FF: AGAINST ALL ODDS - COMPLETE - Page 37

We stayed in the Peninsula. We went to the touristy places like Great Wall, Temple of Heaven etc. My roomate decided to fast the whole day and she pigged out at dinner in one of those fancy places so I spent that night watching her throw up half digested pork. 🤢 NOT appetizing for a vegetarian.

I have a complaint you though. Your hubby just took you out on a romantic weekend and you have your siggy saying: "I Love You is an 8 letter phrase, But then again so is Bull Shit..." :) Yeh kya hai yaar?

So now Jai and Bani will move back to Mumbai and live happily ever after with a number of Junior Jais and Junior Banis running around! 😆

Originally posted by: sabsj

u two, go get a room somewhere 😆

someone sounds jealous?!?!?!?! 😆😆😆

seriously though, excellent fanfic hun, thanks for the dedication, made me feel all warm and fuzzy!! 😳 the perfect ending, if only ekta would read and take some inspiration!!!!

like ziddi i too am waiting for your next one now, dont keep us hanging too long! 🤗

Originally posted by: sabsj

hey maria, where have u been my dear, was missing the banter that we used to have going bet us.

seriously dear, i did not fool u, i did intend to write a sad fanfic, but just ended up having a change of heart over the weekend. it's not easy ok to change ur storyline just like that, only ekta can do it and mess it up in the bargain, but due to public demand, i turned it around............ afterall jai & bani forever right 😛

now read the end and get some more butterflies .......... that is exactly my intention 😉

take care....sabsj

Dearest Sabsj

Last part already up (finished so soon?? Anyhow what has to be ended, has to be ended 😭 ), but before reading it want to answer you!

Why are you already missing me? We had indeed quite a banter about your previous epi., and now I replied to this one too, or? What more can I do? You want me to make two replies per episode??😆😉 Anyhow, I replied bit late this time as I was not so well and I owe you a pm! (but of course it feels very good to be missed 😳😛 )

You know, it's just so nice to get into these small discussions with you, it's because of how you reply....leaving me with the wish to again answer and others obviously too.

It's nice to know, that we, your readers, have changed your storyline. If Ekta would be so caring... It was such a great surprise!

So J & B forever, will read your last part now, to see how you make this come true! (Butterflies? Looking forward to get them!)

Love, M.

Before reading last part reread previous, as I love that one so much (so sensual). Forgot to mention till now, how beautiful their dialogue is, the pained love, the intense wish to reunite. Really very beautiful,Sabsj!

That was the perfect ending!! 👏 👏 👏
I love fairytale endings where everyone is happy and together!
Gave me a real warm fuzzy feeling inside!!


Luv Taz

Great fairytale ending 👏
Sabsj dear, u have a way with fairytales, i see, and i just love them.
Thanks a lor for thsi lovely ff.

main yaha hoo...sabsj jaaaaan tum kahaaaaa ho!!!!yaar i am dying to read the next partt...nd plz dun't get jealous of me and cordiala jeeeee 😆 😆 😉

aur haa..mai aapsey gussa hoo..apney pooja jee...cordeila jee aur puttarani jee ko apa last part dedicate kiya laikin mujhey nahi!!! 😭 😭 😭 ...chalo yah toh sahi bhi hai..kyunki aap mujhey kuch manti hi nahi 😭

Ohhh, sooo beautiful, Sabsj!

A most happy end!

Many, many wild intimate nights awaiting them..... 😳 😳
And kids, who will put a bit of a slow down to these nights, in their infant-years 😆

How you roll out their dialogues, so real, so vivid, so beautiful, meaningful. Written with great style and skill.

Poem in the end, again beautiful and meaningful.Rounding of the story, perfecting it.

Like Sangita said: again a fairytale (but much less innocent this time 😳 😆)

Are you happy you changed the initial story into this happy and romantic end?

Thanx a lot Sabsj! 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: putturani

Hey Sabsj!

Thank you so much for updating! The last part was awesome! 👏 👏 The feeling was put forth so well without too much melodrama.

I loved the way you described them getting back together and the part when 'Bunny' opens her gift. The detail was amazing. I could visualize it. I also really liked the part when Jai says 'astrotransporting' it was funny.

😆 Everything was so aawww but also 😳 Jai and Bani get together. 😃 They are getting married! Yay!

I love happy endings when everything turns out well. They make me look like this 😃

Thanks for dedicating it to us and your Guruji! I just finished my exam and the countdown has begun!

hello dear, how were ur exams today? am happy to know that i did not let u down with the ending ........... am no drama queen so too much melodrama is a strict no no for me 😆

i loved his way of proposing too, the ring etc. (to tell u a secret ..... it really happened that way, u know what i mean right, that is why being able to visualize the scenario is easy 😉) had actually pasted a picture of the gorgeous ring too, unforunately when i save the post, the picture is not showing, i tried and tried, then i gave up 😡

and that astroprojecting is a joke i share with my buddies out here, it was very funny, so i used it in the ff, was not sure at first, but then i somehow fitted it in. 😆

yes u guys wanted them to marry each other only na ......... otherwise u threatened to hunt me down in HK so i obliged, afterall meri jaan mujhe pyaari hain na. and i am a big time succor for romance and happy endings too, its just that of late KS has started killing all the romantic moments so i thought i would write a sadfic, but good for me that u guys made me change my mind 😃

good to know how u smile when u are happy. for the next few days now, i will keep a look out for such a smiley face out here in the mid-levels, and if i do come across one, i will know it is u 😆

last but not the least, u do not have to thank me for the dedication, it was due, u guys have been great and so encouraging, that is the least i could do.

have a safe flight to hk, i hope u enjoy ur well deserved holiday.

love.....sabrina

Originally posted by: putturani

We stayed in the Peninsula. We went to the touristy places like Great Wall, Temple of Heaven etc. My roomate decided to fast the whole day and she pigged out at dinner in one of those fancy places so I spent that night watching her throw up half digested pork. 🤢 NOT appetizing for a vegetarian.

I have a complaint you though. Your hubby just took you out on a romantic weekend and you have your siggy saying: "I Love You is an 8 letter phrase, But then again so is Bull Shit..." :) Yeh kya hai yaar?

So now Jai and Bani will move back to Mumbai and live happily ever after with a number of Junior Jais and Junior Banis running around! 😆

we were there only for 2 days so could not go to touristy places as firstly hubby had his meetings to attend and secondly i have been forbidden to do anything rigorous like climbing etc. for sometime. i wanted to go to the great wall etc. but health was not permitting me to, so i just relaxed in my suite and lazed around the hotel........... it was great. we plan to cover the whole area when we go there for a proper chutti and i am in a better shape and hubby has holidays.

ur friend and her puking sounds awful .......... must have been quiet a sight for u to put up with 🤢 its best to be vegetarian at such places 😆

arre yaar my siggy has nothing to do with my hubby, i was trying to be sarcastic ........... it was basically what ekta thinks of love ........... i found it funny, so i added it on, lekin ab nikal diya .......... khush 😛

yes bani asked jai to take her home na and fulfill all his promises, so they will end up in mumbai, live and love happily ever after and the rest is history 😉