Kya Pyar Karoge Mujhse. Part 8, Page 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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i think this mark is from an accident that bani n jai had from their childhood 😕
plz write soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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is Jai sujal????

that would be wicked.
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Originally posted by: lonely14

is Jai sujal????

that would be wicked.


i am also wondering the same thing, maybe he lost memory when he got jai's face😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
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even i think the same!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
Sorry for making you wait this long.
I know everyone is dying to know about that mark, but it won't come out easly.

Part Five-

Recap-Bani goes to her room change into a white sari than looks for something for Jai Walia but everything reminded her of Sujal only something she bought for Rishi but never had the chance to give it to him so on her way to the guest room to give Jai the clothes when she saw a mark on Jai's back.

*Jigyasa on the phone*

Hey it's me your good friend Priya I was wondering if you would love to come for a dinner with your daughter at my house.
Priya- umm I'll give you a call back
Jigyasa- Ok than dear bye
Priya- Bye
*Pia and Rano talking about Bani outside standing on the roof*
Pia today I miss mummy without her life his nothing.
Pia- Rano Even I miss mummy wish I could have scene her face I was little and you were in mummy's
Rano- Pia I'm talking about my Bani di she is my mom for me.
Pia- Oh I see even I miss her
Pia I miss her so much I wish di was here today look at those stars in the sky tell us that di is so happy with Sujal juju.
Pia- That's true
Nishikant heard his daughters talking about Bani that made him cry and say kash your words were true but the truth is Sujal is death and Bani is missing in her stage of pregnancy. Just walked pass Adtiya and goes to his room.
Adtiya wonders what's wrong with his friend since he called Simila
*Bani gave Mr. Walia a shirt*
Mr. Walia here is a shirt for you and hope it will fit you and leaves from his room and go downstairs stands in front of Sujal's picture.
Bani thinking to herself- How can that mark be on Mr. Walia's back because even I have a mark like this on my chest but this time it didn't burn me like it does when something bad is going to happen. Sujal how can that be a same mark on my chest is also on Mr. Walia's back? I never got to know what it met or why I have it since I was born, but how can he Sujal. (A person comes and touch Bani on the shoulder)
Bani turns around and say app
Mr. Walia- If you don't mind calling Mr. Garewal because we have today a important meeting about his dream project in Mumbai, Simila and Mt. Abu.
Bani turned back and looked at Sujal's picture and Choti Kaki came by saying Mama you asked me to bring a flower necklace ( A thing you put on dead people's picture)
Bani looked at the necklace while this tune played behinddard bhara yeh jeevan
tum ne he jia hai, meri khatir tum ne, yeh zaher bhi pia hai, Thoda Sa Pyar hua hai Kuch bhi nahiin Baaqi.
They all are shocked to see Bani putting the necklace on Sujal's picture.
Choti Kaki- Mama when did this happen?
Bani- Four weeks ago, but for me it feels like it just happened yesterday Kaki.
Kaki leaves
Mr. Walia- I'm sorry about your husband's death, so I just leave
Bani turns around and says nahiin, (Jai turns around) I mean to say that you came for a meeting than we will do this meeting because I don't want any delay on Sujal's dream project.
Mr. Walia- Ok fine, but we will have this meeting tomorrow at my house because it's kind of late so I'll see you tomorrow at...
Bani- At 3pm after I go to Sujal's office so I can get some facts about this deal.
Mr. Ok Ms. Garewal
*Next Morning at Jai's place*
Adtiya walks in saying good morning Jai
Jai- Good morning
Adtiya- How was your meeting with Sujal Garewal?
Jai- Adi I have met his wife her eyes tell me that how much pain she has after loosing her husband but never let's out her tear in front of anyone.
Adtiya- Oh who's wife are you talking about?
Jai- Mr. Sujal Garewal's wife
Adtiya- Oh that pretty sad for her, so know who is going to take over this deal.
Jai- Herself she even said that she will come here at 3pm
Adtiya and Jai looked at his watch and says oh shit.
*Bani in Sujal's cabin/got a shocking news about Sujal's will*
Bani was shock hearing Sujal's wills because he put every Mumbai properties on her name 50 percent, other 25 percent on Rishi's name and other 25 percent on his child's name after he fully turns 18 until that Bani will be the look after.
Mr. Argawal- Mrs. Garewal are you listening all this and other part Mr. Sujal Garewal said that his 3 dream project in Mumbai, Simila and Mt. Abu one will be equally dived by his wife and the Walia's because this project wasn't accomplish without Jai Walia.
Bani was crying after what she heard but the last part of his will made her more shock if anything happens to me than my wife has to get married in three years or the whole Simila house will be under Varun and Rishi's name.



Part Six-

Recap- Bani was shocked to hear Sujal's will that she has to get married to someone in three years or the property will go in Varun and Rishi's name.

*Jai Wait's for Ms. Garewal to come*

Jai sitting in the family room waiting for Ms. Garewal because it was pass 3pm and she should have been here by know.
Adtiya- Jai what are you thinking?
Jai- Adi I was wondering if we don't talk about Mr. Sujal Garewal in front of Ms. Garewal this might make her in tears.
Adtiya- I know how it feels to loose someone, like his friend Mr. Khan
* Bani Walked on the street to the Walia's all wet*
Bani- Why Sujal you made a law like this for me because you know I can't marry anyone else because I love you and no one can take your place in my heart. Sujal you have hurt me today why you put Varun's name with Rishi because Varun will kick out everyone I know Rishi can handle everything but Varun is to smart for Rishi.
Bani came out of her though by the honk of a car and looked at the Walia Mansion, walked to the gate all wet knocked at the door.
Tony- Please come in Ms. Garewal, Sir have been waiting for you
Bani- Thanks
Tony showed her to the family room where Mr. Walia was sitting with his family when Bani's eye spot someone.
*Akshat missed both of his friends*
Akshat looked at both of his friends picture crying - this is only my fault if bhaiyya didn't come here than today you would be alive with your wife and your baby. Sujal please forgive me yaar.
*Walia's family room*
Bani- Papa
They all turned around with a shock, Nishikant opens his arm for Bani to run in. Bani runs in to her papa's arm with tears.
Nishikant- Bani beta mein sad janta hoon Sujal ke barer mein
Bani- Papa everything just vanish like that
Nishikant- Beti tum Garewal house kyun left kiya.
Bani- Papa I tell later but know tell me where is my sisters.
Di we are behind you
Bani turns around saying Rano, Pia
They run in Bani's arm, three off them cried than Nishikant put his arm's around them saying Bani you will live with us.
Bani- Ouch...Ouch
Nishikant- Bani beta
Rano- Di

By Kashish Patel

I hope you all love this parts, please leave your feedback

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Posted: 18 years ago
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fab fanfic kashish
do post the next part soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plz cont soon
all the parts were gr8
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part Seven-

Recap- Jai was wondering what was taking Ms. Garewal to come for the meeting at his place. Bani was walking to Walia's place while thinking about the rule Sujal made on his will about her second marriage or the property will go under Varun and Rishi's name. Bani screams in pain.

Scene One


While the doctor checking Bani, Jai was wondering about Bani and how she is Nishikant's older daughter.
Rano and Pia were consoling each other and thinking why didn't Bani tell them about Sujal juju's death.
(Jai told them about Sujal Garewal's death)
Adtiya told Nishikant not to worry about Bani because everything will be fine.
Nishikant- I know this is only a miner, but it can lead much complications during her deliver.
Adtiya was shocked to know that Bani was pregnant in a young age, but after all she was married.
Yes Doctor what happened to Bani?
Doctor- Mr. Walia it's a good think you brought your wife here on time or else she would have loosed her child.
Pia said sorry doctor but he is not my sister's husband, actually her husband died couple of days ago.
Doctor- I'm sorry, but know she is out of danger, but please make sure she get most of the rest right know because she is kind of weak, so take care of her.
Rano- Can we see di?
Doctor- Not right know because she is sleeping, but you can take her home after she wakes up.
Nishikant- Thanks

Veena went in Sujal and Bani's room looked at their wedding album. Her son was looking the best and her bahu was the most beautiful bride. (Yaadein Yaad Aati Hain, Baatein Bhool Jaati Hain, Yaadein Yaad Aati Hain, Yeh Yaadein Kisi Dil-O-Jaanam Ke, Chale Jaane Ke Baad Aati Hain, Yaadein Yaadein Yaadein)
Akshat put his hand on Veena's shoulder- Auntie please don't cry
Veena- Beta What can I do my older son lefted and Bani had to leave from here because of my husband's one mistake ruin my life and my kids life.
Akshat- Only if Rishi was here than he could have stopped Varun, lekin Auntie
Veena- I know what you are thinking that when Rishi comes than what will happen when he gets to know Bani was kicked out of this house.

Scene Two

Nishikant watched his daughter sleep while he was telling Adtiya about Bani's wedding with Sujal after her engagement broke with Karan. Bani woke up screaming Sujal's name, they all turn around looking at Bani.
Bani looked at them than said- Papa Mera bacha
Nishikant put his hand on Bani- It's fine but you have to take a lot of rest.
Bani- Mummyji
Nishikant turns around than Adtiya says there is no one.
Bani looked again with tears remembering her good times while this song played in the back- (Yaadein Yaad Aati Hain, Baatein Bhool Jaati Hain, Yaadein Yaad Aati Hain, Yeh Yaadein Kisi Dil-O-Jaanam Ke, Chale Jaane Ke Baad Aati Hain, Yaadein Yaadein Yaadein)

Bani was standing by the window looking at the sky with tears. Jai came from behind with couple of files for Bani to read about their project.
umm Bani
Bani- Ji
Mr. Walia- Bani these are the files you need to study, but I know it's not the right time after all the doctor told you to rest.
Bani- I know but we can't keep a delay on this project after it's my Sujal's dream and know it's mine.
Mr. Walia- You have thought about this project pretty well
Bani- Looks at the sky, than says Mr. Walia god is some peoples strength but for me it's my Sujal and will always ermine like that until I live. Couple of time I think to finish my life, but than other side I have Sujal's child in my womb.

Pia watched this whole scene where Bani was talking to Mr. Walia openly like she does with Sujal.

Scene Three

Everyone was sitting in their spot, but there was only one stop open for Bani and that was beside Mr. Walia.
Nishikant told her to sit down, Bani listen to him, Rano saw the pain in Bani's eyes about Sujal.
Rano- Di tell me how is Akshat?
Bani knew what Rano was trying to do- Yes Rano Akshat is fine even Rishi
Pia- Rishi?
Bani- Oh Pia you weren't there to meet Rishi my deaver.
Pia- I see di, but does he look hot
Rano smacked Pia- What are you saying he is a brother to us
Pia- What are you talking?
Rano- I'll tell you later, but let di eat because someone else is also hungry.
Pia- Thanks
Rano- Not you
Bani looked at them than said Papa I think we need to look for a guy for Pia
Nishikant- I think so
Pia- What?
Jai was happy to see Bani happy after many ups and down in her life.

Jigyasa was walking down the stairs while Dadi was going up the stairs, they bump into each other.
Jigyasa- Watch where you are going?
Dadi- Jiggy beta you shouldn't be loss in your beauty that much
Jigyasa- Sasu Ma please just shut up and walked away with her purse
Adtiya comes and say Ma yeah to
Dadi- I know my son fell in love with the wrong person.

This is my last part for right know because I'm going India so I'll update after I come back in November.

Miss you so much, Take care Bye.

By Kashish Patel
Edited by Jai-Bani_Kasamh - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i just read your fanfic....it is awesome.....
--wonder how jai has that mark
--how do jai and bani get together
--what will happen next

continue soon

CK❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it is november time for updates

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