Forever Yours - Final Part pg. 101 Updt - Page 53

My spot. 😆

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OMGGG awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee updateee please continue soon.😃

Edited:You actually write as if its a real novel... Too good.👏

Lots of editing.😆

Originally posted by: fsam

WOW. Sangs beuatifully penned, Bani's confusion on keeping her family honor and commitment or giving in to love.

Thanks dear. That has been Bani's eternal confusion or bane should I say. 😕

Amazingly JW is not present, yet is present thru out, in Bani's thoughts and confusion. Loved it.

As like 'Mere sanson mein basa hain tera hi ek naam, teri yaad humsafar sub-o-sham...' 😳

Hope she did not mean the last statement literally, loved the shooting star, why with this statment: 'Oh Jai. I am sorry'.

Just wait dear for the explanation of that statement. 😆

Please post the next part soon.

Originally posted by: inavars

"Oh Jai...I'm sorry"

Uh oh...that doesn't sound good.

All I would say is wait and watch

I love her mother. She's so understanding and level headed 👏

Absolutely, thats what is needed at this hour

AMAZING part Sangita!! 👏 👏 👏 Thanks dear

I really hope the last line doesn't mean what I think it means. Please keep your fingers crossed.

But something's missing...or should I say someone?! I'm going through JB withdrawal here...help me 😳 😳

I dont think you will have to wait for long. At all. 😳

Originally posted by: rivya

did the last statement mean...she is going for Mayank and not Jai???

Wait and watch dear 😃

wonder what his reaction will be...welll serves him right for not speaking up before...

Could say that, he has been acting like a moron all along.

I feel sorry for Bani since she has to make this decision on her own...wish she had some help...but i guess not...

Absolutely, its very difficult and she doesnt have any support at all. 😕

Cannot wait for the next update...it will be interesting to see what she decides.

Riva

Originally posted by: sangitadas

I hope you have finished reading by now 😆😆😆

Yes indeed I have! I thought it was beautifully written and very discriptive.

Although I havent read from the start from part 1, I will try to whenever I get the chance!

Originally posted by: armana

Sangs,
the last line gave me a heart attack! till i remembered the title......

See I told u na, its a positive one, 😆

ok, beautifully written, the mother is far too normal and sane to ever be in a Mayi serial.

I agree, thats why Maayi doesnt have me working for her serials. I could give her a run for her money. 😆😆😆

i love the way Bani is perpetually thinking about JW, one way or the other. Bani, my idiotic girl it's time you realised that if you think about Jai more than Mayank the answer is obvious! If you want, Shina can explain it to you! 😆

Dont even go there Armana. Shina and Bani, fireworks combination? 😆
Bani has to see it, but lets give her some time, she has always seen Jai as that integral part of her life as THE Friend. It will be a shocker to realise the true worth of Jai in her life.

And Jai, you duffer, pehle akal nahin aayi? you deserve a bit of heartburn for your denseness too!

😆😃 Absolutely, the biggest duffer 😡 In fact, he approved of the match too 😡

But only a bit, eh sangs? 😉
😉😉😉

Armana

Originally posted by: Treasures

wow sangs...that was Great! 👏 👏
loved the mother-daughter interaction!

Originally posted by: Treasures

wow sangs...that was Great! 👏 👏
loved the mother-daughter interaction!

Originally posted by: ovaltine

Sangs, have enjoyed reading your ff thus far. You are taking it nice and slow letting the story develop, Nice going. Let's see what you have in store for us. 👏