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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks guys

Part 2

Raj was having a difficult time concentrating….the only thing on this mind these days was Jaanvi..he didn't know who she was and where she came from but he wanted her…and bad….if Raj wanted something he had to have it…..he made a mental note to work on this later on today…..
Meantime…Jai had returned from his trip to Delhi and was concentrating hard on this new venture he had on hand…..this was a important deal from him as he almost lost it to the Chopra Industries….their major business and family rival…..Roshni Chopra was old but still there……she had a daughter now who ever since college days has wanted to have Jai….like mother like daughter…..But Jai knew it very well and besides she wasn't his type…Today he had his first meeting with the bosses son of Khanna Co Ltd………..Rajvir Khanna…..he was known to be a business tycoon down north (I don't know India so bear with me guys…I mean Delhi here)….and somewhat Jai felt he wil like this guy…
Rajvir entered the Walia Group of Industries main hotel where all the offices were located….he was taken away by the exquisite environment and instantly knew he was going to love working here….He was here with his marketing analyst and his operations person…yes that's right Simran…
Both dashing heroes meet:
Raj: Mr Walia it's a pleasure…
Jai: oh no the pleasure is all mine…
Raj: meet our marketing analyst Mr Dido and our …where is Simran…..as a late Simran hurried in with her laptop ….
Simran: sorry sir I missed the lift….
Raj: smiling he knew Simran very well..Mr Walia our lady in action Simran Bhatiya…
Jai instantly noticed her and assed her from top to bottom….anaysing every curve every angle…..Raj and Mr Dido made their forward and Simran giving Jai a stop it look moved too…
Simran: if u have finished inspecting shall we????...putting her hand forward
Jai: gripping himself…oh yes sure….please
The meeting was a success…the project was to start from next Monday and Jai was to liase with Simran in getting all done…Raj was going to be situated in his Mumbai office hence Jai and Raj were going to be working hand in hand…..
Both guys had an instant liking to each other as most of their characteristics were similar…Raj being 3 years older than Jai….
Simran however was irrated to work with Jai she just didn't like the way he looked at her and that srutinising look…ewww!!!!! But she loved her job and was good at it so she won't let her personal reasons affect work…
Jai had t his magnetic attraction to Simran…he wasn't able to take his mind away from her…no woman ever really affected him this much and those that did had a liking to him and once he had them…he forgot about them….but there was something about Simran that he couldn't let go….hmmmm he thought….better be careful Mr Walia…nahi toh tu geya kaam se….
Jai: Mr Khanna
Raj: please call me Raj…acha lagta hai yaar
Jai: smiling ..great..Raj …on behalf of getting this new deal our company will be hosting a dinner party at my house….a little bit fancy…it was my dads tradition and I love doing it…so I would like to invite you and ur employees with the project to come….and your family members ofcoz….this Friday at 7pm
Raj; oh wow..that is great….certainly….we will be there….smiling both men leave for their separate ways…
Raj: oh Simran….could u stay here and wrap up the presentation and I will see u at the office.
Simran: yeah I guess I have too..she murmured and than she smiled at Jai..obviously the kind where u are too sweet yet meanful…..
Jai ignored her….that pissed Simran off more….
Simran: what an arrogant…selfless …self essentric….
Jai: u say something???

Simran: why would i…where can I wrap this presentation up…I need a internet connection
Jai: u can use my office as the others are all full for now…and the conference room is booked for the whole week
Simran entered the masters room…as it was the most elegant antique room she had ever seen…Raj's taste was more of environment and nature…where as Jai's was more of the zoo kind….as if he takes his prisoners in his cage and keeps them there….Sim was cold all of a sudden…
Jai: u alirght…
Sim: oh yeah..im fine..thank you
Sim did her work while Jai sat on the sofa and pretended to read one of the reports….
Jai: mere papa ka office tha…after him and maa dissappered in an accident I didn't feel like changing it…if ur wondering about that…
Sim: all red thinking….how did he know….ohhh this guy sees too much in me…
Sim thought to herself….kuch log kitne lucky hote hai..herself loosing her mum at an early age and than having to deal with a step mum….a step sister who never got along with her…and a busy dad who didn't have time for her….she was always alone ..she didn't know what it was like to be loved…if it wasn't for her nana she didn't know what she would do…coming to the present…
Jai noticed how Simran was lost for a while and than after some thought she kicked herself to reality and got herself busy into work again……he got back to his aswell….

What little did Jai and Simran know that destiny had other plans for them
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Hope you guys like it.... 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Great going....Looking forward to see the story developed. Am missing Jai and Bani a little though....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow hun.........a sequel was a great idea!👏👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwww... bless

love ur wrk chick!!

cant wait to read more

Henna x
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Posted: 19 years ago
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oooooh.. wow!! love ur ff!! its awesome!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part hun
pls cont soon
take care
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8 going. Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😳 thank you all

Part 3

Part 3
Jai dropped Jaanvi into college and on her way to class she bumped into Aakash…

Aakash: good morning

Jaan: mrng..coldly she replied

Aakash: going to class

Jaan: nahi dance karne…college kiu ate hai

Aakash: wow…kay hamesha tum itne stubborn rheti ho??? Whats ur problem girl???

Before jaan could finish..Aanya spotted them and made her way….

Aanya: hey Jaanu wait..looking at Aakash she got all shy and said…gdmrng Aakash…

Aakash: oh hi Aanya…dancing karne jarahi ho??/

A lost Aanya said…huh???

Aakash: laughing…laterz girls….mujeh toh dancing jana hai…

Aanya: what was al that about..???

Jaan; kuch nahi….chalo class aur phir aaj mall jana hai…janti ho nah…ghar par phir party hai this weekend….bhaia bhi nah….i don't have anything to wear…??and tum arahi ho nah….mujhe akele nahi rehna boring si party meh….

Aanya: gleed…oh yes…she loved parties…papa toh aarahe hai toh ofcoz meh augi!

At the mall:
Aakash had met with Raj to go gets some new outfits aswell as they were also going to this Walia party and they wanted something trendy…Aakash toh tha hi but he knew that his brother will be in his business attire again…so he need something nice…

Jaanvi made her way out of the fitting room in a elegant black dress that Aanya picked out for her…..more like sexy

Raj from across the mens department spotted her and made his way to the babies department where he had a much clearer view…

Jaan: Aana kya tumne yeh dheka hai…sabhi jaga se khula hai

Aanya: relax yaar it looks nice on you….sexy lagrahi ho…smiling and winking

Jaan: oh shut up…mujhe nahi koi dhulah khojna waha pe…
With that she went in and came out in another torqoise dress…beautiful..but not to Jaanvi's taste…

Just than a sales person took a pretty pink mini dress to Jaanvi….and gave it to her…it had a card….the card red

….."for a beautiful princess a beautiful dress"…
………………………………………………….an admirer!!

Jaan didn't know what to do…she read it and started looking around…than she asked the sales person

Jaan; kisne diya???.....

Sales Person: woh waha khare hai….both of them looked to find him gone….

Jaan: unho neh khud pay kiya….

Sales P: yes he paid for it and wrote this card….

Jaan: oh??...taking the parcel…could I please see the copy of the transaction receipt in ur books so that I can have his name to thank him…

The sales lady was more delighted thinking that Jaanvi would actually thank this gentlemen…infact she thought is to be really sweet of him….upon seeing the copy of the receipt she saw the name Rajvir Khaana…but it had no address….Jaan was mad and furious…how dare he..

Aanya: common yaar…kitna pretty dress hai….just like princess rhaklena…jaab milega toh thank you khedena….heheheh

Jaanvi was going to find out hook or crook who this Rajvir afterall was!!!
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Night of the party:
Every business delegates of the Mumbai sher were there…from the shipping to the marketing…amonst them were Raj his brother Aakash….Aaanya and her dad Mohan Khandewal….Simran and Mr Dido….and ofcoz Jashiv Walia…the man himself…the party was shandar as usual with the whole house lighting up…nobody could say that Jai Walia was no moer as he was there very much in the form of his son ……exactly like his father in every aspect…….

Jaan was upstairs on the balcony trying to finish this report which was due next Monday…she knew that if she didn't start today she would never get it done…plus it was a good excuse to ignore h stupid party……after History wsnt her favourite thing but being a requisite she had to take it…..for her course.

Aanya looking for her came upto her room….Jaanu ??? JJJJjjjjjjjaaaaaaanuuu???

Masi: areh beta kisi dhoond rahi ho

Aanya: hi dadi…meh Jaanu ko dhoond rahi hu…

Masi: aareh beta hogi apne kamre meh…

Aanya: nahi hai….meh dek juki hu

Masi: than u know her…apne favourite jagha par hogi…the balcony on top…..

Aanya made her way to the balcony…it was a beautiful Friday evening in Mumbai...rather a bit windy….Jaanvi had her hair open and was wearing a simple body fitting kameez…yellow…simple yet very pretty…"what yaar itna shadar party hai aur tum yaha par…..lets go common…wear ur petty pink dress!"

One look from Jaan and Aanya knew she had to shut up….

Aanya: fine be like that…meh toh jarahi hu…..kitne
handsome hunks hai yaar….aur sunna hai Aakash bhi hoga??

Jaanvi ignoring that got busy with her laptop again….seconds later a copy of her handouts from class flew to the bottom…..and she was in the back area where all the cars were being parked…..oh shit…rushing away she went to get it…after all that page had the main layout for her project….

Aakash saw Aanya and came up to her to say hi…..Raj realizing that he forgot the present he brought for Masi (as he came to the Walia house for he first time…he had got something for the elerly lady in the house as a token of respect…) all he knew was Jai had his Dadi and his sister with him at the house and the rest of the family had settled in London and were looking after the business at that end……………he wanted to call out to Aakash to go get it when he realized he was gone…so he made his way to the car…….

Jaanvi was running …no shoes on and hair all over the place……"kaha geya"…yahi toh tha…kaha dhudu…just than she saw it on the roofs of one of the sports cars near the gates…."aareh"…"aab meh kya karu"….Raj was inside taking his present out and didn't see someone climbing at the back of his car……Janvi climbed from the back of the truck on the top to get it …it was rather windy and a bit chilly….she got the piece of paper and was climbing down when she almost slipped on the side of the car and fell into Raj's arm…he had just than closed the passengers side of the door to find something on his roof and than falling….

Jaanvi quickly closed her eyes shut…very tightly…

Raj was amused…."hmm I see we meet again"

Jaanvi opened her eyes to find herself looking at the most beautiful pair of blue eyes..deep blue like the sea……she felt as if she could drown in those eyes if she kept looking

Jaanvi: tum…aur yaha…tum yaha kya kar rahe ho

Raj still holding her….yahi sawall madam ji meh aapse bhi kar sakta hu

Jaavi realizing her position…woh mera…..history…assignment….hawa….getting irriated and mad….can u put me down please…..

Raj ignored her last comment taking in her beauty beautiful lips…..such silk hair….and that fragrance…of lavender….he inhaled…nice….."oh assignment..meri gari ko"…

Jaanvi getting very uncormfotable coz she could feel him holding her and was getting very conscious of herself………can u put me down…mera ek page ur kar yaha peh agaya tha toh meh use lene ai thi….she was almost squeaking….please…she was not used to saying please…

Raj: ek sharth par

Jaanvi: meh koi sharth warth mane wali nahi…just put me down

Raj; im quite comfortable actually so if u don't want to agree I could stay here like this

JAanvi now a bit worried what if bhaia aggaye ya toh security….acha theek hai kya hai…irritated she said

Raj; u will join me for lunch tomrw

Jaani: pagal ho kya…no way

Raj: okay than

Jaanvi not having any choice….ummm okay fine…but only lunch….

Raj: good girl and putting her down..u cant deny it otherwise meh is mulakat ko galat bhi bata sakta hu…thumare gharwalo ko….

Jaanvi now down…haha theek hai..kaha anna hai…

Raj: I will pick u up from her at 10am….

Jaanvi: nahi yaha nahi …I will meet u at the coffee shop opp our college…

Raj: 10am sharp!!...Jaanvi making a face ran towards
the back entrance…..

Raj: hmmm Walia ghar meh yeh kya kar rahi hai…shayad
kisi employee ki daughter hai..ya toh neighbour..if not she would have been at the party…..with that Raj returned to the party…

There was something in this girl that made him do things he never would do…….
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG LUUUUUVVVVED IT PLZ PLZ CON SOOON 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part
can't wait to find out his reaction
when he learns that jaanu is jai's sister 😆 😆
poor guy
pls cont soon
take care

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