FF:Wooing Bani Dixit: Final Part pg 245 - Page 31

Originally posted by: stahmed69

Dear Sabs,

Just read the update. Another gem, very well written. I loved the way Bani snubbed Jai, though it was very hard for her. Jai the 2 timer wants to have his cake and eat it too. He is day dreaming about Bani in the Baho of Pia - TART OR WHAT. Bani should resist him.

Love,

SONIA.

thanks sonia .........don't worry bani knows how to deal with such men, so what if he is Jai Walia 😆

Originally posted by: kubare

Hey Sabsj just superb. Loved the way Bani does not give in to Jais persuassion and demands and gives him her piece of her mind and snubs him big time. 👏 👏

thanks krishna, bani knows when someone is bluffing her, she is no fool

Could really have done without Jai being seducted by Pia, would have loved it more if it was Jai and Bani 😉 😳 😛 , but with Pia around what can one except but.... 😆

well it was necessary, was trying to portray how bani was beginning to effect jw slowly slowly even if he was with pia

Cant wait for you to update soon with your next part and see more of Jai and Bani in it with out Pia any where near by.

don't worry a lot of jai trying to woo bani from now on, so relax and enjoy

Love
Krishna

It was tremendously too good saby.... 👏

I liked it very much and wow Bani's attitude... 😆


Not bad, absolutely not bad at all "trying wooing her in sort of strait and forward challenging way. The bouquets didn't work as expected but thought about changing the next time to chocolates. I liked that, not giving up that easily I think this guy is going to burn himself without knowing, after all playing with theee love fire is more dangerous than anything else could be...😳

He's right now a man in mission asking and looking for what he wants but doesn't know the consequences could be higher or even bring out something unexpected to the table. He came out to win her but why do I have a feeling that he will leave something behind unknowingly... 😳

Now what is more interesting is he did not put to his calculation that this idea and challenge could actually change everything between the three of them forever and ever... 😳

I don't know why saby, but I want her to woo him back surprisingly by shutting him for while. I think that could bring out more challenging and maybe fun too... 😆

I don't know about the future but I don't trust this guy at this moment even thought I am very much in love with him.... 😳

Other than that I have no complaints soo far, and I very happy that you're encouraging my girl to look after herself.... 👏 👏 👏

The author, the supper spider woman,....👏

It was worth reading really and I am very much pleased with ,tracing your drawing line.....😉

Btw I hope you enjoyed last nights accasions.....😳

Now when are you are going to update the next chapter.. this is seriouse saby you stopped somewhere you shouldn't so.....

Always luv..

hanaane

Originally posted by: purple_penguins

Nahi Yaar!

I am happy that Bani isnt falling for Jai!.. But eventually she will.. I mean who can resist Jai Walia...😉..unless this is a sad FF😭 that is what I meant.. sorry if you took it the wrong way.. sometimes i cant write english properly.. balme the francais....hehhe😳

who know what is gonna happen in the future 😆 don't worry, keep the faith, and no i did not take anything the wrong way, i understood what u meant, i guess i need to check my english too 😆

I love the way Bani is strong and independent ... MB that was soo funny your post!! ...... I am soo happy she didnt agree to the money and didnt take his sh** and the update was awesome sabs!!!.. Pia trying to seduce Jai.. heheh.. too funny... all i can think of is the noir lacy hippie..🤢

pia has nothing else to offer besides herself, let's see how long jai is gonna be happy with just that 😆

**aviva**

Originally posted by: $h@aq...

now as i havee already upsetted [ dont knw whetehr thss a word...but u knw what i mean] u i jst thought to irritatee u ...by postingg my verrryy unwelcomed commentss on ur ff... and u knww i am a pain ! so u havee to put up with it !!! 😉

oh please yaar, i am not upset with u and ur comments are always welcome you know that and u r not a pain and you did not and do not irritate me ...... so can we please stop this now.

awwwwwww !! Saby hun !! tht was a great updateee !!! amazingg !! simmplyyy tremdouss as usual !!! loveddd itt !! u and ur wordyy talent 👏 !!! Gosh !! i wish sometymess i had something like soo !! eventhough i lovee to writee ! i simplyy cant....!

am gald u liked the update

awwww !! i simplyyy lovee the fact that Jai is by the minute fallingg for Bani !! well i hope is !! or he better !!! ..o00hh myyy !!!! distraction from his love !! isntt ttooo gooood !!....but itss Bani !! so i am alll happyy !!!! hmmmm !! Go jai ! u r on a roll !! 😉 just view Bani in that sort of Prespectivee and she realllyyyyy will interst u moreee than any1 elsee !!! 😳 i knowww that didnt soundd ttooo goood !!! 😆 😉 nopee ! still innocent ! 😉 😆 i am suree Jai will be falling in love with Bani in noo timeee !! ... and thosee black eyes of herss..will surellyy be somethign he wudnt be balee to stay awaayy withh !!!!!

just wait for the story to unfold, am sure everything will fall in place

yyyeessssssss !! i am ssoooo happpyyyy !!!! Jai went awayyyy from Pia an her sooo called inviting offer !!! .... 😆 lo00llzz !! dats just the limit !!! Pia is ssooo getting on my nervess !! Goodness sakeee !!!! 😡 😡 does she havee anythingg elseee better to do than ... think of the idea of the child in the lab thing !! Gosh !! althoughh i lovedd thee descriptions of the scientific equipemnt !! lo0llzz !! jst reminded me of the experiment we did 2dai !! howw cud she even say that !! i knoww she iss such A B**** !!! 😡 😡 soorryyy fro thsi ! i reallyy do hate her !

we all hate her sweety and my hate is very obvious, no wonder i made her out into a cartoon in this ff

i reallyy hopee Jai can apologisee to Bani sooon for his veryy harsh words!!!! i dont like it !! and soo when tehy get married they will fall in loveee !!! soo i will be waiting for thosee partss likee hell !! 😉 😳 lovedd the ayy ur storyy is progressin !!!! 😃

woooooo, hold on buddy, let's take each day as it comes ..... am not even sure if they get married

andd sincee i am ur quoteaholic freind !!! i jst lovedd the quotee !!! ne of thesee days hwen i get free !! i need to sit and search for thesee !!!! i am get simplyyyy amazeddd by them like helll !!!! it givess my brain someee rallyy godd excercisee ! i tend to think more and more and moreee !!! 😃

keep enjoying the quotes while i quote

ommmggggg !!!!!!!! lovedd the humorr !! Gosshhh !!!! i was likee in stitchesss at laughter !!! Goodnessss !!! 😆 this was ttoooo goood !!! 👏 👏 👏

good to see you laughing

a tremendouss updatee ! and simplyyy remarkablee as well !! as itss one of the first thought's like soo Jai has Bani !! yayayaya !!! lovin teh way ur story is headingg !! plzzz updateee soon ASAP !! will be waiting eagerllyyf or ur updateee !!!! 😃

i already posted ch 5 will update again tomm now. till then sayonara

Thnksx hun !
Shafaq ! 😛
👏

Originally posted by: Vedo

awesome part Sabs! 😃
👏
Pia darling enjoy the little attention he gives you now bcos soon all of it will be only for Bani...see it has started already! 😛
Pia trying to seduce Jai was funny! 😆 😆
hehe I'm old enough yaar! 😛 and I lovee hot weather! 😳 😳 😉
plzz continue soon! 😊

thanks vedo ........ i am feeling very sorry for pia darling, but am enjoying it too, call me sadistic, but i don't care.

bechari pia, seduce karne ke sivay aur kya aata hain usko

good to know u like hot weather ..... will keep that in mind.

ch 5 has been posted, padh lena 😃

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

once again a superb part.too good.really interesting.loved it.cant wait to read more. 😊

thank u .............. will update soon.

Originally posted by: jnawaz

omg... read the last 3 parts... that pia besharam...
knows that jai is gonna marry bani now and yet she is still feeling him up...ewww 🤢 🤢 🤢

pia hai hi aisi

jai u better be nice to bani and fallin love with her...

oh boy .... dhamkis ...... jw bach ke rehna

cant wait to see what happens...

me too

slowly but surely they will fall in love..

u really think so

i mean they are already half way there...huh...bani is mad in love with him...becahri... 😕 😕 😕 jai hun....you did not just say that...bani needs to stay home with you child...oh hell no...she is a modern woman...what r u a cave man...typical male responce...i hate that...bani can and will balance both...

jw, u better watch what u say to and about bani, yaha pe tumhari dal nahi galnewali

great part...cant wait fo rmore...

thanks dear, will update tomorrow

JAZ