FF: AGAINST ALL ODDS - COMPLETE - Page 18

Originally posted by: sabsj

gurumaya well i am kidding too ......... am become too filmy and a big nautanki thanks to ur company 😆 mujhe bhi bhau khana acha lagta hain 😆

😛 daraa diya yaar!! can we have Part 9 jaldi se please!! 😃

So Jai in your FF is a lot like the real Jai Walia, quite gray. Hmmmm....But please yaar, no bad language or abuse. We get enough of that else where. Just my two cents...or pence...or paise but cents for me!

ITS GREAT SABSJ.

WONDER WHATS GONNA HAPPEN NEXT? 😉

It's becoming great again This part 8 is so beautiful!
I love it. 👏
I can't help but feeling, you've put autobiograhic elements in it: you love swimming?, you love writing (this much we know for sure), erotic elements, that we also recognize. 😆 😆 😆

Thanx Sabsj!

(with all the noise of the past weeks, I didn't feel like replying to your ff earlier, even though I was reading from the start. Sorry!)

Part 8 was awesome!! 👏 👏 👏
Jai went straight for the big one and asked about the books!!
I loved the interaction between jai and bani
Jai has made his intentions ver clear, i wonder what is going to happen next!
Plz continue soon

Luv Taz

Sabsj, please, i am sorry for my mistake and I am not proud of it.
But it looks as if there's no question of earning your forgiveness, so i guess i wont disturb you again. You have even deleted my PMs!!! I guess i earned that. Of course, i will come back to read your FF.

Best of luck and thanks for being a wonderful friend and a good human being. The fault was entirely mine ... SORRY

GOODBYE

MAY GOD BE WITH YOU ALWAYS IN EVERYTHING YOU DO

Originally posted by: stonex

chapter 8 was awesome
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thank u stonex ........... hope u enjoy chapter 9 too.

Originally posted by: Min_3088

Hey sabs...wow yeh Jai..wow the man has his own way of making girls weak in the knees!..lol..on the plus side he would be there to catch you..haha.. 😆 ..anywayz..part 8 waz terrific hun! 👏

hey min, cool guy na jai is ............ no wonder all of us are so fida over him 😛 i wish he was there to catch me ............ i would not mind pretending to drown time and again if that was the case 😆 continue reading dear, hope u like chapter 9 too 😭

Originally posted by: Cordelia

😛 daraa diya yaar!! can we have Part 9 jaldi se please!! 😃

gurumaya, yeh sab tumhare sangat ka asar hain 😆 .......... filmo mein toh aisa hi hota hain na ........... tumse naraz hoke kahan ja payungi main ................. 😭 chalo part 9 posted ............. tumhare standard ka nahin hain, phir bhi, i'm still taking classes from u na .......😕

Originally posted by: putturani

So Jai in your FF is a lot like the real Jai Walia, quite gray. Hmmmm....But please yaar, no bad language or abuse. We get enough of that else where. Just my two cents...or pence...or paise but cents for me!

yes dear, as real as it can get 😡 ............... only difference is i am not ekta mayi and do not think like her creatives, so no gaalis and definitely not to my hunny bunny bani .......... ur two cents, paise, pence ........ whatever denomination ........... is always welcome 😃