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Posted: 18 years ago
#61


just trying something guys dnt mind[/IMG]
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62
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i think m gona die trying
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63


i did it 👏
oops i was trying to put pic using image hosting

yeh i git it
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
he is in da next chapter will update soon
have my assinmnts due nxt week but will try to do it soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
Chap 12 jai's entrance

All through the nite the caterers, the hall and all the wedding arrangements were done
The next morning it was time for engagement arrangements after college, the girls headed to Rashi's house for helping with the preparations.
It was evening and time for the ladke wale to come.Ranveer came in a black ith brown coloured sherwani and a long red toka on his forehead.Jigyasa was also dressed ina n expensive sari with matching jewellary on.

Bani was dressed in a beautiful dark blue choli suit, she was looking like angel .Pia was also wearing a choli suit but in pink shade.
Only a few business clients of the 2 families and close relatives and friends were invited.
Aditya took the mike and thanked everyone for coming and announced that Ranveer and Rashi will exchange rings.

RAnveer-"papa abhi tak Jai aya nahi hai,vo ata hi hoga"

Aditya-"thik hai" to everyone-"ladies and gentlmen ,the ring will be xchanged later ,till then enjoy the snacks and the drinks"

Jigyasa tld aditya to call and see where Jai was,aditya called .
Aditya-"jai carpark main hi hai,he's coming"


Jigs-"thanks god,. Ranveer rasam shuru karo, here take tis ring"

Ranvijay and aunty had forgotten the ring in Rashi's room.
Aunty-"Bani beta ,Pia ,I forgot the ring in Rashi's room, could u get it"
Bani and Pia nod and go upstairs ,her room was far in corner .

Pia-"tum jao ,main Pushkar ko phone karti hu"

Saying that she goes to the balcony.


Just then downstairs in the hall, jai enters, dressed in a grey suit goes towards Ranveer and Rashi and says sorry to them for being little late and goes to jigs aunty to do the same.


Aunty was worrying y the girls still handt got the ring and asked Rashi to go and check.
Jigs stopped her
Jig-"samdanji,rashi ko q bhej rahi hai,Jai tum jaoo"
Jai-"ji aunty where are they?"
Aunty tells him where the room was.


Pia was still in the balcony trying to call pushkar bt the signal wouldn't go.
Bani was alone in the room searching for the ring finally she finds it, she rushes outside but something on the floor makes her trip and she falls .she closes her eyes and waits for herself to jit the ground.after a while she realizes that she ddnt hit the ground she opens 1 eye to chk iy she hadn't , she finds a face staring at her .She opens both her eyes and finds herself in the arms if the same guy who she had seen in the mall.she keeps staring at him, though a few seconds but it looked like ages to Bani.

Jai-"excuse me, miss.. are you ok?im looking for pia and bani have you seen them"
Bani-"huh??? Ohh yaa m ok"im bani"

Still in his arms.Jai ddnt let her go as he was also looking at an angel of a face.

Jai-"everyone is looking for the ring!,do u have it ?"

Coming back to the presents she pulls herself together and looks at the floor , it had slipped her hand when she was falling .
Jai's eyes also turn to where Bani was looking and they both bend down to pick it, thier hands touched each other and Bani felt an electricity flow thru her


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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
wow! that was gr8!! my my jai walia.. true romantic!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
sori if his entrance wasnt great bt i know i wanted bani straight in Jai;s arms.......
😳 😳

hope you like it
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68

ohhhh forgot to give character preview (decribe )
jai
best frnd of RAnveer
business partner of Ranveer
Rich man
Lives in Walia MAnsion with MAsi and Dadi
very romantic and flirty prson 😳

a twist 😃 😃 😃

ROSHNI alsp carzy for JAi


any suggestins for me???i =min for how you want jai to be
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
u r really awesome.loved it.continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70

Chapter 13

Jai's eyes also turn to where Bani was looking and they both bend down to pick it, their hands touched each other and Bani felt an electricity flow thru her. Jai also felt something but didn't know what but quietly picked up the ring.

Jai – "chalen bani"
Bani – "Ji"
Bani quietly followed Jai along side him forgetting about Pia. Jai tried to start a conversation but didn't know how to start. Jai was a big time hunk and he knew it and used it to his advantage. But in this case he was a bit reluctant but he did start anyhow.


Jai – "Miss Bani, right?" (trying to make sure she is not married)
Bani (smiles)– "Ji,you don't see mangalsutra on my neck, do you?
Jai kept on looking at the girl beside him. Couldn't get his eyes away from her for long. Bani caught him staring at her.

Jai (to himself)- "Why isn't she asking about me?"
Bani(thinking)- "Ise iska naam kaise punchu? Yeh bhi meri taraaf dekh raha hai. Maybe he also wants to talk but can't find the topic."
Bani – " Aap Raashi ki taraaf se aaye hai ya Ranveer ke taraaf se?"
Jai (relief finally) – " Mein Ranveer ki taraaf se hu, I'm his best friend and business partner."
Bani- "oh, to aap hi hain Mr…….."
Jai(flirtingly) – "Jai Walia, but you can call me Jai"

They had reached the hall and Bani gave Raashi the ring. Jai stood beside her. Ranveer and Raashi exchanged the wedding rings and everyone applauded. Bani was just going to excuse herself to see where Pia was.

Bani- " Mr………."
Before she could complete her sentence, a lady, in her middleage, appeared behind them .

Lady –" MUNNA! MUNNA!"
Jai and Bani turned to see who it was.
Jai – " Masi?"
Bani thinking to herself –"Munna is ka naam Munna hai"
Bani wanted to laugh out loud but somehow she managed to controlled her laughter.
Jai saw Bani and was embarrassed.

Jai thinking to himself –" Yeh Masi bhi na, itna aacha impression jamaya tha aur masi ne aakar sare kiye karai pe paani fer diya."

Still smiling to herself Bani excuses herself and goes to look for Pia.

Jai – " Aapko aane mein itni der kyu ho gaayi?"
Masi – " Vo Munna, raaste mein gaadi nakre karne lagi thi, mera matlab ki vo rukh rukh kar chal rahi thi."
Jai – " Aur Dadi?"
Masi – "tum Dadi ko to Jante ho na, Uski kuch friends nai use Hazaroo Kwaisein asisi picture ki tickets de di to woh unk esaath chali gaye"

Til then everyone were congratualating Roshni and Ranveer,

Jai-"Masi , main abhi aata hu"
Masi-"ok , beta "
Jai goes to Aditya uncle and tells him to put on some romantic music. Aditya tells Sahil his younger son to turn off the light and put on some romantic music. The bright lights went off and it was turned to a romantic environmentby some dim lights. it felt as if the room was lit with candle light.
Everyone got to the middle of the hall. Everyone dancing the ballroom dance (nt sure what its called), and Jai, his eyes was searching for someone but couldn't find her.

Jai to himself-"I just met this girl and m searching for her? Me Jai Walia !!!wel a liitle dance wont hurt.hehehehehe"


Bani went up to the terrace and found Pia waving to someone.
Bani-" tum abhi tak yahi ho? , aur kise wave kar rahi ho?"
Pia-"umm i was waiting for Pushkar , lets go his here now"

They make their way towards the hall, as they were closer to hall, they saw that only dim lights were on and a favorite song of Bani's was going on..

The entrance was brightly lit so, Pia saw Pushkar enter.Pia made her way towards Pushkar and they went of to dance.

Rashi's parents also saw him enter but Rashi had told her parents about Pushkar and Pia, so her parents weren't surprised to see Pushkar and pia dancing.

Bani was alone in the corner watching all the cuples dance , she was humming the song also …..TU HI MERI SHAB HAI JAHAN HAI TU HI MERI DUNIYAAA….

But yes her eyes were searching for none other than our MUNNA>>




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