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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rooj-i

Alright Navs, finally caught up with all 3 parts...superb!!!! thank you so much
Yeh Jai bhi na...Bani ko rulata hai... yep yep jai bhi na..
All the parts were funny πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
But Bani in drunk state is funnier πŸ˜† can u imagine
anyways gotta run and read other FFs...
Love this part...
sorry again
rooj

thanx hun.. stop sayin sorry.. and happy birthday😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
samu mein kya kahoon.. im 🀣 afta readin ur commentos.. no makhi nahin aayegi don't worry.. and no u were NOT in d same corner where jai was standing πŸ˜† yes i know y u luv atif aslam's songs πŸ˜† πŸ˜† and wat's wit bahaaro phool barsao.. huh

thank u so much πŸ€—
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thanx guyz.. glad u like d last part.. hope u enjoy this part 😳 😳 😳 thanx fo d song samu 😳 .. i hope its not boring.. as i have no idea.. how drunk ppl act πŸ˜† πŸ˜† and i've had a long day - boring museum trip so try and enjoyie 😳 😳 😳

*~*~*PART 49 *~*~*



bani finally manages to get up πŸ˜† .. as jai held her hand.. so she doesn't fall..jai moved so she can get some space and they can leave πŸ˜•
Bani: byeeeeee πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ jai looked at bani..
JW: bani who r u saying bye to ❓
Bani: arey him... right here... πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
as bani whispered to jai
Bani: I think he's a little too drunk
JW: right of course πŸ˜• .. JUST him..
as they both walked out of the house quietly.. right when they got out of the house
Bani: mr. walia..plz.. I can manage πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ as she let go off his hand.. and started walking towards his car πŸ˜• .. now if bani was held over by a cop .. she had walk in a straight line πŸ˜• .. she would definetley lose her driver's license πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. jai stared at bani.. as she walked in a zig zag .. finally when she was about to trip.. jai went and grabbed her.. so she doesn't fall 😳 😳 .. and then he realized.. how long it'd take to get to the car πŸ€” πŸ€” .. if bani was to walk.. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† so he picked her up.. carrying her in his arms.. 😳 😳 😳 Bani not complaining watsoeva.. wrapped her arms around his neck.. 😳 😳

Bani: mr. waliaa ❓
JW: yes bani 😳
Bani: mr. waliaaaa❓ ❓
JW: wat is it bani? πŸ˜•
Bani: mr. waliaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ❓ ❓
jai stared at bani .. as she just giggled away.. πŸ˜† πŸ€ͺ unbelievable.. so there was a good thing that bani doesn't drink πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. seeing her like this everyday... u had to be joking πŸ˜† ..all in all she looked cute 😳 but come on.. let's get real.. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† as jai finally made it to his car.. he put bani down.. as he opened the door for her.. 😳 😳

JW: get in bani πŸ˜ƒ
Bani: no mr. walia.. let's walk πŸ˜ƒ
JW: no bani.. let's not..
Bani: lekin I wanna walk 😑
JW: first learn to walk.. then we'll walk πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Bani: wat?? I do know how to walk..
as she started walkin towards the other end.. jai went holdin her..
JW: show me later.. ab chalein.. u don't wanna miss ur surprise do u?? 😳
Bani: surprise.. no.. no I don't.. let's go πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
as bani quietly went (no wait not quietly.. but u got d point πŸ˜† ) and sat in the car… jai closed the door.. as he looked at her.. she was busy tryin to turn the CD player on.. no no the CD player...the heat.. or was it the AC?? πŸ˜• Jai went to the other side.. as he sat in his seat..

Bani: wat a cheap car 😑 πŸ˜•
JW: now why is my car cheap?? πŸ˜•
Bani: tooti phooti car cheap hi toh hogi πŸ˜†
JW: tooti phooti?? πŸ˜• Bani its workin perfectly fine
Bani: no its not.. look the AC doesn't work, the heat doesn't work, the CD player doesn't work 😑 😑
JW: how about u wait.. 😳 so I can put the key in the ignition and start the car first πŸ˜ƒ

as bani looked at him with a "ohhhhhhhhhh" look.. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† jai just shook his head.. starting the car.. πŸ˜† just then the music started blazing.. as jai and bani both got a jhatka πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. as jai put the volume down.. which was as high as it could go.. thanx to bani.. πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Jai prayed πŸ˜† as he knew this was gonna be one tough ride.. as he changed the gear and started driving.. watchin bani in amusement.. as she turned the heat on, then the AC and then the CD player which kept on going from low volume to high volume..
JW: bani wat r u doing??
Bani: mr. walia I can't decide which song I like best πŸ˜•
JW: woh to dikh raha hai.. why r u putting the AC and the heat on.. the weather's beautiful πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜›
Bani: it is??
as bani looked out the window.. πŸ˜•
Bani: how do u know?? πŸ˜•
JW: how do I know wat?
Bani: that the weather's beautiful?? πŸ˜† πŸ˜†


jai just stared at her.. she was asking the most unusual questions .. and right he was.. the drive was LONG.. I mean longgggggg πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. it started from bani talking drunk .. changing the song every two seconds πŸ˜• .. and ended at bani's never ending questions..that didn't make any sense πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Jai got out of the car.. as he went to the other side.. he had a major headache right about now πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. thanx to the songs – which went from low to high volume... Then the heat and AC.. πŸ˜• he opened the door for bani.. and once again took her in his arms.. 😳 he didn't trust her to walk properly πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. not after everything he had witnessed.. he took her in the building.. they made their way in the elevator.. πŸ˜ƒ
Bani: mr. walia ❓ jai stared at bani.. here she goes again.. wit the repeating of mr. walia.. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
JW: bani tumhe koi gaana aata hai? πŸ˜•
Bani: gaana.. kyun??
JW: normally when someone's drunk they sing
Bani: they do ❓❓❓ gaana.. sochti hoon πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”


as the elevator stopped.. jai got out.. goin towards her apartment.. bani held jai tightly 😳 😳 as her purse fell on the floor behind jai .. jai looked at bani 😑 .. as he was about to put her down..so he can grab her purse.. she wrapped her arms around him tightly.. 😳 😳 😳

Bani: no I don't wanna.. don't let me down.. 😭 😭
JW: bani ur purse
Bani: nooo im comfy here 😳 😳
jai stared at her.. comfy?? πŸ˜•
JW: well im glad I could be of service 😳 .. lekin ur purse.. aren't ur keys in there?? πŸ˜ƒ
Bani: keys… for wat?? πŸ˜•
JW: ur apartment bani
Bani: is the surprise in my apartment??
JW: wat surprise?? πŸ˜•
Bani: the surprise u had .. the reason why we're here
JW: surprise Arey haan.. its.. its in ur apartment
Bani: it is?? How did it get in there?? πŸ˜•
JW: πŸ€ͺ bani worry about that later.. now u mind getting down.. so we can grab ur purse.. and get d keys 😳


bani looked at jai thoughtfully.. πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” as jai just stared at her πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .. finally she nodded.. after some deep thinking. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† .... jai put her down.. as he grabbed her purse off the floor behind him… takin the keys out..
Bani: u know u should never go thru a lady's purse jai looked at her.. as he turned the door knob.. opening the door
JW: nxt time.. I'll ask ur permission.. ok?? 😳
Bani: hmmm ok πŸ˜ƒ
JW: let's go bani.. inside πŸ˜ƒ
jai waited for bani… as she stood leaning on the wall as she stared at jai. Jai was lookin at her confused.. as he looked around and then at bani to find her STARING at him πŸ˜†
JW: ahem bani.. andhar chalein πŸ˜• bani looked at him.. finally moving.. made her way inside.. jai closed the door after bani 😳 😳 .. as bani walked towards her bedroom.. wit jai following close behind.. as she was not walkin properly.. he didn't want her to get hurt 😳 😳
Bani: mr. walia?? ❓ ❓
JW: bani.. say mr. walia one more time.. pitogi 😑
Bani: kya?? Maine .. I just had a question πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
JW: oh acha poocho 😳
Bani: mr. walia can u sing?? πŸ˜•
JW: sing? Why??
Bani: no u were saying that drunk people sing right
jai was confused as to where this was going

JW: yea.. so?? πŸ˜•
Bani: well mr. walia.. u don't sing... and u always get drunk πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
jai stared at him.. no she didn't just call him drunk πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
JW: bani I used to get drunk and when I drink.. im usually alone unlike you.. in a party full of people.... πŸ˜•

Bani: well its not my fault
as jai helped bani on the bed.. she sat down.. now sulking
JW: then whose fault is it?? πŸ˜•
Bani: urs 😑
JW: how so??
bani was about to say something as she kept quiet.. just looking at him..
JW: kya hua??
Bani: kuch nahin..
JW: acha now get some sleep 😳
Bani: u know wat? U probably don't sing… cuz u don't know how to πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
JW: excuse me?? 😑
as jai looked at her..
Bani: wat? Its true.. u can't sing πŸ˜†
JW: don't make assumptions bani..
Bani: well prove it
JW: no its ok..
Bani: lekin .. mr. walia.. .plz 😭
JW: get some sleep bani.. 😳
Bani: one song.. for me.. plz 😭
JW: how about no..
Bani: are you scared?? πŸ˜•
JW: scared off??
Bani: ur bad singing voice.. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
JW: me.. bad voice?? That too in singing?? I told u bani.. don't make assumptions πŸ˜‰
Bani: ok so lets hear one song right now
JW: how about no
Bani: how about yes?? πŸ˜•
JW: well bani u don't get to make the decision here πŸ˜ƒ
as jai looked at bani.. she was in no condition watsoeva to change into a night suit .. d only thing she was good for right now was chattering…non stop...wit these non stop questions.. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† as he got up.. about to put d blanket on her..

Bani: mr. walia.. helppp 😭 😭 as bani pulled on her necklace.. jai stared at her.. as he quickly went to her side
JW: relax bani… hold on I got it jai helped bani wit her necklace.. taking it off.. as he helped her wit her earrings.. putting them on the sidetable 😳 😳 as he looked at bani.. witout her jewelery.. and d slight bit of make up on.. she looked beautiful 😳 😳 .. like an angel.. that's wat she was.. his angel πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ .. jai just wanted to close this little gap in between them.. take her in his arms.. and cross all limits πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ but he stopped himself.. 😳 😳
JW: well now you won't have this problem in the morning πŸ˜ƒ
Bani: wat problem??
JW: ur hair getting stuck in ur necklace.. as I won't be here to help u 😳
Bani: kyun.. aap kahaan chale 😭 😭
JW: mein wohh πŸ˜•
Bani: ur leaving me aren't u ?? 😭 😭
JW: bani no im
Bani: yes u r.. ur leaving me.. 😭 😭
JW: no bani.. im not.. I'll never leave u 😳
Bani: yea right.. I go to sleep and u'll leave.. and 😭 😭 😭
jai looked at bani.. whose eyes were filled wit tears now.. 😭
JW: plz bani don't cry.. im not going anywhere 😳 bani didn't say anything as tears threatened to leave her eyes

JW: so can I get a smile please?? bani looked at jai.. 😭
JW: fine then.. I won't sing.. if u cry πŸ˜‰ bani smiled πŸ˜ƒ
Bani: well don't stop me from crying.. cuz u can't sing
as bani let out a slight laugh.. while jai sat there staring at her.. as bani wiped her eyes..biting her lower lip.. jai continued to stare at her mezmorized.. as his gaze went to her lips... 😳 😳 as he started singing in a low whisper.. 😳 😳

do listen to d song guyz.. its beautiful.. link - if u guyz wanna listen

http://ww.smashits.com/music/oldies/songs/2048/kajal.html

choo laney do nazuk honthon ko
kuch aur nahi hai jaam hai yeh
as jai leaned in.. continued his singing 😳 😳 .. as bani looked at him wit a slight smile playing her lips 😳

qudrat nay jo hum ko bakhsha hai
wo sab se haseen inaam hai yeh
choo laney do nazuk honton ko..
d smile soon went from a small one to a whole heartily one πŸ˜ƒ .. as bani moved closer to jai.. lookin down now.. her nasha had seemed to disappear… it wasn't d jaam (tequila)'s nasha anymore.. it was now jai's voice.. that was doin magic to her ears πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰


sharma kay na younhi kho dena rangeen jawani ki ghariyan (2)
betaab dharaktey seeno ka armaan bhara peghaam hay yeh
choo laney do nazuk honton ko
acchon ko bura sabit karna duniya ki purani aadat hai (2)
iss maiy ko mubarak cheez samajh mana kay bohat badnaam hay yeh
choo laney do nazuk…


not being able to finish d last line.. of the song πŸ˜‰ .. not being able to help/control himself πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ ..jai leaned in.. as he placed a soft kiss on bani's lips 😳 😳 .. before he could even think of backing away.. bani wrapped her arms around him… kissing him back πŸ˜‰ .. wit full passion 😳 😳 .. which jai couldn't resist.. even if he wanted to πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ .. as he kissed her back..taking her in his arms 😳 😳 .. bani pulled him more closer.. as d kiss was about to take everythin else to a different level πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ .. as jai pulled back a little.. lookin at her.. this wasn't right .. well it wasn't wrong either πŸ˜‰ .. but this wouldn't be right.. as bani's in a drunk state .. it'd be make things much worse… the last thing he wants is to take advantage of such a situation.. πŸ˜•

JW: bani get some sleep 😳 😳 as jai whispered.. bani just stared at him.. she didn't look so drunk now.. now she was drunk on the nasha of love/passion πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ .. not tequila.. as jai helped bani lie down.. he put the blanket over her.. bani held his hand 😳 😳 .. jai sat down nxt to her 😳 😳 .. waiting fo her to go to sleep.. bani put her arm around jai as she eventually fell asleep 😳 😳 .. jai – tired and sleepy now.. and definitely not in the position to wake up or get up .. ended up falling asleep by bani on his side.. wit bani in his arms.. 😳 😳 😳


thanx guyz..hope u enjoy this part 😳 😳
Edited by nyzbabigyal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
kitna lamba part hai.. hope u guyz enjoyed 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
i lovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvved this part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

it was so funny!!!!!🀣

great song choice!

please cont soon
Thanks
sunju
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Posted: 18 years ago
smart boy jai...else in the morning she would have killed u...but navs...bechare ko aise to mat karo...she needs to give him a chance...
ok next update mein give him a chance...
oh btw...nice update...havent heard the song but will hear it once the award show if over...lol...
rivs
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome update

bani drunk is trouble..with a capital T...waiting for bani's reaction when they get up in the morning....continue soon
ck
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Posted: 18 years ago
πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† nice awesome wonderful
pls cont soon.............
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Posted: 18 years ago
Man Bani was so drunk, Jai had such hard time with her!!! She talks a lot!!! Loveddddddddddddddddd this part so much that cant believe u stoped writin at such a spot!!! I got lost when read the part, then realized after goin back that Mitali missed a p48!!! Now wish J can explain 2 her of y he was talkin 2 her!!!
Edited by cute1228 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
lovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvved this part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

it was so funny!!!!!

plz cont soon

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