Ek Anjana Sa Rhista _Last Part pg178

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***srk***

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Posted: 18 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: divya_123

sweetu not only u i me myself i too love this fanfic haila kya chemistry hai btwn jai and bani really like this jai and bani😳

raania plzz ek aur part😳

abhi abhi abhi! plz plz plz ek aur update ki jaye! heheheheh

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coolwoman

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Posted: 18 years ago

#342

kya yaar, tune mudje addicted kardiya. fatastic.

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***srk***

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Posted: 18 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: coolwoman
kya yaar, tune mudje addicted kardiya. fatastic.

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mujhe bhi! bohot zyada!!!!!😆

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nikhat

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Posted: 18 years ago

#344

great bohot accha tha pls jalsi cont karo sabar nahi ho raha

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Miss_Diey

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Posted: 18 years ago

#345

Raaniaaaaaaaaaaaaaa please ek aur part 😊. Arre yaar please i'm so addicted with your ff, nd if you read the message i'm not the only one. So plz tum ff is very very very very fantastic.I can't wait the next part. Maybe Jai could make a surprise to Bani and Go to Paris 😆

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NaV

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Posted: 18 years ago

#346

EIGHT MONTHS!!!!!!!!!!! u made bani cry and jai sad.. 8 MONTHS!!!!!!!!!!!!! goddamn it thank god u added a cellphone warna mein aur mera joota and jhadooo would've been ready to beat u.. bach gayi.. awwwwwwwwwww she said i love you awwwwwwwwwwwwww.. haila.. that was so cute.. made me senti 👏

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lonely14

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Posted: 18 years ago

#347

awwwwwwwww that was soooooooooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!

love their love story.

pehle ikraar nahi kiya, aur jab karna chahte the, to waqt ne saat na diya.

come on write the next part soooooon. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee.

Shina

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sweetu144

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Posted: 18 years ago

#348

You were being serious weren't you

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Raania

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Posted: 18 years ago

#349

Nahi sweetu....u got there before me yaar....here it is..meh aur jhooth 😆 kabhi nahi...well kabhi kabhi only...

ab next part kaal yaar...my brain needs to process the future of my story and i have another in the pipeline..oh and this pipe is long so dont ask me 😆 😉

Part 24

The flight long and hectic….Bani got off and looked around for Raashi..who had come her a week ago…she couldn't go with her as Adi uncle had to arrange for accommodation and all…..all sorted 4 days later Bani had caught her flight…

The customs clearance took long and lookin for her passport while carrying her hand bag was so hard…uff yeh saab toh aur hai…making her way to get her luggage…Masi bhi na..jane kya kya band diya..she had 3 huge suitcases…thanks for the porter who was so helpful….

Raashi outside with her dad waving at her…..Bani running up to her..al the formal greetings done she got in …..she was going to live in a flat near the college with Raashi …..Raashi was here for a whole year studying for her hospitality program and Bani well her cookery ….she was going to be a professional chef….

Jai's calls had not come…..Bani would sit idle for hours checking to see if he cell was charged or if it was working…calling the house phone to see if it was working….uff call kiu nahi kiya…..boarding her flight she looked at her flight with a sad face……call nahi kiya…..she remembered and than took her cell out……

On her way watching the sceneries she took her phone out and turned it on..slowly her phone started to buzz…..34 missed calls…..8 voice mails….10 messages….uff lookin at her phone and Raashi…kaise padu..yeh toh chore gi nahi…..slipping it in her jacket….it was so cold here….Paris was cold…looking outside….Pairs known to be the city of love…she smiled..but I am already in love….jai was in Japan and soon to be in London…wonder mujhe milne ayege ya nahi she thought…magar aye toh meh kya kahugi…smling she looked down

RashI: aahi hamari bani bada has rahi hai..???
Bani: chup baad meh batati hu
Rashi: u beta nahi toh mardugi…making her hands as claws

Bani's cell buzzing….Jai was furious he could call her past 5 days as he was offshore on a site where the reception was pathetic…finally when it rang she didn't answer and it went to her voice mail…dammit Bani kaha ho…im dying to hear ur voice…..voicemail again….i have to tell her to personilse her voice mail is bahane uski awaaz toh sunuga….looking at the phone wantin to slam it but nope Bani only had this number with her……calling Masi he found out that she had already left for Paris…8 months…..he had another month before he went to London to complete all the other formalities….he will go see her that's for sure…….usne kaha bhi nahi…smiling he took a pic of her out…the pic he stole from the wall in hallway…….: smiling at her….must be mad at him for not telling her he thought…kambakt ishq joh hai….he smiled……heading to his hotel….

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Going inside Bani explained everything to Raashi……who was over the moon
Rashi: good mujhe bhi tujse kuch kehna hai…
Bani; kya
Rashi: meh na…..mera woh boyfriend …woh
Bani's cell rang again: its him…running towards her room…
Not waiting picking the phone in a hurried manner: hello
Jai relaxing on his sofa ….God it was so freaking good to hear her voice…: he was so mad at her but listening to her voice…all anger gone…..

Jai :Bani hoarsly he said…where were you…I have been trying all day

Bani; smiling…meh …woh…flight meh thi…it was a long flight…

Jai: oh no wonder, tumne mujhe kaha nahi ke tum Paris…
Bani: aapne call nahi kiya???? Shyly
Jai: tumne miss kiya…..
Bani; colouring all up….nahi..
Jai: nahi kiya
Bani: nahi ….kiya..smile in her voice
Jai: toh miss kiya???
Bani: haa …. kiya……
Jai: Bani I….and than changing the topic
Jai: smiling busy tha…tumne apne trip ka kuch kaha nahi
Bani: apne bhi woh 6 months..

Rashi making faces at her…trip ki kya yaa kuch love shove kaho stupid…Bani making a face back

Jai: kya hua
Bani: hesitating woh Raashi…kuch nahi…
Jai: smiling…oh woh..how is she…Ranveer aur usme saab theek toh hai

Bani; Ranveer..what looking at Rashi..and than …hmmmm pointing her finger at Rashi…Rashi running away…

Bani lying down on the bed…
JaI: so rahi ho….Bani instantly getting up
Jai: areh uth kiu gayi….
Ban; aap ne…kaise
Jai; I can feel u BAni…..every breath u take…every move u make….

Bani her heart racing..how can a man sound so sexy over the phone…..her shyness down the road …eyes closed she lay down…….

Jai: I miss you bani…dil kehta chal unse mil..ute hai kadam ruk jate hai….

bAnI smiling: ai na..kisne roka hai aapko….

Jai: meh samne au toh kya tum aise baateh karogi..???
Bani laughing : shayad..she was tired and her laugh was so husky…

Jai: ur doing all the funny things to me Bani???…

Bani lost …huh>?????

Jai: kuch nahi…..time par sab samjaduga!!! Smiling his wicked smile….

Jai: so did u take ur yello sari to Paris???
Bani: nahi….aap toh hoge nahi…
Jai: tumne meri yaadein nahi li…??

Bani teasing him now : nahi….opening her bag and taking the two saris and sleeping on it…..: it smells of you she thought…the pink was covered in his cologne….

Jai: im so tired Bani
Bani: kiu kya hua??? Bhouth hi hard work thi???
Jai; no..i havnt slept in two days
Bani: kiu??
Jai: mujhe yaha jald hi kaam kar ke thumare paas ana hai

Bani blushing profusely……: take ur time..meh kahi janewali nahi……she was finally talking without hesitating……Jai could tell…but would she be like that infront of him…

Jai: nahi I have to see u…I want to tell u something..i want to hear something……bhouth hi bateh karni hai aur…

Bani: almost sleeping: aur???
Jai; bani…
Bani: hmmm
Jai: neend arahi hia…oh God yeah ..india ke to do baje subha hogai hai???
Bani: hmmm…..
Jai: meh au???
Bani really tired…: hmmm…i.m waiting….she was almost dreaming was she talking to Jai>>??
Jai: don't tempt me Bani…..meh kal subha ki flight lekar ajauga???
Bani: smiling……hmmmm mujhe neend arahi hai…..they had been on the phone for an hour now…
Jai: mujhe bhi…magar my bed is empty Bani…and cold….can I cradle in ur arms ??? again???

Bani full awake his words like caffine in her system…keeping her up….: mujhe jana hai

Jai smiled he knew what effects his words had on her….: bani I…
Bani her heart racing…hmmmm…

Jai: Bani I …

Bani: waiting …hmm

Jai: I Miss you smiling ….gdnight…

Bani mad yet smiling…: I …shy again…I miss you too….nite nite..!!

Click ……

.Bani held onto her cell..ohhh I wanna see u so bad…she thought…rolling on her bed… …dreaming…..she could feel Jai around…his very essence…his breath….him…..all over the atmosphere…..

Mardala…mardala!!! She sang to herself….uff

ohhh she turned…this was torture…ek bhi din nahi guzartah……months kaise guzre ge….

The phone rang….Bani without lookin picking it up…: oh I miss you so much before she completed she heard Rano's and Masi's voice on the other side……

rAno: ha di we miss you too giggling….aap puch gayi????

Bani getting up ….setting herself straight……: ha meh theek hu

Hot from embarrassement Masi's laughter still buzzing around her head…Bani got up to shower and than head of to bed…..Rashi ko toh subha dhek lugi..Ranveer hmmm!!!!

She smiled : oh I miss you Jai…..kash meh tumhe kehpati kitna….

Mardala ….mardala she sang…laughing…..shhhhsh Bani soja!!! Scolding herself…gosh its true in love u can do anything …..

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Paris was beautiful…especially the evening…dekte dekte 3 weeks were gone…everynight Bani would wait for his call …sometimes he would call and sometimes she would fall asleep looking at the phone…and sometimes he would call her in the middle of the night to talk to her…..both would get mad at each other but once they heard the others voice…all pent up anger would be gone…..

Bani missed her tram home and she waited at the station…..next to the station across was a huge empire suite hotels….it was exquisite and she thought that next weekend Monday she had no classes maybe her and Raashi could go there for lunch or dinner or something….as she was thinking she saw what looked like Jai on the phone getting out of the hotel..clad in all black….sun glasses and fulling trying a number on his cell….

Bani tried looking harder….usne nahi kaha that he will be here soon…Bani started shouting..: jai…??? Jai??? But she was so high that the voice wouldn't travel…..Jai got in the limo……people looking at her like she was some lunatic……

Bani u are seeing things…jai kaise hosakta hai…magar hobhi sakta hai she thought…sitting down again…..waiting for her tram….: im sure wahi tha……she had forgotten her cell at home too….uff call bhi nahi kar sakti…for a min she was so happy……what if wahi tha???

hope u guys enjoy it 😳

Edited by Raania - 18 years ago

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sweetu144

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Posted: 18 years ago

#350

Reserving my spot before anyone gets it 😉 😳
😃😃 maar dala....maar dala...bani ko nahi mujhe😆😆
loved this part...let me tell you my sweet friend staying up and waiting for it was worth it...maar dala😳
Loved the way they spoke to one another over the phone...hmmm nice and intense...filled with passion!
Can i steal your secret😉😆.
I love the way you write ( ok so whats new...you already know this..but i can't stop saying it)😳.
your are going to make me wait 24 hours till i find out if it actually was Jai?
oh cruel torture.
hmm...love the voices...
I really love this Bnai and Jai...yaar their chemsitry is so real😳...so intense so alive.
You truly do have a words...maar dala😉
Will be waiting most impatiently for the update...hope you'll continue soon😆😆.
Luv
Sweetu
P.S. Aur yeh kya...so your were telling a lie😕...no but you...i am so confused😕
BTW So when can Sweetu here expect to see your new ff?😳...the new "pipeline" as you put it?

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