FF: A journey through Luv...LAST PT pg 32 - Page 8

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Posted: 18 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: inavars

Vaidu that was AWESOME 😆 😆 😆 Thanks srav🤗

man..bani and her overacting... 😆😆😆 yep her overacting...


the whole huge wink thing..i was laughing so hard... hahah i'm glad..

knee and ankle...poor bani...biology to seekho pehle 😆 😆😆😆 being a biology major... and being so drained from it.. i had to pick on the subject😉😆

AWESOME 👏 👏 👏



Thanks srav.... GOOOD LUCK ON YOUR FINALS🤗🤗🤗

vaid
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Posted: 18 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: indian_godess

😆 Bani asking Jai out! lol. absolutely loved this part, hun! made me laugh! loved how Bani makes a fool out of herself! 😆 please update soon!!! Can't wait for the next part! thank you ...so sweet of you😳 i'm glad you liked the part.. 😆😆😆 yes Bani making a fool of herself.. i'm glad you got a laugh out of it😉 i will try to update soon..

Goddess

p.s. hope it's not too much to ask, but please do write a bit longer updates! Would realy like it!!! 😃

oohhh...so sweet of you.. i will definitely try... can't promise though😕😃 haha

thanks again hun

Vaid
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Posted: 18 years ago
#73
Vaidu......that was sooo good.....the song blew me away.....I love the song u put for when Jai comes.....MY fav song.......**Snap out of day dream with SRK**...

ok so on to the update!!! WOW, the way Bani was trying to be all seductive was too cute.....

Jai sounds like a dream come true!!!

Please continue soon.....

Luv ya,

Meera 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Vaidu......that was sooo good.....the song blew me away.....I love the song u put for when Jai comes.....MY fav song.......**Snap out of day dream with SRK**... hahahha You falling in the trance😉😆

ok so on to the update!!! WOW, the way Bani was trying to be all seductive was too cute..... 😆😆 yep trying atleast...

Jai sounds like a dream come true!!! oh he is😉😆

Please continue soon..... I will continue soon...

Luv ya, Luv ya tooo gujju sis

Meera 😳 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
s-u-p-e-r-b! honestly. i jsut wait for u to update ur ff! Keep up the good work!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
Thank you all for your encouraging comments.. Krissi and Junior will come back soon.. i promise..😆 but here is part 4 and i hope you enjoy...
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Recap: Bani met with Jai outside of the mall.. made a complete fool of herself.. got his number though.. and now is calling to make a coffee date with Jia...


Bani: Okay Pia.. we've rehearsed enough..could I make this stupid call and get this over with

Pia: tikh hai.. cool woman.. alright here is the card.. (nervous voice) make the call

Bani: Pia you really show your trust in me…(snatches the card)…

Bani dials the number and the phone rings 4 times before Jai answers…

Jai: Hello?

Bani immediately hangs up the phone

Pia: Kya hua?!

Bani (very fast): You never told me that his voice could sound so sexy over the phone!

Pia: WHAT?!

Bani: WHAT?! ( to herself: Did I just say that?)…. I mean…. He didn't pick up (lying to Pia)

Pia (a little suspicious): ummm okay lets put it on speaker phone… dial again…

Bani dials the number.. Jai picks up on the 2 ring this time

Jai (angrily): If your planning to hang up then don't bother calling!

Pia gave Bani a very shocked looked…Bani just shrugged

Bani to herself: stupid caller id

Pia pushes Bani to talk

Bani: Hello (in her tapori way of talking… Pia gave two huge eyes) … ahhhh (her sensuous overacting voice)…. Hellllllooooo…..

Pia hit her forehead with her hands..Bani shrugged again…

Jai recognized the voice right away: ooohh I'm sooo sorry.. I always seem to mess up our meetings…

Bani (continues in her voice): OOoooh no problem

Jai: I hope you are feeling just fine now.. I really do apologize…

Bani: ooohh believe me after seeing you… ( whispers) I was just fine….

Pia slaps back of Bani's head…

Jai: I'm sorry but I realized after leaving that I didn't get your name…

Bani: ohhh you can call me Bani….

Jai: Bani…. Nice name… by the way my name is …

Bani interrupts him.: Mr. Jai Walia…

Jai: I'm sorry… you knew

Bani overacting loud laugh: HAHHAHA …. (lowers voice) who doesn't know you….anyways. I called to make that coffee date that you owe me

Jai: oh of course… I'm free tomorrow…. How about around noon?

Pia agrees by nodding her head

Bani: ahh…haaaa noon would be great! Ummm where?

Jai: ummm how about Gourmet Caf … have you heard of it..

Bani to herself: I've always had my chai at the daba… what is this gourmet fourmet

Pia nods to let Bani know that she knew where it was

Bani: ooohhhh of course.. its my favorite place

Jai: I guess I'll see you there then… ummm bye

Bani: Byyyeeee Jai


Bani hangs up and gives a huge smile to Pia.. waiting for her to compliment on her job well done

Pia: ummm… Bani… me tumhe kaal batana bhule gahi… YOU SOOOO HAVE TO STOP YOUR OVERACTING!

Bani's smiles turns to a frown: Kya?! Whatever.. he's falling for it… didn't you see how easily he fell for the coffee date.. I mean it didn't take much to get the date (typical move of flipping her collar)

Pia (serious): your right Bani.. but that's Jai… you think he would have asked you out if he saw you somewhere else?… No…. its because you were supposedly hurt.. and Jai could never live with himself not knowing whether you were okay or not…That's Jai…Jai whom I love!

Pia walks away angrily leaving Bani thinking….

Bani to herself: Mr. Jai Walia… a rich successful man… cares for others… Yaar this guy has totally broken the image I've had for these stupid egoistic man… do men like Jai Walia actually exist?… does he really care about me being hurt? I mean he doesn't even know me…(ponders for awhile)..arre Stupid Bani.. what are you talking about.. you really need that psychiatrist that that stupid History teacher had offered you…

Bani hits her forehead gently and goes to find Pia…Finally after 30 min of searching in the house (she was distracted by pizza on the dinning table..can't blame the girl) she found Pia in her room lying on her bed 'reading' a magazine angrily…

Bani to herself: The angry beast has awaken…sabalna Bani…

Bani (overacting singing): Dost Dost na Raha… Pyar Pyar na Raha

Pia: SHUT UP BANI!!

Bani laughs: Pia.. come on yaar.. I was only joking… look I'm sorry… I promise I will not skrew this up for you… you trust me nah?

Pia: Bani I do trust you… but Jai is my only chance…

Bani (interrupts): I know I know… to continue your scheduled… Biological ….clock

Pia frusterated continues to 'read' her magazine: ummph… Bani… I can't live with you..

Bani jumps on top of Pia's Bed and hugs her: and you can't live with out me!... I mean you have to trust me now.. you know I don't do these sappy things…. But one more song.. since I mean this is the last time you'll see me this sappy… (clears her throat).. Ye Dosti hum nahin tode ghe….

Pia laughs: your right this isn't you and its scaring me… I'm sorry… I shouldn't have gotten so upset…

Bani (sarcastic): Alright now lets plan tomorrows date and get Jai madly in love with me.. then we can have a chorus.. (singing manly voice) BANI ....oh my darling…(singing regular)..Piya tummmm… abh tho aaja… ahh haa .ahh haa ahh haa

Pia: BANI!!

Bani: hehe sorry!!

Both laugh.. and plan tomorrow's date with Jai

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There you have it.. i try to make it longer... as some had requested.. i hope you enjoyed this part.. i know there isn't much Bani and Jai yet.. but that will soon come.. Please forgive any spelling or grammer error.. wrote it quite fast
😳

Vaid
Edited by vaidahip - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Hayati

s-u-p-e-r-b! honestly. i jsut wait for u to update ur ff! Keep up the good work!



wow thank you sooo much Hayati for your sweet comment.. i updated.. i hope you like this part😳

vaid
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78
Awesome part.
Thank god Pia told her about her overacting.
Bani stop making fool of yourself.
Jai is so sweet and caring.
plz cont soon with a little more longer part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#79
hii!!

good luck baniiiii but be careful 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: vaidahip



awww thank you soo much... 🤗so sweet of you... its comments like this that gets me to continue😳 (that sounded sappy😕😆)... No its sounded choo chweet just like you...😳

i'm glad you liked it.. .i will continue soon...
thanks Han

vaids😳

Same to you sweety...🤗

Now when are we going to get the next part... 😉

han...

Edited by hanaane - 18 years ago

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