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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: wite_rainbow

GR8 Ending but mere arrival par hi end...(lets out a big LOOOOOONG sigh and loud tooo)
i loved the Nanda's entry...they sounded really cute for some reason...i dunno y but they did! 😳
i cant wait for monday sabs...am addicted to your writing...you cant QUIT not when i need you the most..when KS is going down the drain...oh man! 😭 😳
Romanceland ka ek first class ka ticket mera zaroor kato sabs!
haha reminds me of the song:
asan teh jaane bilo de ghar
kinne kinne jaane bilo dey ghar
ticket katao line lagao
TICKET KATAAAAO...LINE LAGAO
😆😆😆

thanks dear, am sooooooooooo glad MB of all the people liked my ff, main toh dar hi gayi thi.

arre yaar, i did not want to end it too, nor stretch it too much further also, am not ekta mayi and did not want to hash up the ff in the bargain, but like i mentioned in another post don't think it was early, they got back for good, it was pretty conclusive and just dragging the romance seemed pointless to me.

and after having watched Jai in yesterday's episode saying humara bachha to pia, i should credit myself for even wanting to go ahead with this ff. i was seriously contemplating on having Jai hunted down in the woods by the Nanda brothers, or eaten by bhaloos but did not want to leave bani stranded .......... as far as i am concerned JW of KS is history to me.

yes, the Nanda brothers did sound like a cute lot, i kind of added this part becoz i had my bro and 3 of his friends who used to look out for me like that when in college and when i first started dating my hubby, just felt like giving them a role in this ff, don't know why, but i did.

don't worry the other one i'm gonna start is pretty hilarious in a way, am sure u will like it........... afterall i can't think of letting MB down can I ..... i wanna live not die.

and madamji aapke liye complimentary first class ticket and life long frequent flyer membership on Sabsj airways too. it would be great to have u aboard.

i loved the song u mentioned ......... could just picture the video 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sabsj

thanks dear, am sooooooooooo glad MB of all the people liked my ff, main toh dar hi gayi thi.

arre yaar, i did not want to end it too, nor stretch it too much further also, am not ekta mayi and did not want to hash up the ff in the bargain, but like i mentioned in another post don't think it was early, they got back for good, it was pretty conclusive and just dragging the romance seemed pointless to me.

and after having watched Jai in yesterday's episode saying humara bachha to pia, i should credit myself for even wanting to go ahead with this ff. i was seriously contemplating on having Jai hunted down in the woods by the Nanda brothers, or eaten by bhaloos but did not want to leave bani stranded .......... as far as i am concerned JW of KS is history to me.

yes, the Nanda brothers did sound like a cute lot, i kind of added this part becoz i had my bro and 3 of his friends who used to look out for me like that when in college and when i first started dating my hubby, just felt like giving them a role in this ff, don't know why, but i did.

don't worry the other one i'm gonna start is pretty hilarious in a way, am sure u will like it........... afterall i can't think of letting MB down can I ..... i wanna live not die.

and madamji aapke liye complimentary first class ticket and life long frequent flyer membership on Sabsj airways too. it would be great to have u aboard.

i loved the song u mentioned ......... could just picture the video 😆


Oh sabs you r such a sweetheart!
itna charadiya hai mujhe...key even if i didnt like your ff id still read it but you are an amazing writer so there is no problems there...but kia butter factory hai fmaily mein?
man...that would have been funny nandas hunting down JW but funnier to see/imagine him being eaten by a bear...HAHA😆😆
i seriously cant wait for your new ff sabs...am sure its just as good if not better!
HAILA FIRST CLASS woh BHI COMPLEMENTARY...yeh toh owh baat hogayi...walkin into a desi theather 5 min b4 interval and getting to watch the movie for free...😆

yup i remember sunny deol dancing to this song...not a pretty pic but still hilarious!

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: wite_rainbow


Oh sabs you r such a sweetheart!
itna charadiya hai mujhe...key even if i didnt like your ff id still read it but you are an amazing writer so there is no problems there...but kia butter factory hai fmaily mein?

oy main maska nahin lagati, am strictly against that. i was just kidding with u. and please do not read my ff out of obligation yaar........ itna bhi bura nahin likhti hoon main.

theek hain aage so no sweet words for u, not even if i mean them 😆

man...that would have been funny nandas hunting down JW but funnier to see/imagine him being eaten by a bear...HAHA😆😆

u have no idea what violent ideas were going thru my head after watching yesterday's KS episode ........ if not for poo, jai walia was dead meat 😡

i seriously cant wait for your new ff sabs...am sure its just as good if not better!

i'll let u decide that, but again, only if u really wanna read it

HAILA FIRST CLASS woh BHI COMPLEMENTARY...yeh toh owh baat hogayi...walkin into a desi theather 5 min b4 interval and getting to watch the movie for free...😆

😆😆😆 u r a real joker, do u know that .......... i take my complimentary stuff back

yup i remember sunny deol dancing to this song...not a pretty pic but still hilarious!

😆😆 i agree

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Posted: 18 years ago

Haila MB n Sabs bonding without me??? Leaving me all alone??? ab mera kya hoga😭😭😭

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Posted: 18 years ago
you can use sweet words lekin itni volume mein haanikarak na hojaye mere liye( u know injurious for health)...😆 upar sey u can use them but not call ME sweet thats a big issue for me.
I only read your ff because shina said i would like it...and trust me yaar im not reading it out of obligation...if i did i wouldnt have been able to comment or say n e thing about it...im so blunt i would have blurted out something long time ago...it IS really good!
i was just saying ...i havent read your ff since u started and i read all in one go couple of days ago sooo I HAD to make an analogy (im soo good at those)...i want the complimentary ticket back...PLZZ??? ( u can call me sweet only ONCE if you give it back😳)
sunny deol dancing is a comedy itself!
Edited by wite_rainbow - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: lonely14

Haila MB n Sabs bonding without me??? Leaving me all alone??? ab mera kya hoga😭😭😭


tumhara kia hona hai...raat baaki baat baaki hona hai jo hojaaane do!
dont worry you will always be special to me...a song for you PINKY and my new friend sabs but more for PINKY cuz she feels jealous:
Come stop your crying, it will be all right
Just take my hand, hold it tight
I will protect you from all around you
I will be here dont you cry

For one so small,you seem so strong
My arms will hold you keep you safe and warm
This bond between us cant be broken
I will be here dont you cry

And youll be in my heart
Yes, youll be in my heart
From this day on
Now and forever more
Youll be in my heart
No matter what they say
Youll be here in my heart
Always
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: lonely14

Haila MB n Sabs bonding without me??? Leaving me all alone??? ab mera kya hoga😭😭😭

u traitor ........ so it was u who sent munnabhai (MB) after me ...... and u were pretending to be so innocent 😆 ......... u r such a goonda i tell u.

ab tera kya hoga ......... u sound like gabbar singh from sholay 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: wite_rainbow

tumhara kia hona hai...raat baaki baat baaki hona hai jo hojaaane do!
dont worry you will always be special to me...a song for you PINKY and my new friend sabs but more for PINKY cuz she feels jealous:
Come stop your crying, it will be all right
Just take my hand, hold it tight
I will protect you from all around you
I will be here dont you cry

For one so small,you seem so strong
My arms will hold you keep you safe and warm
This bond between us cant be broken
I will be here dont you cry

And youll be in my heart
Yes, youll be in my heart
From this day on
Now and forever more
Youll be in my heart
No matter what they say
Youll be here in my heart
Always

Awww MB, this is why we have that "special" relationship😉

Jealousy is evident, because both of you are special!!!!!😳

aur rahi baat raat ki toh, yaar tumhare liye har raat.....😉

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sabsj

u traitor ........ so it was u who sent munnabhai (MB) after me ...... and u were pretending to be so innocent 😆 ......... u r such a goonda i tell u.

ab tera kya hoga ......... u sound like gabbar singh from sholay 😆

Traitor??? Sabs it was done all out of LOVE!!!!!!!! and agar MB kisi ke saath ho, toh woh DON ko bhi hara de.

hahah gabbar singh??? man i loved gabbar, "Kitne aadmi the"😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sabsj

u traitor ........ so it was u who sent munnabhai (MB) after me ...... and u were pretending to be so innocent 😆 ......... u r such a goonda i tell u.

ab tera kya hoga ......... u sound like gabbar singh from sholay 😆


😆😆 kaalia bolna bhool gayi bechaari!
GABBAR WAS THE BEST!!
yup shina is the rogue goonda of IF...😆

Originally posted by: lonely14

Traitor??? Sabs it was done all out of LOVE!!!!!!!! and agar MB kisi ke saath ho, toh woh DON ko bhi hara de.

hahah gabbar singh??? man i loved gabbar, "Kitne aadmi the"😆


yup DON...khauff is my haathyaar...bechari sabs bhi darti hai😆
tabhi sweets ka overdose! lodkana chathi hai shayad?
gabbar n mugambo...amur raheingey dono!

Originally posted by: lonely14

Awww MB, this is why we have that "special" relationship😉

Jealousy is evident, because both of you are special!!!!!😳

aur rahi baat raat ki toh, yaar tumhare liye har raat.....😉


😳
yup the green monster in Pinky is sooo cute!
harr raat?...abey yaar raat din phir din raat!😆😆
Edited by wite_rainbow - 18 years ago

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