Forever Yours - Final Part pg. 101 Updt - Page 76

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Posted: 18 years ago
Sangita,

Loved the part as usual.....beautifully described emotions, the anticipation, the wait the roothna...everything was so sweet........the gift was cute and massi and Jai's interaction was nice too...Wanna read more ab so please update soon....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

This is so Good Sangita! I am sorry but my husband was messing with my open window! So if you read the original comment, it was from my hubby dear!

Love this FF!

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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG poor Jai, it was so funny to see him like this. 😆 😆 😆 so impatient.
Hay Jai soon she will be yours forever so be patient.
Great part as usual. Very well written.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sangita Di

very sweet and beautiful part.loved how you describe the wedding atmosphere.jai is really impatient,just wait little bit more.loved it.looking forward to the next part.cant wait. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Haila sang I just read part XVI and I was like 😲 😲😲 haila haila ye kya ho raha hai😲, bani ki shadi 😲mayank se, ab mere Jai ka kya hoga😲 n then my filmy mind started running at zillion miles per hr that nahin nahin abhi kuch kuch hota hai hoga 😆 like salman mayank will hand over bani to jai 😉 but then shadi bhi ho gayi😲😲 n I was like haila now Mayank will have to die😲 but I don't want him to die, he is a nice guy 😉 . Aap aise heart attack mat do I'll die then I will have to live like a bhoot in my hubby's bedroom 😆 , yep I am no rashi 😡 , marne ke baad bhi nahin .
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Posted: 18 years ago


hang on hang on, milord i want to change my mind n being a woman i think i have that prerogative. i DONT like mayank u can send him to hell for all I care. how dare he call bani a two timing wotever, he is a creep a ba*tard n jai ka ghoonsa baba kya solid pada, i am all 😃 😃 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago


OK I am done really liked it. The way you portrayed the emotions, not only JB but of bani's parents, I loved it. The father daughter interaction was great. It all was so real, I wud not even blame Mayank or his parents reaction coz that is how it does happen. One tends to go over board when ditched. (I am using this word coz at the time it does seem like that, its later u realise that actually u were saved, no point having a love less marriage) And you handled it so well. Jai is getting impatient now, loved the gift he gave to Bani n the one that Bani gave to him. Great FF sang. 👏 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Sangs,

That was too short, but it was great!!

I love the Lehnga Choli (Peach) for a peachy girl.. 😳

Loved the way Jai was staring at Bani and unnerving her!! Poor thing!! 😆

Maasi and Jai in the car, with Jai apologizing about the way he behaved (Awwww, soooo sweeeeet!) Bani's gift to Jai was perfect, so sweet of her to give him the photo frame with the two of them together!

Awesome update as usual, great job!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanks to all my friends who have commented ober here. Its because of your encouragement that I have really managed to finish this FF. dont know whether I will be writing another WIP very soon.

Anyway, here's the Final Installment, hoep you all like it.

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