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Posted: 19 years ago

#661

Originally posted by: dagr8t1
Hi i am new to the forum it was great reading your ff just hoping(though its never gonna be true) that the real thing was somethimg like that too.
Waiting to read the next part.
Kepp it up your doing a great job.

thank you soooooooo much.. WELCOME to KS forums 🤗🤗 hope u enjoy ur stay here.. on this forum.. get addicted😉😉 ye i wish the real thing was something like the ff's. but NOPE.. its ekta mayi - that lady is beyond realistic.. thank you sooo much.. will update soon..

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Posted: 19 years ago

#662

thanx guyz.. glad u liked it 😳 hope u enjoy this part

*~*~*PART 20*~*~*

as raashi makes her way upstairs.... walking towards dadi's room.. she stops midway.. she moves forward... leaning by the door.. as she looks inside the room.. ranveer sitting on a chair.. reading something.. but was asleep.. wit his head resting back.. as raashi continues to stare at him wit luv/affection in her eyes 😉 as she's lost in her thoughts remembering the dinner.. and wat he had said.. about how she's not talking baat nahin kar rahi.. jab mein tumhare sath rehti thi tab kehte the..raashi tum bahut bolti ho.. and now when i don't talk.. now u tell me to talk.. her facial expression changes as she gets angry but that anger disappears as she continues to stand there..staring at ranveer.. who looks cute as baby 😳 .. when he's sleeping.. well obviously cuz he's not screaming/angry for once 😆

while bani's ready to have a heartattack..as she's suddenly pulled in the room.. she bumps into someone..she knows its him.. she's shocked but not SO shocked.. she's just shocked to see him act this way.. cuz its JAI WALIA - the man who alwayz used to get angry wit her on the tiniest little things.. is actually flirting wit her??? 😕 as bani looked up at jai... who wrapped his arms around bani.. so she doesn't fall.. as he had pulled her hard.. jai closes the door.. as bani moves away from him... looking at him... standing there quietly.. confused bout how to react.. angry.. happy.. confused.. nervous.. shy.. as she froze on the spot.. continued to stare at jai.. who was looking back at her wit nothing but luv and passion gleaming thru his eyes..(**faints**)as they both continue to look at each other.. cuz nothing else was really needed to be said.. as their eyes did most of the talking.. expressing their feelings.. in d most perfect way possible 😳 😉

pushy continued talking to masi/dadi.. now getting confused bout where bani/raashi went... but he had a slight idea of wat might've happened.. as he started to get nervous 😆 😆 .. but nope.. THIS wasn't his fault.. no one told them to go get medicine in the first place.. 😆 😆
Masi: pushkar
Pushkar: ji masi
Masi: thank you
Pushkar: kis baat ke liye masi..
Masi: for taking care of our bahu's
Pushkar: lo dekho dadi.. ek minute mein bhi beta tha.. ab apni daughter in law ka care taker bana ke paraya kar diya as masi/dadi smile
Dadi: yeh sach hi toh keh rahi hai.. jo bhi tumne bani/raashi ke liye kiya voh hum kabhi nahin bhoolenge

Pushkar: dekho dadi ab aap bhi shuru mat kee jiye.. bani/raashi are my sisters.. its my job as a brother to take care of them.. and to tell u the truth.. i've never seen them this happy.. i mean they fight wit me.. argue wit me.. A LOT .. but i love it 😊 .. cuz that way they dont get sad.. i dont' want them to get sad.. i know wat they went thru when they left the walia house masi/dadi get sad as they remember the past moments.. along wit pushy.. pushy smiles hugging them

Pushkar: ab aap log chinta mat kijiye.. mujhe lagta hai..bani/raashi'll be back in this house. sooner than we think.. 😉
Masi: humein bhi kuch aisa hi lagta hai
Pushkar: exactly.. now don't get sad. aur waise bhi..ab aap logon ko chinta karni hai toh meri ki jiye..
Dadi: tumhari chinta??
Pushkar: haan..kyun ke mein toh aaj pitoonga.. bani/raashi se.. pakka.. i just know it masi and dadi start to laugh
Pushkar: sach mein.. lo aap log hasne lage.. mein abhi unhe le kar aata hoon.. warna meri kher nahin.. aap log coffee pee jiye.. pushkar makes his way upstairs.. is looking for bani/raashi.. when he hears giggles coming out of a room.. he knocks to see.. rano/anu/pia/sahil.. chitchatting..
Pushkar: hey guyz.. mind if i join 😊
Rano: pushkar.. come on in pushkar goes inside.. joining the rest.. as he starts talking wit them.. joking around wit them.. (forgetting about the real reason as to y he came upstairs.. 😆😆😆)

raashi makes her way inside the room.. quietly.. she didn't want to.. but she couldn't stop herself 😳 .. she looks around the room.. as she goes by ranveer.. she slowly takes the file from under his hand.. and puts it back on the table.. as she grabs a blanket.. putting it on him.. she smiles.. as she's bout to leave.. she feels someone grab her hand.. as she closes her eyes.. thinking oh goddddddd.. no no no.. plz don't tell me he's awake.. i just HAD to come inside.. omggg NOT good as she slowly turns around to see ranveer holding her hand.. looking at her

jai/bani are busy lost in each other's eyes.. when bani suddenly realizes.. where she is.. and how she has to go downstairs wit the medicine.. bani looks at jai.. then clearing her mind from the train of thoughts.. she makes her way towards the door.. she puts her hand on the door knob to open the door... when she feels someone behind her.. she slowly turns around.. as she feels his body heat.. and he's standing close.. or is it TOO close 😳 as she slowly turns around.. looking at jai... who's standing there quietly just mesmerizingly staring at her 😳 .. he takes a step forward.. since there was NO space.. he ended up moving more closer to bani.. who gets nervous.. turning a deep shade of red.. she moves back.. bumping into the wall.. jai puts his hands on the wall.. around her.. caging her

raashi turns to look at ranveer staring at her.. as she freezes
Ranveer: tum yahaan???
Raashi: haan.. m.. mein voh dadi ki medicines lene aayi thi 😕
Ranveer: yeh dadi ka kamra nahin hai
Raashi: i knowwwww... i came to get bani
Ranveer: bani??? u came for dadi's medicines or bani
Raashi: voh.. i came to get bani who came to get dadi's medicines 😕
Ranveer: aur tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho
Raash: i told you.. mein
Ranveer: i know i know u came to get bani who came to get dadi's medicine
Raashi: exactly
Ranveer: i meant.. in THIS room
Raashi: kuch bhi toh nahin.. i was going
Ranveer: oh really??
Raashi: well i would be gone.. if u weren't holding my hand..
Ranveer: oh im sorry..
Raashi: why are you saying sorry.. just let go of my hand.. so i can leave.. i just came here.. to put the file back.. and i thought i'd wrap a blanket on u. since u were sleep and u know its raashi continues to talk non stop.. much to ranveer's amusement.. as he slowly gets up.. smiling... raashi's too busy talking to notice
Ranveer: raashi
Raashi: huh..
Ranveer: tum bahut bolti ho
Raashi: l.. lekin.. m.. mein as raashi gets angry.. first talks a lot.. then at the dinner table tells her she's not talking and now again.. that she's talking a lot.. as raashi glares at ranveer..as he slowly let's go off her hand.. raashi leaves the room.. angry.. as ranveer smiles.. (million dollar smile 😉) much to his shock.. he liked teasing raashi 😉 .. as raashi leaves... making her way downstairs... but stops midway to catch her breath.. then goes downstairs.. to find NO one there..
Raashi: yeh sab kahaan chale gaye she looks around to see masi/dadi.. who were sitting wit adi uncle.. in one of the rooms talking... as she decided not to disturb them.. she sat on the couch waiting for bani.. and confused bout where pushkar is.. 😕

as bani continues to stare at jai... unable to breathe... trying to breathe.. as jai leans closer.. whispering in her ear
JW: u left wit out saying bye??? as he looks at her.. bani again at the loss of words.. continues to stare at him
Bani: woh.. m... mein
JW: chalo koi baat nahin.. im glad u came back
Bani: i.. i just came wit.. raashi and pushkar to say thanx to masi/dadi..
JW: dat's it????? as bani nods her head saying yes.. jai raises his eyebrow wit a question look on his face..
JW: no bye's for me?? bani looks at him.. then looks down
JW: well im fine wit that.. cuz i dont eva want u to say bye or thanx to me bani looks at him.. confused..
JW: i'll explain later as jai smiles (sighhhhhhh)... as jai's eyes trail bani's face.. going down.. once again fall on her pendant.. as jai once again runs his hand over it.. which makes breathing hard for bani.. no that was already hard... now it was just getting MORE hard.. as bani thanked her stars for the wall behind her.. warna ka kya pata.. kahan hoti 😆

JW: waise bani.. u told me.. raashi gave u this pendant.. right??
Bani: ji
JW: hmm.. whose pictures are in the pendant bani stares at jai..
Bani: voh.. m..
JW: tumhari pictures??
Bani: haan.. n.. nahin..
JW: haan.. nahin.. ???
Bani: nahin meri nahin
JW: toh??
Bani: v.. voh.. abhi khali hai.. i didn't put any pictures inside
JW: bani who wears a empty pendant.. ur suppose to have pictures in it
Bani: i am gonna put pictures in it... when i go back home
JW: hmm ok.. waise.. yeh medicines kiski hain bani's eyes literally pop out of her head.. as she looks at the medicines
Bani: dadi ki.. i.. i have to go.. as she moves forward only to collide into jai again.. as she moves back
Bani: i.. i have to go.. dadi.. voh sab mera intezaar kar rahen hain
JW: hmm ok u can go as jai moves back.. bani opens the door..
JW: good night bani
Bani: good night mr. walia
JW: bani
Bani: ji??
JW: will u be making my fav. food for dinner tomorrow?? as he smiles at bani.. who looks at him.. smiling a little 😉 .. getting shy 😳 .. runs down the stairs.. as jai smiles.. closing the door behind him..

Bani: where's everyone??
Raashi: masi/dadi are in that room over there..
Bani: oh and pushkar..
Raashi: pata nahin.. i came downstairs he wasn't here
Bani: u were upstairs???
Raashi: i went looking for u.. and well don't ask 😕
Bani: ye i agree .. pushkar kahaan hai.. we should go they decide to go make their way upstairs again to find pushy.. as they hear giggles out of one room.. they open the door to find pushkar.. laying on the bed.. joking away wit everyone.. 😆

Bani: pushkar
Pushkar: ohhh sh**.. ahem guyz.. chalein??
Raashi: nahin nahin
Pushkar: wat.. nahin kyun.. hum chalte hain na as pushkar smiles.. saying bye to everyone.. he goes out the door.. followed by bani/raashi who say good night to everyone.. the three musketeers make their way downstairs
Pushkar: u know i came to get u guyz.. and then i..
Bani: its ok
Pushkar: it is??
Raashi: yep its fine.. now let's go say bye to masi/dadi and leave
Pushkar: ok let's go 😃
Masi: arey tum teeno kahan chale gaye the bani/raashi too nervous and confused to say anything.. look at each other
Pushkar: vo masi hum rano/anu/sahil ke paas baithe the.. acha masi ab hum chalte hain.. aap sab kal sham dinner par zaroor aayiyega
Dadi: hum time par pahunch jayenge
Pushkar: theek hai dadi as the three musketeers bid goodbye.. and go out of the house..
Bani: this was...
Raashi: more tougher than dinner
as bani/raashi look at each other .. pushy looks at 'em confused but gets the idea .. as the three musketeers go home.. making their way towards the kitchen.. to enjoy their fruit salad.. along wit a movie 😉

haila i hope u guyz enjoyed.. i tried.. 😳 and i think the length is fine now😉 it looks LONG enough

Edited by nyzbabigyal - 19 years ago

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NaV

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Posted: 19 years ago

#663

hope u guyz enjoyed..i tried😳 nxt part most likely tomorrow 😉

Edited by nyzbabigyal - 19 years ago

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Vanita

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Stunner

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Posted: 19 years ago

#664

Oh man!!!!... this is 2 days in a row!!! i am 1st to post!!!!!!!😃😃😃 go me!!!!!!!😆😆😆

Okay sooo anyways....

Oh man pushy is funny!!!😆😆😆 its not my fault oh man!!!!!...

raashi..... just admit it.. u love the dude!!!!!! and u started ur rambling again!!!!!! on and on and on!! and see.. he didnt yell!!!!!!!! but he told you u talk to much!!😆 now thats funny!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bani...... in the pendant.. u know whos pix should go in there so why are you hesistating!?!😳 and wat will you do when you find out who really got it for u!! oh man!!!!😕😕

But jaanu.. that was awesome!!👏 u never disappoint me!!!!! keep up the good work!! and keep making me smile like this!😃

Edited by Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli - 19 years ago

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shafaq

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Posted: 19 years ago

#665

awwwww !! Navss hun !! was a great part !! ...... too goodd ! tremedouss yaarrr !! ...amazingg !!! super super coooll !!!! 😳😳 gr88 yaarrr !!! fab !

awwwwww !!! Jai and Bani r soo cutee ! aheemm Jai ..be a gentlemen...and let the ladyy go past !! nopee thtss not niceee izzitt !! ... 😆 awww but they r soo cutee ! i mean him ! i cud sooo imagine him as welll !! errmmm Baniiii y did u liee...jhoot bola...o o ..tut tut .not niceee !!! bad gorl 1 looolzz !! they had the pcitures Bani as far as i knoww !! 😉😳 lloollz !! 😆 ...awww Raashi and Ranveer r cuter..... noww they r even more imaginablee😳 awww Ranveer u also leave the lady's hand.....tut tut bad habitss !! loollzz !!! aww man !! i toldu i want moree.... and moree and moree.... yyaarr 1 told u how abt a drivee....or ...a nice longg walk in the park !!! 😉 ..... and psuhkarr is aweosmee,..yaarr i tihinkk i loveee him...... i mean they u portraayy his charctedrr..too goodd !!! noww Bani must get on...with cooking all Jai's fav's !! 😉

grr88 part hun ! loved itt !! tooo gooddd !!! Thanskxx hun for updatingg !! nad soorry fro the naggingg yaarr !! yaaarr mere nag karne se pehle updatee kar liya karo ! ... 😉 ..pleasee updatee sooonn !!! willl be waitingg eagerllyyyyyyy !!! ..... ASAP !

Shafaq ! 😛

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Edited by $h@aq... - 19 years ago

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Munni

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Posted: 19 years ago

#666

wow Navs....... awesome episode ... maza aya padke....

waise kal Bani kya bananewali hai dinner ke liye.......
kya hoga dinner mein....... JDD scenes hai kya.......

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NaV

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Posted: 19 years ago

#667

Originally posted by: $h@aq...
mee too

u two?????? its thanx to u i updated so fast.. it may not happen ALL the time😆

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NaV

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Stunner

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Posted: 19 years ago

#668

Originally posted by: Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli
Oh man!!!!... this is 2 days in a row!!! i am 1st to post!!!!!!!😃😃😃 go me!!!!!!!😆😆😆 lol yeppppppp jaanu.. u've been first..

Okay sooo anyways....

Oh man pushy is funny!!!😆😆😆 its not my fault oh man!!!!!... its not his fault.. he gets worried😆

raashi..... just admit it.. u love the dude!!!!!! and u started ur rambling again!!!!!! on and on and on!! and see.. he didnt yell!!!!!!!! but he told you u talk to much!!😆 now thats funny!!!!!!!!!!!! glad u liked it.. she's a chatterbox.. 😆

Bani...... in the pendant.. u know whos pix should go in there so why are you hesistating!?!😳 and wat will you do when you find out who really got it for u!! oh man!!!!😕😕
yaar tumhe toh abhi se chinta hone lagi.. don't worry bout it.. worry bout it when she finds out.. which is not gonna be soon😉

But jaanu.. that was awesome!!👏 u never disappoint me!!!!! keep up the good work!! and keep making me smile like this!😃 awwwwwwwwwww thanx hun.. glad ur enjoying it.. i hope i kep making u smile like that wit d updates

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NaV

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Posted: 19 years ago

#669

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad
wow Navs....... awesome episode ... maza aya padke....

waise kal Bani kya bananewali hai dinner ke liye.......
kya hoga dinner mein....... JDD scenes hai kya.......

thanx munni.. glad u liked it.. i dont know wat's for dinner yet.. lol JDD scenes.. hehe i'll think about it😉