InNoCeNcE (Part 16 Pg 56) its up - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome starting. Aww thank you 😳
loved it.
Bani talkive and Jai quiet......interesting....let c where this will lead too. hmm yeh lets see shall we.. 😆
Oh that has to be Bani and Jai.....talk non stop girl. LOL damn was it that obvious it was them 😆 yep shes a chatterbox!!
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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heena wah wah hehe.. no1 has sed that b4.. not even when i do poetry at home lol...just loved it yaarAww so sweet of you to say...superb start... 👏
update soon Will do Wednesday keep your eyes peeled for it..😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful start pls cont soon.........
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Heena 😃

fabalous start.just loved it.cant wait to read more of this great stuff.looking forward to the next part. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Henna 786

Looking around, he spotted a pen, pulling it from a lock of hair watching it descend like the closing scene of a theatrical show…


Great analogy!! That was simply awesome!!👏


'EY! Watch it.. have you got no manners,' she turned around

'sorry who..'

'Shut up, I know your type of people, ladki nahin deki to tamasha shuru, I have come with a lot of respect here, if you continue I'll surly have u fired, mera clip kartein hain, phir sorry. If u knw u will have to say sorry to phir why do u do it?!' taking in a short breath and placing her cup to the side.


Smart girl, yeah, why do it, if you are going to say sorry anyway??

😆


He stared as the perfect size 6 figure storm off into the waiting area. 'Sir signi..' the SECRETARY called again.

Perfect Size 6 figure!!! 😳 Hey, that's my size too yaar!! Give or take two!! 😆

'Ah Cum in' Sed a masculine voice, 'Please sit down' Lookin through a file only back being shown,

'so' Turing around 'TUM!'


Mil Hi Gaya!! The infamous meeting between the two!!

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Thats part one.. tell me wat u think of it.. should i continue or leave it.. anything will do..

Please continue, great start!!! 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: amiee

wonderful start pls cont soon.........

Thank you so much for readin, wednesday is the next update.. its longer then 1st part lol

Henna x

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Heena 😃 Hey!

fabalous start.just loved it Aww so sweet .cant wait to read more of this great stuff.looking forward to the next part. 😊 Aww wednesday the date lol

Thank you for your encouragement

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Looking around, he spotted a pen, pulling it from a lock of hair watching it descend like the closing scene of a theatrical show…


Great analogy!! That was simply awesome!!👏

Thank you so much


'EY! Watch it.. have you got no manners,' she turned around

'sorry who..'

'Shut up, I know your type of people, ladki nahin deki to tamasha shuru, I have come with a lot of respect here, if you continue I'll surly have u fired, mera clip kartein hain, phir sorry. If u knw u will have to say sorry to phir why do u do it?!' taking in a short breath and placing her cup to the side.


Smart girl, yeah, why do it, if you are going to say sorry anyway??

😆

😆😆 Chatty and clever! 😉


He stared as the perfect size 6 figure storm off into the waiting area. 'Sir signi..' the SECRETARY called again.

Perfect Size 6 figure!!! 😳 Hey, that's my size too yaar!! Give or take two!! 😆

LMAO! i say that aswell!!! 🤣🤣

'Ah Cum in' Sed a masculine voice, 'Please sit down' Lookin through a file only back being shown,

'so' Turing around 'TUM!'


Mil Hi Gaya!! The infamous meeting between the two!! Zara filmy hogaya lol 😉😆

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Thats part one.. tell me wat u think of it.. should i continue or leave it.. anything will do..

Please continue, great start!!! 👏 thank you for your encouragment.. lol i never expected anyone to quote and write on this part.. 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Haila!

I'm guessing the girl's Bani and the poor guy's our sheru!😆

Love this new side of Bani, and ofocurse, opposites attract!!😳

Will be waiting for an equally brilliant, but longer part!!😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#30

Haila! LOL 😆

I'm guessing the girl's Bani and the poor guy's our sheru!😆 Damn everyone is guessing hehe

Love this new side of Bani Thank you, and ofocurse, opposites attract!!😳

Will be waiting for an equally brilliant, but longer part!!😉you wish will b fulfiled..alonger part am wrkin on it 😉

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