FF - Har Dil Jo Pyaar Karega end pg 62

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Hi guyz! I'm back with another fan fic! It's slightly different!

Jai Walia – a 29 year old business man ( he will turn 30 in two weeks….his age is important!). Even after his death, Jai's father tries to control him through his will (will describe that in more detail later!).

Jigyaasa Walia – Jai's older sister. She's 45 years old. She loves her brother's money but hates her brother. She's a divorcee with three kids.

Ranveer Walia– Jigyaasa's oldest son! 26 years old! He got his uncle's looks and mom's anger! But don't worry….he's a good guy…just has a high temper!

Sahil Walia– Jigyaasa's second son! He goes to college…he's 21 years old.

Anu Walia– Jigyaasa's daughter and the angel of the household…everyone loves her because she's the only girl!

I want to explain now that even though Jigyaasa's the older one (the much older one!) Jai's left with the money and business for valid reasons….you know how Jigyaasa can be!

Bani Dixit – 24 years old! Looking for a job…a house…a life! Anything to get her away from her evil stepmother!

Pia Dixit – Bani's younger sister! 22 years old! (guys she's completely different from the on screen character!) Pia is an animal lover! She works in an animal shelter for minimum pay!

Rano Dixit – a bookworm! 20 years old! Loves her sisters to death! A little outspoken…she's the only one who can stand up to their stepmother.

Palkhi Dixit – the evil stepmother…enough said!

(Guys….Nishikant…in a moment of stupidity remarried and died…left his money(not that he has much) and his house to his new wife. )

plz leave comments and suggestions! I'll post the first part up soon!

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hmmm interesitn ff lookin forward to it Srav 😊
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Hey Srav, looking forward to this FF. 😃
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eagerly waiting for u to post it yaar!! 😃 👏
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oooo...im looking forward to it...cant wait... 😃 👏
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aww will be lukin forwardd to it..!!
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hmmmmmmmmmm...sounds very interesting! pls continue soon! 😃
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kewl!!! sounds really interestin HUN! omg cant wait to read it!!!!!! UPDATEEEE!!!! lolz 😆

lolz! jigs is 45! HAHAHAH! lolz! lmao 😆

cant wait

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hehe jigs is 45.... 😆 😆

can't wait to read part 1... sounds interesting... evil step mother 😉 😆 😆
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this was actually inspired by a romance novel i read 😳 😉 so the end of part 1 is a little abrupt...but i'll explain why later!

Part 1


Jai Walia was drunk! Not a little…..he was completely stoned drunk! He came to on a tree….didn't know what he was doing up there or when he got there. He just knew that when he woke up….he was sitting on a tree branch in the middle of nowhere! 😆

*****

Jai Walia literally fell into Bani's life from the sky. Bani was walking along holding her bag of groceries. She cursed her stepmother as she tugged the bag after her. She heard twigs snapping and looked up to see a man falling…..and falling….and falling…right at her feet! She gasped!

Bani: Omg….sir…are you okay?

No answer. She nudged the man with her foot. She was thinking: umm…I hope he's not dead…don't want to deal with the cops right now! 😆

She put her bag down and knelt down next to the gentleman. She slowly turned him over so she could see his face….and gasped! Perfect! That was the only word that could describe him. 😳

She leaned down and nudged him again: suniyee….

Jai groaned. Thank God! He was alive.

Bani, a little unsure: aap theek hai?!

Jai groaned: owww…

Bani thought: I guess not!

Jai slowly opened his eyes and glared at her: shoooeee….my ankle..

Bani raised an eyebrow and looked at his foot. She quickly moved down and lifted his foot up and tugged at his boots. They didn't budge.

Jai: owww…

Bani: sorrryy…umm…your shoes aren't coming off…I think your ankle's swollen.

She opened her bag and took her pocket knife. 😆

Jai's eyes opened wide: you're a pick pocket!

Bani frowned: don't be silly! I'm going to cut your shoe open….your ankle's swollen.

Jai frowned: are you out of your mind?! I don't trushhtt(he's drunk 😆 ) you with that knife!

Bani raised an eyebrow: you got any better options?!

Jai glared at her and Bani carefully began to cut open his expensive shoes. She slowly removed his foot out of the remaining part of the shoe….and he groaned.

Jai: owww…

Bani flinched: I'm sorry…it must hurt really bad! Can you stand up?

Jai groaned: I'll try!

Bani stood up and slowly helped Jai stand up on his feet (or foot). He leaned heavily on Bani…

Bani: umm…aap kaha rehte hai?

Jai grinned drunkenly: I'm not telling you…you're gonna shtalk me… 😆

Bani sighed exasperated: I'm not going to shtalk or stalk you…you need to get home!

Jai: heyy…what's your name?

Bani surprised: Bani…Bani Dixit. Aapka naam?

Jai: Jai Walia.

Bani froze and let go of him so suddenly that he fell to the ground. 😆

Jai: owwww..

Bani: You're Jai Walia? THE Jai Walia?

Jai scratched his head. He kept looking at her. She was exactly what he needed. Smart and pretty….looks like she admired him too!

Jai, in his drunken state, lying on the ground with his arms and legs spread out asked Bani a question that shocked the living daylights out of her: shayyyy…will you marry me? 😲

And he promptly passed out!




i know....the marriage proposal was sooooo out of the blue....but heyy...what do u expect?! he was drunk 😆



Explanation for Jai Walia's crazy proposal:

Jai's father wrote in his will that for Jai to inherit the business and property completely, he had to get married before his 30th birhtday - in two weeks! Hence, the marriage proposal!

Jai runs the business and owns it right now...but if he doesn't legally get married in two weeks....the property and business goes to Jigyaasa (Jai's dad is such a joker.....even he doesn't trust his daughter 😆 ) I hope that explains it.

Plz leave comments 😛

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