Short FF Concluding part pg.77 COMPLETE!! - Page 6

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lonely14 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: $h@aq...

wooww..
ur storyy is gettin reallty interesting..
i hope thingss owrk out between jai and bani soon..loollzz..
and tarun doesnt find sumfin which will crete mmisunderstand between thme.,....!!
thnksxxx babee..!
do continuee soon...
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aww thanks!!!!!!

Don't worry no more misunderstandings yet!!!!!!

I am glad you liked it!!!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
Preview for tomorrow:

Jai confronts Masi!!!! and Bani received an anonymous text message!!!!!

Will Masi tell Jai the truth? or will she keep her promise to bani?

Who is the anonymous person who sent the text to Bani?

Find out next in my fanfic!!!! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
Its awsome im loving olease continue really soon and keep up the good word. I love this FF. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
Thank you Nazi and cute1228.

Don't worry the next couple of parts are dedicated to Jai finding out the truth.

Will continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55
continue soonn plzzz. its amazing..... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
i loved it!!! that was amazing!!! ur FF is amazing!!!! plz continue soon! i cant wait anymore!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
Really good FF. Please continue soon. Can't wait. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: lonely14

Preview for tomorrow:

Jai confronts Masi!!!! and Bani received an anonymous text message!!!!!

Will Masi tell Jai the truth? or will she keep her promise to bani?

Who is the anonymous person who sent the text to Bani?

Find out next in my fanfic!!!! 😊




wow. can't wait
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
Thank you all for the lovely comments!!!!!!!!

Part 5:

The pooja was going on with Jai and Bani together doing it much to the shock of everyone besides Rashi and Masi who were happy seeing them together.

After the pooja was finished, everyone went back to their rooms while Jai went to Masi to confront her about Bani.

Jai: Masi, mujhe aap se kuch baat karni hai. (I need to talk to you)

Masi: haan bolo munna kya baat hai (yeah tell me what is it?)

Jai: Masi main janta hoon ki aapko bani ke is behavior ke peeche ki wajah pata, mujhe sirf who wajah janani hai. (I know you know the reason behind Bani's behavior, I just want to know what it is).

Masi doesn't know how to respond, she is shocked to know that Jai knows she knows.

Masi: Main kuch nahi janti beta, tu kya bol raha hai. (I don't know what you are talking about).

Jai: Masi maine aapki aur bani ki batein sunli thi us din jab aap use mujhe maaf karne ke liye keh rahi thi. (I heard you talk to bani that day when you were asking her to forgive me)

It takes a while for Masi to understand what Jai just said and she doesn't know what to do. On one hand its Jai, her munna, who loves her more than anyone and on the other hand it is Bani whom she promised to say a word to jai. She is dumbfounded and then finally decides to speak.

Masi: haan mujhe pata hai Bani ke behavior ki wajah, lekin main tujhe kuch nahi bata sakti. (yes, I know the reason behind her behavior but I can't you anything).

Its like lightening struck Jai, his very own Masi is not telling him the reason behind Bani's behavior which is hurting him.

Jai: lekin masi (but masi) (before he could continue masi interrupted)

Masi: Maine Bani ko wada kiya hai ki main kisi se kuch nahi kahongi, tujh se bhi nahi. (I promised Bani that I won't tell anyone anything, not even you).

Poor Jai was just so sad that he left without saying another word, but determined to find the reason behind Bani's behavior.

Sahil, aditya, and Rano were thinking on how to bring Jai and Bani closer, since they know they love each other but for some reason are not saying it. Finally Sahil speaks up.

Sahil: I have an idea on how to get them together.

Aditya and Rano answer in unison: What?

Tarun calls up Jai to tell him what he found out. Jai was just so shocked!!!!! So they decided to meet up and make Bani confess.

Bani on the other hand is very disturbed with how things are going, she wants to get done with everything and leave everything behind and runaway to some far away land. But she knows she can't until she gets Mr.Walia's property back. With a determined look she leaves the house to go meet someone.

While she is going, she hears someone talking on the phone about the attacks on Mr.walia. She becomes paranoid and try to follow the person or just see who it is but before she could do that she loses him. A few minutes later she gets a message on her phone saying:


"If you want your husband to be safe, reach park road in 15 minutes"

Bani was shocked out of her wits, she left without thinking, the only thing she wanted to do was save Mr.Walia at any cost!!!!!!

She reaches Park road looks around finds the place and is just dumbfounded with what she is seeing!!!!!

In another end of the city, we see Ranveer and Jigyasa talking about taking over the property at any cost. They are just so annoyed with Bani at this moment. They are thinking of a way to win the divorce case at any cost.


Ranveer: Maa, We have to do something quick otherwise this Bani will take away everything from us.

Jigyasa: Haan beta, we will definitely do something, I think I know what we can do so that Bani loses this case.

Just then Ranveer's cell rings and he picks it up and is just shocked at the turn of events.

Ranveer: Maa I have to go now, I will tell you everything later.

He just leaves without waiting for Jigyasa's reply.

Bani reaches park road and after finding the place she is unable to think straight.

Sorry if it wasn't as you expected!!!!!

I have a question for you guys!!!!!

I was going to end the fanfic with the revelation of Park Road raaz in like 10 parts as promised, but then i would have to rush it. Do you still want me to end it? or do you want me to add some Jai Bani romance? or if there are any other suggestions those are welcome too.

Please leave comments.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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woooooooooooooooooow! that was nice!!! great job!!! plz cont soon!

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