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Posted: 18 years ago
hello!!!
long time no talk!!
i just caught up and very nice updates!!
sorry i haven't commented in a long time, i feel very bad 😭
but what can i say??
sometimes your updates leave me speechless...
keep up the great work!!
much love,
pooja
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: :::pooja:::

hello!!!
long time no talk!!
i just caught up and very nice updates!!
sorry i haven't commented in a long time, i feel very bad 😭
but what can i say??
sometimes your updates leave me speechless...
keep up the great work!!
much love,
pooja


thanks...Hun hope you are feeling better............😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 52
Ok guys this will be my final chapter...now on it is only Hired Husband, my other FF ok..so hope every one is in zappy mood...I suppose...I will end this ok...too many loose ends..but will try to put all together
I did not know there is a rule that we need to do one FF..so this will come to an end.😉

Jai and Bani had their nice two days trip..and Bani well she is quite relax and happy now a days...

8 months 3 weeks jumb....
Bani was sittng in the bed room
Bani(screemed top of her lungs): JAI
Jai came running from his studies: WHat happen
Bani: Water broke
Jai: that's all...call the plumber and fix it
BAni:you duffer...my water broke
Jai:oh... WHAt what..what when how
BAni: Jai
Jai:yeah call the police
Bani:no get my bag
Jai: yeah I know..(Jai went and fell on the floor tripped by the carpet)
JAi:damn (Jai tried to get up and he fell again and again)
Bani:I got the bag..call massi
Jai(finally got up): ok..I dont know her number...
Bani: Jai relax
Jai: I Can't breathe Bani
BAni:Jai..
Jai: Bani..I am having a heart attack
Bani:ok Listen up.....hold on to my hand
Jai(managed to come and held her hand): NOW what
Bani: let's go
Jai: i don't know how
Bani: I will lead you( she pulled his hand toward her..Bani lead the way)
Jai on the drivers seat...and staring at the front
Bani:Jai drive the damn car
JAi: what
BAni: drive then damn car
JAi:I don't know how
BAni: move off the seat
Jai: what
BAni: move..
Jai just obeyed her and BAni was on the drivers seat, driving and good thing her contaction are not that bad 😆

Finally at the hospital...Jai was oustside pacing back and forth and Finally the doctor came out
Dr:Mr Walia
Jai: yes
DR: congradulation
Jai hugged the doctor
DR: you have 2 sons and 2 daughter...both mother and kids are all healthy and fine
Jai:Thanks doctor
Dr: you can let go of me now
Jai was all embarrassed: May I see my wife
DR:yes you can

Jai went inside...looked at his wife..she looked more beautiful than before...she looked stunning....
Jai leaned down and kissed her on her forehead: Bani
Bani slowly woke up: Jai
Jai: I love you Bani
Bani: I love you Hercules
Jai smiled at her and looked at his children.:..liitle Bani
Bani: no no little Jai...
Jai:no no little arrogant Bani..I don't know who they are going to..
Bani: Mr Walia
JAi: yes Mrs Walia,....no more french kiss
Finally Massi, JK and Rano arrived
They all are happy especially JK..now he has 2 brother and sister to play with
JK:papa you are the best
Bani looked at him: WHy
JK: beause he fullfilled my wish
Bani: which is
JK: I have 4 more ppl to play with
Bani:ohh
JK:papa I want 4 more
Jai: as your wish betta..but your mom has to say yes..she will probablly thrown me out of the window this time
Everyone laughed

After 15 year
Jk,Krishna,Kishan,siya..and Ram
they all grown up and JK is in state for his studies...The other 4 are in their final years at high school..
Siya: bhaiya give me the ruler
Krishna:di why are you always yelling at ram bhaiya
Kishan:you two always bicker let me study
Ram: what is worng Kishan...you are a einstein of the family always studying
Siya: stop yelling at Kishan
Ram: don't put your nose where it doesn't belong Siya
Siya: you go away
Kishan:you two stop arguing
Siya: i was on your side (siya threw her binder at...Ram but it hit Krishna)
Krishna:Papa mama..Papa
Jai walked into the hall..or Jungle
Jai: Krishna betta
Krishna went and hugged Jai...: what happen princess
Krishna:papa she threw book at me
JAi: Sia ...
Sia:Papa..Ram thinks he is cool kid in our house..only at school his is a cool kid
Jai: ram
Ram:papa...It's not my fault I inherited your looks
Jai:RAM
Ram: i am telling the truth
JAi: where is ma?
Ram: she is in the room for long time I had no idea what is wrong with her
Jai:What...and you kids are fighting
Kishan: and not letting me study
Jai:ok here is the deal..I want you all to go and see your Rano aunty...she wanted help with the baby sitting littlle shiv ok
Sia:papa but
Jai:no buts everyone..go
Fianlly they left....4 kids oh man
Jai finally came to his bed room
Jai: waht is wrong
Bani:well nothing
Jai:then why are you inside the room
Bani:well I think Iam...
Jai:sick
Bani:yeah..so I went to the DR
Jai:and
Bani: i might be
Jai:what
Bani: Preganant
Jai:women are trying to give me heart attack
BAni:well I am surprised too
JAi:you r not reacting well for it
Bani: you know how all our 4 kids wants to go to abroad for studies
Jai:are you dumb women
BAni: well I want this kid
Jai: No MORE..I can't take it any more..papa I want this..papa i want that..papa idon't like this..papa..i don't like that..papa i hate this..papa i don't knwo what is happening..I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE
Bani: well Jai..then
Bani's lip smile trembled on his lips.....
Bani:OK THEN
Jai: What...
Bani: mrs Walia...... still has the mojo going
Jai: WHAT
Bani:no baby... duffer...I am almost 50...How
Jai got up : so thi is your trick
Bani: ahaha
Jai: well then now you will face my wrath
Bani:is that a challenge..... my hercules
Jai: you are going to find out 😳 with that...Jai went near her..and took her in his hand
Jai: I can't wait until they r out of this house
Before Bani could mention anything...Jai took her lip in his 😳
Bani broke off from his lips and shispered in his ears: Happy June 19..or may I say Happy Brith day
Jai:same to you hun....you beat me to it...
Bani: well so u did not remeber
Jai: i did...I was planning to take you to Canada...
Bani playfully punched him
Jai: we still did not fullfilled JK is wish
Bani: which is
Jai:4 more kids
Bani:Jai you are so bad
Jai:you are equally bad my better Half.....
With that Jai sealed her lip with his....JW is a happy man........still BAni's Hercules
Edited by loka - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
im off work today cuz its snowing here and i got the chance to read the last and final part off ur ff im sad its the end i really enjoyed reading it but all good things must cum to an end.
a fab ending

Momtaj
Edited by momtajbegum1 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: momtajbegum1

im off work today cuz its snowing here and i got the chance to read the last and final part off ur ff im sad its the end i really enjoyed reading it but all good things must cum to an end. Thanks hun.............for your support all through out theh FF..yeah good thing will have to come to an end ...eventually I guess😉
a fab ending

Momtaj

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Posted: 18 years ago
g8 part loka.
omg 15 years have passed and still the same hercules and his princess bani, still very much in love.
loka, i really loved reading ur ff and that was really great. i will be waiting for epilogue.

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: swatinarang

g8 part loka. Thanks hun..for all your support😛 means alot to me😛
omg 15 years have passed and still the same hercules and his princess bani, still very much in love. ohhhhhhhhhh yes 😆
loka, i really loved reading ur ff and that was really great. i will be waiting for epilogue. will be more interesting.............TR will be mentioned so we know what will happen to them😉

swati

Edited by loka - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
🤣

well loka great ff!!!
😆
how do you come up with this stuff? 👏 👏 👏
i have to say this is one of the funniest ff i've read so far... 😆 😆

OH Boy more kids...my god Jai is all fed up but the Hercules, seems like not 😆

Ok i'm really laughing here so i'm out i'll read the other one and then comment...but now in school
Rooj
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Posted: 18 years ago
Wonerful ending.
loved it as alway.
😆.....this is what I have done most of the time when I read this ff of your.
I are one amazing writer.
👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
great ff asuals soz i havent comented lately.. 😆 da sme personality wen der old omg ... av u finished dis ff den or is there still a few more parts to cum 😕 😕

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