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Posted: 18 years ago
heyy ! .....Navs hun !! r u feeling better now !! 😃 yyaarr wen r we gonnaa get a updatee ! ...havee bveennn waiting ..and waiting...and waiting Patientllyy ! ....arreee yyaarr ....pleaseee updatee sooonn !! .... 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Navs!!!! First of all I'm sooo sorry for not keeping up with your amazing ff!!!

2nd of all, I deserve an applause, I caught up ur whole ff in less than 24 hours, and I have a exam on monday!!! But don't worry I'm prepared! 😉

I love Jai and Bani's tense but sweet moments....your scenes are now providing a good substitute for Jai and Bani

Ranveer and Raashi.....what can I say? 😳

Please please continue with the next part soon...

Once again I'm really sorry!!!

Luv ya,

Meera 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: lonely14

haha sahil's button broke??? 😆 yeaaa cuz i couldn't think of anything else😆

man they ask too many questions to my baby, bechara pehle itna restless tha aur ab yeh tauba tauba. 😆 lmao.. its luv.. kya karein..well first come first serve😆

hahah man i am loving more and more, hehe love his flirting. glad ur liking it.. i luv his flirting too😉

Update soonnn. im tryingggg

Shina

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: $h@aq...

heyy ! .....Navs hun !! r u feeling better now !! 😃 yyaarr wen r we gonnaa get a updatee ! ...havee bveennn waiting ..and waiting...and waiting Patientllyy ! ....arreee yyaarr ....pleaseee updatee sooonn !! .... 😃 😃

hi hun.. im feeling betta now.. compared to before.. give me 10 minutes😉 i've been workin on d part.. its kinda dull.. but ehhhh.. its d best i can do
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Navs!!!! First of all I'm sooo sorry for not keeping up with your amazing ff!!! haila hun its ok.. u take ur time.. no need to say sorry

2nd of all, I deserve an applause, I caught up ur whole ff in less than 24 hours, and I have a exam on monday!!! But don't worry I'm prepared! 😉 oh i was about to say.. applause.. tumhe toh joote padhenge.. good that ur prepared and thanx fo catchin up - 👏 👏 👏 - ur applause😆


I love Jai and Bani's tense but sweet moments....your scenes are now providing a good substitute for Jai and Bani hehe thanx hun

Ranveer and Raashi.....what can I say? 😳 that's more than enough no need to say more😉😉


Please please continue with the next part soon... will do so.. give me 10 mintues

Once again I'm really sorry!!! haila its ok.. thanx fo reading and catchin up and commenting 🤗🤗

Luv ya,

Meera 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
thanx guyz.. hope u enjoy this part 😳😳 im so so so so sooooooooo sorry for the delay..

WARNING – highly boring.. be prepred to zzzzzzzzzzzz..

*~*~*Part 23*~*~*



bani/raashi serve everyone drinks as they all start chit-chatting.. after a while bani/raashi again make their way towards the kitchen.. coming back wit tea.. and samosa chat for everyone.. something to start off with.. pushy helps in the serving.. as everyone eats and enjoys
Sahil: wow mami.. this samosa chat's great
Rano: yea di.. its really good
Bani: thanx guyz.. glad u like it.. now enjoy
as everyone continues to enjoy the samosa chat.. jai smiles to himself.. as he looks at bani.. he's glad to see his fav. Food cooked.. cuz if anyone loves their samosa chat.. its jai 😉😉… as everyone continues to eat.. enjoying their tea.. rano drags bani/raashi upstairs – as she wanted to spend some quality time wit her sisters.. wit anu/pia joining.. masi/dadi left downstairs wit all the men.. as they all continue to chat away

Today was different.. it had been a long time.. since they had all been together.. like this.. and they were happy.. I mean it wasn't all perfect – but they were happy and that's all that mattered.. masi wished this moment would just stay like this.. forever and always.. she couldn't wait for that day – when her DIL's would be back in her house.. just then adi uncle gets a phone call… he gets up excusing himself.. as everyone continues to chatter away.. ranveer was looking around.. he wanted to see raashi.. not the guyz he sees EVERYDAY.. all the time 😆😆😆 as a smile appeared on his face.. when he had seen raashi.. and her reaction towards seeing him.. as his thoughts r disturbed by all the grlz coming downstairs.. approaching them.. ranveer's eyes are fixed on raashi.. who's busy laughing away wit d rest.. raashi looks ahead.. as her smile disappears in a second on seeing ranveer stare at her.. as anu/pia/rano make their way forward

Raashi goes by bani.. as she whispers
Raashi: why's he staring at me?? bani looks at her raashi then everyone else
Bani: who's staring at u??
Raashi: HE IS
Bani: no he's not
Raashi: well he was
Bani: relax raashi
Raashi: how am I suppose to relax.. tell him to stop.. I already made a fool outta myself once
Bani: huh.. wat.. when??
Raashi: don't ask
Bani: tell me..
Raashi: at the door
Bani: wat u mean.. at the door when??
Raashi: when u were in the kitchen.. I went to open the door and it was him
Bani: oh and???
Raashi: and I didn't budge.. I was staring at him.. like a weirdo.. and then.. and thennnnn
Bani: and then wat???
Raashi: u know wat he said.. ufff.. I can't believe.. he said
Bani: raashi.. chalo
bani takes raashi to the kitchen.. giving her some water.. telling her to calm down.. raashi calms down..

Raashi: flowers... who brought??

Bani: voh.. he.. um.. don't ask

Raashi: I won't.. let's get the dinner ready.. and set the table

Bani: yep let's go bani/raashi start heating up the dinner.. rano joins them.. helping them.. while pushy's making sure.. nothing else is needed…serving the guests outside

Just then adi uncle comes inside.. as he talks wit masi/dadi and everyone else..masi/dadi make their way towards the kitchen
Masi: bani beta
Bani: ji masi.. kya hua
Masi: bani beta.. voh.. humein. Humein jaana hai
Raashi: jaana hai.. kahan jaana hai masi
Adi: vo beta.. humein Mumbai jaana hai.. wahaan hamara ek purana dost aur uski family America se aayi hai..and in two days.. they're gonna leave.. so we have to go meet 'em
Raashi: but u guyz.. masiii..
Dadi: arey puttar samjhne ki koshish karo.. humein abhi nikal na hoga
Bani: lekin dadi.. the food is ready.. at least eat something before u guyz leave
Masi: nahin beta phir der ho jayegi..
adi uncle goes hugs bani/raashi

Adi: ok fine.. how about a dinner treat.. once u guyz r back in Mumbai.. hmmm
Raashi: but phir bhi.. kuch toh
Masi: arey baaki sab hain na.. voh toh hum teeno chale hain.. baaki sab kha kar jayenge.. chinta mat karo
Adi: masi humein chalna chahiye
masi/dadi and adi uncle.. leave saying bye to everyone.. telling them to take care.. and they'll see them back in Mumbai on Monday.. as they leave.. jai and ranveer go drop 'em off to the door along wit bani/raashi and pushkar.. as the three leave.. heading back to Mumbai
Pushkar: well.. um.. we should eat right
Rano: wat?? Eat already.. no way…
Pushkar: no way.. why not
Sahil: we'll eat.. relax pushkar.. not hungry yet..
as they all go back on the couch and start chitchatting.. bani makes her way towards the kitchen.. raashi was about to go.. but jai tells her to sit.. he'll go.. raashi sits back down and continues to talk wit everyone.. bani's standin in the kitchen.. by the flowers that jai had brought her.. she has her back to him..

Jai walks in the kitchen…spotting her.. he goes stands behind her.. bani's too oblivious to notice.. jai leans in whispering
JW: im glad u liked the flowers
Bani: huh.. mein toh bas
JW: wat's wrong bani???
Bani: nothing's wrong
JW: banii
jai puts his hands on her shoulders turning her around
JW: hey come on.. tell me.. wat's wrong
Bani: nothing wohh masi aur
JW: bani.. it was an emergency call.. otherwise u know they wouldn't miss the dinner
Bani: haan lekin
JW: lekin kya
Bani: well they could've eaten something.. mumbai's far u know
jai smiles.. as he listens to bani.. she reminded him of a little kid.. well she was acting like one for sure😆😆
JW: they're not kids bani
Bani: phir bhi.. they didn't eat.. wat if they get hungry
JW: well they drank the tea.. they ate the samosa chat.. so they'll be fine
Bani: butt phir bhi
JW: relax will you.. waise I loved the samosa chat.. thanx
Bani: kis liye.. maine nahin banayi
as she turns around again.. looking at the flowers.. running her hand over them..
JW: u didn't make the samosa chat bani nods her head saying NOO
JW: hmm I could've sworn u made it.. I can't forget wat ur food tastes like bani bani looks at him.. then looking at the flowers again

JW: u know.. I made a mistake.. for getting u flowers
Bani: mistake.. why??
JW: well u keep on staring at them.. I should've gotten u something else
Bani: kyun??? I love flowers… especially white lilies.. they remind me of
bani realizes she's talking.. that too wit him.. that too so openly.. she shuts up.. jai smiles
JW: they remind u off??
Bani: nothing..
JW: nothing.. im sure u were gonna say something.. they remind u off???
Bani: nothing.. I just love them..
JW: well that makes two of us 😉😉
as he smiles at bani.. looking around
JW: so wat's for dinner.. im starving as he starts walking around the kitchen.. looking at the dishes that were prepared.. bani's just staring at him.. she had NEVER EVER EVER seen him act like this..
JW: hmm palak paneer.. my favorite.. banii??
Bani: ji
JW: can we eat.. im starving
Bani: y didn't u say so before.. me and raashi will set the dinner table
JW: no no.. actually let's wait.. as no one else is hungry yet.. I'll wait
Bani: but u said u r
JW: um.. can I get some gajar ka halwa.. that'll make do for now
Bani: ok sure
as bani grabs a small bowl.. puts in gajar ka halwa and hands it to him.. jai takes a bite
JW: this tastes great.. thanx..
Bani: ur welcome
JW: no bani.. thanx.. for cooking my favorite foods 😉
as he goes by bani.. he kisses her cheek 😳.. then turns away. Leaving wit his gajar ka halwa.. bani's standing there ready to fall on the floor.. he just kissed her.. he did.. omggg.. he did.. and was she just having a conversation wit him.. a normal nice conversation.. jai makes his way outside eating his gajar ka halwa

Anu: arey mamu.. ur eating
JW: yes.. I was hungry.. so im eating
Sahil: wat r u eating??
JW: gajar ka halwa
Rano: I want gajar ka halwa too
rano makes her way towards the kitchen.. but jai blocks her
Rano: kya hua
JW: u can't have gajar ka halwa
Rano: whyyyyyyy not
JW: cuz its made for me.. and only me.. if u start eating.. its gonna finish
Rano: 😲 what is THAT suppose to mean??????
Sahil: he's right rano.. but if u'll both excuse me.. can I go thru..
Rano: sahilllll.. ur taking his side
Sahil: cuz he's right rano
JW: I told u.. and waise bhi u said u weren't hungry
Rano: I didn't say that.. sahil said that
the three continue talking at the door.. bani's watching them.. a smile appears on her face.. rano's getting teased by jai and sahil.. she had really neva seen this side of jai.. just then rano passes jai and sahil makes her way towards the kitchen.. followed by jai and sahil.. the two (sahil and rano) literally attack the kitchen. Lookin for gajar ka halwa.. when bani helps 'em. and serves them.. just then they're joined by anu/pia/raashi/pushy.. who also eat and enjoy..

Now everyone's seated in the kitchen.. sahil's sitting on the counter.. everyone's either standing or sitting somewhere.. just talking and laughing.. full masti in the kitchen.. raashi looks around..doesn't find ranveer.. then makes her way outside.. ranveer's sitting on the couch.. raashi looks at him.. taking a deep breath.. as she walks towards him
Raashi: aap.. aap ne kuch nahin khana
Ranveer: voh mujhe bhook nahin hai
Raashi: phir bhi.. baaki sab kha rahen hain
Ranveer: nahin raashi mujhe
raashi gives him an angry look.. then walks back in the kitchen.. ranveer's now confused but just sits there.. a few seconds later.. raashi's standing by his side again
Raashi: here u go raashi hands him a bowl wit gajar ka halwa
Ranveer: but raashi i..
Raashi: everyone's eating.. u should too.. you're..
Ranveer: but raashi who eats dessert before dinner???
Raashi: voh.. voh to sab kha rahen hain.. toh
Ranveer: thanx raashi.. lekin mujhe gajar ka halwa.. u know I don't like it so much
Raashi: voh.. mein.. mein aapke liye kheer laati hoon
Ranveer: kheer.. tumne banayi??
Raashi: haan I rememba u like
as raashi bites her tongue shutting up.. ranveer smiles standing up..
Ranveer: hmm so u rememba I like kheer
Raashi: mujhe toh.. main toh bas
Ranveer: thanx raashi.. but I'll take gajar ka halwa
as he takes the bowl from her.. he's bout to walk towards the kitchen.. when he stops
Ranveer: waise raashi
Raashi: hmm
Ranveer: I change my mind
Raashi: 😕 😕 😕 about?????
Ranveer: blue
Raashi: blue?? 😕 😕
Ranveer: ye u look just as good in pink as u do in blue.. 😉😉
raashi smiles looking down
Ranveer: cuz when u blush.. the color of ur face.. matches wit ur pink sari.. which makes u look even more beautiful as he smiles.. and leaves for the kitchen.. wit raashi left behind him in shock.. as she smiles.. goin to the kitchen..



hope u guyz enjoyed.. I don't know wat I wrote.. but obviously I wrote something

Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
im sooo sorry for the delay guyz.. i tried.. i didn't know wat to write.. still dont know try to enjoy

i gotta go now - dinner preparations then i gotta wash my hair.. blah blah blah.. ttu guyz later..

love you.. muah
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey baby!!!!!! dude i read ur post about the office getting robbed!! dude thats soooo true who the heck would wanna rob that!!! wats the fun in that?😕 stupid peoplei tell ya!!!😆

anyways....

haila! .. i am 1st again!!! man too bad i wasnt on ur last part but i was today!!!!!!!!!😃 go me!!! woohoo!!!!!!... yup me and my sis have to save spots!!!!! cuz then other people will beat us!!!!!!😉


wow!!! what another part!!!!! that was sooooo cute!!!!!! with jai and ranveer awww!!!!! haila kiss!!!!!!😳 bani.. u know u liked it!!!!!!

Raashi..... the more u blush.. the more he's gonna hit on u!!!!😆😆😆 and u know u like it!! dont hide it girl!!!!!!!!!!😳...........

oh man that was awesome cant wait for next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

savin ! okiee now Guli sisiee tht wasnt soo nicee ..cozz i knoww i clked her thread first ...but i gt too busy reaidng the reply...and den wen i cmaee and psited "savin" u already did !! ... 😭😭😭....Chote Chote bacho ko sab Bargee karke aage chale gayee !! ..... 😭...veryone should wait for me to cmeent...and onllyy then comment !! afterall im the princess !!! 😳😉....

awww Navss hun ! that was a great partt 👏!!! awwww thtss just tooo gooodd !! Fab !! luvingg the dinner !! ... awwww !!! ...hey bot who on earth eatss the desert first 😕.... and then the dinner ! looollzz !! .....awww 😆😆...awww 1 ia m ssooo glad all thee oldies left !! ..noww thts shows ... tht we get moreee Jai and Bani aloneeee !!! 😉 and loadss moree masti ! ..... and a few ahhemm ahheem !! 😳........ awww !! .... hey i bet they saw me ..with my Mickey waving....and i knoww Jai blowed me a Freindly kiss ! ....😆...... ...Ranveer aashi weree too gooodd !! heyy ...blushinr we !!

hun ! it was a fab part !!! tooo gooodd !! loved it !! it wasnt boring at aalll !! .. it was fab ....great part !! loved... it ! ...pleaseee updatee sooonn !!! will be waiting eagerllyyy ! ......soon ..matlab sooon ! ....

Thanksx !

Shafaq ! 😛

👏

Edited by $h@aq... - 18 years ago

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