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Posted: 18 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Vaidu......Awesome part!!! Thanks Meera🤗

I totally loved the whole speakerphone conversation...it was too cute!!! 😆😆 thanks

Please continue soon.... It may be awhile.. but will try

And Srav was right long means looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnngggggggggggggggggggggg. Okay...as i said to srav.. aye aye Maam😃

😆

Please please continue soon!!! will try hun

Can't wait to see how the coffee date goes!!! me neither as i haven't written it yet😉😆😆

Luv ya gujju sis, luv ya too gujju sis😉

Meera 😳 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#92
Vadahi, loved it 👏 and really love this Tapori Bani. 😉 Thank god Pia told her she was over acting, but she really is cute. 😛 😃

Cant wait to read, Bani and Jais meeting.It definitely will be interesting as they both are such different characters. 😃

PLease update soon and this time a much longer part.

Love
Krishna
Edited by kubare - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93
Hey guys.. sorry for not posting soon.. but here is Part 5.. Please don't kill me Meera, Srav and Krishna.. its not as long as you would like.. but it is eventful..different then the other parts.. I hope you guys like this part..
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Bani walked through the doors of the caf at 12:10. Pia had told her to be a little late… It was what girls did…She walked in and searched for Jai…. But he was no where to be seen..

Bani to herself: well check that out.. Mr. Caring is late himself…

Waiter: may I get you a table

Bani usually never got served before.. people tended to show her door out never a table

Bani (arre atleast these clothes came to some good use) : ahh haaa… table for two… please

Waiter: right this way maam

Bani got seated and waited… it was now 12:15

Bani continued to wait.. checked her new fancy watch again and it was now 1:00 pm.

Bani to herself: So Mr.Caring…is caring… I THINK NOT! He stood me up… This is ridiculous… He was supposed to take me on the coffee date and now having drank 3 cups of expensive coffee in this expensive place… I'm having to pay the bill.. Stupid men… they all are the same.. and to think that I was starting to think that kind men existed..sheesh!

Bani stormed out of the restaurant after paying the bill saying all men are pig… The server stared with confusion…

Bani stood outside of the restaurant fuming with heat that could clearly be seen in that cold breezy day.. Bani angrily covered herself with her shawl.. she didn't think to bring a jacket hoping Jai would give her a ride home .. well that was lost cause…

Bani: I can't believe this… That's it.. I mean I have some self –respect.. I'll let Pia know that I can't do this anymore. .and that she should not try to get Jai back.. he's not worth it…

Bani turned around starting to head home when she stopped abruptly.. There was a huge car accident, about 3 blocks away.. Ambulance, police, fire truck.. it was all there.. There seemed to be 2 objects that looked like cars.. The accident was so bad that the 2 cars were totaled. There were stretchers placed with people bleeding tremendously from all sides… and the paramedic attending to them as quickly as possible…

Bani gasped at the scene and immediately placed her hand over her mouth..

Bani to herself: why didn't I hear this in the caf? Omg this is horrible

Bani's eyes were glued to the scene… she couldn't believe that these things actually happened other than in movies.. . She skimmed the scene and gasped once more

Bani: OMG JAI !!

Bani recognized Jai on one of the stretcher… He was wearing a blue shirt that was now covered by his blood… The paramedics were working on stopping him from bleeding profusely.

Bani immediately ran as fast as her heels could take her….

The police officer saw her running and stopped her as she was 15 feet of Jai..

Bani while crying and shouting try to push her way through to Jai from the police officers

Police: Please Ma'am try to control yourself

Bani crying: Please….. JAI!!! …. Please I have to see him… he's a friend…

Police: look ma'am we can't have you go through… its too dangerous… we are transporting your friend to the hospital.. if you like.. you can ride with us and we can drop you off

Bani hearing only some parts of what the police officer said.. managed to hear the last part : Yes… … I will go… please make sure he's okay…

Bani rode with the police officers all the while thinking only how Jai must be… and remembering him lying there

Bani to herself: How could I think so negative of him.. There I was sitting and having coffee and cursing him… while he was fighting for his life… He must of gotten into this accident while coming to see me… (cries a lot more).. oh god.. how can I be so low.. Please God take whatever you want from me.. but please.. please let Jai be okay….

The police car stopped in front of the hospital and Bani ran out without thanking the Police and immediately started searching for Jai…

Bani (distressed, frantic) : I'm looking for my friend… he… he just met with an accident… his name is …is Jai Walia..

Nurse: Yes… He was just brought in… He has been rushed to the operating room.. umm usually we talk only to the family members.. but I'm sure the doctor will be able to meet with you .

Bani: Thank you… where can I find the doctor..

Nurse points to an open area in front of a room: you may wait there. I will let the doctor know that you are here for Mr. Walia. He will come talk to you as he is ready..

Bani: Thank you..

Bani walked to the area and found it hard to sit… she was so anxious to know how Jai was…

Bani to herself: Oh.. god what should I do.. call Pia.. nahin.. she will panic.. Please god.. let Jai be okay.. I promise that I will change my ways… please.. just Let Jai be okay…

Just then the doctor came out from the door with the same nurse holding what seemed to be reports and x-rays..
Bani rushed towards him…

Nurse: Umm Doctor this is the patient's friend..

Bani: Doctor is Jai okay?!

Doctor: Ma'am please follow me to my office… we can discuss there

Bani gave a shocked confused look… she knew that this could not be good….Bani followed the doctor to his office….

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I know not the greatest part... but i hope you liked it.. once again.. please forgive me on grammer and spelling mistakes

Vaid 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: kubare

Vadahi, loved it 👏 and really love this Tapori Bani. 😉 Thank god Pia told her she was over acting, but she really is cute. 😛 😃

Cant wait to read, Bani and Jais meeting.It definitely will be interesting as they both are such different characters. 😃

PLease update soon and this time a much longer part.

Love
Krishna



Thanks a lot Krishna😳.. i just posted the next part i hope you like that part as well

Vaid
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! This was supposed to be a funny part w/ Bani messing up...but Jai baby in an accident?! 😭

Don't worry..i trust you...he'll be fine...and bani the tapori will change her ways to his liking 😉 😆

AWESOME part hun...still not long enough... 😆

and can we have jai alive and talking in the next part?😉

I'm supposed to be all sad...but heyy...i know he's fine 😳 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: inavars

NOOOOOOOOOOO!!! This was supposed to be a funny part w/ Bani messing up...but Jai baby in an accident?! 😭

Don't worry..i trust you...he'll be fine...and bani the tapori will change her ways to his liking 😉 😆

AWESOME part hun...still not long enough... 😆

and can we have jai alive and talking in the next part?😉

I'm supposed to be all sad...but heyy...i know he's fine 😳 😃



sorry sravi.. don't cry😭😭😭... Don't worry you know me...😉... I have this all planned.. there are funny scenes to come.. And Jai will have a huge role.. i just had to set it up... alright i don't want to give it away..

hehe i know it wasn't long enough.. but i will make it long as i get more time...

Thanks srav

luv vaid
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
Vaidu!!!

U made Jai get into a accident!!! How could you?? 😭 😭 😭

It's ok, I understand, it's all to do with your awesome story!!!

Please continue soon, and don't worry I won't kill you because it wasn't long enough!!

Please continue soon, and let OUR Jai be alright!!

Luv ya,

Meera 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#98
Meera..take him...it's your Jai!

It's official...Sravi is over Jai Walia...I could care less...THERE I said it! 😃

Doesn't mean that I'm over RK though 😳 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: inavars

Meera..take him...it's your Jai!

It's official...Sravi is over Jai Walia...I could care less...THERE I said it! 😃

Doesn't mean that I'm over RK though 😳 😆



😆Sravi is over JW?? What has happened to the world?? I'm scared!!!😆 I'll take him no problem!😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Vaidu!!!

U made Jai get into a accident!!! How could you?? 😭 😭 😭 I'm sawwiee😕

It's ok, I understand, it's all to do with your awesome story!!! Yep i promise😃

Please continue soon, and don't worry I won't kill you because it wasn't long enough!! Thank god. lol...

Please continue soon, and let OUR Jai be alright!! Yes OUR..haha i will keep in mind😉

Luv ya,

Meera 😳

Thanks hun..luv ya too

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