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Posted: 18 years ago
davia dear just loved the parts, please continue soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
thnks for all the replies and readers... still typing next part.. trying to type fast to update... hopefully to update tonight....
and pls do commenting.. thnks..
promo: jai cooks ...
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Posted: 18 years ago
Interesting promo, i'll be waiting ! šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago

thnks for all ur replies.. and sorry for the mistakes.. hoping i will get more and long comments.. agar boring hai to jaroor bathana..

75 a. they climb down and sees that the resorts the place where they were to stay was away from others and was at the end almost and it was not to far or not to close to beach .. and it gave a wonderful view of sun and sky… and not much people were seen there as it was away from people too.. and peacefully and it was calm.. and she loved the place…… and a smile appeared on her lips on seeing it.. as always imagined some place like this which have this view along with peace and calm… and then he ask the driver to leave .. and he goes with the car.. to the car parking in the front… and she replies ye place bahut hii beautiful hai.. tumse jyaada nahi bani he thinks… .. . and then he says andar chalein. She nodes yes..

their luggages were placed in already and the service guy leaves .. and they go inside the cottage was having a small living room before the bedroom and inbetween was a small kitchen.. adjoining the living room and then when she entered the bedrrom it was a huge room with a king sized bed … and it was having small sofa sets opposite to it.. and then she starts to feel like vomttiing so runs to the bathroom and it was also same big in size.. . with all contains.. and she throws out.. and jai also came for her to support her.. as she goes weak after throwing.. and he holds her .. and she finishes and he asks her is she is ok.. taking back to the roomand she nodes yes.. he makes her sit on the bed.. comforting her with her thing around her like pillow at her back for support making her drink water…. And asks is she is feeling well she nodes.. yes.. and then says mein abhi atha hoon and goes and comes back with some with something in his hand saying u will feel better on smeliing it.. handing her some acchar to smell as it was in the bag.. and she smiles and takes it.. usually she does when she vomits……

after few min jai was in the conversation with his clind after he gave it to her… . and she eats little too. And he was busy in his phone.. when he returns he sees her going inside the bathroom to get freshen upp and then he orders something to eat… as it was almost 1..she enters the bathroom and thinks how to say to him.. and how he will react on hearing it.. whether he will accept her love still knowing he also feels same for her yet.. she is not sure and somewhat thinks.. and changes her self into comfortable saree and comes out to find already in his laptop… and thinks jab dekhoo ye latop mein busy rehte hai…… she then thinks.. muje jaldi kuch karma padega.. and goes and sits in the bed and he was sitting next to her working in his laptop and then he turns and smiles and says meine lunch order kardiya it will be coming.. and goes back to the works.. and she was like oh noo pata nahi kya order kiya hoga??????? And then wantedly switch on the tv.. and makes the volume higher and he hears it the volume raising and just act af if he dint hear anything.. .. he then act as if he doesn't care on the volume or disturbance and continues to work.. he tries to finish his work soon. . she then decides to do something.. but did not know what to do….

As tv idea dint work out sooo. Then she goes to the huge suit case and and starts to drag.. and which made noise some irritating noise.. he sees it and says bani what do u want from that huge box../?????? she says meri dolls as no one is interested in talking to me.. soo I will talk to my dolls … and he says stopp
he closes his laptop finishing the savings and climbs down from the bed.. and then takes it and open it.. and takes out the towel covering the things.. and she shouts merii chocolate yahan hai and takes it over his left hand which was placed on the things and belowhis right hands and takes it and in that process her pallu falls as she has not pinned it.. and he sees her……………….and was like oh nooo and he says baniii and she looks at him.. and before they could proceed anyfurther they heard the bell… and she removes her hand taking it and he says mein dekha hoon and goes out to living room to open the door .. and she her self and correct her pallu all blushing… as thinking he must have seen her like that.. and smiles to herself..

meanwhile the lunch arrives and jai asks the service boy to place it the table there near he sofa .. and then the p[erson leaves… and then she comes out asking koun tha he says the llunch has arrived.. ….. then he ask do u want to have lunch now..or.. I want to have.. then both sit down for lunch… and on opening she says ye kana.. muje noodles kana hai..bechara he was about to eat a piece of food and he is stopped ther..and was like what???????? Haan muje noodles kani hai.. ye sab nahii .. he was like ye noodles ab mein kahan se lahoon???????????? And then says bani kya tumein noodles argently chahiye>????????haan muje wahi kani hai .. muje pata yahi hoga as u dint ask me before ordering it… …….. muje pata ta and makes a angry sad face and he was like bani I am sorry ageli baar I will ask u and order par noddle?????? Keliye ab mein kaha jayoon kahi bhii I don't care muje chahiye matlab chahiye… varna and runs into the bedrrom and enters the bathroom to throw upp and she starts and make noise and he follows her and holds her up… and after seeing it he thinks no more lunch for me…… as now I cant eat ……. And then she finishes and washes her face and he holds her back for her support and brings her back and she sleep away actually faints.. he was like phirse????????? And feels bad as her present state was because of him….. and he makes her sleep properly.. and covers her with blanket.. and then opens the box to take some doll and pl ace near her and sees a noodles packet there and things wow noodles packet and was like wow I will make noodles before she gets upp and was like thnks u god..

then closes the box placews the dolss nxt to her and goes to kitchen and searches for the vessels and some how manges it.. and then after wahing it then… somehow cooks it……..for her… and says yes I have done it.. and then place it in a bowl and thinks she must be awake as asually she get ups at this time after fainting and when he enters she sees her who was now awake and was eathing chocolate.. and sees him saying.. noodles ready hai???????? He was like haan par tumein.. she cuts him sayoing muje pata hai I saw u cooking as I got up earlier today… and he was like ok…(this idea came to me from d2 as I saw abhi cooking for his wife the fish…. When she was pregnant…)

she was eathing the noodles now with sauce ove her mouth and surround it and she was soo busy eathing she dint notice he was admiring her eathing while he was eathing a little and noticing her kiddish eathing style… and sauce in her face made him to think to tast her one more time.. aur pata nhai kya kya uska dimag mein chal raha ta.. and he was like jai stop thinking it all not now jai stop it.. pehle use propose to karoo… stop there jai his other mind was saying…. And then bani says aap kana nahi ka rahe hain. He was like noo.. I am eathing.. and continues to eat.. but he was not actually trying to eat….. and was trying to concentrate on food… he was thinking pehle wo paallu now her…. And thinks kash mein woo noodles hii hota…….. and just blushes.. and bani was now washing her face and the sauce in it.. and he was imaging that how it will be if he would be tasting the sauce over her mouth……. And face…… how yummy…he thinks… and says bani mein abhi aat hoon and goes inside the bathroom and was like jai stop it.. don't think or hurry like that.. she may get scad don't remember how she was looking the room and what face she had.. and so and soo and takes a cold shower…. And comes out fe min later too see bani sitting in the chair near the tv and feeling the babies placing her hands over her stomach and was lost in it.. her face was not smiling but just null thinking on something……. He then goes to her and ask bani sab teek haina…. Sitting next to her. She says haan then why ur face is not good? She says woo actuaaly I am trying to hear what they r saying and trying to feel them.. as they were talking in my dreams.. saying they wanted noodles and they wanted to ask me something…. Isliye.. he was like what she was upto and get totally confused.. and then she says why don't u and place his hand on bare stomach which make hi get more confused seeing her likethat.. and she asks kuch pata chala.. haann he says.. kuch pata chala????

He felt the skin soo smooth.. and thought their babies r soo lucky to be inside her……. And then she sayss apko kya pata chala????? He says kuch nahi she says kuch nahi??????????? To teek hai I am going to sleep.. and she goes and sleeps in the bed covering herself with blanket and turninf off the lights… and he was like hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm and goes and stand outside the door seeing the sea which was little far away.. and just smile…

evening comes and around 6 she gets up from her afternoon nap.. and sees that he was sleeping next to her.. and she was holding his hand and he had a cute smile on his face spread across.(shayad may be seeing a cute dream..)she was sleeping in his arm.. and she smiles shyly… and gets up and wanted to kisss him in his fore head but was not able to thinking she shd tell him first and then.. moves from the bed and goes to the living room and stands near the window to see the sunsetting.. and was enjoying the the view.. and the cool breeze.. and was smiling .. her hair was little messy as she was sleeping .. and her dress was little creasy…… and then she leans to the window.. all smiling and places her hand over her stomach.. and closes her eyes.. and thinks and get lost in her thought of imaging kissing him… and smiles to herself..

he starts to feel empty and when open his eyes she was not there and then comes out calling bani which makes her to come back and ask kya hu8a mr walia? Kuch nahi bus yuhinn tum so rahitii pata nahi meri bhii aank kab laggayi.. aur jab utkar dekha to tum nahi thii..to . teek hai mr walia.. mein jakar fresh hokar aathi hoon and goes.. and he pasees his hand through his hair.. and smiles.. thinking he cant even keep her away for few min from him … and smiles and decides to make coffee for them… and weather for really suitng it.. to have coffee

preview:jig returns to wm.. and aditya says everything and she fumes…

promo: jai leaves to party without bani saying he will be going alone and she gets hurt…

davia

Edited by davia389 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
davia that was a good part.. wow they r in love with each other.. and this jigyasa, iska kuch karna parega... bani is soo cute.. dolls and choc. omg wen will they tell their feelings to eachother.. cant wait
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part davia šŸ‘
cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi Davs…ok finally caught up…baap re kitne lambe updates karti ho itni jaldi…feel so bad I take so long with my updates. šŸ˜•

Anyways. Uday Walia is back!!! My god!! 😲 It was him that Bani saw that day. Wonder why he is back all of a sudden and what the story is behind him. šŸ˜• šŸ˜• Jai obviously doesn't want to tell Bani about him just yet, said he will tell her everything in Goa.

Haila now they are in Goa...wow...i loved that last upadte šŸ‘ ..so romantic....Bani looking at the sunset and all.

Bani was trying to get Jais attention, putting th volume of the t.v up to distract him!! šŸ˜† And the noodles!!!! 🤣 God that had me laughing šŸ˜† šŸ˜† ...Jai wishing he was the noodles so Bani could eat him...kaise kaise khayaal aa rahe the dono ke dimaag mein 😳 😳 ...hope they confess their love for each other soon. Can't wait! 😃

Great updates…keep it up! šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

Taz! šŸ¤—
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Posted: 18 years ago
😳 thnks for replies... wanthing more comments..
davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
next part will be after i get suffient replies..
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey davs,
that was another gr8 part..a bit romantic..both the duffers r in love but r not able to share their feelings..Oh pls jaldi se love u bolney ko bolo na..
oh..jai cooking for her..I know its only noodles, but then too the almighty JW in the kitchen makign noodles is a gr8 story!!! oh mann..Jai is really haveing a hard time controlling his emotions..seeing the sauce over Bani's mouth was makign him go crazy...
so now our munna is making coffee for bani...good progress...
Cant wait to see the next part..why jai doesnt wnat to take bani to the party??

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