new ffThe love triangle chapter 27pg22

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This is my first attempt with a fan fic. I got inspired after reading the fan fics posted on the forum. Please bear with my mistakes and hope you like it. I would also welcome comments to improve my writing. I have made slight changes in the character description's.

The Walia's

Jai Walia: In his mid 30's An hotel industrialist who diversified his business into resort constructions holiday packages which included exclusive and very expensive private beaches, Yatches etc. very successful in his business ventures. Is quiet arrogant and is very confident that he gets whatever he pursue in life. Close to his family members always there to help them around never gets attached to anybody and keeps his emotions and feelings to himself.

Jigyasa: Married to Aditya Eldest but respects her brother and barnali are of the same age and always in competition of who is the best. She was married very young . The children are also same as in the serial. Ranveer same age as Nachiketh, Sahil and Anu

Aditya: same as in the serial.

Barnali: Second wife of Uday Walia

Nachiketh: Son of Barnali and Uday. 26 years exact opposite of Jai walia very fun loving loves to drive fast cars, flies planes. Loves to live life on the edge not interested to take up the business of the family hence Barnali is always after her son and angry with Jai that he has control over the business.

Billu massi and Dadi are the head of the Walia family just like in the serial but here Massi and Dadi have a separate section of the house for themselves as Barnali and they don't get along very well.

Bani Dixit: 21 simple girl very talented in painting has a very artistic nature, helps people in need. Currently she is in Paris on a summer exchange program and she is majoring in arts. Loves outdoors and is into hiking, camping.

Pia Dixit: 19 in her second year of college. Can spend hours in front of the mirror very conscious of her beauty loves expensive stuffs. The sisters share their allowance with her so that she gets really the best outfit for parties and holidays.

Rano Dixit: Appearing for her 12th board exams and is always in an anxiety mode thogh she gets straight A's in all her papers. A book worm. Loves her sisters but is very disaster prone. She always ends up getting bandaged. Hates outdoor sports and physical activities.

Tarun: Personal lawyer of Jai Walia but his father's associate works as the legal advisor for Jai walia's company.

Sahil, Pushkar and Pia go to the same college. Nachiketh was an ex student there but is still very popular.

Chapter 1

The plane has landed from Heathrow airport and we have the reporters waiting for the arrival of the winner of business man of the year award. It was raining and Jai's mood also was just like the weather. He seemed to be brooding and his mind was preoccupied somewhere else. Once the camera's started flashing Jai was bought to the present away from his thoughts. Aditya and his lawyer were waiting for him. The reporters came forward and asked how it feels to win the award again. I have been winning it for some time and I am going to keep winning. What are your future plans? Your questions will be answered at the press conference after the awards. We heard some complications have come up regarding your in-house restaurants which was supposed to collaborate with the foreign group is that the reason we have not been getting any comments. Now Jai was loosing his temper. Thankfully Adi and his lawyer Tarun came to the rescue. Jai tried to stay away from the press as he always had problems in communicating with them but he was always headline news especially in the business page and socialite pages for his grand parties and his latest lady companion.

His Mercedes came to the drive way of the airport. By then Jai was back to his business mode and asked what is this legal complication now that has come up after eight years of dad's death. Adi and Tarun were his close friends and confidant. Tarun waited for a while before he began to explain as he knew when he heard the details he would be fuming over his das deceionWhen you took over the business the lawyers did try to tell you but then you never showed any interest in the girls so it was left . But now Bani is going to be 21 in three weeks she comes to hold 30% of the restaurant share and she can decide on the 20% share of her sisters. Moreover your father has left her with 10% of the share which he had brought from her father. Are you telling me now that she will be the managing the restaurant and the entertainment company. What were the legal experts of the company doing till now. Adi interpreted and said actually The entertainment company and the in-house hotel were not a part of the Walia group it belonged to the dixits, When bad time had fallen on them your father helped them out by buying out half the company to keep it afloat.

Jai: What a mess? The media is going to have field day with this bit of news. Adi: We can think about that later. But our investments to upgrade the in-house restaurants and finalizing the deal with the foreign collaborators must have Bani's signature for it to be valid

Jai: Now where do we find this Bani.

Tarun: That is a bit of a problem.

Jai: There is again a problem. I have been hearing only problems for the past two days about these projects aren't there any solutions. Damn it

Adi: Please Jai calm down.

Tarun: Actually we have not been able to contact Bani.

Jai: Jai just stared at Adi and tarun and said don't tell me you couldn't locate the 21 year old girl who has been receiving every month grant from the company.

Adi: The girls have practically being living in hostels and the money was transferred to a bank account and the address for it was the old Dixit residence were the girls have never been there for the past 10 years. The other reference is to your father.

Jai: Are you trying to say that we have reached a dead end. If so Tarun your legal team is going to be fired.

Tarun: will you just relax and it is not my legal associate that handles it its my dad's remember I am a criminal lawyer. So now to the solution part my dad had contacted the girls once when your father passed away. we have contacted the convent they attended but the girls have moved from there. So now the hired detective agency has located the younges girl to a boarding school in Bombay but since school is out now we have problems in getting touch with her.

Jai: Again a problem by the end of the day I don't care which legal team is finding were the girl is but something has to come up by today evening or the legal team is fired.

Adi: Patience was never his virtue.

Jai: You both can sit and talk about my virtues. My business reputation and money is at stake here. The Jai walia with the Midas touch biggest blunder would be the headlines in tomorrows paper ..

Adi: What is it that you are really worried about your image or the business.

Jai ; I don't find any amusement in all this rather It is totally getting on to my nerves.

Adi: Whats so new .

Jai: What?

Tarun. Instead of trying out the Wailia anger may be you should work upon the Walia charm on Bani so that you may not have a lengthy legal complication with her.

Adi: Then I think it would be better to send Nachiketh as he is has got all the charm and Jai has got the anger

Jai: talking about Nachiketh What is his latest achievement

Adi: You better ask him I think it was skydiving over the weekend. Baranli had a fit last evening

Jai What's new

(By then they had reached the office main complex)

Tarun: See you guys later in the evening. And please Jai go easy on my father he is and old retired man. I don't want him to be admitted to ahospital because you had a crisis in the office.

Jai. Remember he is just like a dad to me and more over Jai Walia loves challenges. Infact I thrive on it.

Tarun and Adi: ya ya we know that only count the heads that are going to be chopped off.

Chapter 2 will be flash back

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Posted: 18 years ago
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very well begun 👏
Now I'm hoping we get to see JnB...not NnB 😉

Poo

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wow!!! loves when u interduced the characters!!! 😃 wow! tarun!!! 😳 😳 😳 pia can spend hours in front of a mirror! 😆 i really think you have talent! you should take ekta's place in ks!!!!! 👏 wow!!!!


luv, kritu! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank you for the encouraging comments. There would be slight deviations and drama beofre Jai and bani can come together actually I was planning something on the lines of getting Bani and nachiketh closer.
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👏 👏 👏
Great ff.
Can't wait JB to meet.
Anyways B and N can also do the trick.
plz cont. soon
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Good start sweety...👏

I am hopping to see more of JB.... 😉 😆 😆

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Chapter 2
Adi and Tarun drops Jai as they had to go for another meeting.
Jai,s office is on the top floor of the building. He has the whole floor for himself with conference room an entertainment area for small gatherings. Only the security and his secetary are the people other than him on that floor Its more like a penthouse. The private elevator from the car park opens directly onto the top floor. He generally avoids the lobby but today with so many things going on in his head he stepped on to the lobby. The ground level staffs were quite surprised as they started wishing him he looked as though he was lost. But quickly turns towards the elevator and punches the code for his floor.
Once in his office. He pages for his sectary. A Lady in her 40's Mrs. Brianna comes in with his usual cup of coffee and the appointments of the day.
Jai: Thank you Mrs. Brianna. Please cancel all by appointments for the day.
Mrs. Brianna: But Mr. Walia Mr. Kapoor (tarun's father) has been anxiously waiting for you as he has something really important to discuss with you.
Jai: Send him in.
Mr. Kapoor comes in
Kapoor: Hello Jai beta how are you?
Jai: I still have my temper in control and I haven't fired the legal team so that should be an achievement considering my track record.
Kapoor: Don't be hard on yourself son? Things will work out for the better. Your father would have been proud of you.
Jai: Yes we know how much he loved his family that's why he spent so much of time with us.
Kapoor: Now boy don't get sarcastic with me. Your father was a wonderful man.
Jai: Of course after all he was your best friend. Just tell me one thing what was our fault that he never wanted to be with us.
Kapoor: May be you never tried to understand him. The more I see of you it reminds me of him.
Jai: Hope not I don't want to be bitter like him and to be hated by my own blood. Forget all that. I believe he has left to mention something's to us regarding his business dealings also.
Kapoor: No, in fact when you first took over I did mention it to you. But you hadn't thought about it seriously as the girls were in school and you were their guardian as per the will.
Jai: Wait. What are you saying?
Kapoor: Yes. After your dad's death, you have inherited the guardian ship and also their business shares till they are at the age of 21 when they have their rights to be part of the board..
Jai: Hold on now how can they be board members they are not even Walia's.
Kapoor: Sorry to disappoint you but Nishikanth and your father were a sort of business partners then.
Jai: But I wasn't aware he had any partners. Also I have worked with my father. But never heard him mention about any Dixit's.
Kapoor: That is a long story.
Jai: I am all ears and I have got the whole day. I am getting to know more about my own father form somebody else isn't it strange.
Kapoor: I don't know Jai sometimes you have mean streak in you and you are not at all forgiving. Forget that about the dixits now
Nishikanth Dixit and Uday Walia were friends. The Dixits and the Walia's were doing business jointly in many ventures. They had an event management company and a line of restaurant which mainly ran in the Walia group of hotels. After the death of his wife to cancer Nishikanth dixit's interest in the business is lost and resorts to drinking with in no time he makes some wrong decisions which brought the company to a stage of bankruptcy .Then your father decided to take over the company and help the Dixit's buy taking over 50%of the company stake. Nishikanth was proud man to take money freely that is how your father came into possession of the 50%.But very soon Nishikanth Dixit passed away before he could see the company make any progress. Hence his three girls be came orphaned and your father took the Guardian ship of the three girls and sets up trust fund for their education and when the girls become the age of 21 they will inherit the 50 percent of the shares of which Bani has 30% and the rest is 20% is for Pia and Rano.The arrangements were made in my own presence about ten years back. None of you all were aware of the legal decisions about the company merger. At the time of Nishikant's death Bani the eldest was only 11, Pia 9 and Rano 7. The girls were sent to a boarding school. Your father did visit them occasionally and even took them for a vacation.
Jai: That statement caught Jai off guard. .What? My father took the girls for vacations. Are we talking about the same man here.
Kapoor: Now Jai why is it so hard to believe that your father was also a human being with normal feelings. Perhaps you should read this.
Jai: Now what is this?
Kapoor: Your father's dairy.
Jai: The old man kept a dairy. What did he have to write other than his business meetings and achievements and the never ending parties and women in his life?
Kapoor: Aren't we a little hypocritical here? Look at yourself before you point finger at him. Tell me when was the last time you made your father feel like that you needed his support or he could come to you for that matter of fact. So you both are even my son. Don't waste your life in bitterness it's not worth it your father was too late to understand that. So if you get time read the diary may be you could make peace with yourself.
Jai felt like a thunder had struck and in the lightning it had burnt everything in its way. And kept on looking at the diary.
Mr.Kapoor: Bye my son. sorry If iwas harsh on you but I don't regret what I said.
Jai called for his driver to bring his car out and told him to go home as he wants to drive the car himself.
The driver looked shocked and just kept staring at him. Jai never drove the car.
Jai What are you looking at me for? Just give the keys and I will inform you when I require your service till then stay at home
Chapter3: The diary of Uday Walia.

Today I went to see Nishikanth my friend from childhood to finalize about the buissness and the welfare of the girls. He was really loosing it. Sometimes I felt he is insane, but I guess that is what happens when you have lost something that was your reason for living. I use to envy him for his happy married life and his lovely children. But I guess all good things do have an end. Just to remind that nothing remains the same always and life is full of ups and downs. His wife died because of blood cancer and he send the girls to convent school as there was no one to take care of the girls. Well they had been attending that school for over a year from the time his wife Mathura was sick. I had seen his little girls and wondered if I could ever find that kind of bond between my children. It was such a joy to watch them play. I even remember the drawing my bani made the day I had come for one of her birthday as a thank you gift. I tell you one day she is going to be a hell of an artist. Bani knew how fill the emptiness in my life she had such a lovely smile which always made you think only about the bright things in life. While Pia made you think about trying to catch up with the stars and of course Rano inspite of being withdrawn and she could come up with a smart reply. I was zapped with the way she read the poetry of Blake's and Byron at such a young age. With them I never knew how time went by. As I said all good things have their end.
Someone came and knocked on Jai's car window and said. Sorry sir there has been a land slide hence you will have to go back. Jai put the dairy aside and drove back to the cabin.
But his mind was wandering to the details of the diary He kept thinking to himself It seems my father had another set of children and he had a good time with them while he turned his back to us,. He was getting frustrated about everything in his life.
He parked the car on the drive way of the cabin. While on the way he had thankfully stopped by and got some ready meals. He just had soup and breadsticks and went back to the diary. Turned a few pages.

My little girls lost their father too today and as I promised to Nishikanth I have taken the guardianship of the girls. I felt the life was really unfair to them to become orphan at such a young age. They somehow lost their smile. But still they seem to hold on though it seemed to be bleak as they never had any where to go when the school closed for vacations. And I could never take the girl's home as my present wife Barnali would never appreciate it. So I just visited them every month and the girls wrote to me regularly though I hardly replied to them. I loved their letters and treasured them. It is kept in my study in a chestnut box inlaid with carvings in my study. I would read them before I go to sleep.
Jai was feeling jealous that his father loved these girls so much when he had a family for himself how could he do this to us. He just shut the book and went to have some fresh air with a drink in his hand. But something compelled him to read the diary. He turned a few more pages.

Today is my "little ange"l Bani's birthday. I have a surprise for the girls we are going to Shimla for a weekend trip and a visit to the painting exhibition for upcoming artist. Actually that is my birthday gift for Bani. I liked one of her paintings and presented it at the exhibition today I got the note saying that it has won the first place and she is to be awarded on Sunday. I felt so proud when she went up to take the Prize I took a photo with her. The painting at the backdrop and the award in her hand. I still have that along with the letters. I can look at that photo and remember of some o f my lovely moments with my first wife. My son Jai's birth Jigyasa's first day at school, Jai's first play at school. That seemed to be a part of another life to me now Was it the painting or was the photo that did the trick I could never figure out. About the trip to Shimla it was cold and Bani would make lovely hot chocolate for the girls while I had to drink the soup but still I can never forget the way she would say uncle after I finish school I am taking you to my house and feed you everyday with soups so you live to ninety. Among the girls Bani was the mother hen she found goodness in everyone and had hopes that all things God does is a way to understand him better. The day we parted Bani gifted me the painting saying that hope it brings a smile on my face. I felt she understood me better than anyone it was like the daughter I never had. I hung the painting in my private study so that no one could see it. I was afraid that like every happy things that comes in my way this to would be lost. So I had it almost hidden it from every one.
Jai felt his eyes becoming moist and said to himself why dad you found happiness in the girls rather than in your own children where did we go wrong why you never tried to reach to us. You built such a big wall around yourself you are to be blamed for that not us he looked up and said I am sure you are happy now that you made me feel miserable and that I was not there for you when you needed me . I don't think I want to read that diary of yours anymore but I would like to meet the girls especially Bani whom you refer to as the light of your life or should I say your little angel. But don't even think for a moment that I am going to hand over the shares in a platter for her. I have worked very hard to make what Walia industries are today.
His phone is ringing. But Jai is in his own world

Chapter 4
His phone was ringing. It was Adi
Jai: Yes Adi what is it?
Adi: Where the hell are you we have been tying to reach you and it is like as though you just disappeared from this world.
Jai: Now Adi relax. I never knew that people missed me so much.
Adi: Cut the crap out. And stop being cynical. We were supposed to meet to night. Also you took off with the car and told your driver to go home what is happening? Jai you are loosing it man.
Jai: Stop it Adi. Listen there has been a landslide that is why I can't make it and the charge of my mobile is low so try to get in touch either and once the roads are clear I will be in Bombay. When I am back I want to see Bani. Good night and just cuts the phone
Adi: just stared at the phone;
Massi: where is Jai When will he come?
Adi: He is out of Bombay. He should be back in two days time some things has come up.
Massi: you and your business when you will learn that there is more to life than that.
Adi: are you telling about us or about Jai.
Massi: What use nobody listens to this old lady anymore.
Adi and tarun: Now Massi don't become so emotional tell us what you want and we will help you.
Massi: Really. I want my Jai to get married with in this year.
Adi and tarun: Just looked at her shocked but thought what harm in a little indulgence.
Massi: What happened you both? You all only said anything and that is what I want so what say boys shall we start Operation Jai's marriage.
Adi and tarun Some what in a fix and shaken say yes………Massi.
Barnali hears this and is upset Everyone is worried about Jai. It is what Jai has to do or what Jai wants. God is there no end to this. Goes Calling out Nachiketh.
Now Sahil, Anu, Pushkar and Nachiketh were playing cards and sneaking up and having drinks out in the balcony hearing barnalis voice they all get up to their room and to do their jobs saying that nobody in this house allows us to enjoy.
Barnali: What are you doing beta
Nachiketh: Nothing much do you want something?
Barnali: Yes be responsible on life.
Nachiketh: Not again ma. You know I have no interest in buisnees and Bahi does a good job of it I never want to compete with him.
Baranali: Why are you afraid of him or scared that you will fail?
Nachiketh: Let me ask you something why does he brother you so much Is it because it reminds you about dad.
Barnali: It is not that what is wrong in expecting my son to be responsible. like any other person for once in his life instead of trying new daring tricks and risking his life for trivial things
Nachiketh: I could say the same thing. Why can't you understand your own son. I am sure if dad was there he would understand.
Barnali: That did it. The mention of his father and barnali started shouting at him saying why is it that you care for the dead more than the person alive he was never there I was always there for you but I never measured up to him or to your bhai isn't it.
Nachiketh: Its not that mum and you know it Why bring this on to yourself always
Every one hearing the raised voice came to their room.
Massi: Barnali what is happening here?
Barnali: Forget it in this house nobody is worried about any one cut the act out massi and you only cared for your Jai.
Nachiketh: Stop it mum. And sorry massi for all this. All retire to their rooms
But once Barnali is back in her room they group again on the balcony.
Nachiketh drinking says why everyone is after my life. Sahil and Anu comes out and says out and says same goes for us too I think it runs in the family.
Nachiketh: hope not. I don't want to be like that for sure. By the way why is it only when Bhai is not around can we get to the bar then my mum and Didi are after us to make life miserable.
Sahil: At Least you have your escapes. What about us we are tied down here. Then somebody comes from behind the bushes
Pushkar good night guys and hope you all have fun till Jai bhai is back. I heard he is already in town.
Together: Don't say it we know.
Pushkar: Sahil and Anu see you in college. What are your plans for tomorrow Nachiketh.
Nachiketh: Why Want to come with me for rock climbing.
Pushkar What? No, Get myself scrapped all over my modeling career would come to an end.
Anu: Hey think about it if you are in the hospital may be you could get a sympathy glance or visit from Pia.
Pushkar: Shut up don't rub it in.
Sahil: Did that slap hurt you.
Nachiketh: What Our hero got slapped by a girl Wow that's new. Who didn't fall for the pushkar charm I should meet this girl. Tomorrow I am coming to the college.
Together the tri say wow so done tomorrow at 9 in college to operation Pia

I know its a bit drag but the next part is were Jai goes to meet Bani


Edited by kuttu - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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A superb beginning and loved it.👏 Read all the three parts in one go and cant wait for more from you.😃

I really loved your description of each and every character, loved Jai the most and the him reading the diary and about Bani was superb.😃


Am waiting for the update from you, so is it going to be Pushkar or Nattu to win over Pia??? And Jai is going to be the one to meet Bani, are there going to be sparks flying everywhere on Jais and Banis meeting. 😉😛😃

Cant wait for you to update the next parts.

Love

Krishna


Edited by kubare - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plzzzzzz update soon.wonderful part cant wait 4 the scene 😊
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hey ♥this ff....

loved their character intro..
please continue soon..
cant wait to read more...


♥nirali

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