FF about j n b updated pg 56

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jigna_07

@jigna_07

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Posted: 18 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: pakiza_srk

trip was good jigz and i miised u all! very very very much!😊 the trip was very interestibng but quite tiring too but since my teacher who looks like SRK a lot was with us! i was glad and very happy! heheheh just joking!😆

haha if any of my teachers loked like Srk mein to chipak jati uske ke saath!😉😆

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shafaq

@$h@£aq...

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Posted: 18 years ago

#32

awwwwwwwwwww....paku tht was a grrr88888 part...!!! i am sooo gladd...tht jai madee her feel tht she has the right over jai's money and stuff...!!!
thtss grr88
do contiueeeee soon...
will be waitingg eagerlii...!! to knoww wht happeness next ...!!!!!!!!
thnkxxxx hunii !!
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Aakriti Mehta

@lil_desi_goddes

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Posted: 18 years ago

#33

WOW! di.. fantastic story soo far.. just read the 4 parts!!

plz do continue!!

and how was ur trip.. was missing u heaps! di.....

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Vanita

@*Guli*

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 18 years ago

#34

dude i love this!!!

yay 2 FF from u!!!!

I am in heaven!!!!!

woohoo!!!!!

dude please cont soon!!!!!

warna... belan's coming out!! 😉

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devananjali

@devananjali

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Posted: 18 years ago

#35

Nice FF.. Actually I wanted to write such a FF.. NoPR and only love.... Nice... write the remaining parts very soon...

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Manish Kumar

@mk727272

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#36

Hey Pakiza,
Loved ur this part!!!
It was just so good!!!
Loved the way Jai tells Bani that she is his wife and love the way he compliments her!!!! 😉 😉
Pls continue sooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!
Kudos to u!!!!
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Keep smiling,

Happiness Always,
Manish

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***srk***

@***srk***

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Posted: 18 years ago

#37

hey guys,
thanx for ur lovely comments! they make my day! now i have to go to the physio and im writing this part for my special friend shafaq who gave me loads of ideas to continue this FF! so here it is!

Bani was the first to leave downstairs after jai's kiss on her cheeks! she directly made her way downstairs blushing like a mad! what happend to mr walia, she thought! why is he behaving as he was really her "husband"? with these questions running in her mind, she went to where masi was standing talking with a servant about the decorations!
masi: haan haan tum jao then turning to bani! haan to bani beta, munna kahaan hai? kab se bula rahi hoon! mehmaan aa rahe hain, jaa ker tum aur munna unko sambhalo!
bani was just standing there thinking about the kiss that jai gave her on her cheek (hehehehe sirf ek ke saath yeh haal hai! 😆 😆 😆 )
masi seeing this says: bani beta! baniiiii! kya hua? r u ok?
bani coming back to reality: ji ji! main theek hoon! woh mr walia bas aate hi honge!
she says this and here our hero jai comes and stand behind bani but she cannot see him yet!
masi: betaaaaa, kitni baar bola hai ke munna ko uske naam se ya kuch aur bola kar!
bani now all red : masiiii! main kese bol sakti hoon!
masi arrey kyun? munna thodi kuch kahe ga! kyun munna?
bani now sees jai who come closer to her and puts his hand on her waist and says: ofcourse masi! mujhe kya problem ho sakti hai! bani u can call me jai whenever u want! he then smiles and says: chalein? 😊

Edited by pakiza_srk - 18 years ago

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***srk***

@***srk***

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Posted: 18 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: devananjali
Nice FF.. Actually I wanted to write such a FF.. NoPR and only love.... Nice... write the remaining parts very soon...

hmmmm thats good! u know u shuld write one! i always wanted to see a FF with jai bani loving each other before 19th june and all! so if u write one i will be the first big fan of ur FF!😉