A Force to Reckon With-Pt3,Pg3 Updated!!! - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part-II

Jai and Bani still did not understand who could that intruder be. Was he here all the time? Was he watching them? How much did he know about the case? These things were running in both of their minds.

Jai and Bani worked well together. Jai and Bani were so different yet a past still connected them together. A past which neither want to remember but could not forget, a present which was weighing too much on both of them and a future that they did not want to face together but yet were again back together.

Jai and Bani parents were best of friends. Jai and Bani's fathers were business partners.

Jai Walia could have joined his father in the hospitality business if he wanted to. But Jai from a very young age was always interested in joining the police force and fighting crime. By the time he grew up he knew he wanted to be a police officer and hence he was today a successful ACP in his professional life but was alone in his personal life. A life he had chosen himself when he walked out on Bani on the day of their wedding.

Bani also came from a very influencial family. Her father was into event management business. But Bani was different since she was young. She had this unique power of ESP which only grew as the time went by.

She decided to use her power to fight crime and put criminals behind bars. She still could not forget the day when Jai walked out on the day of their marriage. She stood stunned in her bridal outfit only to be told that Jai had left her stranded.

The Dixit family had been humilated and for this Jai's father did not forgive him and it was the very reason that Jai and his father had not spoken to each other in the last 5 years. They lived under the same roof but like two strangers.

Bani decided to leave Mumbai and go to Delhi. There she joined the Delhi Crime Branch as a criminal profiler and started solving cases at a brisk pace. It was only time before she was known as the country's best profiler who was a no-nonesense police officer. Her mission in life was to put offenders and accused behind bars. And she left no stone unturned.

When her father started not keeping well, Bani asked for a transfer to Mumbai Crime Branch as she was given the transfer as she wanted to be close to her father and take care of her parents. Being the only daughter she knew it was her duty to take care of her parents.

But the transfer to Mumbai got with it the a torrent past as she once again stood infront of Jai Walia this time as her boss. Jai Walia was too numb to find out that Bani would be working with him.

Jai on many ocassion had tried to sort out the issues between them but Bani did not want to bring up the past. It was buried and with that her relationship with Jai was also history. Jai had asked her to call him Jai but she called him "Sir", and told Jai not to start a relationship which he killed before even giving it time to nurture.

She told him to be professional with her and that is the relationship they will share. She was clear about it. No matter what. For her Jai Walia died the day he left her to be humilated in her own wedding.

Jai had never forgiven himself for what he had put Bani through. But there was nothing he could do about the past. He was living in the present and future was not in his hands. Jai decided one of these days he had to clear the air with Bani come what may.

While the past came flooding in front of both their eyes. A phone ring on Jai's mobile brought both of them back to the living. It was Dr.Mehra he had finished the autospy on the victim and had his report ready.

Jai looked at the watch and saw it was 9am in the morning. Both Jai and Bani had not slept all night and knew would not be able to rest anytime soon.

Dr.Mehra's Lab,
Friday 9am,

Dr. Mehra had both some pleasant and some disturbing news. Actually mostly disturbing news. He had finished the autospy and it revealed some damaging news which will affect the outcome of the case in a big way.

Jai and Bani both walked into Dr.Mehra's cabin. He asked them to sit down. And ordered coffee for all of them.
Jai asked, "So what have u got for us?"
Dr.Mehra,"Well, I have completed my autopsy report and have found out that the victim died due to strangulation, further close examination has revealed marks around the neck. The bullet wound seemed like a after thought to confuse us. This is definitely murder not sucide."
This news startled both Jai and Bani.
Dr.Mehra continued,"We also found that the victim was pregnant three weeks and when I ran her fingerprints through our database I hit the jackpot. She has a criminal record. Her name is Rani Chanda, she was a bar dancer who had been arrested for prostitution and drug related cases."
This further stunned Jai and Bani.
Dr.Mehra continued, "Also, we found out that she had been raped before she was killled we are still checking to see if any marks or semen were found on the victim."
Jai and Bani were now looking at each other.
Dr.Mehra told them that they can take the report with them as soon as he is able to tell them more about the evidence regarding rape he will call them.
The coffee came and all three of them drank without saying much to each other.
Jai and Bani went back to their office and got Rani Chanda's house address and decide to investigate the matter themselves.
Rani Chanda lived in Dharavi Chawl.
As soon as they reached her home they saw that the door to her small house was ajar or open. Both Jai and Bani took out their guns and proceeded the house with caution. Jai entered first and then Bani.
As they further moved into the room somebody attacked at both of them from behind. Both Jai and Bani's gun went sprawling on the floor. But this time Bani moved fast and jabbed the intruder in the stomach. Jai came back and hit him with a punch on his face and kicked him in his groin. The intruder fell down crying out loud with a thud.
Jai and Bani both latched on to the intruder and Jai took out the mask and they were facing the watchman who they had spoken to last night.
Both were stunned.

Preview of Next Part-
Jai-Bani get a vital clue from the watchman.
Bani meets Jai's family after longtime at a family function.
Jai-Bani talk about their past for the first time.
Bani comes across the corpse of Reema Malik, the owner of the flat where the murder took place.
Do leave ur comments.
Pls let me know should I continue or stop.

Keep Smiling,

Happiness Always,
Manish



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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
Come on guys, someone at least tell me if u like this fanfic or should I discontinue?
At least just say yes or no?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Manish,

This is too good yaar!! I have got hooked to this too after Touched by Love!! You write pretty well...Cant get over the fact that JB are police officers.... 😆

BTW, Jigyaasa would suit Bani's cop role rather than our Prachi dixit....hehehehe...she would look so funny.... 😆 😆 😆
Please post the other part....I am soooooooo inquisitive!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

Hey Manish,

This is too good yaar!! I have got hooked to this too after Touched by Love!! You write pretty well...Cant get over the fact that JB are police officers.... 😆

BTW, Jigyaasa would suit Bani's cop role rather than our Prachi dixit....hehehehe...she would look so funny.... 😆 😆 😆
Please post the other part....I am soooooooo inquisitive!!


Thank u so much. Believe me Jiggs is coming in this ff too and u will love her role just keep on reading. She will surprise u. All I can say u have not seen Jiggs in a character like this before. I appreciate all ur kind words.

Happiness Always,
Manish
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Posted: 18 years ago
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g8 storyline. plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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VERY GOOD. a bit of CSI. i love detective stories. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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simply awesome
i luv csi
and ur ff reminds me of it
pls cont soon
eagerly awaiting for the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Manish,
this is sooo good... pls continue...I am chewing my nails waiting for the story to unfold...
👏 👏 👏


Tally!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank you all for your lovely and encouraging comments.

Part-III

Jai and Bani take the watchman by his collar and take him for further interrogation. The watchman is just sitting there he is reluctant and as much as Jai and Bani do not want to use a excessive force Jai and Bani do not see a choice so Jai takes out a gun and empties all his bullets.

Then he opens the chamber of the gun and puts one bullet and snaps it to close the chamber. Jai revolves the chamber of the gun and tells the watchman that he does not know where the bullet is and puts the gun on in between his eyes and starts playing Russian Roulette.

The watchman is stunned and scared he cannot believe what is happening to him. He decides he will still not tell them after all they cannot shoot him they are the police and he tells this to Jai and Jai smiles and tells him has be ever heard of the term called "Encounter" that is what is going to happen here.

That word alone sends shiver in watchman.

He knows this man can do anything. By the time this thought leaves his mind Jai has already pressed the trigger of the gun once and the suspect survives he repeats this twice more and still the watchman survives and with every click both Jai and Bani can see the watchman getting nervous and scared they can see the teror in his eyes. Three chances gone.

Three left Jai said the choice is yours - life or death. With this he presses the trigger once more and then the watchman is in tears now because now two chances are left- maybe he will survive now or die later whatever it is he decides to confess as it is not worth his life.

The watchman tells Jai-Bani the location of the Reema Malik the owner of the flat also he tells them what he saw that night. This further confirms Jai-Bani's fears that there is more to this murder than anything else.

They hold the watchman in prison till his story checks out. Meanwhile Jai Walia gives a piece of his mind to the officers who were suppose to keep an eye on the watchman and warned them that next time one slip and they will regret that they messed with Jai Walia' s direct order.

With that Jai left the office.

Later that day, Bani recieved a call on her mobile from her father asking her to attend a family function at the Walia House. Bani said that Jai's parents had asked her to come infact they will call her personally. Bani said she will go and asked her father to tell them not to call her.

She could not handle the awkwardness on the phone and now she would have to meet them face to face. She was not prepared for this but she had to do this once and for all.

Walia House,

That evening Bani walked in for the first time in the Walia House after 7 years and all the past flashes came back to her. She took a deep breath and flashed a smile to deal with the pain which was causing her just by being at the Walia House.

Somethings in life are hard to forget and this was one of them for Bani. The pain will never go and with time it had open old wounds for her once again instead of healing it forever.

Bani met Jai's parents and they were happy to see them. Even Jai was happy to see Bani come to family function. Bani was talking with Ranveer, Saahil and Anu.

Bani enquired about Jiggs and Aditya and as soon as she said both Jiggs and Aditya came from behind and then Bani hugged both of them. Aditya was a businessman and Jiggs was also from the law enforcement.

She was Jai Walia's boss- Joint Commissioner of Police- Jigaysa Kohli. She had not spoken to her brother in 7 years they only spoke professionally and that too when it was most required.

The family function was going on everyone was having a gala time. Bani was sitting by herself when Jai walked up to her and said that he wanted to talk to her about them.

As soon as Jai said those words Jai sensed a coldness and a sense of uncomfortableness from Bani but he caught her hands and asked her to listen to him. Both Jai and Bani spoke for sometime and a lot of air was cleared between them.

Bani forgave Jai and that lifted a tremendous guilt which had been chipping away slowly Jai's existence for such a long time.

Bani got a call and left without informing Jai and the next thing she discovered was the body of Reema Malik someone had dumped in the backseat of her car. She screamed and that is when all Jai and Jiggs and others came and what they saw also stunned them.

Someone had began to play games with them.

Preview for Next Part-
Jai-Bani land up in the middle of a robbery.
Jai-Bani foil the robbery but Bani gets hurt.
Jiggs asks Jai the progress of the murder case.
Jai-Bani find themselves coming close to each other once again.

Would love to know ur comments.

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish


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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow Jiggu's also part of the police force!!😲

Great part three!!👏

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