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Posted: 18 years ago
great part. please continue soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Jai..come on get a GRIP on ur thoughtssss..Hopefully he wont break all those beautiful relationship he has with Bani due to his insecurity..Good part 👏 👏 ..
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Posted: 18 years ago
wonderful part pls cont soon..........
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks friends for reading......

Part31

Bani was in Walia Mansion to meet Krishna whose health was not well. Jay saw her car outside and looked for her. He found her in the hall talking to his father. As his father left to attend a phone call, Jay looked at her questioningly.

Jay: "Bani tum aaj apne office kyun nahi gayi thi?"
Bani: "lekin main toh gayi thi."
Jay: "toh phir dopahar ke 2 baje, pink dress mein Globe cinema hall mein kaun ghus raha thi?"
Bani: "mujhe kya pata? Jo ghus rahi thi usse poocho."
Jay: "ussi se pooch raha hoon."
Bani(innocently): "tumhe kyun lagta hai ke woh main thi?"
Jay: "Bani maine tumhe peeche se dekha tha. I can't mistake your appearance."
Bani: "oh woh!!!! Actually maine bhi suna hai ke aajkal meri koi duplicate is shehar mein aayi hui hai. Tumne usse dekha hoga. Waise bhi dekho maine koi pink dress nahi pehna hai. It's black."
Jay: "tumhari duplicate? Bani stop lying. Accept that it was you."
Bani(in fake tears): "Jay us pink dress ki kasam main woh nahi thi."

At that time Saahil came and they stopped arguing. He gave some medicines to Jay for his mother and then on seeing Bani he remembered something.

Saahil: "hey Bani tumne woh photo dekha?"
Bani: "kaun sa?"
Saahil: "arey wahi pink dress mein. Pushkar ne mujhe abhi bheja. See.."

But before Bani could take the mobile phone from Saahil's hand, Jay took it. He saw a photo of Bani outside the cinema hall in the same pink dress.

Jay: "Saahil ye kab ki photo hai?"
Saahil: "aaj hi ki toh hai. Bani ke office mein pest control ke log aaye the, toh in logonki chutti mil gayi. Bani ne phir Rano aur Pia ko call kiya aur finally Bani, Rano, Pia aur Pushkar movie dekhne gaye the. Main bhi jata par main to aapke saath meeting mein tha."
Jay: "oh I see."

Bani snatched the phone from Jay's hand and saw the photo. After Saahil sent it to her number, he left. Jay looked at Bani with the expression "I told you". Bani knew she needed to find an excuse. But what?

Bani: "hmmm… so Mr. Jay Walia aap test mein paas ho gaye hain."
Jay: "test?"
Bani: "haan aap mujhe doooor se pehchaan lete hai that means your eyesight is still good. But aap wahan kar kya rahe the?"
Jay: "mujhe kisise milna tha toh main meeting ke beech mein hi uth gaya tha aur wahin se gujar raha tha tab maine aap ko dekha. By the way maine tumse jab poocha, tumne jhoot kyun kaha?"
Bani: "arey main toh tumhe test kar rahi thi?"
Jay: "really?"
Bani(scratching her head): "actually……. Maine tumhe bataya nahi tha that's why. Mujhe laga tumhe bura lagega."
Jay(placing his arm around her shoulders): "Bani mujhe kyun bura lagega? In fact achcha hua ke tumne film dekhli varna tum mujhe kehti dikhane ke liye."
Bani(pulling his cheek): "don't worry Jay Walia, tum itni asaani se nahi bachoge."

Hearing the sound of footsteps, Jay left hold of her shoulders and both of them sat down on the sofa with strange expressions. Jay's father entered the hall and was happy to see that his long absence didn't make Bani feel alone as she had Jay's company. Jay's father showed him some files and asked to finish some task regarding them. As his father left, Jay went to his room and dropped himself on a chair. He closed his eyes and took some deep breaths. Bani who followed him was taken aback by Jay's action.

Bani: "kya hua Jay?"
Jay: "nothing sweetheart! These files…. Mera sar dukh raha hai."
Bani: "sar dukh raha hai?? Main abhi thik kar doon?"
Jay: "tum doctor ho?"
Bani: "haan par sirf tumhari."
Jay: "ok then show me your doctori."

Bani at first assured herself that Jay's eyes were still closed. Then she ran her fingers through his hairs, bent down to meet his face and then placed a soft kiss on his cheeks. Jay's eyes flew open. This was one of the rarest events for him. He looked sideways and saw Bani running away like a squirrel. Jay kept on calling "Bani" and she replied "bye Jay".

At 11pm Jay called Bani. She was feeling sleepy so without checking the name of the caller, she received the call.

Bani: "hello o o o"
Jay: "hello doctor!"
Bani(now wide awake): "yes dear patient? Sar dard gaya?"
Jay: "you cured me well but what to do of the side-effects?"
Bani: "side-effects? What side-effects?"
Jay: "woh kya hai na ke 'ab mujhe raat din tumhara hi khayal hai/ kya karu pyar mein deewano jaisa haal hai'."
Bani: "oh no what did I do? I turned the human into a frog?"
Jay: "frog?"
Bani: "oops sorry! Crazy frog!"
Jay: "crazy frog? Doctor you are so confusing."
Bani: "arre ye jo abhi abhi mendhak ki tarah gaana gaya, isliye keh rahi hoon."
Jay: "mendhak? Bani you are……."
Bani: "mind you Mr. Walia I am your doctor. Behave properly varna aisi dawai doongi ke yaad rakhoge."
Jay: "Jay Walia ko dhamki?"
Bani: "agar mujhe meri fees nahi mili toh dhamki sach bhi ho sakti hai."
Jay: "okay. Aapki fees kya hai?"
Bani: "zyada kuch nahi. Only a million dollar……"
Jay: "isse behtar to yeh hoga ke main aapko apki special medicine lauta doon. I mean…."
Bani(immediately): "I meant a million dollar smile."
Jay: "someone is ducking out."
Bani: "huh! You need another doctor. I don't want to treat mads."
Jay: "firstly it's mad not mads and secondly I want this doctor only. Because doctor I…… lo…"

Meanwhile Bani's mother entered her room and found her talking to somebody on phone instead of sleeping. She interrupted the conversation.

Kiran: "Bani kisse baat kar rahi ho? Ab so bhi jao."
Bani(eyes twinkling with mischief): "mummy jay ka phone hai. Aapko kuch kehna chahta tha."
Then quickly she said to Jay "lo Jay mummy se baat karo." and handed over the receiver to her mother.

Jay was in a mood to flirt and the sudden change in his audience made him fall into an uneasy situation.

Kiran: "haan Jay beta kaho kya baat hai?"
Jay: "I…. woh aunty I… lo… no aunty I good night. I mean I wanted to wish you a good night. Hope you sleep well and see the sweetest of dreams……. That's it."
Kiran: "that's so sweet of you beta. But what's the matter? I mean don't mind but why are you so concerned about my sleep?"
Jay: "kyunki sleeping is good for health."
Kiran: "yeh tum keh rahe ho? Maine didi se suna hai ke tum raat raat bhar jagke kaam karte ho. Beta tumhe bhi rest ki jarurat hai. Anyway good night. Ab main rakhu?"
Jay: "nahi, woh aunty Bani ko jara phone dijiye"

Bani's mother gave her the phone and indicated that Jay was still on line.

Bani(whispering): "mumma tell him, main so gayi hoon."
Kiran: "Bani stop troubling him and just talk to him."
With that Kiran left and Bani cleared her throat to show Jay that she was on line.

Jay(nearly shouting): "Bani tumhe mujhse koi dushmani hai?"
Bani: "haan. You are my JANI dushman."
Jay: "very funny. I was about to say I lo…"
Bani: "the subscriber whom you are trying to romance with has fallen asleep. Please try to call her at morning. Beep."

Bani disconnected the phone and Jay stared at his phone in disbelief. He closed his eyes to sleep but soon Bani's face appeared in front of him. He smiled and remembered all those wonderful 4 years with Bani and silently prayed to have her beside him always.
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Posted: 18 years ago
wonderful part so when are they gonna reveal to the world that they are seeing each other and are in love and want to get married i hope soon ........
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great part yaar 😆 ......loved the telephone banter between Jai & Bani......hope they would reveal their relationship to everyone soon.......please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was funny.. pls continue soon..
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks for reading......

Part32

Next day morning Ranveer brought a friend to Jay's office. He introduced his friend as Nachiket. Jay could not speak to him much due to his busy schedule so he invited Nachiket to the Walia Mansion for dinner. But by the time it drew to evening, Jay forgot about Nachiket. In general Jay was not so forgetful but a smile on Bani's face was sufficient to blur his memory. Long after Ranveer left with Nachiket, Bani called Jay. Their teasing and the doctor-patient banter continued for a while and then suddenly Jay asked her to join him at dinner. It was a usual thing for Jay or Bani to have sometimes their breakfast or dinner at the other one's house.

At dinner time

While Bani was busy arranging the table along with Jay's mother, Ranveer came along with Nachiket to Walia Mansion. At that time Jay remembered that he actually had a guest at dinner. He wondered how he was going to spend time with Bani rather than wondering how he was going to show his hospitality to his guest.

When everyone was gathered at the table, Ranveer introduced Nachiket to all of them. The dinner went on with all the discussions, gossips, etc. Bani found sometimes Jay stealing glances of her. On one such occassion their eyes met and Bani could read Jay's disappointment. To make him smile genuinely, she framed a plan. When Jay was busy chatting while eating, Bani either added some more rice to his plate or replaced his bowl of curry with an empty bowl or anything like that but cautiously. Jay was confused as 'what's happening?' but then he realised that it must be Bani's mischief. He looked at Bani only to find her eating away the salads from his plate. He caught hold of her hand on his plate when she was busy taking the cucumber slices. Bani mouthed him to leave his hand but Jay simply refused it. Least did he realise that there were family members present unaware of their relationship. Bani warned him through her eyes but Jay didn't care. So finally Bani screamed "aunty" which caught everyone's attention.. Jay was still holding her hand.

Bani: "aunty Jay ne aaj koi bhook zyada lagne ki dawai pi li hai kya? Dekhiye na apna plate to saaf kar liya, aur ab mera bhi karne ka irada hai."
Jay: "ma don't believe her. See woh mere plate se…….."
Bani: "main tumhare plate se kya?"
Jay(lowering his eyes): "kuch nahin."
Bani: "dekha aunty. Now jay leave my hand."

Jay left her hand and then kicked his leg beneath the table to hit Bani's feet. But someone else screamed out. It was Ranveer. He looked confused as he couldn't figure out what had happened. Jay's eyes got widened with Ranveer's scream as he missed his target. Bani grinned looking at Jay who showed his fist to Bani to warn that the game was not over.After everyone finished their meal, Ranveer asked Bani for a favour.

Ranveer: "Bani kya tum mere dost ki thodi help kardogi?"
Bani: "kaisi help?"
Nachiket: "sorry to interrupt Ranveer but let me explain it to missssssss Bani. Actually missssssss Bani I am looking for a relative of mine who works in the same organisation as yours. Our families have lost touch many years back but now there are certain reasons for which we are looking for them. By some source I came to know that my so called cousin works in your organisation but the problem is that I don't know even his name I mean I know only his pet name. So I will be grateful if you help me out to find him. I know I am giving troubles to you but as far as I have observed, the beautiful girl in you won't refuse."
Bani: "no no why should I refuse? It will be a pleasure to help you. So day after tomorrow we will meet at our office sharp at 9 o'clock."
Nachiket: "9 o'clock? That means I have to wake up early? Ok no probs. Afterall I will be having your company. Anyway can we meet for coffee tomorrow evening anywhere you prefer to go."

Bani lifted her eyes to seek Jay's opinion but he averted his gaze on her at that instant. Bani understood she was supposed to refuse.

Bani: "it would have been a pleasure but see tomorrow Masi is coming so I will spend my evening here only with Mmmm Masi."
Ranveer: "wow is she coming? After such a long time. Dadi bahut khush hogi. Well then Nachi tomorrow we will meet Masi here and you can have coffee with not only Bani but all of us."

Bani again looked at Jay who was about to leave. Another excuse time.

Bani: "ye kya baat hui Ranveer, kal Sunday hai, apne dost ko jara Mumbai city to dikhao. Kya pata baad mein time mile na mile."
Nachiket: "that's cool. So why don't you join us in the morning. Later on at evening we can meet Masi."
Ranveer: "good idea Bani and no excuses please. Tum humare saath chalogi. Full and final. It will be fun to spend time with you after such a long time. These 3 years in London were fun-filled definitely but I missed something here even."

Bani didn't have the heart to destroy their plan so she agreed. Jay showed as if he felt 'go on' but he was not liking Nachiket since he started to become so friendly with Bani from the first meeting itself. After Ranveer and Nachiket left, Bani went to the study. She was looking for a book but couldn't find it. Jay came from behind and held the book in front of her eyes. She exclaimed with joy and then took the book and without even speaking to Jay, sat on a chair to read it. Jay sat at the adjacent side of the table and to the right of Bani. He saw her engrossed in reading the book but a strand of hairs prevented him from watching her. He moved the hairs and saw a faint smile on Bani's face. But before the smile disappeared, the strand reappeared on her face. Again Jay moved them away and saw Bani blushing. He liked this view so he did it again and again everytime the strand returned to her face. He placed his arm on the table and rested his head on it to have a good view of Bani. She couldn't finish reading a single line and re-read the sme sentence again and again. Neither was she in a state to ask Jay to stop the teasing. At that moment Bani's mobile phone beeped. Jay took it from the table and saw that there was a message from Nachiket. So soon? He thought. He checked the message and it was all about love and friendship. Man this boy is too much. Then Jay checked that the inbox was filled with so many messages from Bani's colleagues, friends, Saahil, Rano, etc. etc. etc. means nearly everyone except him. He began to read the messages and most of them were heart-warming or funny. He then checked the outbox where he found her sending witty replies. There also his name was not there. He felt bad. He knew that he was not that sort of msg freak like today's youngsters but not to be in Bani's list in that group bothered him. At least she should send him some nice messages like that but then he realised that he was the one who had a big NO NO for them. Bani wondered what Jay was doing. She thought that it was good for her as he was not teasing but her thoughts even didn't let her read the book. So she took the book and left her seat. On seeing her leaving, Jay held her arm and stood up. Again the strand of hair prevented him from seeing her. He went close to her and gave her the mobile phone. Once again he was about to remove the strand when someone opened the door of the study. Jay turned on the other side and pretended to search somethimg on the table. As Jay's father moved towards them he was happy to see Bani with the book she asked for so many times. What he couldn't understand was Jay's behaviour.

Jagdish: "Jay what are you looking for?"
Jay(fumbling with words): "no…..thing dadd. I was looking for the…….. bookmark. Bani needed that. See I found it."
He gave the bookmark to Bani and gave a hesitant smile. Bani bid the father-son duo good night and while stepping out of the room, looked back at Jay and gave her killer smile for which Jay would die a thousand time.

Next day
Jay came to know that Ranveer, Bani and Nachiket were on a Mumbai city trip. Throughout the day his mind drifted from work to Bani and Nachiket. Sometimes he called Ranveer and sometimes Bani throughout the day. But he couldn't speak to them at a stretch anytime. One thing that was obvious by the noise and the tone of their voices was that they were having a blast, even his Bani without him. He couldn't concentrate on anything so he decided to create a message for Bani. From morning, it turned to afternoon and then to evening, he couldn't create one of Bani's kind and by that time even Masi reached Walia Mansion. So he spent the rest of the evening with Masi. He hoped Bani to come. She came a bit late. Jay was thankful to his stars for once in the day since Bani told that Nachiket and Ranveer were too tired to come there. While chatting with her beloved Masi, Bani noticed Jay bringing a packet.

Jay: "Masi dekhiye maine apne aquarium ke liye ye nayi fish kharidi hai. Sab kehte hai yeh bahut badmash hoti hai."
Masi: "hmmmm…. toh tu isey kyun laya?"
Jay: "bus yun hi, iski namesake se milane."
Masi: "namesake?"
Jay: "haan iska naam bhi B A N I hai."
Masi: "machli ka naam bhi kabhi Bani hota hai kya?"
Jay(winking and grinning): "aap khud hi dekhiye."

Meanwhile Bani made faces to show her anger.

Masi: "yeh kyun nahi kehta ke tujhe ye naam bahut pasand hai?"

Both Jay and Bani were shocked to hear that. They wondered whether Masi knew of their relationship or not. But their dilemma was soon gone on hearing the full story.

Masi: "tujhe yaad hai tune hi toh Bani ka naam rakha tha. Mera matlab hai iske namkaranwale din tune hi toh ye naam suggest kiya tha aur didi ko kaha tha ke tujhe ye naam bahut pasand hai?"
Bani: "Masi ye sach hai?"
Jay: "dekha Bani you owe me a lot but you are least bothered to repay even in installments. Tumhara naam toh….. chipkali(lizard) rakhna chahiye tha."
Bani: "Mr. Jay Walia, tab toh confusion ho jata."
Jay: "kaisa confusion?"
Bani: "mere college mein ek ladki thi jo hostel mein rehti thi aur jiske room mein ek ganda sa chipkali rehta tha. Toh maine usey ek naam suggest kiya tha us lizard ke liye. Batau kya? Jay naam rakha tha humne uska."

Masi broke into a fit of laughter. It took her few minutes to calm down. She hit Jay's head and then Bani's head saying that even children would fail in front of them when it comes to teasing each other. Later on Krishna joined them and after approving the namkaran fact she was also in all smiles on hearing the whole incident. Jay and Bani meanwhile had a session of staring with Bani's eyes saying 'Thanks for the name' and Jay's eyes answering back 'The pleasure is all mine.'
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi great part yaar 😃 .......liked the teasing part betwen JB a lot 👏 👏 ....please don't create any misunderstanding because of Nattu 😕 ........can't wait for the next installment from you soon.....hope you don't keep us waiting a long for that 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
awww how cute jealous jai and the namesake and he had named bani on her namkaran
pls cont soon.........

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