Ehsaas (End, Pg 79) - Page 29

Originally posted by: punjabi#1

Its bani!!

I like the emotional parts, I would love to read Jai and Masi's talk.


-Rimpy

Bani??? oh you mean the last person? It could be Sahil too...lets wait for the next part...

I am glad you like the emotional ones...I will try to make it short and stick it in the next update...

Originally posted by: rivya

Bani??? oh you mean the last person? It could be Sahil too...lets wait for the next part...

I am glad you like the emotional ones...I will try to make it short and stick it in the next update...

yeah, I meant the person that heard them talking or atleast like they heard part of the conversation.

Its proable Sahil because thats they kind thing Ekta would do and I can see you do it. Its a writer thing, to throw at people something they least except.

BTW, I like the emotional parts because in my opionion I think they are harder to write and understand because they are more complicated. regular parts are overdone this days but then again you have to cater to your readers.

-Rimpy

Originally posted by: punjabi#1

yeah, I meant the person that heard them talking or atleast like they heard part of the conversation.

Its proable Sahil because thats they kind thing Ekta would do and I can see you do it. Its a writer thing, to throw at people something they least except.

BTW, I like the emotional parts because in my opionion I think they are harder to write and understand because they are more complicated. regular parts are overdone this days but then again you have to cater to your readers.
-Rimpy

Thanks hon...I will try to cater to both types...but since I dont read a lot of light and fluffy things, I am not sure if I will be able to do such a good job with it...

i really can't wait to read massi and jai conversations, it will be so emotional. So Bani will know the truth if she wants. wondering how she will react about Jai and their past.
Nice update keep on your great job 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: Miss_Diey

i really can't wait to read massi and jai conversations, it will be so emotional. So Bani will know the truth if she wants. wondering how she will react about Jai and their past.
Nice update keep on your great job 👏 👏 👏

Okay so we will get some of Masi and Jai's conversation...since it has been 2/2 so far...

Yes...a lot of people want Tarun to tell Bani her truth...but I dont want it to come out so soon...

Thanks hon...

riyva,
g8 part.
so tarun is confused about his love and feelings for bani and he wants bani to go back to Jw is really g8. so he shld do something to bring them together soon. i think tarun only cares for bani and he shld not come in b/w JB just hope soon bani's memory will be back. please continue soon.

swati

Originally posted by: swatinarang

riyva,
g8 part.
so tarun is confused about his love and feelings for bani and he wants bani to go back to Jw is really g8. so he shld do something to bring them together soon. i think tarun only cares for bani and he shld not come in b/w JB just hope soon bani's memory will be back. please continue soon.

swati

Hey...with all the hatred going on for Tarun around here...I figured that I can make the Tarun in my FF seem a little like a hero...he needs to deal with his feelings before he does something to help JB...but I think he is already doing enough...dont you see how he affects Jai with everything he does or says...

I will continue soon...in the next couple of chapters I have a couple of things that I am thinking should help get her memory back...atleast to the point where she can question her past...

rivsb

Rivs,

that was great, 👏
Maasi is fair, she is trying to convince Jai that Tarun is not a bad guy, Tarun himself seems to be a good guy, hope he turns to be one in the real KS too!!

Keep going, it's getting really good!

-- SR

rivs kitna inteza karaogi
i want bani to know everythign
poor jai roh raha tha
tears
please continue soon!

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Rivs,

that was great, 👏
Maasi is fair, she is trying to convince Jai that Tarun is not a bad guy, Tarun himself seems to be a good guy, hope he turns to be one in the real KS too!!

Keep going, it's getting really good!

-- SR

Thanks...Sheena...

That is how I see Masi...to me she has been fair...always except her recent actions..which can only be attributed to the creative ideas that some people come up with...so I want to keep her true to her nature...as mush as possible.

Tarun...this is how I expected him to be...even in the serial...and I am keeping my hopes up that the creatives get a brain wave and they stop this ridiculous portrayal of such fanastic chacracter and actor.

I shall continue soon...Maybe another update on Thursday...