FF: Forbidden!! - last prt on pg 74 - Page 36

Me no Number 😭 😆
Awesome part yaar 😃 😆
So Bani is going to Walia City 😳
Waiting to read more what is going to happen there 😉 😳 😆
Please update soon 😊
👏

Hey Minks

fabalous update,finally both them confessed there feelings.OMG this Jai is drving me up the wall,he is jealous and loves her but cant trust her.dude get your fact's right.poor bani,she's heartbroken--hope jai realizes her importance and makes up with her.looking forward to the next part,cant wait. 😊

mahima dear der aye durast aye, i mean to say that even if late at last we got an update 😉 so how is ur mood with real KS now a days dear hope ur mood will be great after marriage of JW with durga and we will be getting frequent updates 😉

dear really a great part with both idiots admitting their love to each other 😉 but i must say ur haathi has crossed all the limits as he loves her but cannot trust her 😡 i want bani to teach him a lesson soon.

just loved the interaction b/w JB and yaar why ur sallu entered at the wrong time otherwise we have got to see repeat of 19 june, but chalo koyi baat nahi i know we will be witnessing repeat of that in Walia city at the same place, u know well which place 😉

please continue soon.

swati

Originally posted by: bollycrazy

me first! okkk bakkkk!!!

newys... awesomeeeee updateeee!!! but canttt believee stupid jai cant trust bani wts wrong with u jai! cant u see she wont do anything to hurt u! hmmmmm ho saqta hain ki he is blind lol see i never said that he is not blind hehehehehe😆😆

but jai.. i swear.. he is one confused dude! he loves her.. but cant trust her... and yet has now made her stay at his house! cant wait to see banis reaction to that! hehehe yaar i cant wait either so can u help me with bani's reactions as i dont know wat it'll be😆

newys... thankooo for the dedication! lol and thank u for….lol sry..sry bad joke but jst read my pm! x yeah...yeah read it, don't remind me lol 😆😆

luv ya lodsssssssssss my cherub😉

Originally posted by: Taz234

Me second!!!

Hey Minku hiiiiii taz😊....been waiting for ur update for a long time...been busy then?...koi baat nahin i understand!
I know how hard it can be to write when u get depressed by watching KS...so don't worry ur not the only one!! so u were depressed with ks too, hopefully nothing more sick then wat happened will happen on ks again nahi tu i'll boycott it this time😭😆

Anyways back to the update...loved it!!! Salman and Jai aur beech mein Bani...how lucky she is!!!

Both finally admitted they loved each other but Jai just can't bring himself to trust Bani all becuz of that Pia.......yeh Pia bhi na!!! Always a problem!! yesss she is and i hate her i cant do anything about the real ks but here one day soon i am gonna kill her😡 😡

Loved the whole JB scene... was to good!!! Well written!!thanxxxxxxxxxxx😳
Cont whenever u can sweety...curious to know what happens next. i'll find my way back here! i'll try my level best to cont soon. thanxxxx so much for replyin luv ya.😃
Taz!!

Originally posted by: harshi21

Glad to know that there love is out in the open.

Maybe I didn't read too carefully, but I missed why Jai doesn't trust Bani... it's been a while between updates so can someone refresh my memory. ok lemme help u out see everyone including jai thinks that pushakar and bani loved each other but this is not true but no one believes it however much bani negates it, so jai believes that bani is one of the reasons that pushkar and pia's marriage failed although he knew it would was a failure even without bani's contribution and so he cant trust her, ok did i make sense?? if not u can ask me any question u like and i'd be glad to ans.😊

luv minks

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Awesome update.
oh this JW is sure is something....dude loves her but can't trust her.
plz cont. soon.

hi ridhi,

thanxxxx for replyin😃, so u like this jai ??lol😆

luv

minks

Originally posted by: siumi

omg what a update it had all anger, jealousy, confession of their love, etc. etc. wow thanxxxx 😳 hmmm....well whats happens in walia city?????? I really have no clue wats gonna happen lol when I'll figure it out I'll update it heheheheh😆

continue soon

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Me no Number awwww ur no. 1 yaar 😃
Awesome part yaar thanxxxxxxxx😳
So Bani is going to Walia City yup she is going😆
Waiting to read more what is going to happen there lol and I am waiting for an idea to come as to wats gonna happen, waise any help would be more then welcome 😊
Please update soon

luv ya

mahima

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

Hey Minks

fabalous update,finally both them confessed there feelings.OMG this Jai is drving me up the wall,he is jealous and loves her but cant trust her.dude get your fact's right.yeah isn't he dumb lol😆 I am sure bani will make him see some sense soon😉 poor bani,she's heartbroken--hope jai realizes her importance and makes up with her.looking forward to the next part,cant wait. Thanxxx so much for ur sweettttt reply😊

luv ya

minks

Originally posted by: swatinarang

mahima dear der aye durast aye, i mean to say that even if late at last we got an update so how is ur mood with real KS now a days my mood is still not too gud but its better😛 but I am finding ks boring right now heheheh dear hope ur mood will be great after marriage of JW with durga now this is news!!😃 kya aisa sacch main hone wala hain is it a confirmed news?? or is it ur intuition wasie both r one and the same thing lol bcoz if u think so it'll come true just like ur ff 😉 😆 and we will be getting frequent updates yup if it happens and if my exams get over at the same time then yessssss😃

dear really a great part with both idiots admitting their love to each other but i must say ur haathi my haathi or ur haathi??😆 has crossed all the limits as he loves her but cannot trust her i want bani to teach him a lesson soon. If u want that then help out with it, I don't have any clue wat to do lol😕

just loved the interaction b/w JB and yaar why ur sallu entered at the wrong time otherwise we have got to see repeat of 19 june, but chalo koyi baat nahi i know we will be witnessing repeat of that in Walia city at the same place, u know well which place hehehehehhe yeah..yeah I know lets see wat happens lol but yaar walia city is a big place we'll find a diff place lol😉😆 😆

please continue soon. Help me and I will 😊

swati

luv ya lodsss

mahima

Brilliant part👏
why cant jai trust bani?

Taj

phew..just caught up with the updates...which made me realize i had only read the first update...im so sad that i missed all these updates 😭 but then again i caught up so im all 😃 now...

wats jai's prob yaar..pia is pia...if bani was like pia..she wud never attend to krishna..she wud have also neglected her...

may be she can make jai understand that if she was pia, krishna wud be raised by walia khandan and bani's life wud be tension free... but she took the initiative to love and take care of krishna...isnt that enough to get back his trust... or get them married for krishna's sake and then let the trust grow...let jai see how genuine is bani...

well these were my suggestions...use em or trash em 😉
cont soon hun
plz pm me everytime u update..

neetu

hi,
just read yr ff n its awesome, mindblowing 👏
cont. soon
jb's fights r cute 😳 😳 😳

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiii everyone,

Soooooooo sorryyyyy for not posting an update for such a loooooong time but I had exams which r now overrrrrr yipeeeeeeee!!!! So here is an update and I hope u'd like it. plzzz give me ur replies and I promise I'll update regularly now and I'll update the nxt prt in the eve. Today promise and I'll finish off this story soon and not leave u all hanging anymore.

But I hope that I haven't bored u too much with the story and not updating for soooo long, so tell me if I should cont. it or just let it be.

Luv ya
Minks

This prt is for allllllllllllllll my readers, soooo sryyyy for taking so long to update.


FORBIDDEN- CHAPTER 14

It had been ten days since bani had broken her arm and she was now living at walia city where everyone took great care of her and pampered her a lot specially maasi and jigyasa but she always gave a cold shoulder to jai ever since there conversation at the hospital and jai didn't like it one bit but couldn't do much about it bcoz everyone was always hovering near bani and she wasn't giving him any opportunities to come anywhere near her, he knew she was angry with him and he knew that she had every right to be so but he was fast loosing his patience with her and then one day he lost all his patience and decided enough was enough and when she saw her alone for a few moments he just grabbed her hand and pulled her inside her room and locked the door even before bani could realized wat happened.

Then she saw him and her anger bubbled up and she hissed "wat do u think u r doing??" jai asked coolly "wat does it looks like I am doing??" this infuriated her even more and she said "don't act smart, just open the bloody door and either get the hell out of here or lemme go" jai said calmly "no one is getting out of here until I say so, so I'll say that u'v got only two options either u shut up and sit down and listen to wat I'v got to say or I can shut u up my way and believe me I like the second option more pleasurable and I wont be responsible of the consequences after that…….so wat have u decided??" bani very well knew that he was gonna do just wat he was threatening to do if she didn't listen to him but she was still too angry and hurt to want to listen to him so she said in a low calm voice "look jai there is nothing I want to talk to u about, I think we have said everything we needed to say to each other so just plz open the door and lemme go out" jai mocked her "very nicely said bani, but don't think u can run away from me now or ever" bani saw that it wont help even if she tried to act calm so she said angrily " and who is gonna stop me, I'll do just as I please and u had better get out of my sight, i'v had enough of u to last a life time, get out of my way this instant otherwise I am gonna start shouting and u can explain ur family wat u r doing in here" with that she tried to walk past him but he blocked her way and even before bani could open her mouth he said "I gave u the warning but u just wont listen to me so now…." With only this much warning his lips descended on hers.

Bani was expecting a hard punishing kiss but this was tender assault to her senses, and she melted from the power that the kiss held, however much she tried too control herself, keep her emotions on check, that kiss was filling her mind, body and soul and she had no power to resist it no matter how much she tried, her lips began to clung to his instead of trying to break free, and she found herself clinging to him, she found herself wanting much more then just a kiss, she wanted him, she wanted to feel him against her, she wanted to be his forever and ever. Then suddenly she remembered all that he had said to her and she pushed herself away from him.

And involuntarily she began to cry, she tried hard not to show her weakness in front of him but she just couldn't help herself her emotions were in a jumble and tears came spilling down her eyes, tears of pain, hurt, anger, desolation, and the awareness of the hold he had on her and that she was totally and madly in love with a man who although loved her and wanted her as much as she wanted him but he could not trust her and that knowledge was tearing her heart into two.

Jai felt his heart tug when he saw her crying like that and when he saw the look in her eyes, he realized how much pain he was inflicting on her by not trusting her, he cursed himself for believing wat his mind told him and not listen to his heart which told him that bani could never ever broke anyone's trust least of all his.

He tried to take her back in his arms and sooth her but she held against him and begged for him to leave her alone but jai just couldn't leave her like that and even though she tried to resist him he pulled her in his arms and hugged her to his heart and bani could resist herself any longer and hid her face into his chest and spilled her heart out and she asked him again and again "y r u doing this to me…..y r u punishing me for a sin I never did……y….y??" jai just held her and just said soothingly "shhh….sweetheart…shh!!! I…" ……..to be cont.

haila me first me first.. it looks like ages since i have been first in anyone's FF😕

great part minks...
👏 👏
great to see you after so much time 😉

so finally someone thought about updating 😉. mahima dear i am feeling very happy that now ur exams are over and hopefully now that friend of urs won't be telling uncle and aunty to limit ur net time 😉

dear just loved the part. yaar agar Jw warn kar raha tha to bani shld have heard what he was saying but no she kept on blabbering i think that was intentional on her part, she was missing him and wanted to be with him. so dear this time place is going to be room of Walia city, does not matter as long as they r together room or no room matters 😉. hopefully jw is gonna trust her now for sure or else i am gonna 😡 grill him for sure.

please continue soon

swati