taking aim at your eyes
Like a spotlight

The beating of my heart is a drum and it's lost
And it's looking for a rhythm like you
You can take the darkness from the pit of the night
And turn into a beacon burning endlessly bright

I've gotta follow it 'cause everything I know
Well it's nothing till I give it to you

I can make the runner stumble
I can make the final block
And I can make every tackle at the sound of the whistle
I can make all the stadiums rock

I can make tonight forever
Or I can make it disappear by the dawn
And I can make you every promise that has ever been made
I can make all your demons be gone

But I'm never gonna make it without you
Do you really wanna see me crawl
And I'm never gonna make it like you do
Making love out of nothing at all


Part 4

Karuna was fixing one of her dresses and humming to herself, "Tumse milke dilka hain jo hal kya kahe,,hmmm." She suddenly stopped as Bani entered the room and closed the door behind. Well, she shared the room with Bani and Bani can come into her room any time but her condition was like that she's just taken a walk in the tornado. Hair all messy, the saree very much crumbled, she looks like she's been ravished. Karuna stared at her then it hit her. "Bani?"

"Didi… kya ap mujhe thora der ke liye akela chor denge?" Karuna nodded and left the room, Bani dropped in the floor. Not that it was the first time, not that she doesn't trust Jai, but still… why? Is it normal to become this desperate? Bare papa ko pata chal jayega to kya hoga? But kisi na kisi din to batana hi parega na. god! What if he doesn't accept me for Jai. He loves me and cares for me as a daughter but will he accept me for Jai? After all, I am no match for Jai. Jai ne to kabhi bare papa ki bat nehi tala hain, will he go against him if doesn't accept our relationship? Agar wooh mujhe chor ke jaye to ? nehi, aisa nehi hoga. Mera Jai aisa nehi hai, wooh mujhe chor ke nehi jayegi. Wooh aisa nehi kar sakti.

"have a seat Jai." Jai was a bit nervous and confused. "aisa kya baat hain ke dad itna privacy me batana chahti hai?" uday was standing near the window, looking outside. "Jai, tum jante ho, log kehte hain ke Vijay Bhaia ke moud ke zimmedar main hu?" Jai certainly wasn't expecting this. "Dad, what do you want to say?"

"janti ho, jab main yeh business join ki, to Walia's ke pas kya the? Two hotels in India. The rein of the Walias were started by me. Mera business join karne ke baad se, Walia's ke improvement shuru hua. Lekin everything was named after Bhaia, every credit used to go to him, every control was under him. I's tired of his foolish decisions. That was an insult upon me. Jai, tell me, what you would've done if you were in my place?" jai looked at her father with horror, "What was he implying to say? He didn't…?"

"I want an answer Jai, what you would've done?" Jai considered this for a moment. Then replied, "may be, I'd start of my own?"

Uday chuckled, "you are so much like me, son. I thought the same thing. I decided to leave the family business and start from my own. But Vijay Bhaia never approved this. He knew, without me Walias will flop. He tried to stop me. But I's too strubborn to listen. So he decided to remove me all along." He took a deep breath, "it was a perfect plan, Jai. Only his man got messed up with cars. Otherwise, me and your mother would've died that day and god knows what he'd've done to you and Anu."

"Jai, mera afsos to is bat ka hain ki us hadsa me do innocent log bhi chala gaya, both were very close to me you know, Vidya and Nishikant. I also blame myself for what happened, if I wouldn't be too stubborn, than may be it never happened…"

Jai got up and placed a hand on his father's shoulder, "Dad, jo ho gaya us me apka koi galti nehi tha, kismat pe hamara hat to nehi hota na. you don't feel guilty of that."

"Jai, jo Vijay Bhaia ne kiya uski saja main Aditya ko nehi dena chahta, maine hamesha Aditya aur Tarun ko bhi mera beta jaisa mana. Is empire ki control to main tumhe dekar jaungi, lekin yaad rakhna, isme un dono ka bhi pura haq hain."

"Dad, don't worry, main dosro ka haq chin na nehi shikha, everything will be alright. Don't take so much tension upon you."

"one more thing Jai. I've to ask you something, and I want the truth." "What, dad?"

"Do you love Bani?" jai shrugged, "I think so." Uday raised his eyebrows, "You THINK so????? Don't make me beat you in this age Jai!" Jai grinned, "that's not fair,Dad, you still love her more than me? And it's the 10th time you've asked me the question. You very well knew what the answer is." Uday also smiled, "Keep her happy, will you? She's like my daughter." Jai grinned sheepishly, "Ok but I've got more interest in you wife than your daughter!" "JAI!, BEHAVE! You're old enough to stop this ridiculous jokes of yours!"


I know super boring chapter, this time you all will belive that i really can't write. 😭

purno
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Posted: 18 years ago
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How can you say tt yaar! You write so well!!! 😊

Awesome update!!! Phew I really thought that Jai's dad would disaprove Jai and Bani's relationship!! 😆 😆 😆

Waiting for the next update!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow..uday wallia is nt bad
coooool dad 😊
nw when r v going to c the wedding?????? n any idea hw u plan to get rid of pia????? she is trouble
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: love is fire

How can you say tt yaar! You write so well!!! 😊

Awesome update!!! Phew I really thought that Jai's dad would disaprove Jai and Bani's relationship!! 😆 😆 😆

Waiting for the next update!! 😛




Thanks for the compliment, yaar. 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks!! 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ash9

wow..uday wallia is nt bad
coooool dad 😊
nw when r v going to c the wedding?????? n any idea hw u plan to get rid of pia????? she is trouble




Thanks for replying, dude! And the wedding - Dilli abhi bhi bohut dur hai dosto! 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Second update today!



Can we touch the soul of heaven
Can we unite a sacred lesson
Every child creates a skylight of beauty
Can you hear cathedrals falling
All the universe is calling
Cry a single cello from your heart
Since the world has lost her way
Loneliness journey endlessly
Yet the promised chance remains
Gifts of what could be

So let the children remember the sun
Let them dance let them soar
For their lives have begun
Let the children engender the rain
As the river runs through fields
Forever subsiding their pain
Prayer

Every voice along the shoreline
Standing still within time
Spinning unresolved the walking
As each season passes
Through wonderland and looking glasses
The secret garden shires beckon's you
Gentle flower, don't fade away
Sweet innocence they're harvesting
In the faith of golden dreams
Where one love lives eternally

Let the children remember the sun
Let them dance let them soar
For their lives have begun
Let the children engender the rain
As the river runs through fields
Forever subsiding their pain
Prayer

Let the children bring the light
They are the truth of spirit in flight
Yes the children engender the rain
As the river runs through life
Healing their pain
You can trust with your heart but for time
Sweet angels, conceive you have
Forever and always believed
Prayer




Part 5

"where is Jai?" asked Krishna as everyone gathered in the breakfast table. "I'm right here, Maa" said a cheerful Jai as he took a seat beside Karuna. Pia looked up at him and started choking on her food, "God, subha subha aag lagane ke liye tayar hai!" Jai was dressed in a formal black suit. Anu handed her a glass of water. Bani also looked at Jai who was also looking at her. Bani was looking like fire, on a flaming red shirt. Lookin at her, Jai suddenly lost his appetite. He poured himself a glass of orange juice.

"Yeh kya Jai, kuch nehi kha rahi ho?" asked Krishna worriedly. "Mom, I'm just out of the gym. So if I eat now, thori din me main pig jaisa ban jaunga." Karuna didn't left the chance to pinch, "My, my! Our Jai is worried about his figure!" tarun and Anu snorted in their food. Jai made a face at her and "acciedently" poured orange juice on her cerial. "Yucks! Jai!" jai looked up, examining the roof. Karuna muttered, "Uncle dekh rahi hain, nehi to teri aj…." The phone rang loudly. "I'm checking' Jai left the table. Karuna quickly added some salt to his juice, "Ab samajh me ayegi"

"Maa, masi ke phone tha, usne Karuna ko uthake khirki se pheq dene ke liye kaha. Kyonki wooh yaha aa raha hain aur ake ise nehi dekh na chahte hai" Karuna scowled at him. He winked. He took a sip of his juice and his facial expression changed, "Oh god, namak! Abhi to thik tha. Jaroor Karuna ke kam." He drank it as if nothing has happened. Karuna was horrified, "kya cheez hain, namak dali hui juice pi rahi hai!"


Two weeks passed since Jai joined the office. His days were hectic. He was new and inexperienced, but he was learning quick. Uday was over impressed with him. He's taken most of the workload on himself relaxing Uday. It doesn't seem that he's just joined business. He handles it as if he's done it all his life. In most of the cases, Uday just need to decide or sign otherwise, everything is done by Jai. Uday was however, stunned to see Jai at office. He was a complete different person here. Handling and managing everything with great efficiency and enthuse. And the personality he hold, none could deny anything in front of him. Sometimes Uday feels that if Jai comes and says Dad do this, he'll end up doing this. It was difficult to say no to Jai and he has got a impression that Jai will go this further that people will forget what Uday has done for it. How he wished he could live till than to see his son reaching the highest point of success! But the doctor has already requested him to live as much possible, kya pata kal ho na ho?

Krishna was furious with Uday about giving up work to Jai all along. Because it was over stressing him. After all, Uday has done this for many years but Jai is new. She almost everyday complains how her Jai is becoming another person day by day. Jai insisted to her that he's happy with the job and it's his decision to take over Uday's work. It need not to mention that Krishna wasn't at all convinced with the father and son duo.



What do you think of this? Let me know. And I might not be updating for a few days. I've got exams. 😭

purno
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Excellent......Thanks Buddy for updating two parts.....it's a great treat for us........Good luck with your exam!!!!!!!!

Keep it up....... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr88888888 part ....plz do con.... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Finally caught up!!😛

Three wonderful (yet short parts) sweety!!👏👏

You gave me a total shock when Bani said Jai!........Haila, I actually though there was a TB thing going on!!😕

Not that I'm complaining!!😳

But honestly, badmaash bache!!.....Mama kya kahegi?😉

So does Tarun love her?😕

Love Karuna and her pranks!!😆

But Pia needs to keep her eyes closed!!......Urgh!!.......JB relation better come out soon so this chipku can stop staring!!😡

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