Ek Anjana Sa Rhista _Last Part pg178

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ProudMom

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Posted: 18 years ago

#261

Again amazing fanfic.Bravo excellent job 👏 👏.Plz coninue soon 😉

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NaV

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Posted: 18 years ago

#262

ye im waitin too.. plz updte soon.. im waitin (i'll update mine its almost done.. sorry fo d delay .. forgive me.. day's been hectic.. ) so ye when u updating.. can't believe u finished ur other ff 😭

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Mamta Singh

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Posted: 18 years ago

#263

i am also waiting rani but i have request please don't end this fan fiction i am already 😭 this week because two wonderful ff got end one by you and the other one by sam
i want to see their engagement, wedding, and then a post wedding
plz write soon i will update my ff also today

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Posted: 18 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: ziddi
i am also waiting rani but i have request please don't end this fan fiction i am already 😭 this week because two wonderful ff got end one by you and the other one by sam
i want to see their engagement, wedding, and then a post wedding
plz write soon i will update my ff also today

i agree.. since u endd 2 ff's.. means u ahve only 1 ff.. either start posting on this continuously or start another ff.. and DON'T end this one so soon

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Vanita

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Posted: 18 years ago

#265

i 2nd that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳

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sweetu144

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Posted: 18 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli
i 2nd that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳

😳 I 3rd...😳
Please...waiting most impatiently for the update😳

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Raania

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Posted: 18 years ago

#267

oiii what u guys doing aaaah 😆 😆 😆
mein tumlog ko shorugi nahi 😈 .....

attached find the last part for this one..... 😭

Everyone in the family were busy preparing for birthday boys birthday party…Jai had to go out of town on Thursday for a business deal and was to be bck Friday afternoon for his birthday party...

The whole house was beautifully lit …but this time the arrangements were a bit different…..the outside was done in lights but the inside were done in flowers…..Bani had suggested the idea and Masi was yeah something different would be nice….Jigyasa wsnt really into it but even herself got into the preparation of things…..

Bani however ensured that even little thing was done to the perfection….it was some 3pm when she came to see the arrangement of the flowers on their stairs……uff yeh log kuch theek se nahi karte…Rano ….rano….getting a table and than putting a small stool on it …she climbed up on it…..the railings on top had the flower done wrongly…..leaning up she undid the previous pattern and was redoing it when she needed scissors….oh ho

Bani: Rano….Rano….
Rano: ayi didi…..

Jai at that moment had walked into the house….he was amazed at the decoration…it was like walking into a flower garden only it was more done in a spacious way and it smelt heavenly…..lavender jashmine and rose smell all over……..as he entered the main living room moving to to to his room he hear Bani scream…..looking up tip toeing not to make her aware he spotted her on the stool trying to fix the arrangements herself……..

Rano coming in before she met Jai……: hi and Jai quietened her…; shhhhhhhhhssshhhhhhh sending her away…tip toeing towards Bani……..

Bani hearing the hi from Rano not looking: Rano mujhe waha par kaichi hai…pass karona….jaldi kar…mera haath dukh raha hai…

Jai taking the scissors and handing it to her suppressing a smile…..

Bani: handing the access flower and giving it to her…and than demanding the string: who dhaga dena…orange wala

Jai handed her the yellow one…..

BAni: taking it and than making a face….ooof ho…budhu yeh wala nahi….orrrrrrrrrannnnge……..

Jai laughing now but quietly…handing her the orange…Bani taking that and handing the scissors to him…..

Jai was mermerised by her…..in her mini kameez …yello one …she looked cute…dupatta tied to her waist and tip toeing on the stool her back to him……hair done in a single braid at the back on the creamy brown skin exposed near the zipper on top……she looked ravishing….

Bani: hmmmmm dusting her hands…..good ..hogeya….yeh log bhi na…shot cut meh kaam karte hai…..

Jai: very innocently …kuch aur chahiye…smiling up at her

Bani turning in a abrupt unbalancing herself falling…trying to steady but too late……:ooo oooo ooops….falling right into his arms….Jai smiling ….

Jai: wow birthday ka start itne khoobsurat tarika se…thank you….
Bani: looking up at him her hands not wanting to but around his neck steading herself…..ohhhh….happy birthday…I mean sorry….i mean woh.....

Jai : laughing

Masi came out…..bani turning to a scarlet red

Masi: areh munna tu kaab aya…..going to jai

Jai turning….lets just say at the right time masi….kya hamare ghar meh naukro ki kami hai joh Bani kaam kar rahi hai???

Masi: meh kya kehti beta…meri baath sunti hi nahi hai…sara sajawat meh bAni ki haath hai…..meh keh keh kar thakgai……but yeh…..masi meh yeh karugi…woh karugi…unko yeh pasand ayega…woh pasand ayega……laughing at her…Bani chot toh nahi lagi

Bani still in Jai's arms pleading to be left down…..: nahi masi woh…looking at Jai

Masi : acha theek hai….aab tu jaa aur zara aaram karle….phir taiyar bhi hona hai……leaving them smiling….

Jai: chale…aaram karna…a glint of mischief in his eyes….

Bani bechari ekdum embarrassed kahi bhag bhi nahi sakti thi as Jai started to go up the stairs……

Dadi coming down the stairs: areh Jai putar bani ko kya hua

Bani looking for a reason when Jai replied…: dheko na dadi meh is pagal ladki ko batakar thakgeya hu…ghar meh itna naukar hai aur yeh khud char kar stool par kaam kar rahi thi…mimicking masi….Bani her eyes big looking at him….kya ???? she thought……jai continued ..aur phir gir gai…per meh zara si mauch hai magar nothing major….toh maine kaha kamre aaram karle…akhir sham ko party hai na…..

Dadi: areh mere Shah Rukh Khan holding his cheeks…: janamdin mubarak ho….and than to Bani..; areh putar zara kheyal kar….theek toh kehraha hai

Bani looking incredulously at Jai……thinking meh tumhe maardugi…uffff…but saying nothing and looking helpless as a mischievous smiling Jai led her to her room…..

Putting her the sofa in her room…bani opeing her dupattta from the side and putting it on looking really embarrassed….mad …..stupid……at Jai….

Jai: hmmmm its 4pm and since tumne kabhi sari nahi pheni u will need time…now be good girl and make me happy…sari meh…winking at her……bani toh khalas …..faint ho jati magar kya kare she had to just stand there listening to him…..

Jai with that closed the rooms door and Bani was like…..: aaahhhh I cant believe it…did he just do that…….

Going to have her bath and thinking…she filled the tub with water …all this time thinking and getting in she just couldn't figure out khadoos chatha kya hai???.....and than blushing at how he had held her in his arms…..he didn't even feel tired…was I so light….smiling…how he held her…..and sliding futher in the bath tub……

It was around 5.30 when Masi was looking for Bani….6.30pm was the cake cutting ceremony aur yeh lakdi ki pata nahi

Bani standing infront of her huge dresser mirror…..in her petty coat and blouse….the blouse a tad bit revealing her back…it was sleeveless and darn the dori…..watching the sari…kaise karte hai……looking at the end folds…..uff meh kya karu

Masi: knock knock….Bani beta…jaldi karo……Bani …coming in the room……

Bani on the verge of tears looking at Masi: kaise karte hai…mujhe kuch nahi ata sitting on the bed…..Masi laughing….hmmm sari …aur meri Bani

BAni: smiling and looking down…woh use kaha ke this is the gift he wants from me….in a sari..meh kaise mana karti….

Masi: in a ironic tone..ha ha tum kaise mana karti…koi baath nahi ke hamare kehne par…yah phir RAno aur Pia ke kehne par tumne nahi pheni…magar "unke" stressing on it while picking the end ….unke kehne par pheno gi

Bani: Masi app bhi…

Masi : chal meh dhikati hu…..badi hu sundar sari hai….munna ne diya…bAni smiling and shaking her head……

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Jai was greeting all his family and friends talking to them chatting away…but his eyes were looking for one thing…her..she wasn't anywhere around…it was 6.20pm already and the function was to start in another 10 minutes…his was dying to see her in that sari……itni besabri toh shayad Jai ko kabhi hui hi nahi…this feeling of love is just so crazy……all this mysterious emotions bubbling up inside him……

Dressed in a Indian suit…..pants matching blazer on top….all black with pink shiny diamonds near the neckline…looking extremely gorgeous….his age not doing justice to his appearance……

Masi smiling….aaah ab dek….turning Bani infront of the mirror….the pins tucked all in the right places….as Bani turned she couldn't believe it…masi taking a kajal from her eyes….putting it behind bAni's ears…: kisi ki nazar na lage meri bachi ko…..aacha me jati hu…tum bhi aaja

Clad in the pink sari…..the pallu all done to the top…….hair all done in loose curls around her face…….and a single bindiya hangin on the middle of her head….matching earrings and necklace that filled the empty space around the neck…looking exquisitive……..putting on her bangles and finishing up her lipstick when Rano entered…

RAno: Di woh meh….tyring to hook her necklace….clad in a beautiful deep purple kameez…..sleeveless and hair all loosly curled on top of her head tyed by a nice diamond entwined wire kind of clip…….makeup done to perfection…Rano actually looked gorgeous……Di oh my god…u look so beautiful…….wait…yeh aap hi ho……let me breathe…….going to bAni

Bani taking he necklace and putting it on…: areh Rano tu in Hindustani kapre meh kitni khoobsurat lagrahi ho….tumhe suit karta hai….but wait …going to her closet and taking out matching hills….aaj woh chapli nahi..yeh…..putting in on her feet

Both sisters looked gorgeous....Rano: PIa hoti toh acha hota nah Di looking sad…..Pia had left for Delhi for 6 months as a exchange program student…she was studying fashion….

Masi just than entered the room telling them to come down……

Jai busy with his mates and friends suddenly noticed how the crowd shshed or uueedddd and aaaaaheeed……and the song that the DJ played seemed to have the feeling Jai had in his heart turning to see what the commotion was the song playing

Tu ishq mera hai chaahat hai meri
Tu paas mere hai kismat hai meri
Bheege tere labon se yeh narmiyaan chura loon
Saanson ko teri choo ke yeh garmiyaan chura loon
Yeh yeh yeh, yeh yeh yeh

Tu pyaar mera hai chaahat hai meri
Tu paas mere hai kismat hai meri
Bheege mere labon se yeh narmiyaan chura le
Saansein ko meri choo ke yeh garmiyaan chura le
Yeh yeh yeh, yeh yeh yeh

Tera yeh badan hai ke sheesha hai koyi
Tere gesuon mein hai khushboo ki royi

Mujhe apni baahon mein
Ghere milein hain re
Mushkil hai jaan-e-man rehna akele, rehna akele

Kaise bataoon kya haalat hai meri
Tu ishq hai mera chaahat hai meri
Bheege tere labon se yeh narmiyaan chura loon
Saanson ko teri choo ke yeh garmiyaan chura loon
Yeh yeh yeh, yeh yeh yeh

Bhikre hain gaalon pe shabnam ke daane
Inhe choom lene de, kar na bahaane

Bhar ke panahon mein
Tujhe pyaar doongi
Teri beqeraari ko main qeraar doongi
Main qeraar doongi

Sanam tujhpe marne ki aadat hai meri
Tu ishq mera hai chaahat hai meri
Bheege tere labon se yeh narmiyaan chura loon
Saanson ko teri choo ke yeh garmiyaan chura loon
Yeh yeh yeh, yeh yeh yeh

Tu pyaar mera hai chaahat hai meri
Tu paas mere hai kismat hai meri

Bheege tere labon se yeh narmiyaan chura loon
Saanson ko teri choo ke yeh garmiyaan chura loon
Yeh yeh yeh, yeh yeh yeh

Bani a shy figure walking down with a very confident Rano on her side and Masi infront….

Jai's buddy: hey yeh kaun hai??? Wow….some were shouting…oh that's Mr Walia's dream girl the one from the paper…..and the others were "look at those beauties…" Bani was about tu turn and run back but Masi helf firmly in her hand…: achi lagti ho beta….chalo….

Jai's gaze not shifting from where she was and going close to the crowd BAni stood still not looking up..she knew the fixed gaze looking at her…..the party in motion when Sahil announced the cake cutting

Masi taking Rano Sahil…RAnveer…Anu and BAni even Jigyasa Aditya and Dadi…. to the table next to Jai….the way they ended up standing was Bani next to Jai…..he cut the cake feeding Masi Ranveer and the lot coming to Bani…

BAni: trying to ignore when Masi insisted……cameras clicking flashing away…the whole Mumbai knew headlines for tomrw…..afterall who was this mysteria girl in Jai Walia's life…..?????Bechari shy BAni standing there

Party in full swing…..Anu announcing…..ladies and gentlemen on this really special occasion….a surprise for all of u…admist us is a very talented singer not known to the world…..she is a dear family girl of our house ….Anu looking towards Bani….Bani looking at her and smiling when it daunted on her that she was talking about her…….BAni wanting to go out of the room but Masi told her to stay yet again poor BAni stood there….

Jai smiling at her…this was the other request of his…Rano and Masi had complimented on her sweet voice so many times that he just had to listen…..

Aun continuing…please welcome my friend and sister : Miss Bani Dixit……everyones eyes on her……the timid shy Bani the centre of attraction….Rano encouraging her…gao na Didi…please…masi: ha beta jao…..Jai looking at her and than saying…its my birthday……the whole crowd cheering for her

Bani stage par toh chaligai…par churu kaise kare…hoding the mike hands sweating throat dry…looking at Rano…: kya gau??

Rano: Di college wala…running to the DJ and telling them the song so that they can play the music….from : rehna hai tere dil mein …Bani had got the best singer award at the young talent contest 2 years back in chandigar…..

Bani: closing her eyes…..aahemmmmm clearing her neck…..music looking nervously at the DJ and when he gave the thumbs up the lights dim and only focus on Bani…..she began

Zara zara bahekta hai, mahekta hai
Aaj to mera tan badan, main pyaasi hoon
Mujhe bhar le apni baahon mein) - 2
Hai meri kasam tujhko sanam, door kahin na jaa
Yeh doori kehti hai paas mere aaja re
Yunhi baras baras kaali ghata barse
Hum yaar bheeg jaaye is chaahat ki baarish mein
Meri khuli khuli laton ko suljhaaye
Tu apni ungliyon se main to hoon isi khwaahish mein
Sardi ki raaton mein hum soye rahe ek chaadar mein
Hum dono tanha ho, na koi bhi rahe is ghar mein
Zara zara bahekta hai, mahekta hai
Aaj to mera tan badan, main pyaasi hoon
Mujhe bhar le apni baahon mein
Aaja re aa re
Tadpaaye mujhe teri sabhi baatein
Ek baar ae deewane jhootha hi sahi pyaar to kar
Main bhooli nahin haseen mulaaqaatein
Bechain karke mujhko mujhse yun na pher nazar
Roothega na mujhse, mere saathiya yeh vaada kar
Tere bina mushkil hai jeena mera mere dil mein
(Zara zara bahekta hai, mahekta hai
Aaj to mera tan badan, main pyaasi hoon
Mujhe bhar le apni baahon mein
Hai meri kasam tujhko sanam, door kahin na jaa
Yeh doori kehti hai paas mere aaja re
Aaja re, aaja re, aaja re

The whole time Jai's right at the stage place looking at Bani…feeling the song touching his soul……she is singing for me….looking at her…taken away by her simplicity and innocence…she looked so beautiful today that he didn't want anyone else looking at her….it was a pure bliss sight……such soothing to the eyes…..

As Bani finished everyone was so silent and the whole crowd roared…..cheering….beautiful…bravo……Jai going forward leaning down and kissing her left cheek…he jsut couldnt help it.....in her ears…thank you ..that means so much..nobody has done something so special for me……taking the mike…holding her shoulders acknowledging everyones clapping….photos clicking away

Bani toh khalas…she forgot how she sang or what the crowd were cheering …he mind was on his lips on her cheeks..she was burning …BAni cheeks a shade of deep red looking down….her sari pallu's coner in her hand twisting it showing how nerves she was….

Jai assuring her by his hands but little did he know the interaction made Bani more aware of him and the whole crowd…..

Slowly the focus shifted from her…people commenting to her as she talked …slowly BAni excused herself and made her way to get some cool air outside…as she stepped outside jai caught her leaving following her……as BAni sat on the garden bench….breathing…..phew….hey Ram yeh kya hogeya….

Jai: approaching her and than sitting next other…..Bani suddenly aware standing up…oh aap ho….
Jai; koi shak??? eyebrows raised////
Bani: nahi meh woh…dar gai thi
Jai: Bani standing up and holding her shoulders…Bani looking each side and than him….closing her eyes and than breathing….oh God….looking at him....kiu itna darti ho mujse Bani.....

Jai: smiling…bhouth hi khoobsurat lagrahi ho…Bani bending her head down shy……thanks ….shyly
Jai: and thank you….for wearing the sari …the song and …
Bani: looking up again….and confused
Jai; and this…….leaning forward kissed her ever so gently on her lips….a bare touch but kissing her…..
Jai: happy birthday to me…

Bani couldn't believe it pushing him she ran but not lucky enough to be met by masi: are beta kya hua…..
Bani: kuch nahi masi

Masi dragging her back to the party…..bechari Bani…..halat hi kharab thi…a sudden feeling of happiness syness everything burning in her….

Jai stood there looking at the stars…..saluting it and than smiling…: I have found her…..in time she is going to be mine…making his way in…..

As the people startd dancing….Jai with Anu than Jigs…Masi and than RAno….finally grabbing Bani ….perfect timing pe perfect song playing

koi aaisa alam banke aayi ho
jaane kis duniya ki tum parchayi ho
bhooli bisri yaadein saath main layi ho
chayi ho chayi ho humpe chahi ho
koi aaisa alam banke aayi ho
koi haqeeqat ho ya koi saaye ho
bhooli bisri yaadein banke aaye ho
chahye ho chaye ho humpe chaye ho

Main hu wahi wahi hai sama
pehle na thi yeh shokhiya
mehki hui hai teri dhadkanein
teri chahaton main ho gaye hum aaj gum
koi aaisa alam banke aayi ho
jaane kis duniya ki tum parchayi ho
bhooli bisri yaadein saath main layi ho
chayi ho chayi ho humpe chayi ho

Kaise sahenge tere pyaar ki judaai
kaise kahenge tu hai eharjai
(dekhe koi meri bebasi
ab aag si lage jo gayi) - 2
koi aaisa alam banke aaye ho
koi haqeeqat ho ya koi saaye ho
bhooli bisri yaadein saath main layi ho
chaye ho chaye ho humpe chaye ho
chayi ho chayi ho humpe chayi ho
chayi ho humpe chayi ho

Bani was mesmerized by his touch..his hold …the lyrics of the songs….everything…looking at his chest…dancing…..Jai looking down at her and smiling…..in his heart his saying …." I love you" keh do na….ke tumhe bhi pyar hai….bringing Bani more close and dancing…..

Masi smiling at how happy her munna was even….even Jigs had to admit her brother was happy…….beaming in her smile

chaye ho chaye ho humpe chaye ho
chayi ho chayi ho humpe chayi ho
chayi ho humpe chayi ho

😆 gotcha sorry...i meant hte last part for the weekend....hehehehe will continue on monday...lolz i can already see Tinks bashing me...navs with a smirk on her face running after me and Mamta Sweetu Jaanu and all my fanfic lovers making sad faces...lolz 😆 sorry yaar 😉 mazaaaaaaak kar rahi thi...ya wala has a long way to go 😆

hope u guys liked the weekend treat...the new one oh i have started but wont post till i atleast finish like 10 parts so that when the demand flows i have it all ready.... 😉

Edited by Raania - 18 years ago

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Mamta Singh

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Posted: 18 years ago

#268

Nice joke
I will join Tinks, and come and bash you with my bhelan and jhoota 😡if you talk about ending this ff😆
This my favorite ff
I almost had a heart attack, because i was fearing that my thought was coming true that you were going to end the ff, like you did the other two, and when i saw the post i was like😭

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Halia that was so romantic, cute, sweet, wonderful
Jai carrying her upstairs to the bedroom, making a excuse😆
Bani wearing a sari just for jai on his request and singing mindblowing😳
Bani's first kiss😳
Don't end this ff until Jai and Bani have a two kids😃
Please write soon😛

Edited by ziddi - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago

#269

oh God...i was ready to start bawling...i thought u really ended it 😭 😭

but man...that was AWESOME...mindblowing...finally he kissed her 😳 😳

amazing part hun 😛